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Polarem: /* Text */ Capitalization -- "pops" -> "Pops"

2011-06-09T15:31:56Z

Text: Capitalization -- "pops" -> "Pops"

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	// Orig TL: Though, things like secretly taking photos of my girlfriend is kinda pointless...		// Orig TL: Though, things like secretly taking photos of my girlfriend is kinda pointless...
	// けど、自分の彼女の写真を隠し撮りするなど、あまりに虚しい…。		// けど、自分の彼女の写真を隠し撮りするなど、あまりに虚しい…。
	<7602> And besides, going along with ~~pops~~ was just inviting more trouble.		<7602> And besides, going along with Pops was just inviting more trouble.
	// それに、オッサンと行動を共にして、厄介事が起きずに済むはずがなかった。		// それに、オッサンと行動を共にして、厄介事が起きずに済むはずがなかった。
	<7603> \{\m{B}} "Ah, Sanae-san."		<7603> \{\m{B}} "Ah, Sanae-san."
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	<7604> \{Akio} "What?! How'd she get out of the smoke screen?!"		<7604> \{Akio} "What?! How'd she get out of the smoke screen?!"
	// \{秋生}「なにぃっ！？あの煙幕の中からどうやってっ！？」		// \{秋生}「なにぃっ！？あの煙幕の中からどうやってっ！？」
	<7605> I looked for a way to escape in ~~pops~~' confusion as he searched for her.		<7605> I looked for a way to escape in Pops' confusion as he searched for her.
	// オッサンが慌ててその姿を探している隙に、俺は逃走を計った。		// オッサンが慌ててその姿を探している隙に、俺は逃走を計った。
	<7606> Turning around in the residential district, I went back to the park.		<7606> Turning around in the residential district, I went back to the park.
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	<7623> \{Sanae} "Akio-san's a bad kid, playing with his food."		<7623> \{Sanae} "Akio-san's a bad kid, playing with his food."
	// \{早苗}「秋生さんは、食べ物を粗末にして、悪い子です」		// \{早苗}「秋生さんは、食べ物を粗末にして、悪い子です」
	<7624> \{\m{B}} "Umm... where's ~~pops~~?"		<7624> \{\m{B}} "Umm... where's Pops?"
	// orig TL: "Pops is there?"		// orig TL: "Pops is there?"
	// \{\m{B}}「その…オッサンは？」		// \{\m{B}}「その…オッサンは？」
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	<7738> We waited around a bit.		<7738> We waited around a bit.
	// しばらく待たされることになる。		// しばらく待たされることになる。
	<7739> During that time, ~~pops~~ was moving around suspiciously, like some peeper.		<7739> During that time, Pops was moving around suspiciously, like some peeper.
	// その間、オッサンは不審な動きで店内を覗き見する。		// その間、オッサンは不審な動きで店内を覗き見する。
	<7740> \{Akio} "Hey, check it out, it's Nagisa."		<7740> \{Akio} "Hey, check it out, it's Nagisa."
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	<7800> \{Akio} "Oh, there's Nagisa. Call out to her."		<7800> \{Akio} "Oh, there's Nagisa. Call out to her."
	// \{秋生}「お、渚が居るぞ。呼んでくれ」		// \{秋生}「お、渚が居るぞ。呼んでくれ」
	<7801> \{\m{B}} "You don't get it do you, ~~pops~~..."		<7801> \{\m{B}} "You don't get it do you, Pops..."
	// \{\m{B}}「わかってるのか、このオッサン…」		// \{\m{B}}「わかってるのか、このオッサン…」
	<7802> I didn't call out to Nagisa, but she came anyway.		<7802> I didn't call out to Nagisa, but she came anyway.
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	<7806> \{Nagisa} "Yes, one hot coffee."		<7806> \{Nagisa} "Yes, one hot coffee."
	// \{渚}「はい、ホットコーヒーおひとつですね」		// \{渚}「はい、ホットコーヒーおひとつですね」
	<7807> Nagisa turned herself around to face ~~pops~~.		<7807> Nagisa turned herself around to face Pops.
	// 渚がくるりと体を反転させて、オッサンのほうを向く。		// 渚がくるりと体を反転させて、オッサンのほうを向く。
	<7808> \{Akio} "........."		<7808> \{Akio} "........."
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	// orig TL: (That magic uniform and speech… in that figure, Nagisa had become rather desired…)		// orig TL: (That magic uniform and speech… in that figure, Nagisa had become rather desired…)
	// \{\m{B}}（制服マジックと言うべきか…あんな格好をすると、渚もモテモテになるんだな…）		// \{\m{B}}（制服マジックと言うべきか…あんな格好をすると、渚もモテモテになるんだな…）
	<7875> \{\m{B}} (Even ~~pops~~ came as a regular customer just to see this cute stuff...)		<7875> \{\m{B}} (Even Pops came as a regular customer just to see this cute stuff...)
	// orig TL: (Pops as well, had come as a customer just to have something cute to stare at…)		// orig TL: (Pops as well, had come as a customer just to have something cute to stare at…)
	// \{\m{B}}（オッサンも、常連客から可愛い可愛いと聞かされて、ここに来てるわけだし…）		// \{\m{B}}（オッサンも、常連客から可愛い可愛いと聞かされて、ここに来てるわけだし…）
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	<7906> Standing up roughly, we pulled him along.		<7906> Standing up roughly, we pulled him along.
	// 乱暴に立ち上がって、俺たちの脇を抜けていく男ども。		// 乱暴に立ち上がって、俺たちの脇を抜けていく男ども。
	<7907> Then, ~~pops~~ stopped his leg behind him.		<7907> Then, Pops stopped his leg behind him.
	// その時、相手がわざとオッサンの足を踏んだのが見えた。		// その時、相手がわざとオッサンの足を踏んだのが見えた。
	<7908> And then...		<7908> And then...
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	<7917> His hand came out.		<7917> His hand came out.
	// 手が出た。		// 手が出た。
	<7918> Seeing it, ~~pops~~ pulled out his leg again.		<7918> Seeing it, Pops pulled out his leg again.
	// オッサンはそれをよけて、また足を引っかけた。		// オッサンはそれをよけて、また足を引っかけた。
	<7919> Thump! \shake{3}		<7919> Thump! \shake{3}

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2010-12-30T13:05:16Z

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Polarem: /* Text */ They're already married

2010-11-23T14:04:04Z

Text: They're already married

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	<7600> To be honest, the thought of the reprints as the reward made me shook me a little.		<7600> To be honest, the thought of the reprints as the reward made me shook me a little.
	// 正直、写真の焼き増し、という協力報酬には心が揺れた。		// 正直、写真の焼き増し、という協力報酬には心が揺れた。
	<7601> Though, things like secretly taking photos of my girlfriend is kinda pointless...		<7601> Though, things like secretly taking photos of my wife is kinda pointless...
			// Orig TL: Though, things like secretly taking photos of my girlfriend is kinda pointless...
	// けど、自分の彼女の写真を隠し撮りするなど、あまりに虚しい…。		// けど、自分の彼女の写真を隠し撮りするなど、あまりに虚しい…。
	<7602> And besides, going along with pops was just inviting more trouble.		<7602> And besides, going along with pops was just inviting more trouble.

Kotarou: /* Small corrections. */

2008-03-06T11:28:04Z

Small corrections.

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	<7501> And just like that, I suddenly had a free afternoon.		<7501> And just like that, I suddenly had a free afternoon.
	// ぽっかりと、午後から時間が空いてしまった。		// ぽっかりと、午後から時間が空いてしまった。
	<7502> The work that was scheduled ~~was cancelled~~ by our client just before we were sent out.		<7502> The work that was scheduled got canceled by our client just before we were sent out.
	// 予定していた仕事を依頼主が直前になってキャンセルしたためだ。		// 予定していた仕事を依頼主が直前になってキャンセルしたためだ。
	<7503> \{Yoshino} "Well, you go first."		<7503> \{Yoshino} "Well, you go first."
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	// orig TL: "How's that, a girl serving in the family restaurant's uniform, showing off her breasts, she'll be famous!"		// orig TL: "How's that, a girl serving in the family restaurant's uniform, showing off her breasts, she'll be famous!"
	// \{秋生}「いいか、あいつが勤めてるファミレスの制服は、胸元が強調されているので有名なんだよ！」		// \{秋生}「いいか、あいつが勤めてるファミレスの制服は、胸元が強調されているので有名なんだよ！」
	<7535> \{Akio} "That's why I want ~~one~~ photo! You got that, idiot?"		<7535> \{Akio} "That's why I want a photo! You got that, idiot?"
	// \{秋生}「だから、写真が欲しいっつーてんだよっ！わかったか、馬鹿！」		// \{秋生}「だから、写真が欲しいっつーてんだよっ！わかったか、馬鹿！」
	<7536> \{Akio} "Arghh, daaamnit! Imagine how hot that'd be! Just look, look!"		<7536> \{Akio} "Arghh, daaamnit! Imagine how hot that'd be! Just look, look!"
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	<7565> \{\m{B}} "If it's gonna be trouble, do you have anything to do in mind?"		<7565> \{\m{B}} "If it's gonna be trouble, do you have anything to do in mind?"
	// \{\m{B}}「困るって、なんかする気かよ」		// \{\m{B}}「困るって、なんかする気かよ」
	<7566> \{Akio} "Yeah. Let's go to Nagisa's ~~work~~ from here."		<7566> \{Akio} "Yeah. Let's go to Nagisa's workplace from here."
	// \{秋生}「ああ。これから渚のバイト先にいく」		// \{秋生}「ああ。これから渚のバイト先にいく」
	<7567> \{\m{B}} "Well, go by yourself. See you."		<7567> \{\m{B}} "Well, go by yourself. See you."
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	<7761> \{Nagisa} "You came so suddenly... I was a bit surprised."		<7761> \{Nagisa} "You came so suddenly... I was a bit surprised."
	// \{渚}「いきなり来たら…びっくりします」		// \{渚}「いきなり来たら…びっくりします」
	<7762> \{\m{B}} "Sorry, my bad. I came quickly after I got some spare time.		<7762> \{\m{B}} "Sorry, my bad. I came quickly after I got some spare time."
	// \{\m{B}}「いや、悪い。急に暇が出来たんだ。だから連絡のしようもなくてさ…」		// \{\m{B}}「いや、悪い。急に暇が出来たんだ。だから連絡のしようもなくてさ…」
	<7763> Actually, she's cute.		<7763> Actually, she's cute.
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	<7783> \{\m{B}} "Yeah, thank you."		<7783> \{\m{B}} "Yeah, thank you."
	// \{\m{B}}「ああ、サンキュ」		// \{\m{B}}「ああ、サンキュ」
	<7784> Handing us the menus, Nagisa ~~was~~ busied herself with the chairs.		<7784> Handing us the menus, Nagisa busied herself with the chairs.
	// メニューを俺たちに渡すと、渚は忙しそうに席を離れていった。		// メニューを俺たちに渡すと、渚は忙しそうに席を離れていった。
	<7785> \{Akio} "See? She didn't ~~recognized~~ me."		<7785> \{Akio} "See? She didn't recognize me."
	//Orig TL: "Look, doesn't she seem cheerful?".		//Orig TL: "Look, doesn't she seem cheerful?".
	//This one was quite weird, akio referring himself that he wasn't exposed. I'm not sure of the form of the sentence here, so it is kinda an improvisation. This line needs a clean up -Klashikari		//This one was quite weird, akio referring himself that he wasn't exposed. I'm not sure of the form of the sentence here, so it is kinda an improvisation. This line needs a clean up -Klashikari
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	<7787> \{Akio} "Nah, she's actually quite witty. If I were to talk she would see through it."		<7787> \{Akio} "Nah, she's actually quite witty. If I were to talk she would see through it."
	// \{秋生}「いや、あいつは鋭い。もし声を出していたなら気づかれていただろう…」		// \{秋生}「いや、あいつは鋭い。もし声を出していたなら気づかれていただろう…」
	<7788> \{\m{B}} "Seriously, wearing those ~~sunglass~~, much as you wanna say you're a different person, you're not gonna pass for one."		<7788> \{\m{B}} "Seriously, wearing those sunglasses, much as you wanna say you're a different person, you're not gonna pass for one."
	// \{\m{B}}「いやもう、グラサンがなかろうが、別人ですと言い張れば、別人で通るんじゃないかと」		// \{\m{B}}「いやもう、グラサンがなかろうが、別人ですと言い張れば、別人で通るんじゃないかと」
	<7789> \{Akio} "I'm not stupid."		<7789> \{Akio} "I'm not stupid."
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	<7838> \{\m{B}} "Well, do what you want.."		<7838> \{\m{B}} "Well, do what you want.."
	// \{\m{B}}「じゃ、好きにしてくれ…」		// \{\m{B}}「じゃ、好きにしてくれ…」
	<7839> \{Akio} "Whatever you're gonna say about my interests, you've gotta follow the rules for taking the photos man."		<7839> \{Akio} "Whatever you're gonna say about my interests, you've gotta follow the rules for taking the photos, man."
	// \{秋生}「なに他人事みたいに言ってんだよ、てめぇだって焼き増し条件でノコノコついてきたくせによ」		// \{秋生}「なに他人事みたいに言ってんだよ、てめぇだって焼き増し条件でノコノコついてきたくせによ」
	<7840> \{\m{B}} "Gah..."		<7840> \{\m{B}} "Gah..."
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	<7960> I think he's a good guy.		<7960> I think he's a good guy.
	// いい人だと思った。		// いい人だと思った。
	<7961> \{Store Manager} "Besides, even though I look like this, I have a keen interest in in Bushido."		<7961> \{Store Manager} "Besides, even though I look like this, I have a keen interest in Bushido."
	// orig TL: "That's what it looks like to me, that's just how I feel about it."		// orig TL: "That's what it looks like to me, that's just how I feel about it."
	// \{店長}「それにこう見えても、私、武道の嗜みもございますので」		// \{店長}「それにこう見えても、私、武道の嗜みもございますので」

Klashikari: Some issues with 2 lines, suggested TL.

2008-03-03T11:56:19Z

Some issues with 2 lines, suggested TL.

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	// \{秋生}「かーーーっ！まさか、てめぇ、忘れちまったなんて言うんじゃねぇだろうなぁ！」		// \{秋生}「かーーーっ！まさか、てめぇ、忘れちまったなんて言うんじゃねぇだろうなぁ！」
	<7528> \{\m{B}} "No, seriously, what do you mean...?"		<7528> \{\m{B}} "No, seriously, what do you mean...?"
	// orig TL: "No, I mean what is ~~it…~~?"		// orig TL: "No, I mean what is it...?"
	// \{\m{B}}「いや、マジでなんのことだか…」		// \{\m{B}}「いや、マジでなんのことだか…」
	<7529> \{Akio} "The photo, the photo! Nagisa's cute, erotic, waitress photo!"		<7529> \{Akio} "The photo, the photo! Nagisa's cute, erotic, waitress photo!"
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	<7784> Handing us the menus, Nagisa was busied herself with the chairs.		<7784> Handing us the menus, Nagisa was busied herself with the chairs.
	// メニューを俺たちに渡すと、渚は忙しそうに席を離れていった。		// メニューを俺たちに渡すと、渚は忙しそうに席を離れていった。
	<7785> \{Akio} "Look, doesn't she seem cheerful?"		<7785> \{Akio} "See? She didn't recognized me."
			//Orig TL: "Look, doesn't she seem cheerful?".
			//This one was quite weird, akio referring himself that he wasn't exposed. I'm not sure of the form of the sentence here, so it is kinda an improvisation. This line needs a clean up -Klashikari
	// \{秋生}「見ろ、ばれなかったじゃないか」		// \{秋生}「見ろ、ばれなかったじゃないか」
	<7786> \{\m{B}} "Yeah, I'd forgotten. Your daughter's really dim-witted."		<7786> \{\m{B}} "Yeah, I'd forgotten. Your daughter's really dim-witted."
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	// \{ウェイトレス}「いらっしゃいませ」		// \{ウェイトレス}「いらっしゃいませ」
	<7796> \{Akio} "Tch, bastard, why didn't you use it?"		<7796> \{Akio} "Tch, bastard, why didn't you use it?"
			//This line seems a bit weird with what the Waitress does. Isn't supposed to be something like "tch, I don't have any business with you" or something? -klash
	// \{秋生}「ちっ、おまえになんか用はねぇんだよ」		// \{秋生}「ちっ、おまえになんか用はねぇんだよ」
	<7797> I'd heard her coming around.		<7797> I'd heard her coming around.
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	// orig TL: "Ah!"		// orig TL: "Ah!"
	// \{\m{B}}「やれっ！」		// \{\m{B}}「やれっ！」
			//If you have selected "run for it" at 7588, goto 7847. Else, go to 7857
	<7847> \{Akio} "What did I say about looking into someone else's business. Bastard, why do you think Sanae was happy about it?"		<7847> \{Akio} "What did I say about looking into someone else's business. Bastard, why do you think Sanae was happy about it?"
	// \{秋生}「なに他人事みたいに言ってんだよ。てめぇ、早苗に俺をよろしくされてただろうが」		// \{秋生}「なに他人事みたいに言ってんだよ。てめぇ、早苗に俺をよろしくされてただろうが」
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	<7856> \{\m{B}} "Don't try it!"		<7856> \{\m{B}} "Don't try it!"
	// \{\m{B}}「しちゃわねぇよっ！」		// \{\m{B}}「しちゃわねぇよっ！」
	<7857> \{Nagisa} "U-~~umm~~.."		<7857> \{Nagisa} "E-excuse me..."
	// \{渚}「あ、あの」		// \{渚}「あ、あの」
	<7858> \{\m{B}} "Eh...?"		<7858> \{\m{B}} "Eh...?"
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	<7927> The customers had already left since it was closing time, and the store manager looked at me over the table.		<7927> The customers had already left since it was closing time, and the store manager looked at me over the table.
	// 客足が途絶えた閉店間際の時間、俺は店長とテーブルで向かい合っていた。		// 客足が途絶えた閉店間際の時間、俺は店長とテーブルで向かい合っていた。
	<7928> Pops ~~was…~~		<7928> Pops was...
	// オッサンは…		// オッサンは…
	<7929> \{Akio} "You take care of the trouble! Bye bye!"		<7929> \{Akio} "You take care of the trouble! Bye bye!"

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2008-02-25T04:14:04Z

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	<7679> \{Akio} "Guh..."		<7679> \{Akio} "Guh..."
	// \{秋生}「ぐ…」		// \{秋生}「ぐ…」
	<7680> \{Akio} "You see this guy... wanted to see the restaurant ~~Nagisaw as wroking~~ at, but he was crying that it was embarrassing for him to go on his own and order a parfait..."		<7680> \{Akio} "You see this guy... wanted to see the restaurant Nagisa was working at, but he was crying that it was embarrassing for him to go on his own and order a parfait..."
	// orig TL: "Fact is, this guy… Nagisa's family restaurant work to get a look at her, begging and crying shamefully on his own with a parfait roll."		// orig TL: "Fact is, this guy… Nagisa's family restaurant work to get a look at her, begging and crying shamefully on his own with a parfait roll."
	// \{秋生}「実はこいつがよ…渚のファミレスで働く姿を見たいけど、ひとりでパフェ頼むのは恥ずかしいって泣きついてきやがってよ…」		// \{秋生}「実はこいつがよ…渚のファミレスで働く姿を見たいけど、ひとりでパフェ頼むのは恥ずかしいって泣きついてきやがってよ…」
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	<7720> \{Akio} "Hey, brozza."		<7720> \{Akio} "Hey, brozza."
	// \{秋生}「おい、ブラジャー」		// \{秋生}「おい、ブラジャー」
	<7721> \{\m{B}} "Who's ~~bozza~~?! It's brother ain't it?"		<7721> \{\m{B}} "Who's brozza?! It's brother ain't it?"
	// \{\m{B}}「誰がブラジャーだっ、ブラザーじゃなかったのか」		// \{\m{B}}「誰がブラジャーだっ、ブラザーじゃなかったのか」
	<7722> \{Akio} "Yeah that's what I meant. You still not sure, brother?"		<7722> \{Akio} "Yeah that's what I meant. You still not sure, brother?"
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	<7764> \{Nagisa} "Ah, so you couldn't get here early."		<7764> \{Nagisa} "Ah, so you couldn't get here early."
	// \{渚}「あ、早く通さないとっ」		// \{渚}「あ、早く通さないとっ」
	<7765> Remembering her job, I took the menu, and ~~aske dher~~,		<7765> Remembering her job, I took the menu, and asked her,
	// 職務を思い出したらしく、メニューを取りだすと、俺に向かって訊く。		// 職務を思い出したらしく、メニューを取りだすと、俺に向かって訊く。
	<7766> \{Nagisa} "For one, right?"		<7766> \{Nagisa} "For one, right?"
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	<7960> I think he's a good guy.		<7960> I think he's a good guy.
	// いい人だと思った。		// いい人だと思った。
	<7961> \{Store Manager} "Besides, even though I look like this, I have a keen ~~interestin~~ in Bushido."		<7961> \{Store Manager} "Besides, even though I look like this, I have a keen interest in in Bushido."
	// orig TL: "That's what it looks like to me, that's just how I feel about it."		// orig TL: "That's what it looks like to me, that's just how I feel about it."
	// \{店長}「それにこう見えても、私、武道の嗜みもございますので」		// \{店長}「それにこう見えても、私、武道の嗜みもございますので」

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	<7657> Most women looking at us would this it was absurd, but it seems Sanae-san really found it fun.		<7657> Most women looking at us would this it was absurd, but it seems Sanae-san really found it fun.
	// 普通の女性なら、馬鹿らしくて見向きもしないことだって、早苗さんなら、そこに楽しみを発見してしまうのだろう。		// 普通の女性なら、馬鹿らしくて見向きもしないことだって、早苗さんなら、そこに楽しみを発見してしまうのだろう。
	<7658> It ~~made me wonder, what made it~~ so fun one ~~forgot about being stressed~~.*		<7658> It was so fun that one would not even feel a hint of stress.
	// 緊張しなくたって、なんだって楽しんでくれるに違いなかった。		// 緊張しなくたって、なんだって楽しんでくれるに違いなかった。
	<7659> \{\m{B}} "Do you want to go on the bar next?"		<7659> \{\m{B}} "Do you want to go on the bar next?"
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	// \{\m{B}}（俺が彼氏として自意識過剰なだけか…？）		// \{\m{B}}（俺が彼氏として自意識過剰なだけか…？）
	<7873> No, those guys sitting at the corner over there were all following Nagisa's actions, even pointing at her.		<7873> No, those guys sitting at the corner over there were all following Nagisa's actions, even pointing at her.
	// orig TL: No, what were they all doing, chasing after Nagisa like that?*		// orig TL: No, what were they all doing, chasing after Nagisa like that?
	// いや、角の席に座る男連中なんて、指までさして、全員で渚の行動を追っているじゃないか。		// いや、角の席に座る男連中なんて、指までさして、全員で渚の行動を追っているじゃないか。
	<7874> \{\m{B}} (Guess you could call it the magic of that uniform... Nagisa becomes really popular looking like that...)		<7874> \{\m{B}} (Guess you could call it the magic of that uniform... Nagisa becomes really popular looking like that...)

Velocity7 at 03:24, 25 February 2008

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	<7544> \{Sanae} “Wow, really? That makes me happy.”		<7544> \{Sanae} “Wow, really? That makes me happy.”
	// \{早苗}「まぁ、本当ですか。それはうれしいです」		// \{早苗}「まぁ、本当ですか。それはうれしいです」
	<7545> \{Sanae} “But, ~~Akio’s in front there~~.”		<7545> \{Sanae} “But, before that, Akio-san.”
	// \{早苗}「でも、その前に秋生さん」		// \{早苗}「でも、その前に秋生さん」
	<7546> \{Akio} “What is it?”		<7546> \{Akio} “What is it?”
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	<7559> \{\m{B}} “What kind of bread are you selling!?”		<7559> \{\m{B}} “What kind of bread are you selling!?”
	// \{\m{B}}「どんなパン売ってんだよっ！」		// \{\m{B}}「どんなパン売ってんだよっ！」
	<7560> \{Akio} ~~“I’m~~ surprised ~~to see you here~~ now~~, bastard~~.”		<7560> \{Akio} “Why are you being surprised, even now?.”
	// \{秋生}「今更なに驚いてんだよ、てめぇ」		// \{秋生}「今更なに驚いてんだよ、てめぇ」
	<7561> …what more can I say.		<7561> …what more can I say.
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	<7566> \{Akio} “Yeah. Let’s go to Nagisa’s work from here.”		<7566> \{Akio} “Yeah. Let’s go to Nagisa’s work from here.”
	// \{秋生}「ああ。これから渚のバイト先にいく」		// \{秋生}「ああ。これから渚のバイト先にいく」
	<7567> \{\m{B}} ~~“I’m going on my own. Seeya~~.”		<7567> \{\m{B}} “Well, go by yourself See you.”
	// \{\m{B}}「ひとりで行ってくれ。じゃあな」		// \{\m{B}}「ひとりで行ってくれ。じゃあな」
	<7568> \{Akio} “Wait a sec! You’re coming as well.”		<7568> \{Akio} “Wait a sec! You’re coming as well.”
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	<7572> \{Akio} “That’s a bit too weird!”		<7572> \{Akio} “That’s a bit too weird!”
	// \{秋生}「あんまり変わんねーよ！」		// \{秋生}「あんまり変わんねーよ！」
	<7573> \{\m{B}} “Nah, I don’t think eating parfait and ~~eating~~ coffee is weird.”		<7573> \{\m{B}} “Nah, I don’t think eating parfait and drinking coffee is weird at all.”
	// \{\m{B}}「いや、パフェとコーヒーじゃ、ぜんぜん違うと思うけど…」		// \{\m{B}}「いや、パフェとコーヒーじゃ、ぜんぜん違うと思うけど…」
	<7574> \{Akio} “And, where you’re living, Nagisa’s always coming near you.”		<7574> \{Akio} “And, where you’re living, Nagisa’s always coming near you.”
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	<7598> \{Akio} “Look, how is it, do you understand?”*		<7598> \{Akio} “Look, how is it, do you understand?”*
	// \{秋生}「見ろ、どうだ、わからんだろう」		// \{秋生}「見ろ、どうだ、わからんだろう」
	<7599> \{\m{B}} “I get it completely.”*		<7599> \{\m{B}} “I get it completely.”* //goto 7706
	// \{\m{B}}「丸わかりっす」		// \{\m{B}}「丸わかりっす」
	<7600> To be honest, the thought of the reprints as the reward made me shook me a little.		<7600> To be honest, the thought of the reprints as the reward made me shook me a little.
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	<7786> \{\m{B}} “Yeah, I’d forgotten. Your daughter’s really dim-witted.”		<7786> \{\m{B}} “Yeah, I’d forgotten. Your daughter’s really dim-witted.”
	// \{\m{B}}「ああ、忘れてたよ。あんたの娘が超鈍いことに」		// \{\m{B}}「ああ、忘れてたよ。あんたの娘が超鈍いことに」
	<7787> \{Akio} “Nah, ~~that violent one over there~~. I ~~just noticed her speaking~~.”		<7787> \{Akio} “Nah, she's actually quite witty. If I were to talk she would see through it.”
	// \{秋生}「いや、あいつは鋭い。もし声を出していたなら気づかれていただろう…」		// \{秋生}「いや、あいつは鋭い。もし声を出していたなら気づかれていただろう…」
	<7788> \{\m{B}} “Seriously, wearing those sunglass, much as you wanna say you’re a different person, you’re not gonna pass for one.”*		<7788> \{\m{B}} “Seriously, wearing those sunglass, much as you wanna say you’re a different person, you’re not gonna pass for one.”*
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	<7864> \{Akio} “You bastard!”		<7864> \{Akio} “You bastard!”
	// \{秋生}「てめぇだっ！」		// \{秋生}「てめぇだっ！」
	<7865> \{Nagisa} ~~“Umm~~, ~~aren’t you two friends?”~~		<7865> \{Nagisa} “Excuse me, sirs”
	// \{渚}「あの、おふたりともです…」		// \{渚}「あの、おふたりともです…」
	<7866> \{\m{B}} “Yeah, sorry…”		<7866> \{\m{B}} “Yeah, sorry…”
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	<7871> A young man kept glancing across at Nagisa.		<7871> A young man kept glancing across at Nagisa.
	// 若い男の客の視線が、頻繁に渚のほうを向いているのだ。		// 若い男の客の視線が、頻繁に渚のほうを向いているのだ。
	<7872> \{\m{B}} (Am I being overconcious about this just because I’m her ~~boyfriend…~~?)		<7872> \{\m{B}} (Am I being overconcious about this just because I’m her husband…?)
	// \{\m{B}}（俺が彼氏として自意識過剰なだけか…？）		// \{\m{B}}（俺が彼氏として自意識過剰なだけか…？）
	<7873> No, what were they all doing, chasing after Nagisa like that?*		<7873> No, what were they all doing, chasing after Nagisa like that?*
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	<7876> Thinking about it, it kinda gave me a feeling of superiority.		<7876> Thinking about it, it kinda gave me a feeling of superiority.
	// そう考えると、ちょっとした優越感が味わえた。		// そう考えると、ちょっとした優越感が味わえた。
	<7877> \{\m{B}} (Hey bastards, that girl’s my ~~girlfriend…~~ Hahaha…)		<7877> \{\m{B}} (Hey bastards, that girl’s my wife… Hahaha…)
	// \{\m{B}}（てめぇら、その子は俺の嫁だぜ…ふふふ…）		// \{\m{B}}（てめぇら、その子は俺の嫁だぜ…ふふふ…）
	<7878> \{Akio} “Hey, look, they’re all gathering around my number-one girl, Nagisa.”*		<7878> \{Akio} “Hey, look, they’re all gathering around my number-one girl, Nagisa.”*
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	<7932> \{\m{B}} (I was kinda pissed at being left on my own…)		<7932> \{\m{B}} (I was kinda pissed at being left on my own…)
	// \{\m{B}}（怒られるのは俺ひとりかよ…）		// \{\m{B}}（怒られるのは俺ひとりかよ…）
	<7933> \{Store Manager} “I’m the store manager here, ~~Mr.Construction Worker~~.”		<7933> \{Store Manager} “I’m the store manager here, Hishikata.”
	// \{店長}「ここの店長をしております、土方です」		// \{店長}「ここの店長をしております、土方です」
	<7934> He presented me with a business card.		<7934> He presented me with a business card.
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	<7936> \{Store Manager} “Well, did you hear what I said?”		<7936> \{Store Manager} “Well, did you hear what I said?”
	// \{店長}「ええと、聞いた話によりますと…」		// \{店長}「ええと、聞いた話によりますと…」
	<7937> \{Store Manager} ~~“\m{A}~~-~~kun’s the master of the house, I hear~~.”		<7937> \{Store Manager} "I see you're Okazaki-kun's husband.”
	// \{店長}「\m{A}くんの旦那さんということですね」		// \{店長}「\m{A}くんの旦那さんということですね」
	<7938> \{\m{B}} “\m{A}-kun?”		<7938> \{\m{B}} “\m{A}-kun?”
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	<7951> \{\m{B}} “Nah…”		<7951> \{\m{B}} “Nah…”
	// \{\m{B}}「いえ…」		// \{\m{B}}「いえ…」
	<7952> \{Store Manager} ~~“Looking~~ at ~~your resume~~, ~~seems like you’ve got~~ a ~~weakness in your~~ body~~. It’s really tough work~~ here~~, you’ve gotta be healthy~~.”*		<7952> \{Store Manager} “Moreover, looking at her resumee, it would seem she has a weak body, and working here is a little heavy so having a good condition is a must.”*
	// \{店長}「それに履歴を見るかぎり、体が弱いそうですが、ここでの働きぶりはまったく、健康そのものですよ」		// \{店長}「それに履歴を見るかぎり、体が弱いそうですが、ここでの働きぶりはまったく、健康そのものですよ」
	<7953> \{Store Manager} ~~“No~~, ~~you seem healthy~~, ~~would you like~~ to ~~work here?”~~		<7953> \{Store Manager} “Well, but despite that, she has been a good worker up to now”
	// \{店長}「いや、健康な人よりも、よく働いてくれています」		// \{店長}「いや、健康な人よりも、よく働いてくれています」
	<7954> This guy’s persistant…		<7954> This guy’s persistant…

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	~~7701~~
	~~7732~~
	~~7788~~
	~~7839~~
	~~7851~~
	~~7924~~
	~~7952~~

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