Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume9 Chapter3 - Revision history

Royaloyalz at 12:53, 7 September 2013

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	The anger in him when he had argued with Nina had now faded. Right now, he felt guilty for leaving work and throwing a tantrum at Nina. He walked on the empty road in low spirits.		The anger in him when he had argued with Nina had now faded. Right now, he felt guilty for leaving work and throwing a tantrum at Nina. He walked on the empty road in low spirits.

	Though he wanted to go back, he felt the Captain would chase him all the way to the dormitory. No, perhaps she wouldn't come......		Though he wanted to go back, he felt that the Captain would chase him all the way to the dormitory. No, perhaps she wouldn't come......

	He strode around his dormitory, saw something shining and went over like a moth attracted to light. It was an area designed for vending machines. It had everything, from drinks and snacks to fast food and cleaning liquid. No wind blew here, as a roof had been constructed over the area. People who stayed late would sometimes sleep here for a night. Tonight, no one was about. Layfon sat down on a long bench.		He strode around his dormitory, saw something shining and went over like a moth attracted to light. It was an area designed for vending machines. It had everything, from drinks and snacks to fast food and cleaning liquid. No wind blew here, as a roof had been constructed over the area. People who stayed late would sometimes sleep here for a night. Tonight, no one was about. Layfon sat down on a long bench.
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	"Wu......."		"Wu......."

	"You're strong. So strong that you could spare time to help the Captain while fighting Haia. We can't support you. I don't really know what the Captain thinks since I'm a Psychokinesist, but as someone fighting in the ~~frontline~~, she probably understands that more than me. When you truly need help, she might not be able to provide the support you need. And she blames herself for it. That's why she wants to do something for you, and she also hopes you can do something. Do you understand that feeling?"		"You're strong. So strong that you could spare time to help the Captain while fighting Haia. We can't support you. I don't really know what the Captain thinks since I'm a Psychokinesist, but as someone fighting on the frontlines, she probably understands that more than me. When you truly need help, she might not be able to provide the support you need. And she blames herself for it. That's why she wants to do something for you, and she also hopes you can do something. Do you understand that feeling?"

	"......... Even if I take up the Katana, that can't solve the problem of the Dite."		"......... Even if I take up the Katana, that can't solve the problem of the Dite."
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	That was it.		That was it.

	"Whether it's just one out of 100%, or one out of a million chances. As long as it increases the ~~chance~~ of your survival, I hope you can take up the Katana."		"Whether it's just one out of 100%, or one out of a million chances. As long as it increases the chances of your survival, I hope you can take up the Katana."

	"That probability means nothing. When you die, you can't escape it. I've seen that many times," he protested.		"That probability means nothing. When you die, you can't escape it. I've seen that many times," he protested.
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	"Right. I fainted," Leerin sighed.		"Right. I fainted," Leerin sighed.

	This was her first time being admitted to a hospital. She had visited others in the hospital a couple of times though. That time when she visited Layfon here in Zuellni, and back at Grendan when her adopted father was attacked by filth ~~monster~~ and had to stay in the hospital.		This was her first time being admitted to a hospital. She had visited others in the hospital a couple of times though. That time when she visited Layfon here in Zuellni, and back at Grendan when her adopted father was attacked by filth monsters and had to stay in the hospital.

	She watched the ceiling, never thinking she would have to stay in a hospital as well.		She watched the ceiling, never thinking she would have to stay in a hospital as well.
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	"Do you know why you get wounded so many times in here?"		"Do you know why you get wounded so many times in here?"

	After looking at the confusion and chaos governing the people in Myath at the news of filth ~~monster~~ attack, Leerin understood how unusual Grendan was. The incident had also made her realize how safe Grendan was. It was lucky for them to have strong Military Artists, and they also had the elites – the 12 Heaven's Blade successors. No city could be luckier than Grendan. At the same time, this was lucky for the Heaven's Blade successors as they could reduce each others' burden. They didn't have to consider being forced into a corner. Even if they made a mistake, Military Artists as strong as them could fill in any gaps left by an error. This meant one didn't have to push oneself too much in a fight. Of course, there were other reasons. For example, Layfon didn't have a Heaven's Blade and had to use a normal Dite that failed to maximize his potential. Things like that.		After looking at the confusion and chaos governing the people in Myath at the news of the filth monsters attack, Leerin understood how unusual Grendan was. The incident had also made her realize how safe Grendan was. It was lucky for them to have strong Military Artists, and they also had the elites – the 12 Heaven's Blade successors. No city could be luckier than Grendan. At the same time, this was lucky for the Heaven's Blade successors as they could reduce each others' burden. They didn't have to consider being forced into a corner. Even if they made a mistake, Military Artists as strong as them could fill in any gaps left by an error. This meant one didn't have to push oneself too much in a fight. Of course, there were other reasons. For example, Layfon didn't have a Heaven's Blade and had to use a normal Dite that failed to maximize his potential. Things like that.

	"Yeah," he nodded.		"Yeah," he nodded.
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	This was great. Layfon didn't plan to toss away his past in Grendan. She had thought he had sealed her away in his memories, but truth revealed otherwise. She was really happy.		This was great. Layfon didn't plan to toss away his past in Grendan. She had thought he had sealed her away in his memories, but the truth revealed otherwise. She was really happy.

	"Don't forget us."		"Don't forget us."

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	"Wu......."		"Wu......."

	"You're strong. So strong that you could spare time to help the Captain while fighting Haia. We can't support you. I don't really know what the Captain thinks since I'm a ~~psychokinesist~~, but as someone fighting in the frontline, she probably understands that more than me. When you truly need help, she might not be able to provide the support you need. And she blames herself for it. That's why she wants to do something for you, and she also hopes you can do something. Do you understand that feeling?"		"You're strong. So strong that you could spare time to help the Captain while fighting Haia. We can't support you. I don't really know what the Captain thinks since I'm a Psychokinesist, but as someone fighting in the frontline, she probably understands that more than me. When you truly need help, she might not be able to provide the support you need. And she blames herself for it. That's why she wants to do something for you, and she also hopes you can do something. Do you understand that feeling?"

	"......... Even if I take up the Katana, that can't solve the problem of the Dite."		"......... Even if I take up the Katana, that can't solve the problem of the Dite."

Lygophile at 01:43, 14 July 2013

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	===Chapter 3: Wish===		===Chapter 3: Wish===

	His mood had gone to the bottom of what ~~was~~ called the "worst" in the past few months. Nothing much had happened since the Military Arts Competition with Myath, but now... Even Layfon was at a loss.		His mood had gone to the bottom of what could be called the "worst" in the past few months. Nothing much had happened since the Military Arts Competition with Myath, but now... Even Layfon was at a loss.

	(Aa, what should I do? I just ran off.)		(Aa, what should I do? I just ran off.)

	The anger in him when he argued with Nina had now faded. Right now, he felt guilty for leaving work and throwing a tantrum at Nina. He walked on the empty road in low spirits.		The anger in him when he had argued with Nina had now faded. Right now, he felt guilty for leaving work and throwing a tantrum at Nina. He walked on the empty road in low spirits.

	Though he wanted to go back, he felt the Captain would chase him all the way to the dormitory. No, perhaps she wouldn't come......		Though he wanted to go back, he felt the Captain would chase him all the way to the dormitory. No, perhaps she wouldn't come......
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	He felt like Felli had sneaked in a laugh behind his back.		He felt like Felli had sneaked in a laugh behind his back.

	"You said that ~~after~~ you know how powerful you are."		"You said that even though you know how powerful you are."

	"Uh, no, I mean........."		"Uh, no, I mean........."
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	And next, the sound of something hitting his cheek.		And next, the sound of something hitting his cheek.

	"You don't know that," she said emotionally. Even she herself didn't know why she was feeling this way. "You don't understand what it feels like when you can't do anything!" ~~she~~ ran off.		"You don't know that," she said emotionally. Even she herself didn't know why she was feeling this way. "You don't understand what it feels like when you can't do anything!" She ran off.

	"......... I knew it would turn out like this," he sighed.		"......... I knew it would turn out like this," he sighed.
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	This was her first time being admitted to a hospital. She had visited others in the hospital a couple of times though. That time when she visited Layfon here in Zuellni, and back at Grendan when her adopted father was attacked by filth monster and had to stay in the hospital.		This was her first time being admitted to a hospital. She had visited others in the hospital a couple of times though. That time when she visited Layfon here in Zuellni, and back at Grendan when her adopted father was attacked by filth monster and had to stay in the hospital.

	She watched the ceiling, never thinking she would have to stay in a hospital ~~once too~~.		She watched the ceiling, never thinking she would have to stay in a hospital as well.

	Her first time taking a long journey. Her first time coming to another city. She did her best to keep going no matter how many first times she encountered. Perhaps all the stress she had been bearing had burst out at once. The drip attached to her arm prevented her from moving.		Her first time taking a long journey. Her first time coming to another city. She did her best to keep going no matter how many first times she encountered. Perhaps all the stress she had been bearing had burst out at once. The drip attached to her arm prevented her from moving.
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	"Then......."		"Then......."

	"But it troubles me to suddenly take up what I've ~~determined~~ to give up......... I need time to tidy my feelings."		"But it troubles me to suddenly take up what I've resolved to give up......... I need time to tidy my feelings."

	"I see........"		"I see........"
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	"Do you know why you get wounded so many times in here?"		"Do you know why you get wounded so many times in here?"

	After looking at the confusion and chaos governing the people in Myath at the news of filth monster attack, Leerin understood how unusual Grendan was. The ~~incidence~~ had also made her realize how safe Grendan was. It was lucky for them to have strong Military Artists, and they also had the elites – the 12 Heaven's Blade successors. No city could be luckier than Grendan. At the same time, this was lucky for the Heaven's Blade successors as they could reduce each ~~other~~'s burden. They didn't have to consider being forced into a corner. Even if they made a mistake, Military Artists as strong as them could fill in any gaps left by an error. This meant one didn't have to push oneself too much in a fight. Of course, there were other reasons. For example, Layfon didn't have a Heaven's Blade and had to use a normal Dite that failed to maximize his potential. Things like that.		After looking at the confusion and chaos governing the people in Myath at the news of filth monster attack, Leerin understood how unusual Grendan was. The incident had also made her realize how safe Grendan was. It was lucky for them to have strong Military Artists, and they also had the elites – the 12 Heaven's Blade successors. No city could be luckier than Grendan. At the same time, this was lucky for the Heaven's Blade successors as they could reduce each others' burden. They didn't have to consider being forced into a corner. Even if they made a mistake, Military Artists as strong as them could fill in any gaps left by an error. This meant one didn't have to push oneself too much in a fight. Of course, there were other reasons. For example, Layfon didn't have a Heaven's Blade and had to use a normal Dite that failed to maximize his potential. Things like that.

	"Yeah," he nodded.		"Yeah," he nodded.
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	"In that case....."		"In that case....."

	"I know. I'm really happy. In the end, I'm still a Psyharden Military Artist. Nothing can make me happier than father's forgiveness. Looking at Haia holding the Katana so naturally, ~~so matter of fact~~, I was jealous of him."		"I know. I'm really happy. In the end, I'm still a Psyharden Military Artist. Nothing can make me happier than father's forgiveness. Looking at Haia holding the Katana so naturally, to tell the truth, I was jealous of him."

	Leerin had heard that Haia was the leader of the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang.		Leerin had heard that Haia was the leader of the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang.
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	She once again recalled the past he might have wanted to forget. But from the current Layfon, it was clear that he wouldn't have forgotten it. At that time, the people in the orphanage refused him. They called him a traitor, a contemptuous person. Father didn't say anything to comfort him. That couldn't be helped, since he was also in shock.		She once again recalled the past he might have wanted to forget. But from the current Layfon, it was clear that he wouldn't have forgotten it. At that time, the people in the orphanage refused him. They called him a traitor, a contemptuous person. Father didn't say anything to comfort him. That couldn't be helped, since he was also in shock.

	"Father said that he's been in battles for too long. Because he spent a long time teaching students in the dojo, something had restricted him without his knowing. The techniques of Psyharden. The techniques that he ~~learnt~~ in order to survive, he's forgotten them."		"Father said that he's been in battles for too long. Because he spent a long time teaching students in the dojo, something had restricted him without his knowing. The techniques of Psyharden. The techniques that he learned in order to survive, he's forgotten them."

	"Father..........."		"Father..........."
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	His shoulders shook under the dim light. She didn't know when, but her voice trembled.		His shoulders shook under the dim light. She didn't know when, but her voice trembled.

	"Father knows your path will only get more difficult. He didn't give this to you to inherit Psyharden. He thinks he has nothing left to teach you. He wishes you to grow freely and not be ~~bounded~~ by anything."		"Father knows your path will only get more difficult. He didn't give this to you to inherit Psyharden. He thinks he has nothing left to teach you. He wishes you to grow freely and not be bound by anything."

	She remembered that time back in the past. Layfon was too small to accept father's training. In a distance, she watched him swing the wooden Katana on his own. She watched him sway and stagger, unable to take its weight. Even so, he imitated father's stance.		She remembered that time back in the past. Layfon was too small to accept father's training. From a distance, she watched him swing the wooden Katana on his own. She watched him sway and stagger, unable to take its weight. Even so, he imitated father's stance.

	"Does that make you happy?" she had asked.		"Does that make you happy?" she had asked.
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	"........ Speaking of which, how does this relate to the intruders?" Bothered by this point, she left the bar.		"........ Speaking of which, how does this relate to the intruders?" Bothered by this point, she left the bar.

	Barmelin would probably be outraged if she found out that there was another way into the Inner Court. However, only the royalty knew of ~~this~~ route, so the other Heaven's Blades could only bear the nasty smell through the usual route. If only the intruder had died in the maze.		Barmelin would probably be outraged if she found out that there was another way into the Inner Court. However, only the royalty knew of that route, so the other Heaven's Blades could only bear the nasty smell through the usual route. If only the intruder had died in the maze.

	Synola came to the door that would open into the Inner Court.		Synola came to the door that would open into the Inner Court.
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	"I want to see some change here, but things stay the same."		"I want to see some change here, but things stay the same."

	The combination of the environment and a match had given birth to the monster called Alsheyra Almonise. Her strength far exceeded any Heaven's Blade successor. Though her strength couldn't be compared to the combined strength of all 12 Heaven's Blade successors, she far exceeded the strength of individual Heaven's Blades. But no one could lead her to that thing as long as the consciousness of Grendan remained in its slumber. Just what was she to do?		The combination of the environment and a good match had given birth to the monster called Alsheyra Almonise. Her strength far exceeded any Heaven's Blade successor. Though her strength couldn't be compared to the combined strength of all 12 Heaven's Blade successors, she far exceeded the strength of individual Heaven's Blades. But no one could lead her to that thing as long as the consciousness of Grendan remained in its slumber. Just what was she to do?

	"Should I give up?" she asked. Of course, no one replied her. She felt uncomfortable at the silence.		"Should I give up?" she asked. Of course, no one replied her. She felt uncomfortable at the silence.
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	Yes, she knew. She herself and the 12 Heaven's Blades were not enough. The royal family of Grendan lacked a true successor. But........ Why did Grendan appear in front of Leerin?		Yes, she knew. She herself and the 12 Heaven's Blades were not enough. The royal family of Grendan lacked a true successor. But........ Why did Grendan appear in front of Leerin?

	It wasn't rare for the blood that made up of the three families of the royal line to slip into the ordinary populace. Though Grendan had a long history, it didn't have the power to enable all three royal families to live a rich life. It was rare for that strength to appear in the populace of Grendan, but it wasn't extremely unusual. But why.........? Synola asked again, gritting her teeth.		It wasn't rare for the blood that made up the three families of the royal line to slip into the ordinary populace. Though Grendan had a long history, it didn't have the power to enable all three royal families to live a rich life. It was rare for that strength to appear in the populace of Grendan, but it wasn't extremely unusual. But why.........? Synola asked again, gritting her teeth.

	"If possible, I want that child to be happy."		"If possible, I want that child to be happy."

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	He should be happy. His adopted father willed for him to hold the Katana that he thought he could never touch again. This, however, didn't mean what happened in the past was cancelled. He had tainted the name of a Heaven's Blade. He had betrayed the people of Grendan....... Those things meant nothing for Layfon except for the fact that ~~they~~ had tainted the name of Psyharden. He had insulted the father who had sworn to protect them.		He should be happy. His adopted father willed for him to hold the Katana that he thought he could never touch again. This, however, didn't mean what happened in the past was cancelled. He had tainted the name of a Heaven's Blade. He had betrayed the people of Grendan....... Those things meant nothing for Layfon except for the fact that he had tainted the name of Psyharden. He had insulted the father who had sworn to protect them.

	When he took up the sword, he wanted to let those who wished to study under Psyharden's name to know that he had cut his ties with Psyharden. His actions had gained Derek many students, but later on, the dojo went back to its desolate state. That didn't concern Layfon much as he was plagued by guilt.		When he took up the sword, he wanted to let those who wished to study under Psyharden's name to know that he had cut his ties with Psyharden. His actions had gained Derek many students, but later on, the dojo went back to its desolate state. That didn't concern Layfon much as he was plagued by guilt.

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	"Uh~?" she watched the ceiling, feeling a bit drunk. Though the lighting was dim, the structure on the ceiling stood out vividly. Submerged a long time in smoke and oil, the color of the ceiling had changed.		"Uh~?" she watched the ceiling, feeling a bit drunk. Though the lighting was dim, the structure on the ceiling stood out vividly. Submerged a long time in smoke and oil, the color of the ceiling had changed.

	"What's it?" the owner of the bar asked. He was originally her classmate. It was usual for Synola to act strange, so he only asked out of curiosity.		"What is it?" the owner of the bar asked. He was originally her classmate. It was usual for Synola to act strange, so he only asked out of curiosity.

	"Um~" she responded.		"Um~" she responded.
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	"I have something to report."		"I have something to report."

	"What's it?" she looked at the document in her hand.		"What is it?" she looked at the document in her hand.

	A gene report. But the name of the person who wrote this report wasn't on the document. On the other hand, someone else's name was on it.		A gene report. But the name of the person who wrote this report wasn't on the document. On the other hand, someone else's name was on it.

Zero2001 at 13:37, 8 August 2011

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	“Because you have to fight,” she touched the surface of the can. “You don’t have to take it if you give up on Military Arts. Because that would only cause you nostalgia.”		“Because you have to fight,” she touched the surface of the can. “You don’t have to take it if you give up on Military Arts. Because that would only cause you nostalgia.”

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	Nostalgia. That word caused him pain. He wanted to deny it, but he hardly resisted it when he held the Dite. Although he did resist when the Student President blackmailed him into fighting, now he didn’t really dislike what had happened. That was because he enjoyed the time he had spent with Nina and the 17th platoon.		Nostalgia. That word caused him pain. He wanted to deny it, but he hardly resisted it when he held the Dite. Although he did resist when the Student President blackmailed him into fighting, now he didn’t really dislike what had happened. That was because he enjoyed the time he had spent with Nina and the 17th platoon.
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	Even without looking at each other, they knew they were both crying. She felt his tears from her ears, and her tears fell on his neck. They no longer knew who did the hugging first. Tears stole away their strength, and they held each other to give themselves support.		Even without looking at each other, they knew they were both crying. She felt his tears from her ears, and her tears fell on his neck. They no longer knew who did the hugging first. Tears stole away their strength, and they held each other to give themselves support.

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	This was great. Layfon didn’t plan to toss away his past in Grendan. She had thought he had sealed her away in his memories, but truth revealed otherwise. She was really happy.		This was great. Layfon didn’t plan to toss away his past in Grendan. She had thought he had sealed her away in his memories, but truth revealed otherwise. She was really happy.

207.6.82.126: /* Chapter 3: Wish */

2010-09-13T04:44:00Z

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	He should be happy. His adopted father willed for him to hold the Katana that he thought he could never touch again. This, however, didn’t mean what happened in the past was cancelled. He had tainted the name of a Heaven’s Blade. He had betrayed the people of Grendan……. Those things meant nothing for Layfon except for the fact that they had tainted the name of Psyharden. He had insulted the father who had sworn to protect them.		He should be happy. His adopted father willed for him to hold the Katana that he thought he could never touch again. This, however, didn’t mean what happened in the past was cancelled. He had tainted the name of a Heaven’s Blade. He had betrayed the people of Grendan……. Those things meant nothing for Layfon except for the fact that they had tainted the name of Psyharden. He had insulted the father who had sworn to protect them.

	When he took up the sword, he wanted to let those who wished to study under Psyharden’s name to know that he had cut his ties with Psyharden. His actions had gained ~~Deruk~~ many students, but later on, the dojo went back to its desolate state. That didn’t concern Layfon much as he was plagued by guilt.		When he took up the sword, he wanted to let those who wished to study under Psyharden’s name to know that he had cut his ties with Psyharden. His actions had gained Derek many students, but later on, the dojo went back to its desolate state. That didn’t concern Layfon much as he was plagued by guilt.

	Most of the students came to learn the Psyharden techniques because Layfon was a Heaven’s Blade successor. However, that thinking alone was not enough to grasp hold of the essence of Psyharden. Back then, Layfon knew a Military Artist in the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang also used Psyharden, and that the Gang’s reputation had far exceeded that of Grendan’s. What he didn’t know was that the leader of the Gang was the apprentice of Derek’s brother from the same Military Arts school.		Most of the students came to learn the Psyharden techniques because Layfon was a Heaven’s Blade successor. However, that thinking alone was not enough to grasp hold of the essence of Psyharden. Back then, Layfon knew a Military Artist in the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang also used Psyharden, and that the Gang’s reputation had far exceeded that of Grendan’s. What he didn’t know was that the leader of the Gang was the apprentice of Derek’s brother from the same Military Arts school.

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	He should be happy. His adopted father willed for him to hold the Katana that he thought he could never touch again. This however, didn’t mean what happened in the past was cancelled. He had tainted the name of a Heaven’s Blade. He had betrayed the people of Grendan……. Those things meant nothing for Layfon except for the fact that they had tainted the name of Psyharden. He had insulted the father who had sworn to protect them.		He should be happy. His adopted father willed for him to hold the Katana that he thought he could never touch again. This, however, didn’t mean what happened in the past was cancelled. He had tainted the name of a Heaven’s Blade. He had betrayed the people of Grendan……. Those things meant nothing for Layfon except for the fact that they had tainted the name of Psyharden. He had insulted the father who had sworn to protect them.

	When he took up the sword, he wanted to let those who wished to study under Psyharden’s name to know that he had cut his ties with Psyharden. His actions had gained Deruk many students, but later on, the dojo went back to its desolate state. That didn’t concern Layfon much as he was plagued by guilt.		When he took up the sword, he wanted to let those who wished to study under Psyharden’s name to know that he had cut his ties with Psyharden. His actions had gained Deruk many students, but later on, the dojo went back to its desolate state. That didn’t concern Layfon much as he was plagued by guilt.
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	Three months. Though she was used to Zuellni’s streetscape, she felt today’s scenery was different from usual. Was this because of the change in the color of the sky? Compared to Grendan, the building style here was different. But the color of the sky shouldn’t deviate much. Was it because of the stars?		Three months. Though she was used to Zuellni’s streetscape, she felt today’s scenery was different from usual. Was this because of the change in the color of the sky? Compared to Grendan, the building style here was different. But the color of the sky shouldn’t deviate much. Was it because of the stars?

	Leaving alone the theory that had no basis, her thoughts turned to the people living here. No Synola. No Leerin’s other good friends. No classmates from Grendan’s school. No orphanage and no adopted father. In here, she only had Layfon, the Layfon who had disappeared from Grendan.		Leaving alone the theory that had no basis, her thoughts turned to the people living here. No Synola. None of Leerin’s other good friends. No classmates from Grendan’s school. No orphanage and no adopted father. In here, she only had Layfon, the Layfon who had disappeared from Grendan.

	“…… What should I do?”		“…… What should I do?”

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	Though he wanted to go back, he felt the Captain would chase him all the way to the dormitory. No, perhaps she wouldn’t come……		Though he wanted to go back, he felt the Captain would chase him all the way to the dormitory. No, perhaps she wouldn’t come……

	He strode around his dormitory, saw something shining and went over like a moth attracted to light. It was an area designed for vending machines. It had everything, from drinks and snacks to fast food and cleaning liquid. No wind blew here, as a roof had been constructed over the area. People who stayed late sometimes ~~would~~ sleep here for a night. Tonight, no one was about. Layfon sat down on a long bench.		He strode around his dormitory, saw something shining and went over like a moth attracted to light. It was an area designed for vending machines. It had everything, from drinks and snacks to fast food and cleaning liquid. No wind blew here, as a roof had been constructed over the area. People who stayed late would sometimes sleep here for a night. Tonight, no one was about. Layfon sat down on a long bench.

	“Ha……..” he sighed. He wished he could release all the feelings stuffed inside him.		“Ha……..” he sighed. He wished he could release all the feelings stuffed inside him.
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	“Why?”		“Why?”

	“Because you have to fight,” she touched the surface of the can. “You don’t have to take it if you ~~gave~~ up on Military Arts. Because that would only cause you nostalgia.”		“Because you have to fight,” she touched the surface of the can. “You don’t have to take it if you give up on Military Arts. Because that would only cause you nostalgia.”

	Nostalgia. That word caused him pain. He wanted to deny it, but he hardly resisted it when he held the Dite. Although he did resist when the Student President blackmailed him into fighting, now he didn’t really dislike what had happened. That was because he enjoyed the time he had spent with Nina and the 17th platoon.		Nostalgia. That word caused him pain. He wanted to deny it, but he hardly resisted it when he held the Dite. Although he did resist when the Student President blackmailed him into fighting, now he didn’t really dislike what had happened. That was because he enjoyed the time he had spent with Nina and the 17th platoon.
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	“…… Of course, that was all because I got kidnapped. Sorry.”		“…… Of course, that was all because I got kidnapped. Sorry.”

	“That ~~isn’t~~ your fault……..”		“That wasn’t your fault……..”

	In fact, it was his fault. Haia wanted to fight him because they both inherited the Psyharden skills. Felli just got caught up in this fight between brothers from the same Military Arts school.		In fact, it was his fault. Haia wanted to fight him because they both inherited the Psyharden skills. Felli just got caught up in this fight between brothers from the same Military Arts school.
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	Synola came to the door that would open into the Inner Court.		Synola came to the door that would open into the Inner Court.

	It had been one week since the intruder got here. The city’s auto-repair ability had wiped clean the traces left by the previous fight. Synola stood at the door, looking a bit drunk. No handles were built into the door. A shallow trench ~~spit~~ the middle of the door, yet seams filled that trench. Protruding holes and depressions covered the door like a puzzle. Even Synola couldn’t open this door. Behind this door laid Grendan’s real consciousness. When would this consciousness wake? What did the intruder come here for? Should she not have asked Barmelin to come?		It had been one week since the intruder got here. The city’s auto-repair ability had wiped clean the traces left by the previous fight. Synola stood at the door, looking a bit drunk. No handles were built into the door. A shallow trench split the middle of the door, yet seams filled that trench. Protruding holes and depressions covered the door like a puzzle. Even Synola couldn’t open this door. Behind this door laid Grendan’s real consciousness. When would this consciousness wake? What did the intruder come here for? Should she not have asked Barmelin to come?

	But she couldn’t fight him if that intruder was related to the Wolf Faces. Since she would be pulled to another side, someone needed to fight that person. Besides, it was a high possibility that the Wolf Faces knew of the Inner Court.		But she couldn’t fight him if that intruder was related to the Wolf Faces. Since she would be pulled to another side, someone needed to fight that person. Besides, it was a high possibility that the Wolf Faces knew of the Inner Court.