Chronicle Legion:Volume 3 Chapter 6 - Revision history

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	Back the sky over Mount Souun...		Back to the sky over Mount Souun...

	Masatsugu's Tōkaidō-Roman coalition force versus Edward's British army.		Masatsugu's Tōkaidō-Roman coalition force versus Edward's British army.

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	"You can really see that stuff?"		"You can really see that stuff?"

	"This time, my intuition tells me ~~that~~ you hinted at is the most effective path to survival... This is precisely the effect of my Feat of Arms—Kanglong Youhui."		"This time, my intuition tells me what you hinted at is the most effective path to survival... This is precisely the effect of my Feat of Arms—Kanglong Youhui."

	Wei Qing easily revealed his completely unassuming ability.		Wei Qing easily revealed his completely unassuming ability.

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	Those forces were currently fighting the armies left behind by Prince Edward.		Those forces were currently fighting the armies left behind by Prince Edward.

	Currently, the hundred and fifty Tōkaidō Legions combined with the four hundred and fifty of Rome's to give a total of a thousand and two hundred.		Currently, the seven hundred and fifty Tōkaidō Legions combined with the four hundred and fifty of Rome's to give a total of a thousand and two hundred.

	Given the proportions, it would not be wrong for Tōkaidō to be in command. However, if the Roman army, which had sacrificed the most so far, refused to cooperate, this battle would be extremely hard to fight—That was how the proportions worked.		Given the proportions, it would not be wrong for Tōkaidō to be in command. However, if the Roman army, which had sacrificed the most so far, refused to cooperate, this battle would be extremely hard to fight—That was how the proportions worked.

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	"Kanesadas—the two hundred of you in the front—Draw your swords and charge."		"Kanesadas—the two hundred of you in the front—Draw your swords and charge."

	"I knew it would come to this. Focus the rain of arrows on the advance party. Do not let them succeed, or else the samurai swords will disrupt ~~oru~~ formation."		"I knew it would come to this. Focus the rain of arrows on the advance party. Do not let them succeed, or else the samurai swords will disrupt our formation."

	The army of Kanesadas at the top left of the diagonal were many ranks deep.		The army of Kanesadas at the top left of the diagonal were many ranks deep.

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	"Drawing a diagonal line across the battlefield... An oblique formation, huh? How old-fashioned to employ the tactic of Lord Epaminondas. Hohohoho, famed generals of past and present, oriental and occidental, all use the same methods, is that it!?"		"Drawing a diagonal line across the battlefield... An oblique formation, huh? How old-fashioned to employ the tactic of Lord Epaminondas. Hohohoho, famed generals of past and present, oriental and occidental, all use the same methods, is that it!?"

	Speaking of medieval knights, the of them were actually uncultured brutes.		Speaking of medieval knights, the majority of them were actually uncultured brutes.

	The point of promoting chivalry was to impart a system of basic morals on these unruly men who frequented battlefields. So-called knights were nowhere as elegant as imagined by modern people.		The point of promoting chivalry was to impart a system of basic morals on these unruly men who frequented battlefields. So-called knights were nowhere as elegant as imagined by modern people.

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	Maintaining stalemate was the key point. Ensuring their own safety and survival was the top priority. While this was happening, the "elite unit with superior offensive power" would defeat the initial enemies in front of them before turning to the rest of the enemies stalled by their "less powerful allies."		Maintaining stalemate was the key point. Ensuring their own safety and survival was the top priority. While this was happening, the "elite unit with superior offensive power" would defeat the initial enemies in front of them before turning to the rest of the enemies stalled by their "less powerful allies."

	Then afterwards, the ordinary troops would attack aggressively, to surround and destroy the enemy army ~~together~~ with the elite unit...		Then afterwards, the ordinary troops would attack aggressively, to surround and destroy the enemy army in concert with the elite unit...


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	It was the same for the Centuriae because they had spent a long time at Seiryuu Gate to keep Edward occupied.		It was the same for the Centuriae because they had spent a long time at Seiryuu Gate to keep Edward occupied.

	This ~~difference in numbers~~ of two hundred would only increase over time. However, Edward was still fired up for battle. Ambition and ~~a sense of competition~~ made him cheerful.		This numerical gap of two hundred would only increase over time. However, Edward was still fired up for battle. Ambition and competitiveness made him cheerful.

	He was deeply convinced that the opponent who had won his approval still had more tricks to play!		He was deeply convinced that the opponent who had won his approval still had more tricks to play!
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	As one would expect, Masatsugu's troops were mostly afflicted with arrow wounds.		As one would expect, Masatsugu's troops were mostly afflicted with arrow wounds.

	The arrows of light shot by the Garter Knights ~~had~~ not ~~disappeared~~.		The arrows of light shot by the Garter Knights did not disappear.

	The arrows of light were still embedded in the Kanesadas. Some of the Kanesadas were shot in the head, chest, or neck, killing them. There were others who had arrows in their thigh, foot, or waist, immobilizing them. There were also many cases of flesh wounds in shoulders, arms, or damage to ~~the surface of~~ armor.		The arrows of light were still embedded in the Kanesadas. Some of the Kanesadas were shot in the head, chest, or neck, killing them. There were others who had arrows in their thigh, foot, or waist, immobilizing them. There were also many cases of flesh wounds in shoulders, arms, or surface damage to armor.

	The majority of the Kanesadas were lying on the ground, unable to fight anymore.		The majority of the Kanesadas were lying on the ground, unable to fight anymore.
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	Having consumed vast amounts of ectoplasmic fluid, they were depleted in strength. Just as Masatsugu was satisfied with the current situation, he sensed bloodlust so he pulled the wyvern's reins lightly.		Having consumed vast amounts of ectoplasmic fluid, they were depleted in strength. Just as Masatsugu was satisfied with the current situation, he sensed bloodlust so he pulled the wyvern's reins lightly.

	~~Wvyerns~~ were intelligent retainer beasts. His flying mount noticed Masatsugu's intent and changed course to the right.		Wyverns were intelligent retainer beasts. His flying mount noticed Masatsugu's intent and changed course to the right.

	Several seconds later, something descended through Masatsugu and his wyvern's former position.		Several seconds later, something descended through Masatsugu and his wyvern's former position.
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	A Garter Knight approached, its bayonet rifle pointed at Masatsugu.		A Garter Knight approached, its bayonet rifle pointed at Masatsugu.

	~~The~~ black knight was not heavily injured. It was flying at low altitude only because the shock of a collision during battle had sent it down. The two eyes beneath the mask had evidently captured Masatsugu's figure.		This black knight was not heavily injured. It was flying at low altitude only because the shock of a collision during battle had sent it down. The two eyes beneath the mask had evidently captured Masatsugu's figure.

	The enemy realized that the noesis emanating from Masatsugu was commanding a great army.		The enemy realized that the noesis emanating from Masatsugu was commanding a great army.
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	Spurring her wyvern to fly at full speed, Akigase Rikka charged at the British Legion.		Spurring her wyvern to fly at full speed, Akigase Rikka charged at the British Legion.

	She drew ~~out~~ the treasured blade of Genji pedigree ~~from~~ her waist and recited the mantra of the Feat of Arms. Rikka also intended to slay the enemy soldier with her own hand.		She drew the treasured blade of Genji pedigree at her waist and recited the mantra of the Feat of Arms. Rikka also intended to slay the enemy soldier with her own hand.

	A slightly wavy temper-line was visible on the two-feet-seven-inch blade.		A slightly wavy temper-line was visible on the two-feet-seven-inch blade.
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	"Masatsugu-dono—"		"Masatsugu-dono—"

	Rikka was pressed intimately against Masatsugu'~~sbody~~.		Rikka was pressed intimately against Masatsugu's body.

	Through the military uniform, Masatsugu could feel her softness and warmth.		Through the military uniform, Masatsugu could feel her softness and warmth.