City Series:Volume7 Layer 1 - Revision history

Js06 at 14:11, 21 February 2022

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Js06 at 02:06, 3 July 2016

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Js06 at 02:09, 26 May 2016

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 Now, in the original publication, the Boss spoke in the Kansai dialect, but I changed that to standard Japanese after the serialization began. It felt like an unnatural way to establish his character.
-===Record 95===
+===Record 95: Meeting You===
 ===Record 42===

Js06 at 00:20, 24 May 2016

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 Snow Character shows up right away and you can read the school’s name on the left side of the illustration.
-===Record 86===
+===Record 86: Zoning Out Amid the Excitement===
 ===Record 95===

127.0.0.1: Fixed some typos and the navigation bar (seems like it was copy-pasted from Osaka B).

2016-05-23T20:33:57Z

Fixed some typos and the navigation bar (seems like it was copy-pasted from Osaka B).

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	Before I could actually say that, you used your skill as a Tokyo Special Duty Officer to elbow me in the gut. ''Oww, what the hell do you think you’re doing to the Vice Chancellor’s precious belly?'' As I grew angry, the gas lights lining the sidewalk starting sending out their night-colored lights.		Before I could actually say that, you used your skill as a Tokyo Special Duty Officer to elbow me in the gut. ''Oww, what the hell do you think you’re doing to the Vice Chancellor’s precious belly?'' As I grew angry, the gas lights lining the sidewalk starting sending out their night-colored lights.

	Our surroundings were illuminated up by the winter-exclusive darkness and the smell of winter filled the area.		Our surroundings were illuminated by the winter-exclusive darkness and the smell of winter filled the area.

	I rubbed my stomach and looked forward where the North Wind was walking from the other side of the road with his black hair fluttering behind him.		I rubbed my stomach and looked forward where the North Wind was walking from the other side of the road with his black hair fluttering behind him.
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	The line of frost was supported by a colorless and invisible destiny line extending right to left between communication poles.		The line of frost was supported by a colorless and invisible destiny line extending right to left between communication poles.

	It was a pretty low-quality destiny line, so ~~who’s~~ was it?		It was a pretty low-quality destiny line, so whose was it?

	“Seiyah!!”		“Seiyah!!”
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	\| Back to [[City_Series:Volume7_Preface\|Preface]]		\| Back to [[City_Series:Volume7_Preface\|Preface]]
	\| Return to [[City_Series\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[City_Series\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[City_Series:~~Volume4b_Layer_2~~\|Layer 2]]		\| Forward to [[City_Series:Volume7_Layer_2\|Layer 2]]
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Js06 at 01:47, 23 May 2016

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 The title story had the Tokyo-ish layout of the gas lights, the North Wind, and the night. At the start, I wanted to make the night and the wind be artificial things. In the illustration’s background, you should be able to see a number of things attached to the gas light.
-===Chapter 108: Someday===
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 The reason the protagonist is having the Professor erase his memories will be provided later. And the black shadows each handle their own form of creation.
-===Chapter 119===
+===Record 119: Someday Surely===
-===Chapter 1===
+'''02/19/1999
-===Chapter 86===
+Snow Character shows up right away and you can read the school’s name on the left side of the illustration.
-===Chapter 95===
+===Record 95===
-===Chapter 42===
+===Record 42===
-===Chapter 38===
+===Record 38===
-===Chapter 72===
+===Record 72===
-===Chapter 92===
+===Record 92===
-===Chapter 99===
+===Record 99===
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Js06 at 02:40, 20 May 2016

2016-05-20T02:40:03Z

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	“…You don’t hold back, do you?”		“…You don’t hold back, do you?”

	~~“Okay, I think~~ I should ~~put you~~ to sleep ~~now~~ so ~~you~~ won’t talk anymore. Goodnight… Ahh, I’m so full.”		“Then I should probably go to sleep so I won’t talk anymore. Goodnight… Ahh, I’m so full.”

	''Don’t react so quickly, you idiot.'' I ate the bread, punched the Professor with plenty of energy, and then asked a question.		''Don’t react so quickly, you idiot.'' I ate the bread, punched the Professor with plenty of energy, and then asked a question.

Js06 at 02:31, 20 May 2016

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 “That’s not where.”
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 The title story had the Tokyo-ish layout of the gas lights, the North Wind, and the night. At the start, I wanted to make the night and the wind be artificial things. In the illustration’s background, you should be able to see a number of things attached to the gas light.
-===Chapter 108===
+===Chapter 108: Someday===
 ===Chapter 119===

Js06 at 02:40, 19 May 2016

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	As he passed us, he saw where I was rubbing my stomach and spoke.		As he passed us, he saw where I was rubbing my stomach and spoke.

	“That’s not it.”		“That’s not where.”

Js06: Created page with "{{Incomplete|parts=1|tparts=11}} ==Layer 1: Thoughts== thumb '''11/15/1998 '''17:58 You and I walked back from school together on a major road..."

2016-05-19T02:32:06Z

Created page with "{{Incomplete|parts=1|tparts=11}} ==Layer 1: Thoughts== thumb '''11/15/1998 '''17:58 You and I walked back from school together on a major road..."

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==Layer 1: Thoughts==
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'''11/15/1998

'''17:58

You and I walked back from school together on a major road’s sidewalk as the winter gas lights began to turn on.

“Do you think thoughts are real?”

“If I thought they were…would that thought be real?”

When I answered you, you groaned a little, wrinkled your well-formed brow, and tilted your head.

“Y’know, thoughts can be tricky, so let’s set them aside for now. …Now, memories: those were real at one point.”

“Well, yeah. Memories are when your thoughts get outside.<ref>Based on a literal interpretation of the Japanese word for memories.</ref> You could call it a real thoughtful ejection.”

“Then where do those memories ‘get out’ from to become memories?”

''Hmm. Where ''do'' they get out from? Your ears or your butt sound like some unpleasantly realistic options…

But before I could decide, you circled in front of me and asked another question.

“You were thinking about them getting out from some place really dirty, weren’t you?”

“Sorry, I hadn’t gotten that far yet.”

Before I could actually say that, you used your skill as a Tokyo Special Duty Officer to elbow me in the gut. ''Oww, what the hell do you think you’re doing to the Vice Chancellor’s precious belly?'' As I grew angry, the gas lights lining the sidewalk starting sending out their night-colored lights.

Our surroundings were illuminated up by the winter-exclusive darkness and the smell of winter filled the area.

I rubbed my stomach and looked forward where the North Wind was walking from the other side of the road with his black hair fluttering behind him.

As he passed us, he saw where I was rubbing my stomach and spoke.

“That’s not it.”

'''Author Comment:

Commenting on this stuff is pretty difficult, but try to follow along.

Anyway, all of Layer 1 is what I wrote well before the serialization began. I think it might have been a year before. I wrote fifteen passages and the ones that didn’t fit here were put in other parts of the story. That’s why these ones feel a little different from the rest of the story. The title story was the only one I wrote after we decided to serialize this.

The title story had the Tokyo-ish layout of the gas lights, the North Wind, and the night. At the start, I wanted to make the night and the wind be artificial things. In the illustration’s background, you should be able to see a number of things attached to the gas light.

===Chapter 108===

===Chapter 119===

===Chapter 1===

===Chapter 86===

===Chapter 95===

===Chapter 42===

===Chapter 38===

===Chapter 72===

===Chapter 92===

===Chapter 99===

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===Notes===
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| Back to [[City_Series:Volume7_Preface|Preface]]
| Return to [[City_Series|Main Page]]
| Forward to [[City_Series:Volume4b_Layer_2|Layer 2]]
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	I guess you could say this is where the main story begins.		I guess you could say this is where the main story begins.

	~~Snow Character~~ shows up right away and you can read the school’s name on the left side of the illustration.		Snowy shows up right away and you can read the school’s name on the left side of the illustration.
	===Record 86: Zoning Out Amid the Excitement===		===Record 86: Zoning Out Amid the Excitement===

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	“It’s a nice pool, but there’s nothing too exciting here. …Are the girls using the indoor greenhouse pool?”		“It’s a nice pool, but there’s nothing too exciting here. …Are the girls using the indoor greenhouse pool?”

	~~“Snow Character~~ is guarding the place with her sword, so things might be more brutal there than here.”		“Snowy is guarding the place with her sword, so things might be more brutal there than here.”

	“What about Senpai? Is he with the 1st Special Duty Officer?”		“What about Senpai? Is he with the 1st Special Duty Officer?”
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	After running to the pharmacy, I for some reason found a ponytailed girl with a wooden sword standing behind the counter.		After running to the pharmacy, I for some reason found a ponytailed girl with a wooden sword standing behind the counter.

	It was ~~Snow Character~~. She was playing with Daitarou, her pet white fox, but she looked annoyed as soon as she saw me.		It was Snowy. She was playing with Daitarou, her pet white fox, but she looked annoyed as soon as she saw me.

	“You are far too late. …Everyone else is already here.”		“You are far too late. …Everyone else is already here.”
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	“Then can you give me a drug to make me smarter? Things never seem to work out for me.”		“Then can you give me a drug to make me smarter? Things never seem to work out for me.”

	~~Snow Character~~ held Daitarou in her arms as it begged for food and she gave me a rare smile.		Snowy held Daitarou in her arms as it begged for food and she gave me a rare smile.

	“Sorry. I had the same thought and bought them all up a moment ago.”		“Sorry. I had the same thought and bought them all up a moment ago.”
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	“You should leave it alone.”		“You should leave it alone.”

	It was ~~Snow Character~~. She sat behind the bush while holding the pipe in question like a sword in its scabbard.		It was Snowy. She sat behind the bush while holding the pipe in question like a sword in its scabbard.

	“If you two leave and I fall asleep, this will be attached. So hurry up and leave.”		“If you two leave and I fall asleep, this will be attached. So hurry up and leave.”
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	“He has no connection to the Kansai students and corporations that have been causing trouble lately, but I am worried about how reckless and careless he is. His recklessness and carelessness could lead to me cutting him down.”		“He has no connection to the Kansai students and corporations that have been causing trouble lately, but I am worried about how reckless and careless he is. His recklessness and carelessness could lead to me cutting him down.”

	“What about ~~Snow Character~~?”		“What about Snowy?”

	“She relies on her power too much. Even if she uses paper, sound, celluloid, or the sense of taste, she must find a more pure way to cut people down. I am worried about how inexperienced she is. That inexperience could lead to me cutting her down.”		“She relies on her power too much. Even if she uses paper, sound, celluloid, or the sense of taste, she must find a more pure way to cut people down. I am worried about how inexperienced she is. That inexperience could lead to me cutting her down.”