Chronicle Legion:Volume 2 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Zzhk: Undo revision 503479 by 127.0.0.1 (talk) correctly used, AD would be positioned BEFORE the year, because it means "the year of our lord", but either way, BC and AD are outdated

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Undo revision 503479 by 127.0.0.1 (talk) correctly used, AD would be positioned BEFORE the year, because it means "the year of our lord", but either way, BC and AD are outdated

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	That victory went down in history as the Battle of Crécy. Even today at the end of the twentieth century, it remained very well-known to war researchers.		That victory went down in history as the Battle of Crécy. Even today at the end of the twentieth century, it remained very well-known to war researchers.

	The year 1346 AD was part of the European Middle Ages familiar to everyone.		The year 1346 CE was part of the European Middle Ages familiar to everyone.

	To Edward, it was a nostalgic time of his adolescent past.		To Edward, it was a nostalgic time of his adolescent past.

127.0.0.1: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

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	That victory went down in history as the Battle of Crécy. Even today at the end of the twentieth century, it remained very well-known to war researchers.		That victory went down in history as the Battle of Crécy. Even today at the end of the twentieth century, it remained very well-known to war researchers.

	The year 1346 CE was part of the European Middle Ages familiar to everyone.		The year 1346 AD was part of the European Middle Ages familiar to everyone.

	To Edward, it was a nostalgic time of his adolescent past.		To Edward, it was a nostalgic time of his adolescent past.

Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Under the Black Knight's Shadow */

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Chapter 1 - Under the Black Knight's Shadow

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	It was past the middle of the month and autumn was in full swing.		It was past the middle of the month and autumn was in full swing.

	People called autumn the season of appetite and the time for sports. However, enjoying these pleasures ~~were~~ a little difficult at Tachibana Masatsugu's current residence of Suruga City.		People called autumn the season of appetite and the time for sports. However, enjoying these pleasures would be a little difficult at Tachibana Masatsugu's current residence of Suruga City.

	After all, ''enemy armies'' were occupying the "surroundings" of Suruga City.		After all, ''enemy armies'' were occupying the "surroundings" of Suruga City.

Zzhk at 15:50, 25 July 2016

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	The tutelary fort was located on Suruga City's tallest plateau, also known as Nihondaira. It used to be a famous scenic spot offering a view of Mount Fuji and Suruga Bay from afar.		The tutelary fort was located on Suruga City's tallest plateau, also known as Nihondaira. It used to be a famous scenic spot offering a view of Mount Fuji and Suruga Bay from afar.

	There was parking space reserved for the castellan in the high-ranking officers' lot.		There was a parking space reserved for the castellan in the high-ranking officers' lot.

	After Rikka parked her beloved car into the reserved space, the trio walked together in the tutelary fort. Their destination was the nation-protecting keep in the center of the tutelary fort.		After Rikka parked her beloved car into the reserved space, the trio walked together in the tutelary fort. Their destination was the nation-protecting keep in the center of the tutelary fort.

Zzhk at 15:49, 25 July 2016

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	The tutelary fort was located on Suruga City's tallest plateau, also known as Nihondaira. It used to be a famous scenic spot offering a view of Mount Fuji and Suruga Bay from afar.		The tutelary fort was located on Suruga City's tallest plateau, also known as Nihondaira. It used to be a famous scenic spot offering a view of Mount Fuji and Suruga Bay from afar.

	There was parking space reserved for the castellan in the ~~commissioned~~ officers' lot.		There was parking space reserved for the castellan in the high-ranking officers' lot.

	After Rikka parked her beloved car into the reserved space, the trio walked together in the tutelary fort. Their destination was the nation-protecting keep in the center of the tutelary fort.		After Rikka parked her beloved car into the reserved space, the trio walked together in the tutelary fort. Their destination was the nation-protecting keep in the center of the tutelary fort.

Hp2 at 19:04, 23 July 2016

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	Having demonstrated the capability of defeating an enemy army six times bigger than his own, the Black Prince would be embarrassed to brag about such a small victory...		Having demonstrated the capability of defeating an enemy army six times bigger than his own, the Black Prince would be embarrassed to brag about such a small victory...

	As his thoughts reached this point, the legendary prince smiled wryly and said, "No, it was all thanks to God's blessing and the soldiers' valor that ~~totaly~~ victory was achieved. I must now praise my knights for their glorious efforts and suppress my desire for a contest of strategy."		As his thoughts reached this point, the legendary prince smiled wryly and said, "No, it was all thanks to God's blessing and the soldiers' valor that total victory was achieved. I must now praise my knights for their glorious efforts and suppress my desire for a contest of strategy."

	Edward refreshed his mindset and said to the little girl spirit's simulacrum on his shoulder, "Morrigan, could you perform a search for me?"		Edward refreshed his mindset and said to the little girl spirit's simulacrum on his shoulder, "Morrigan, could you perform a search for me?"

Hp2 at 18:48, 23 July 2016

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	This gallant appearance belonged to the Suruga tutelary fort's current castellan, Chevalier Akigase Rikka. Masatsugu could not possibly mistake the identity of a striking beauty of her caliber.		This gallant appearance belonged to the Suruga tutelary fort's current castellan, Chevalier Akigase Rikka. Masatsugu could not possibly mistake the identity of a striking beauty of her caliber.

	He said, "No too long of a while, really. We met yesterday and the day before."		He said, "Not too long of a while, really. We met yesterday and the day before."

	"I-Indeed, you are right."		"I-Indeed, you are right."

Hp2 at 18:43, 23 July 2016

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	The sole exception was this land of Suruga.		The sole exception was this land of Suruga.

	Thanks to Chevalier Akigase Rikka coming to ~~the~~ the Suruga tutelary fort by chance—as well as Tachibana Masatsugu's efforts—they managed to halt the Restoration Alliance's advance.		Thanks to Chevalier Akigase Rikka coming to the Suruga tutelary fort by chance—as well as Tachibana Masatsugu's efforts—they managed to halt the Restoration Alliance's advance.

	The problem was that enemy forces still remained inside Shizuoka Prefecture.		The problem was that enemy forces still remained inside Shizuoka Prefecture.

Zzhk at 22:51, 20 July 2016

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	Tachibana Hatsune's serious declaration was dismissed indifferently by Masatsugu.		Tachibana Hatsune's serious declaration was dismissed indifferently by Masatsugu.

	Akigase Rikka had shown up twenty minutes earlier. Leaving Year 2 Class 2's homeroom where they were earlier, they had gone to an open-air cafe ~~off campus~~, thus leading to the above exchange.		Akigase Rikka had shown up twenty minutes earlier. Leaving Year 2 Class 2's homeroom where they were earlier, they had gone to an open-air cafe outside the school building, thus leading to the above exchange.

	It was currently third period and there was no noise around.		It was currently third period and there was no noise around.

Belatkuro at 03:18, 20 July 2016

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	These points added up to show that an outstanding sniper was at work. Even so, the enemy already made a mistake the moment they thought sniping would work against a Chevalier of Edward's caliber. Had the target been a Japanese Chevalier lacking in practical combat experience or greenhorns among the British knights, the story would be different...		These points added up to show that an outstanding sniper was at work. Even so, the enemy already made a mistake the moment they thought sniping would work against a Chevalier of Edward's caliber. Had the target been a Japanese Chevalier lacking in practical combat experience or greenhorns among the British knights, the story would be different...

	Even if Edward was enjoying his sightseeing and looked very relaxed, instantly returning to a battlefield mindset was not difficult. That was kind of man he was.		Even if Edward was enjoying his sightseeing and looked very relaxed, instantly returning to a battlefield mindset was not difficult. That was the kind of man he was.

	Also of note, the Charter of Chivalry laid down many rules forbidding armed forces from ~~attack~~ civilian structures. However, civilian structures used for military objectives were considered exceptions, which was why the retaliatory shot just now as totally legitimate.		Also of note, the Charter of Chivalry laid down many rules forbidding armed forces from attacking civilian structures. However, civilian structures used for military objectives were considered exceptions, which was why the retaliatory shot just now was totally legitimate.

	"Oh right, that katana-using Chevalier I saw at Suruga last time... He demonstrated the same ability too."		"Oh right, that katana-using Chevalier I saw at Suruga last time... He demonstrated the same ability too."
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	Masatsugu went straight to the point, causing the surprised Shiori to deny angrily, "Please do not suggest anything so preposterous!"		Masatsugu went straight to the point, causing the surprised Shiori to deny angrily, "Please do not suggest anything so preposterous!"

	"All other reasons are unlikely. As your knight, Princess, I am been having friendly conversations with another girl to develop a relationship of mutual honesty. Witnessing that, you cannot help but feel jealous—This is the most convincing motive."		"All other reasons are unlikely. As your knight, Princess, I have been having friendly conversations with another girl to develop a relationship of mutual honesty. Witnessing that, you cannot help but feel jealous—This is the most convincing motive."

	"M-Masatsugu-sama!"		"M-Masatsugu-sama!"