Chronicle Legion:Volume 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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	The remaining eighty-nine Kamuys followed.		The remaining eighty-nine Kamuys followed.

	The commander-in-chief was leading the fight against the enemy on the front lines. Rikka could not help but smile wryly. This ~~method~~ of ~~fighting resembled~~ military ~~chronicles~~ dating back to the time of the Genpei ~~era~~, but it was also how modern wars were fought too.		The commander-in-chief was leading the fight against the enemy on the front lines. Rikka could not help but smile wryly. This fighting style was reminiscent of military records dating back to the time of the Genpei period, but it was also how modern wars were fought too.

	By transmitting noetic waves, Chevaliers directed their Legion armies to fight.		By transmitting noetic waves, Chevaliers directed their Legion armies to fight.

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	"You need to burn that guy's books and forget what he wrote."		"You need to burn that guy's books and forget what he wrote."

	Masatsugu had heard these words before but he ~~rejected~~ the theory ~~directly~~.		Masatsugu had heard these words before but he summarily dismissed the theory.

	Incredibly, Masatsugu was able to argue military strategy extremely naturally in the same way as his body would automatically defeat opponents in brawls.		Incredibly, Masatsugu was able to argue military strategy extremely naturally in the same way as his body would automatically defeat opponents in brawls.
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	"I think that man's theory is pure delusion written on paper."		"I think that man's theory is pure delusion written on paper."

	"So that your opinion, Masatsugu-sama? I understand!"		"So that is your opinion, Masatsugu-sama? I understand!"

	Smiling, Shiori nodded.		Smiling, Shiori nodded.

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	A so-called "Feat of Arms" was a supernatural technique used by Chevaliers and Resurrectees. To slay gigantic Legions by a human's hand—This was quite an incredible Feat of Arms.		A so-called "Feat of Arms" was a supernatural technique used by Chevaliers and Resurrectees. To slay gigantic Legions by a human's hand—This was quite an incredible Feat of Arms.

	Sir Black Knight shook his head and said, "If Stevie really thinks that, it means ~~he's~~ abilities only go so far. Their fates had been sealed the moment the female knight succeeded in luring him into melee combat. Pretending to be overwhelmed by the Crusades, the enemy was actually preparing for a pincer attack."		Sir Black Knight shook his head and said, "If Stevie really thinks that, it means his abilities only go so far. Their fates had been sealed the moment the female knight succeeded in luring him into melee combat. Pretending to be overwhelmed by the Crusades, the enemy was actually preparing for a pincer attack."

	"I, see."		"I, see."

Zzhk at 03:52, 14 July 2016

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	Imperial princess was a title referring to all princesses carrying Lord Tenryuu's bloodline. There were other imperial princesses in Japan, all with higher ranked seats at the imperial palace than Shiori's.		Imperial princess was a title referring to all princesses carrying Lord Tenryuu's bloodline. There were other imperial princesses in Japan, all with higher ranked seats at the imperial palace than Shiori's.

	The self-styled ostracized "forsaken princess" said, "To begin with, the Japanese government and the ~~empress~~ are under Lord Caesar's control while the regional rulers, Twelve Fiefdoms, each have their own agendas. And now, there is the Kinai Fiefdom's coup d'etat declaration and the British Empire's armed invasion and excessive interference in domestic affairs. There is no easy way out of the current upheaval no matter how much I think about it..."		The self-styled ostracized "forsaken princess" said, "To begin with, the Japanese government and the Empress are under Lord Caesar's control while the regional rulers, Twelve Fiefdoms, each have their own agendas. And now, there is the Kinai Fiefdom's coup d'etat declaration and the British Empire's armed invasion and excessive interference in domestic affairs. There is no easy way out of the current upheaval no matter how much I think about it..."

	Shiori shrugged while speaking in a sardonic tone.		Shiori shrugged while speaking in a sardonic tone.

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	"The Tōkaidō Fiefdom has been forced to fight the Restoration Alliance... I wish to use this opportunity to establish closer ties to the men of influence in Tōkaidō. I will make proper use of my name and favor to turn them into my future backers or allies."		"The Tōkaidō Fiefdom has been forced to fight the Restoration Alliance... I wish to use this opportunity to establish closer ties to the men of influence in Tōkaidō. I will make proper use of my name and favor to turn them into my future backers or allies."

	Masatsugu's cheeks ~~tightened~~ slightly. ~~He smiled~~.		Masatsugu's cheeks twitched slightly. It was a smile.

	He was aware that his expression tended to be stiff normally. Smiling was not his strong suit. Nevertheless, he did occasionally show this type of smile, except that no one around him noticed.		He was aware that his expression tended to be stiff normally. Smiling was not his strong suit. Nevertheless, he did occasionally show this type of smile, except that no one around him noticed.
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	"Relax. I'm not the type who enjoys coercing girls."		"Relax. I'm not the type who enjoys coercing girls."

	Masatsugu ~~tightened his~~ cheek muscles again to smile at the flustered princess.		Masatsugu's cheek muscles twitched again to smile at the flustered princess.

	"I promise I will never do anything against your will, Princess. All I'm asking from you is a small favor at most."		"I promise I will never do anything against your will, Princess. All I'm asking from you is a small favor at most."
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	Meanwhile, the "red-purple" Kamuys had completely wiped out the army of British Legions.		Meanwhile, the "red-purple" Kamuys had completely wiped out the army of British Legions.
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	Entering an audience with Lord Tenryuu, the sacred beast that had descended upon the plains of Hokkaidō, he obtained a pack of retainer beasts, the Mibu wolves. Fighting as the commander of the shogunate troops across various battlefields with the Mibu wolves by his side, he protected Hokkaidō from the Meiji government's invasion.		Entering an audience with Lord Tenryuu, the sacred beast that had descended upon the plains of Hokkaidō, he obtained a pack of retainer beasts, the Mibu wolves. Fighting as the commander of the shogunate troops across various battlefields with the Mibu wolves by his side, he protected Hokkaidō from the Meiji government's invasion.

	The current imperial family had roots in the court that had fled ~~north~~ to Hokkaidō. Consequently, after the Second World War, the name of Hijikata Toshizō came to the forefront as a hero who had protected the nation.		The current imperial family had roots in the northern court that had fled to Hokkaidō. Consequently, after the Second World War, the name of Hijikata Toshizō came to the forefront as a hero who had protected the nation.

	Furthermore, national historical novelists had written a series of masterpieces using the Shinsengumi as a theme.		Furthermore, national historical novelists had written a series of masterpieces using the Shinsengumi as a theme.

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	"Please accept this. It is an heirloom passed down the Fujinomiya family—A testament to a Feat of Arms. It is a relic from a certain hero... I took this out in hopes that it could aid you, Masatsugu-sama."		"Please accept this. It is an heirloom passed down the Fujinomiya family—A testament to a Feat of Arms. It is a relic from a certain hero... I took this out in hopes that it could aid you, Masatsugu-sama."

	"A testament to a ~~Fear~~ of Arms, in other words, it's an Appellation?"		"A testament to a Feat of Arms, in other words, it's an Appellation?"

	Shiori nodded in affirmation and Masatsugu took it from her hand.		Shiori nodded in affirmation and Masatsugu took it from her hand.

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	If she were nothing more than a crafty girl, Masatsugu probably would not have taken an interest in her.		If she were nothing more than a crafty girl, Masatsugu probably would not have taken an interest in her.

	However, the contradictory qualities of merciless intellect and refreshing sincerity coexisted inside her. This felt particularly interesting and also provided a feeling of reliability. She was a girl harboring the commingling of not only good and evil but also ~~the pure~~ and ~~the murky~~. And the application of such duality was required in certain positions in the world, such as politicians and kings.		However, the contradictory qualities of merciless intellect and refreshing sincerity coexisted inside her. This felt particularly interesting and also provided a feeling of reliability. She was a girl harboring the commingling of not only good and evil but also purity and murkiness. And the application of such duality was required in certain positions in the world, such as politicians and kings.

	Perhaps Fujinomiya Shiori might become a great figure in recorded history one day.		Perhaps Fujinomiya Shiori might become a great figure in recorded history one day.

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	Advancing with just a lone sword, he released noesis towards the battlefield.		Advancing with just a lone sword, he released noesis towards the battlefield.

	Noesis—The strength of a Chevalier's thoughts ~~were~~ determined by all kinds of crucial factors.		Noesis—The strength of a Chevalier's thoughts was determined by all kinds of crucial factors.

	Strength of personality, strength of character, mental strength, physical strength, competitiveness, composure, wrath, hatred, love, friendship, sadness, enlightenment, experience, charisma, etc...		Strength of personality, strength of character, mental strength, physical strength, competitiveness, composure, wrath, hatred, love, friendship, sadness, enlightenment, life experience, combat experience, charisma, etc...

	The noesis released by Masatsugu was far stronger than anyone's on this battlefield.		The noesis released by Masatsugu was far stronger than anyone else's on this battlefield.

	"Attack as soon as I give the order without the slightest delay."		"Attack as soon as I give the order without the slightest delay."
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	Due to the effects of noetic disruption, unable to receive their master's noetic waves, the sixty-four Kamuys ended up crashing to the ground one after another.		Due to the effects of noetic disruption, unable to receive their master's noetic waves, the sixty-four Kamuys ended up crashing to the ground one after another.

	Sending his noetic waves to the Kamuys that had lost their commander, Masatsugu had ~~seized~~ command ~~by force~~.		Sending his noetic waves to the Kamuys that had lost their commander, Masatsugu had forcibly assumed command.

	This method was just as coercive as how he had ordered the Kamuy yesterday, almost like snatching by force.		This method was just as coercive as how he had ordered the Kamuy yesterday, almost like snatching by force.

	The Kamuys that had been lying on the ground like corpses... They stood up like ghosts. Many of the crashed Kamuys were injured, but not to ~~the extent of preventing~~ them from fighting. Legions had very high resistance against non-mystical damage.		The Kamuys that had been lying on the ground like corpses... They stood up like ghosts. Many of the crashed Kamuys were injured, but not enough to prevent them from fighting. Legions had very high resistance against non-mystical damage.

	Kamuys were revived all over the battlefield's mountainous terrain.		Kamuys were revived all over the battlefield's mountainous terrain.

	Their armor and military uniforms ~~were originally~~ blue.		Their armor and military uniforms used to be blue.

	All the Kamuys were now red-purple. Every single one of them had taken on this color—This was proof that they had fallen under Masatsugu's command.		All the Kamuys were now red-purple. Every single one of them had taken on this color—This was proof that they had fallen under Masatsugu's command.
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	Struck in sixty-five places by this attack, the shimmering noesis barrier was greatly weakened. Parts of the scenery exhibiting no heat haze effect also became very obvious.		Struck in sixty-five places by this attack, the shimmering noesis barrier was greatly weakened. Parts of the scenery exhibiting no heat haze effect also became very obvious.

	Moreover, Seiryuu ~~over~~ the tutelary fort was about to vanish.		Moreover, Seiryuu above the tutelary fort was about to vanish.

	After the Crusades' fierce attack came the onslaught of the sixty-four Kamuys that had turned red-purple.		After the Crusades' fierce attack came the onslaught of the sixty-four Kamuys that had turned red-purple.
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	The "red-purple Kamuys" were preparing to tighten the net in the aerial battlefield. Closing in on the British Legions, they were going to stab the enemies in the vitals using their bayonets.		The "red-purple Kamuys" were preparing to tighten the net in the aerial battlefield. Closing in on the British Legions, they were going to stab the enemies in the vitals using their bayonets.

	"They're on their last legs. Wipe them out in melee."		"They're on their last legs. Wipe them out in melee," Masatsugu calmly commanded.

	Masatsugu calmly commanded.

	There were only twenty-nine Crusades left. They were not only at a numerical disadvantage but also exhausted.		There were only twenty-nine Crusades left. They were not only at a numerical disadvantage but also exhausted.
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	Before the enemy could muster a last stand in desperation, he would annihilate them with extreme prejudice.		Before the enemy could muster a last stand in desperation, he would annihilate them with extreme prejudice.

	"Thank you for waiting. It's finally your turn to debut"		"Thank you for waiting. It's finally your turn to debut."

	The sheathed Japanese sword in Masatsugu's left hand was the Appellation bestowed to him by Princess Shiori.		The sheathed Japanese sword in Masatsugu's left hand was the Appellation bestowed to him by Princess Shiori.
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	Masatsugu chanted a certain name that had surfaced in his mind when he inherited the sword.		Masatsugu chanted a certain name that had surfaced in his mind when he inherited the sword.

	Then he drew it out. A great sword two feet and eight inches long. Curving gently, the blade exhibited the kind of beauty unique to Japanese swords but was not especially ornate. There was a spirit of austerity and fortitude in its appearance—craftsmanship prioritizing practical combat to forge a trenchant blade specialized for slaying enemies. The blade exuded a ~~sharp~~ aura.		Then he drew it out. A great sword two feet and eight inches long. Curving gently, the blade exhibited the kind of beauty unique to Japanese swords but was not especially ornate. There was a spirit of austerity and fortitude in its appearance—craftsmanship prioritizing practical combat to forge a trenchant blade specialized for slaying enemies. The blade exuded a keen aura of sharpness.

	"All Kamuys, draw your sword."		"All Kamuys, draw your sword."
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	Vertical slashes. Horizontal slashes. Diagonal slashes. Straight thrusts.		Vertical slashes. Horizontal slashes. Diagonal slashes. Straight thrusts.

	Every sword technique was so precise and merciless, almost to a bone-chilling degree. As though chopping vegetables, the Kamuys severed the Crusades' limbs, bodies, necks and masks.		Every sword technique was so precise and merciless, almost to a bone-chilling degree. As though chopping vegetables, the Kamuys severed the Crusades' limbs, bodies, necks, and masks.

	Some of the Crusades tried to swung their bayonets in an attempt to resist the onslaught of the Japanese swords.		Some of the Crusades tried to swung their bayonets in an attempt to resist the onslaught of the Japanese swords.
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	The pair of eyes behind the mask ~~went dim~~ and the Crusade went limp. It died.		The pair of eyes behind the mask lost their glow and the Crusade went limp. It died.

	...Masatsugu had a faint feeling that he was a warrior capable of fighting Legions in the flesh. In fact, prior to coming here, a notion had occurred to him. Even without an army to command, he did not mind personally cutting down enemies of this scale—		...Masatsugu had a faint feeling that he was a warrior capable of fighting Legions in the flesh. In fact, prior to coming here, a notion had occurred to him. Even without an army to command, he did not mind personally cutting down enemies of this scale—
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	Up in the aerial battlefield, a Crusade was slashed dead every ten seconds.		Up in the aerial battlefield, a Crusade was slashed dead every ten seconds.

	This was all due to the Japanese sword wielded by the red-purple Kamuys—the peerless sharpness of the blades. Izumi-no-Kami Kanesada hummed, asking him not to ~~mention~~ the obvious.		This was all due to the Japanese sword wielded by the red-purple Kamuys—the peerless sharpness of the blades. Izumi-no-Kami Kanesada hummed, asking him not to point out the obvious.

	"I guess I'll simply call them 'Kanesadas' from now on."		"I guess I'll simply call them 'Kanesadas' from now on."