Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume22 Chapter4 - Revision history

Rxls at 17:02, 9 August 2017

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	===Chapter 4 - Each Others' Battles===		===Chapter 4: Each Others' Battles===

	Down below, endlessly advancing underground......		Down below, endlessly advancing underground......

Lygophile at 17:18, 26 October 2013

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	But with that hypothesis...... that expectation, he could confirm that he was correct.		But with that hypothesis...... that expectation, he could confirm that he was correct.

	The Electronic Fairies here were ~~the~~ Electronic Fairies that Karian had been to<!-- Should this say "electronic fairies of the cities he'd been to"? He hadn't actually visited the fairies "in person" had he? Also, the above "Considering the number..." seems to imply not all such fairies were here, so maybe the "the" in "were the electronic fairies that" should be dropped. --> when he was ~~transmitting the crisis~~ and images of it.		The Electronic Fairies here were Electronic Fairies of cities that Karian had been to when he was spreading information and images of the crisis.

	"Then everyone, is it about time to begin?"		"Then everyone, is it about time to begin?"

80.223.220.209 at 17:15, 26 October 2013

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Lygophile at 15:20, 26 October 2013

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Al92: Fixed a typo

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	A young girl that Karian had seen before.		A young girl that Karian had seen before.

	"~~Zhellni~~."		"Zuellni."

	She was there, and had begun speaking to the other Electronic Fairies.		She was there, and had begun speaking to the other Electronic Fairies.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==

Edricklim: /* Chapter 4 - Each Others' Battles */

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Chapter 4 - Each Others' Battles

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	This wasn't the only change.		This wasn't the only change.

	The underground space that had oppressed the two up till now and given them a kind of enclosed feeling suddenly disappeared. It gave a kind of feeling like being released, and the presences of the metal frame that had originally surrounding them ~~alos~~ disappeared.		The underground space that had oppressed the two up till now and given them a kind of enclosed feeling suddenly disappeared. It gave a kind of feeling like being released, and the presences of the metal frame that had originally surrounding them also disappeared.

	The light spreading out above their heads swept away the darkness, and Stania behind him seemed to have also seen this.		The light spreading out above their heads swept away the darkness, and Stania behind him seemed to have also seen this.

Lygophile at 16:44, 20 October 2013

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	{{Regios Nav\|prev=Chrome Shelled Regios:~~Volume21 Chapter3~~\|next=Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume22 Chapter5}}		{{Regios Nav\|prev=Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume22 Illustrations\|next=Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume22 Chapter5}}
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Lygophile at 16:13, 15 October 2013

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	She should be unable to see that light source. What goal was she moving forwards for? It didn't seem like the surroundings were that dark.		She should be unable to see that light source. What goal was she moving forwards for? It didn't seem like the surroundings were that dark.

	Or perhaps the scene surrounding them was one that only Karian could see+		Or perhaps the scene surrounding them was one that only Karian could see.

	Were the guardians of the other side peering over at them? That kind of doubt couldn't help but appear.		Were the guardians of the other side peering over at them? That kind of doubt couldn't help but appear.

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