Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume24 Epilogue - Revision history

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	==Epilogue - Life is Goodbye==		===Epilogue: Life is Goodbye===

	The surrounding noise was very loud.		The surrounding noise was very loud.

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Minor spelling error.

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	"I say, Layfon."		"I say, Layfon."

	The ~~fist~~ to open his mouth was Sharnid.		The first to open his mouth was Sharnid.

	"Though I pretty much knew already, you really also suffer from Nina Disease."		"Though I pretty much knew already, you really also suffer from Nina Disease."

Darklor: /* Epilogue - Life is Goodbye */ Typo right?

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Epilogue - Life is Goodbye: Typo right?

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	He had long since known that she would be mad.		He had long since known that she would be mad.

	"Ah, I wouldn't have ~~though~~ she would cry."		"Ah, I wouldn't have thought she would cry."

	But, he hadn't thought she would have that kind of response.		But, he hadn't thought she would have that kind of response.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==

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Mostly punctuation

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	"It's nothing, it's nothing."		"It's nothing, it's nothing."

	Seeing Layfon laughing, Leerin wanted to say to him, 'then, what about you?'.		Seeing Layfon laughing, Leerin wanted to say to him, 'then, what about you?'

	"Layfon?"		"Layfon?"
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	Even if he continued staying in Grendan, there obviously wouldn't be anyone to say anything about it.		Even if he continued staying in Grendan, there obviously wouldn't be anyone to say anything about it.

	"Is it truly only because of that?'		"Is it truly only because of that?"

	"Eh?"		"Eh?"
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	"Ooh, not bad."		"Ooh, not bad."

	"Agreed, ~~a greed~~."		"Agreed, agreed."

	"Then we'll have to go buy things soon."		"Then we'll have to go buy things soon."
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	"Well......"		"Well......"

	Because he she couldn't face Layfon who was looking for words to say, Felli moved her gaze.		Because she couldn't face Layfon who was looking for words to say, Felli moved her gaze.

	"Anyways, sorry."		"Anyways, sorry."
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	He would protect Arute, and send her to the place she wanted to go to.		He would protect Arute, and send her to the place she wanted to go to.

	He had already promised ~~with~~ her.		He had already promised her.

	"But, Layfon, you actually want to return here, right? And, the person just now was always waiting for you......"		"But, Layfon, you actually want to return here, right? And, the person just now was always waiting for you......"

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	No matter what, they would have to fight with Nina.		No matter what, they would have to fight with Nina.

	Dalshena carried out a complete offense, Sharnid sometimes sniped and sometimes attacked on the frontline depending on the opportunity, and Felli supervised information gathering and used Psychokinesis ~~lightning~~ as a means of attack, making the entire platoon's offensive very diverse.		Dalshena carried out a complete offense, Sharnid sometimes sniped and sometimes attacked on the frontline depending on the opportunity, and Felli supervised information gathering and used Psychokinesis mines as a means of attack, making the entire platoon's offensive very diverse.

	This was the current seventeenth platoon...... No, first platoon.		This was the current seventeenth platoon...... No, first platoon.
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	The Psychokinesis flakes positioned everywhere around the roaming bus suddenly gave off an intense light.		The Psychokinesis flakes positioned everywhere around the roaming bus suddenly gave off an intense light.

	This light formed spears and sharp blades, piercing and cutting open the bus. This was a type of usage of Psychokinesis ~~lightning~~, morphing Psychokinesis power into light and ~~shooting~~ it out.		This light formed spears and sharp blades, piercing and cutting open the bus. This was a type of usage of Psychokinesis mines, morphing Psychokinesis power into light and firing it out.

	"Wait!"		"Wait!"

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THE END

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	Leerin went silent, moving her vision from his body. In front of him were the legs of the city that made heavy noises.		Leerin went silent, moving her vision from his body. In front of him were the legs of the city that made heavy noises.

	That leg that only recently been able to move.		That leg that had only recently been able to move.

	The repair work on Grendan that had been more than half-paralyzed had been extremely difficult, but now it had settled down a bit.		The repair work on Grendan that had been more than half-paralyzed had been extremely difficult, but now it had settled down a bit.
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	No, more like it had returned back to before.		No, more like it had returned back to before.

	Because she had lost her strength, she had been dismissed from being a successor. Alsheyra said before that it was fine if things went on, and Minse who was her uncle had also allowed her to continue living in that room, but Leerin didn't have such plans.		Because she had lost her strength, she had been dismissed from being a successor. Alsheyra had said before that it was fine if things went on, and Minse who was her uncle had also allowed her to continue living in that room, but Leerin didn't have such plans.

	Though she had also thought of returning to the student dorm, because that place had already been destroyed, she could only return to live at the orphanage first.		Though she had also thought of returning to the student dorm, because that place had already been destroyed, she could only return to live at the orphanage first.
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	The most difficult part was probably the city relying on its own legs to move to its original area.		The most difficult part was probably the city relying on its own legs to move to its original area.

	They had clearly used some kind of mysterious method when they had come here, but when they returned it was indeed a very ordinary method of walking on its own feet. Though they hadn't had any problems like friction with other cities, the difficulty created by the terrain and the attacks of filth monsters still affected the student life of Zuellni.		They had clearly used some kind of mysterious method when they had come here, but when they returned it was indeed a very ordinary method of the city walking on its own feet. Though they hadn't had any problems like friction with other cities, the difficulty created by the terrain and the attacks of filth monsters still affected the student life of Zuellni.

	When the Student Council president in her departure speech said that the city had returned to its normal path, everyone had truly relaxed.		When the Student Council president in her departure speech said that the city had returned to its normal path, everyone had truly relaxed.
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	"Though I expected you to say that long before, Clara-chan isn't that easy to stop. She's also a Heaven's Blade successor-sama, you know."		"Though I expected you to say that long before, Clara-chan isn't that easy to stop. She's also a Heaven's Blade successor-sama, you know."

	"It's alright. In any case, that person's thoughts are to challenge me alone. Even if it's not like that, as long as I don't leave this place, the flag will be fine. Everyone else, it's up to you. Felli, take note of the enemy Psychokinesist, that person can have bad habits.		"It's alright. In any case, that person's thoughts are to challenge me alone. Even if it's not like that, as long as I don't leave this place, the flag will be fine. Everyone else, it's up to you. Felli, take note of the enemy Psychokinesist, that person can have bad habits."

	"I know."		"I know."
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	That black mist substance was created by Karen Kei. There would probably be people who felt angry at that kind of wildly wasteful Military Arts technique, but most students and herself were all very happy about it.		That black mist substance was created by Karen Kei. There would probably be people who felt angry at that kind of wildly wasteful Military Arts technique, but most students and herself were all very happy about it.

	Because from Gorneo's ~~information~~ (who had already graduated), Claribel's teacher Troyatte had this kind of style, thinking about fixing her style was a waste of time. Reproaching her was completely meaningless.		Because from Gorneo's (who had already graduated) information, Claribel's teacher Troyatte had this kind of style, thinking about fixing her style was a waste of time. Reproaching her was completely meaningless.

	(What do we do? Should we think of a way to stop her?)		(What do we do? Should we think of a way to stop her?)
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	'Everyone, these are the judges. We stopped the competition just now, because we believed there were unfair actions taking place.		'Everyone, these are the judges. We stopped the competition just now, because we believed there were unfair actions taking place.

	Nina Antalk. Claribel Ronsmier. After conducting and inspection of these two competitors' Dites, we have noticed that Claribel Ronsmier's Dite is not a registered Dite. Moreover, Claribel's Dite has not undergone safety modifications, so this time the unfair actions of the fourteenth ~~platoons~~ lead to their defeat, and therefore the first platoon wins.'		Nina Antalk. Claribel Ronsmier. After conducting and inspection of these two competitors' Dites, we have noticed that Claribel Ronsmier's Dite is not a registered Dite. Moreover, Claribel's Dite has not undergone safety modifications, so this time the unfair actions of the fourteenth platoon lead to their defeat, and therefore the first platoon wins.'

	After the judges' announcement ended, loud boos came from the spectators. Claribel had a lifeless expression, and Nina let out a long sigh. The fourteenth platoon's members were a bit restless.		After the judges' announcement ended, loud boos came from the spectators. Claribel had a lifeless expression, and Nina let out a long sigh. The fourteenth platoon's members were a bit restless.
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	Though she didn't know the truth, she felt that the extremely reduced number of filth monsters had something to do with that being.		Though she didn't know the truth, she felt that the extremely reduced number of filth monsters had something to do with that being.

	Of course, maybe Felli was just thinking too much, but even that were true, it didn't matter.		Of course, maybe Felli was just thinking too much, but even if that were true, it didn't matter.

	"............"		"............"
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	The recruitment information of the Loss Pioneering Group had spread to all of the cities, becoming a hot topic, and of course, Zuellni wasn't excluded. 'I'm joining the Loss Pioneering Group after graduation', 'Who's waiting till graduation, if you want to go then go now', those kinds of conversations could be heard everywhere.		The recruitment information of the Loss Pioneering Group had spread to all of the cities, becoming a hot topic, and of course, Zuellni wasn't excluded. 'I'm joining the Loss Pioneering Group after graduation', 'Who's waiting till graduation, if you want to go then go now', those kinds of conversations could be heard everywhere.

	It was probably because of that reason that there ~~were~~ an abnormally large number of outsiders staying in the residential district where residences for outside roaming buses were located.		It was probably because of that reason that there was an abnormally large number of outsiders staying in the residential district where residences for outside roaming buses were located.

	Today as well, there were many people around the residences.		Today as well, there were many people around the residences.
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	Most of them were only using this place as a pit stop, but among them there would still be several who entered Zuellni, or perhaps who were leaving Zuellni.		Most of them were only using this place as a pit stop, but among them there would still be several who entered Zuellni, or perhaps who were leaving Zuellni.

	Ignoring the actions of those people, Felli stopped walking in a place ~~nearby~~ the roaming bus residences.		Ignoring the actions of those people, Felli stopped walking in a place near the roaming bus residences.

	Even if she came very close, there were no presences of people, which was unusual considering the residences here that were squeezed full of outsiders.		Even if she came very close, there were no presences of people, which was unusual considering the residences here that were squeezed full of outsiders.
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	But even so, roaming buses were still packed full, and the outsiders had been buzzing around through this day.		But even so, roaming buses were still packed full, and the outsiders had been buzzing around through this day.

	It was probably there were a lot of people who wanted to go out?		It was probably because there were a lot of people who wanted to go out?

	Perhaps they believed that in the wilderness, they could accomplish many things they were unable to do in their birth city?		Perhaps they believed that in the wilderness, they could accomplish many things they were unable to do in their birth city?
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	Naruki, wearing the uniform of the City Police, seemed a bit panicked.		Naruki, wearing the uniform of the City Police, seemed a bit panicked.

	"Sorry to ~~both~~ you, but could I bother you a bit to help me with something?"		"Sorry to bother you, but could I bother you a bit to help me with something?"

	"Understood."		"Understood."
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	Felli glanced at Naruki who was directing subordinates by her side as she manipulated a Psychokinesis flake to fly into the roaming bus.		Felli glanced at Naruki who was directing subordinates by her side as she manipulated a Psychokinesis flake to fly into the roaming bus.

	The impact-resistant shutters on the other side of the bus windows had already been lowered, so she couldn't directly see the interior. All she could see on the other side was the area of the driver's seat. There was no driver present~~, who~~ had probably been dragged into the commotion inside.		The impact-resistant shutters on the other side of the bus windows had already been lowered, so she couldn't directly see the interior. All she could see on the other side was the area of the driver's seat. There was no driver present; he had probably been dragged into the commotion inside.

	Felli let her Psychokinesis pass through the outside, probing the interior.		Felli let her Psychokinesis pass through the outside, probing the interior.
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	"I came late."		"I came late."

	"Didn't you have your own reasons?'		"Didn't you have your own reasons?"

	It was for that girl.		It was for that girl.
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	Layfon didn't have any way of negating Felli's words.		Layfon didn't have any way of negating Felli's words.

	Maybe if didn't look at Felli, he could think of some excuse.		Maybe if he didn't look at Felli, he could think of some excuse.

	But Layfon hadn't moved his gaze from Felli.		But Layfon hadn't moved his gaze from Felli.
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	But, he hadn't thought she would have that kind of response.		But, he hadn't thought she would have that kind of response.

	Layfon sluggishly returned to his ~~sense~~, seeing Arute and Hotep standing there. Hotep was the driver of the roaming bus.		Layfon sluggishly returned to his senses, seeing Arute and Hotep standing there. Hotep was the driver of the roaming bus.

	A man who loved sunglasses and nicotine wherever and whenever, he had a cigarette in his mouth even now. The moment he took out a lighter, Arute deftly stole it.		A man who loved sunglasses and nicotine wherever and whenever, he had a cigarette in his mouth even now. The moment he took out a lighter, Arute deftly stole it.
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	"It's alright, this is a decision I made myself."		"It's alright, this is a decision I made myself."

	He would protect Arute, and send her to the place she wanted to go.		He would protect Arute, and send her to the place she wanted to go to.

	He had already promised with her.		He had already promised with her.