Chronicle Legion:Volume 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Zzhk at 05:03, 25 August 2016

2016-08-25T05:03:45Z

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	"It has been so long since I last visited Suruga's water shrine."		"It has been so long since I last visited Suruga's water shrine."

	Akigase Rikka was walking alone in the water shrine. This place's abundant body of blue water was ~~criss-crossed~~ by a thread-like network of paths three meters wide, allowing people to walk without getting wet.		Akigase Rikka was walking alone in the water shrine. This place's abundant body of blue water was crisscrossed by a thread-like network of paths three meters wide, allowing people to walk without getting wet.

	Only personnel involved with mystic powers or Legions were allowed to enter water shrines.		Only personnel involved with mystic powers or Legions were allowed to enter water shrines.

Zzhk at 01:51, 6 August 2016

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	Hatsune's reveal was startling, but it was possible to find the underlying logic.		Hatsune's reveal was startling, but it was possible to find the underlying logic.

	The intimate relationship between the Tachibana clan and Princess Fujinomiya Shiori was definitely quite similar to the deep bond between 'a Sengoku-~~era~~ general and a secret ninja clan.'		The intimate relationship between the Tachibana clan and Princess Fujinomiya Shiori was definitely quite similar to the deep bond between 'a Sengoku-period general and a secret ninja clan.'

	Even the domestic helpers at Black Lily Dorm were all older women from the Tachibana clan.		Even the domestic helpers at Black Lily Dorm were all older women from the Tachibana clan.

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2016-07-26T16:11:53Z

Part 2

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	Flying in the air were three wyverns, a type of retainer beast used by many countries. Their common characteristics were "a lizard-like appearance except with wings growing out of their shoulders" and "being roughly two to three times the size of a horse."		Flying in the air were three wyverns, a type of retainer beast used by many countries. Their common characteristics were "a lizard-like appearance except with wings growing out of their shoulders" and "being roughly two to three times the size of a horse."

	However, every country's variant ~~of wyvern~~ had its own unique color.		However, every country's wyvern variant had its own unique color.

	Imperial Japan's wyverns were blue. The wyverns in the air ~~currently~~ were white.		Imperial Japan's wyverns were blue. The wyverns currently in the air were white.

	White was the color the British Empire's wyverns.		White was the color of the British Empire's wyverns.

	"So British retainer beasts have trespassed all the way here..." lamented the princess gloomily.		"So British retainer beasts have trespassed all the way here..." lamented the princess gloomily.

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2016-07-25T07:56:43Z

Part 4

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	Entering the blue liquid used for bathing, he recited words.		Entering the blue liquid used for bathing, he recited words.

	"~~May disaster strike down the wicked~~ of ~~heart~~—Upon my true name and soul, I petition the shrine of this land. Pray share the nourishment of holy water with my soldiers and recognize us as knights of the local land."		"Shame be to him who thinks ill of it—Upon my true name and soul, I petition the shrine of this land. Pray share the nourishment of holy water with my soldiers and recognize us as knights of the local land."

	Sir Black Knight closed his eyes and prayed, his entire body glowing faintly.		Sir Black Knight closed his eyes and prayed, his entire body glowing faintly.

Zzhk: /* Chapter 3 - Knights and Feats of Arms */

2016-07-23T15:20:04Z

Chapter 3 - Knights and Feats of Arms

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	The water shrine was located deep underground the Suruga tutelary fort.		The water shrine was located deep underground below the Suruga tutelary fort.

	Inside the vast space built from stone was a pool of marine-blue holy water. With dozens of giant pillars standing inside it, there was a solemnity reminiscent of ancient Greek temples.		Inside the vast space built from stone was a pool of marine-blue holy water. With dozens of giant pillars standing inside it, there was a solemnity reminiscent of ancient Greek temples.

Hp2 at 09:52, 23 July 2016

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	Not too long ago, Masatsugu was still an ordinary student without the slightest clue about his clan's secrets.		Not too long ago, Masatsugu was still an ordinary student without the slightest clue about his clan's secrets.

	Besides, he had lost his memory too. It ~~was~~ be ill-considered for a princess to take as a trusted subordinate someone whose personality and disposition were unknown.		Besides, he had lost his memory too. It would be ill-considered for a princess to take as a trusted subordinate someone whose personality and disposition were unknown.

	Shiori replied, "Indeed, there are many matters that I need to discuss with you, Masatsugu-sama, including this one. Please accompany me."		Shiori replied, "Indeed, there are many matters that I need to discuss with you, Masatsugu-sama, including this one. Please accompany me."

Hp2 at 09:51, 23 July 2016

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	"I now understand Your Highness' intent. The question is, why tell me? Although I'm part of the Tachibana clan, we barely know each other for a few days."		"I now understand Your Highness' intent. The question is, why tell me? Although I'm part of the Tachibana clan, we barely know each other for a few days."

	Not too ~~too~~ ago, Masatsugu was still an ordinary student without the slightest clue about his clan's secrets.		Not too long ago, Masatsugu was still an ordinary student without the slightest clue about his clan's secrets.

	Besides, he had lost his memory too. It was be ill-considered for a princess to take as a trusted subordinate someone whose personality and disposition were unknown.		Besides, he had lost his memory too. It was be ill-considered for a princess to take as a trusted subordinate someone whose personality and disposition were unknown.

Hp2 at 09:48, 23 July 2016

2016-07-23T09:48:31Z

Zzhk: /* Chapter 3 - Knights and Feats of Arms */

2016-07-21T01:53:47Z

Chapter 3 - Knights and Feats of Arms

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	Bathing in a vat of ectoplasmic fluid was like resupplying rations to feed a massive army. In addition, there was one important significance.		Bathing in a vat of ectoplasmic fluid was like resupplying rations to feed a massive army. In addition, there was one important significance.

	"...Upon my Appellation of Onikiri Yasutsuna, I pray to the local shrine of Suruga. Now that my soldiers and I have bathed in local holy water, pray grant me the authorizing seal of warfare to become ~~the~~ war god to defend Suruga."		"...Upon my Appellation of Onikiri Yasutsuna, I pray to the local shrine of Suruga. Now that my soldiers and I have bathed in local holy water, pray grant me the authorizing seal of warfare to become a war god to defend Suruga."

	Rikka shut her eyes and prayed to Suruga's water shrine.		Rikka shut her eyes and prayed to Suruga's water shrine.

Belatkuro at 14:13, 19 July 2016

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	Her ideas were conveyed through Hatsune, Masatsugu and Taisei then executed by the community.		Her ideas were conveyed through Hatsune, Masatsugu and Taisei then executed by the community.

	Shiori remembered Taisei's position in the student council, so she made her requests to the student council members at school through their vice-president (in truth, they were more like directions ~~that~~ requests).		Shiori remembered Taisei's position in the student council, so she made her requests to the student council members at school through their vice-president (in truth, they were more like directions than requests).

	Furthermore, Shiori also went to the cafeteria kitchen to make rice balls together with the girls.		Furthermore, Shiori also went to the cafeteria kitchen to make rice balls together with the girls.

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	The water shrine was located deep underground of the Suruga tutelary fort.		The water shrine was located deep underground the Suruga tutelary fort.

	Inside the vast space built from stone was a pool of marine-blue holy water. With dozens of giant pillars standing inside it, there was a solemnity reminiscent of ancient Greek temples.		Inside the vast space built from stone was a pool of marine-blue holy water. With dozens of giant pillars standing inside it, there was a solemnity reminiscent of ancient Greek temples.
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	Rikka's tone was gentle as though consoling a frightened child or animal.		Rikka's tone was gentle as though consoling a frightened child or animal.

	However, Rikka did not want to feign a sweet voice to coax others. She could not do it either. Aware of her warrior disposition, Rikka spoke rigidly, "Since the worst-case scenario was avoided and I am not a woman who nags and clings to grudges, will you please forget about yesterday? Hurry and come help me. Starting today, we will be very busy for foreseeable future."		However, Rikka did not want to feign a sweet voice to coax others. She could not do it either. Aware of her warrior disposition, Rikka spoke rigidly, "Since the worst-case scenario was avoided and I am not a woman who nags and clings to grudges, will you please forget about yesterday? Hurry and come help me. Starting today, we will be very busy for the foreseeable future."

	As soon as she finished, a roughly nine-year-old girl appeared out of thin air next to the vat of ectoplasmic fluid. The young girl with shoulder-length black hair was dressed as shrine maiden, Sakuya's projected image.		As soon as she finished, a roughly nine-year-old girl appeared out of thin air next to the vat of ectoplasmic fluid. The young girl with shoulder-length black hair was dressed as shrine maiden, Sakuya's projected image.
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	'I hereby declare the formation of the Restoration Alliance between the Kinai Fiefdom and the British Empire. All Fiefdoms wishing to pursue the same dream are welcome to join the alliance to save our great nation.'		'I hereby declare the formation of the Restoration Alliance between the Kinai Fiefdom and the British Empire. All Fiefdoms wishing to pursue the same dream are welcome to join the alliance to save our great nation.'

	'As a revolutionaries to bring about our nation's rebirth, the Restoration Alliance will presently march upon Tokyo.'		'As revolutionaries to bring about our nation's rebirth, the Restoration Alliance will presently march upon Tokyo.'

	The Restoration Alliance's manifesto was instantly spread throughout Japan via airwaves.		The Restoration Alliance's manifesto was instantly spread throughout Japan via airwaves.
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	The Tōkaidō region consisted of the three prefectures of Aichi, Shizuoka and Yamanashi. Suruga City was the central metropolis of Shizuoka Prefecture.		The Tōkaidō region consisted of the three prefectures of Aichi, Shizuoka and Yamanashi. Suruga City was the central metropolis of Shizuoka Prefecture.

	"Apart from this place, all tutelary forts in Shizuoka have been subjugated by by the Restoration Alliance."		"Apart from this place, all tutelary forts in Shizuoka have been subjugated by the Restoration Alliance."

	Rikka pointed at five locations on the map—Hamamatsu, Kakegawa, Suruga, Fuji, and Nagahama respectively.		Rikka pointed at five locations on the map—Hamamatsu, Kakegawa, Suruga, Fuji, and Nagahama respectively.
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	Hatsune followed the princess' instruction and turned the steering wheel.		Hatsune followed the princess' instruction and turned the steering wheel.

	The car drove through the neighborhoods and streets of Suruga that Masatsugu knew so well. However, there was very little traffic in every street. Most shops were also closed temporarily. All this was ~~the~~ due to the imposition of martial law. Most of the vehicles on the road belonged to either the Tōkaidō provincial army or the police.		The car drove through the neighborhoods and streets of Suruga that Masatsugu knew so well. However, there was very little traffic in every street. Most shops were also closed temporarily. All this was due to the imposition of martial law. Most of the vehicles on the road belonged to either the Tōkaidō provincial army or the police.

	Along the way, this car was stopped by soldiers and police many times too.		Along the way, this car was stopped by soldiers and police many times too.
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	After that, Hatsune drove north of Suruga City.		After that, Hatsune drove north of Suruga City.

	Continuing forward along this direction would take one near the ~~Souther~~ Alps and Mount Ryuusou. In other words, they had gone from the countryside around a bus station to what was truly deep in the mountains.		Continuing forward along this direction would take one near the Southern Alps and Mount Ryuusou. In other words, they had gone from the countryside around a bus station to what was truly deep in the mountains.

	Masatsugu looked out the window into the sky and noticed something.		Masatsugu looked out the window into the sky and noticed something.
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	Masatsugu recalled knowledge he had heard before.		Masatsugu recalled knowledge he had heard before.

	Shiori said to him, "Tutelary forts have water ~~shrine~~ underground—In other words, reservoirs of artificial ectoplasmic fluid. Thanks to large quantities of this mysterious liquid that 'nourishes beings not of this world,' the region surrounding a water shrine will naturally become spiritually purified—"		Shiori said to him, "Tutelary forts have water shrines underground—In other words, reservoirs of artificial ectoplasmic fluid. Thanks to large quantities of this mysterious liquid that 'nourishes beings not of this world,' the region surrounding a water shrine will naturally become spiritually purified—"

	"Meaning that it becomes a sacred domain, right?"		"Meaning that it becomes a sacred domain, right?"
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	Unlike yesterday, Shiori did not walk in the lead.		Unlike yesterday, Shiori did not walk in the lead.

	On campus, she intended to keep up her facade a the "gentle and virtuous princess."		On campus, she intended to keep up her facade as the "gentle and virtuous princess."

	"...Taisei?" Masatsugu asked doubtfully upon seeing Okonogi Taisei in front of the boys dorm.		"...Taisei?" Masatsugu asked doubtfully upon seeing Okonogi Taisei in front of the boys dorm.

	Concerned about the presence of the princess, Taisei gestured with a wave of his hand, wanting have a word with Masatsugu in private.		Concerned about the presence of the princess, Taisei gestured with a wave of his hand, wanting to have a word with Masatsugu in private.

	Living in the city, Taisei was not a boarder. Besides, now that martial law was in effect, educational institutions were basically all on holiday. Masatsugu had no idea why he was here.		Living in the city, Taisei was not a boarder. Besides, now that martial law was in effect, educational institutions were basically all on holiday. Masatsugu had no idea why he was here.
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	Completely unfazed, Masatsugu said, "What's up, Taisei? Didn't you want to talk to me?"		Completely unfazed, Masatsugu said, "What's up, Taisei? Didn't you want to talk to me?"

	"Oh, yeah. Given these unusual times, information is hard to come by. I was thinking 'maybe Masatsugu-kun might have some legit info since ~~his~~ serving the princess?' to myself."		"Oh, yeah. Given these unusual times, information is hard to come by. I was thinking 'maybe Masatsugu-kun might have some legit info since he's serving the princess?' to myself."

	"And you came all the way to the dorm for that?"		"And you came all the way to the dorm for that?"
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	Only then did Masatsugu remember that his good friend was vice-president of the student council.		Only then did Masatsugu remember that his good friend was vice-president of the student council.

	Taisei's face was handsome yet nondescript. He sighed, "Due to military's noetic disruption, it's virtually impossible to receive television and radio signals, but there are occasional images or sound. Using fragmentary information, everyone is making all kinds of speculation to make sense of the situation—or more like imagining the situation, I guess."		Taisei's face was handsome yet nondescript. He sighed, "Due to the military's noetic disruption, it's virtually impossible to receive television and radio signals, but there are occasional images or sound. Using fragmentary information, everyone is making all kinds of speculation to make sense of the situation—or more like imagining the situation, I guess."

	From what Masatsugu had heard, there once existed companies that developed pocket-size portable telephones.		From what Masatsugu had heard, there once existed companies that developed pocket-size portable telephones.
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	"Greetings, ladies and gentlemen. Suruga is currently facing a time of tribulation."		"Greetings, ladies and gentlemen. Suruga is currently facing a time of tribulation."

	"The British forces and the Kinai Fiefdom ~~has~~ formed the Restoration Alliance, intending to start an insurrection against our imperial government. This is indisputable."		"The British forces and the Kinai Fiefdom have formed the Restoration Alliance, intending to start an insurrection against our imperial government. This is indisputable."

	"However, excessive panic or wariness would only bring greater danger to yourselves."		"However, excessive panic or wariness would only bring greater danger to yourselves."
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	The Black Lily Dorm was assigned to the princess exclusively.		The Black Lily Dorm was assigned to the princess exclusively.

	It was a double-story building constructed with a steel frame. There was a great hall, dining room, conversation lounge, ~~rading~~ room, etc on the ground floor with several single rooms for boarders on the second floor. The layout was the same as ordinary boys and girls dorms.		It was a double-story building constructed with a steel frame. There was a great hall, dining room, conversation lounge, reading room, etc on the ground floor with several single rooms for boarders on the second floor. The layout was the same as ordinary boys and girls dorms.

	However, Black Lily Dorm clearly felt classier and cleaner.		However, Black Lily Dorm clearly felt classier and cleaner.