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2016-07-01T09:10:03Z

do not drop honorifics; do not add similes of your own invention; Konoha's speech uses polite forms, so if you're changing it, make it more formal and avoid contractions

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2016-07-01T06:25:55Z

Part 6

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	"Why?"		"Why?"

	"Hehe. You just have to tell Fear~~-san~~ what you told me back when we first met. With that, I bet all the problems will be solved."		"Hehe. You just have to tell Fear what you told me back when we first met. With that, I bet all the problems will be solved."

	"I don't remember what I told you. What did I say back then?"		"I don't remember what I told you. What did I say back then?"

	"Well, ~~Haruaki-kun didn~~'t ~~change a~~ bit so you just have to tell her what's on your mind right now."		"Well, you haven't changed one bit so you just have to tell her what's on your mind right now."

	After that, Konoha offered to help cleaning up the house but Haruaki politely refused. He felt that it was something he had to do, and not anyone else. Konoha didn't argue		After that, Konoha offered to help cleaning up the house but Haruaki politely refused. He felt that it was something he had to do, and not anyone else. Konoha didn't argue
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	~~In that~~ evening.		That evening.****

	"Hey. Are you awake?"		"Hey. Are you awake?"
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	After an interlude of silence, Fear replied that she didn't have anything to say to him. Haruaki said never mind and sighed. Talk about being stubborn.		After an interlude of silence, Fear replied that she didn't have anything to say to him. Haruaki said never mind and sighed. Talk about being stubborn.

	"You might not have anything to say ~~to me~~, but I do. Well, er... I'm sorry."		"You might not have anything to say, but I do. Well, er... I'm sorry."

	There was no reply. There wasn't anything he could do for her silence so he just continued speaking.		There was no reply. There wasn't anything he could do for her silence so he just continued speaking.
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	"Yeah, okay. Well, what I want to say is... that you don't have to hurry trying to lift your curse. And, if there is something that you don't know, just ask me and I'll teach you		"Yeah, okay. Well, what I want to say is... that you don't have to hurry trying to lift your curse. And, if there is something that you don't know, just ask me and I'll teach you
	so long as it is something that I know. I left your dinner at the kitchen so you can have it when you get hungry. I'll be going now. Oh, I forgot, here's my present for you.		so long as it is something that I know. I left your dinner in the kitchen so you can have it when you get hungry. I'll be going now. Oh, I forgot, here's my present for you.
	Take it."		Take it."

	Haruaki left the paper bag he was carrying onto the floor in front of the sliding door. After that, he went back to his room, yawning as he walked away.		Haruaki left the paper bag he was carrying onto the floor in front of the sliding door. After that, he went back to his room, yawning as he walked away.
	After a few minutes, the sliding door silently opened. After some minutes of observation, a white hand came out and took the paper bag. The sliding door moved silently as ~~the~~		After a few minutes, the sliding door silently opened. After some minutes of observation, a white hand came out and took the paper bag. The sliding door moved silently once again as it closed.
	~~sliding door~~ closed.


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	be just a waste of time if you...."		be just a waste of time if you...."

	A heel ~~drop struck~~ the paper before ~~Fear~~ could finish reading.		Fear heel dropped the paper before she could finish reading.
	There were other things inside the paper bag other than the clothes. It was the cubic toy from earlier. And, there was also...		There were other things inside the paper bag other than the clothes. It was the cubic toy from earlier. And, there was also...

127.0.0.1: /* Part 4 */

2016-07-01T06:15:30Z

Part 4

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	Kirika was a formidable class rep. She was calm and composed at all times and her grades were top-notch. She always wore a knee-length long skirt, which gave her an impression		Kirika was a formidable class rep. She was calm and composed at all times and her grades were top-notch. She always wore a knee-length long skirt, which gave her an impression
	that she was born two decades later than she should have. She also hated to expose much of her skin, and was always wearing a jersey during physical education classes and		that she was born two decades later than she should have. She also hated to expose much of her skin, and was always wearing a jersey during physical education classes and
	even at summer, she wore a long-sleeved blouse.		even in summer, she wore a long-sleeved blouse.
	Because of this, only few people tried to get close to her and she was often alone during her first few days. It was only Kana, who was friendly to everyone, who forcefully		Because of this, only few people tried to get close to her and she was often alone during her first few days. It was only Kana, who was friendly to everyone, who forcefully
	brought Kirika with them.		brought Kirika with them.
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	They saw that the inside was horrible. An overturned back table was standing in a slant position, its leg piercing the sliding door. The cabinets were turned over. On the floor was		They saw that the inside was horrible. An overturned back table was standing in a slant position, its leg piercing the sliding door. The cabinets were turned over. On the floor was
	~~unnecessary things~~ that should have been inside the closet scattered ~~all over~~.		everything that should have been inside the closet scattered like leaves in the wind.

	....Just in a half day, his place of rest became a place of chaos. Something extraordinary must have happened here.		....Just in a half day, his place of rest became a place of chaos. Something extraordinary must have happened here.
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	~~What~~ Fear did ~~first,~~ when she entered her room, was to mount on a pillow and punch it to get some stress out of her body. The moment she ~~got~~ out of breath, she took the futon out		the first thing Fear did when she entered her room, was to mount a pillow and punch it to get some stress out of her body. The moment she was out of breath, she took the futon out
	and covered herself with it. But, that didn't completely take out her anger.		and covered herself with it. But, even that didn't completely take out her anger.

	"Hmph....Hmph! That idiot, that shameless brat....! He doesn't have to be so..."		"Hmph....Hmph! That idiot, that shameless brat....! He doesn't have to be so..."

127.0.0.1: /* Part 4 */

2016-07-01T06:01:10Z

Part 4

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	could do to comfort him..."		could do to comfort him..."

	"What a villain you are Haruaki! Since when did you steal the class rep's heart? Did you save a princess? Have you set a fire to a forged bill factory? Did you kill someone in a clocktower with pair of scissors?"		"What a villain you are Haruaki! Since when did you steal the class rep's heart? Did you save a princess? Have you set a fire to a forged bill factory? Did you kill someone in a clocktower with a pair of scissors?"

	"Both of you! Stop s-saying nonsense! How foolish!"		"Both of you! Stop s-saying nonsense! How foolish!"

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Part 4

Zzhk: /* Part 6 */

2013-08-05T13:14:42Z

Part 6

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	\| Back to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume1_Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| Back to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume1_Prologue\|Prologue]]
	\| Return to [[CubexCursedxCurious\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[CubexCursedxCurious#Volume_1_.28Full_Text.29\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume1_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Forward to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume1_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
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	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

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	==Chapter ~~One: Who Knows the~~ One Who Went to Bed~~<br/><br~~/>"Night of Rubik's Cube"==		==Chapter 1 - The Unknown One Who Went to Bed / "Night of Rubik's Cube"==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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Zzhk at 14:13, 17 January 2013

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	==Chapter One: Night of Rubik's Cube==		==Chapter One: Who Knows the One Who Went to Bed<br/><br/>"Night of Rubik's Cube"==

			===Part 1===

	"...What is this? Custard pudding?"		"...What is this? Custard pudding?"
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	She guided the spoon into her mouth, then froze up.		She guided the spoon into her mouth, then froze up.

	"It's not sweet! This is a fake! What ~~a nasty~~ food... When ~~you say~~ a soft ~~pedestal~~ and a black sauce, it just has to be a pudding!"		"It's not sweet! This is a fake! What malicious food... When something has a soft foundation and covered with black sauce, it just has to be a pudding!"

	"Don't call food ~~nasty~~. It's ~~just~~ tofu, ~~a solidified~~ soybean ~~soup~~. You ~~didn~~'t like it?"		"Don't call the food malicious. It's simply tofu, coagulated soybean juice. You don't like it?"

	Haruaki sat just opposite of the girl after removing the apron he had on.		Haruaki sat just opposite of the girl after removing the apron he had on.
	The girl's ill temper was obvious as she chewed the ~~Yakko-Doufu~~. She was now wearing a borrowed shirt and hot pants.		The girl's ill temper was obvious as she chewed the chilled tofu. She was now wearing a borrowed shirt and hot pants.

	"Hmph, it's not bad. It's inferior to the crunchy snack I was munching earlier, though."		"Hmph, it's not bad. It's inferior to the crunchy snack I was munching earlier, though."
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	Ding dong. The door bell rung suddenly. Fear seemed to be frightened by it, so Haruaki told her that it was just a bell that said there was a visitor. He stood up and pointed at the table.		Ding dong. The door bell rung suddenly. Fear seemed to be frightened by it, so Haruaki told her that it was just a bell that said there was a visitor. He stood up and pointed at the table.

	"The food~~'ll grow~~ cold, so eat it now. Especially the mackerel pike."		"The food will get cold, so eat it now. Especially the mackerel pike."



	~~<span style="font-size: 300%; border: "><center>* * *</center></span>~~


			===Part 2===

	"Good evening, Haruaki-kun."		"Good evening, Haruaki-kun."
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	"I'm not sure what happened, but I've won. I feel great."		"I'm not sure what happened, but I've won. I feel great."

			===Part 3===

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	Dull-colored stone floor was all that there was. The room smelled of metal and of metal-like stink. The air was congested but it wasn't stagnant.		Dull-colored stone floor was all that there was. The room smelled of metal and of metal-like stink. The air was congested but it wasn't stagnant.
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	That, perhaps, was the first time that she felt those things.		That, perhaps, was the first time that she felt those things.

			===Part 4===

	~~<span style~~=~~"font-size: 300%; border: "><center>* * *</center></span>~~



	Next day, during lunch break at school. Haruaki opened the lid of his lunch box and thoughts about the problem he left alone in his house came to his mind.		Next day, during lunch break at school. Haruaki opened the lid of his lunch box and thoughts about the problem he left alone in his house came to his mind.
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	After letting out a big snort. She rearranged the futon and covered her head again.		After letting out a big snort. She rearranged the futon and covered her head again.

			===Part 5===

	~~<span style~~=~~"font-size: 300%; border: "><center>* * *</center></span>~~



	For the few days that Fear spent together with Honatsu, she was taught by him the basic Japanese reading and writing, as well as the common knowledge about the modern world.		For the few days that Fear spent together with Honatsu, she was taught by him the basic Japanese reading and writing, as well as the common knowledge about the modern world.
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	A poltergeist or an alien. Which would be more credible if she were to reason out?		A poltergeist or an alien. Which would be more credible if she were to reason out?

			===Part 6===

	~~<span style~~=~~"font-size: 300%; border: "><center>* * *</center></span>~~



	"Hmmmmmmmmm. I have this feeling that what she tried to do was too predictable but, could it be really...?"		"Hmmmmmmmmm. I have this feeling that what she tried to do was too predictable but, could it be really...?"

Zzhk: /* Chapter One: Night of Rubik's Cube */

2012-12-23T10:05:09Z

Chapter One: Night of Rubik's Cube

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	===Chapter One: Night of Rubik's Cube===		==Chapter One: Night of Rubik's Cube==

	"...What is this? Custard pudding?"		"...What is this? Custard pudding?"

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	"What the?!"		"What the?!"

	They saw that the inside was horrible. ~~Turned~~ back table was standing in a slant position, its leg piercing the sliding door. The cabinets turned over. On the floor was		They saw that the inside was horrible. An overturned back table was standing in a slant position, its leg piercing the sliding door. The cabinets were turned over. On the floor was
	unnecessary things that should have been inside the closet scattered all over.		unnecessary things that should have been inside the closet scattered all over.

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	Haruaki searched for the silver-haired girl, his heart beating wildly. He found her immediately.		Haruaki searched for the silver-haired girl, his heart beating wildly. He found her immediately.
	She was lying face-down on the porch. ~~Not~~ a movement from her. He kneeled over her and picked her up.		She was lying face-down on the porch. There was not a movement from her. He kneeled over her and picked her up.
	He tried to talk to her while he shook her body. Her eyes opened and she blinked with a blank stare.		He tried to talk to her while he shook her body. Her eyes opened and she blinked with a blank stare.
	Konoha went to the kitchen to get some water but hurriedly came back.		Konoha went to the kitchen to get some water but hurriedly came back.
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	"Shut up! I don't care what you say about me! I'm feeling sleepy so I'll go get some sleep! Don't even try bothering me!"		"Shut up! I don't care what you say about me! I'm feeling sleepy so I'll go get some sleep! Don't even try bothering me!"

	She ran away to her room. Haruaki was taken ~~back~~ by her sudden outburst and lost the ~~will power~~ to follow her.		She ran away to her room. Haruaki was taken aback by her sudden outburst and lost the willpower to follow her.

	"That little... tsk, she should try to be the one who'll fix these things up! So this is how she repays me for my kindness!"		"That little... tsk, she should try to be the one who'll fix these things up! So this is how she repays me for my kindness!"
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	What Fear did first when she entered her room was to mount on a pillow and punch it to get some stress out of her body. The moment she got out of breath, she took the futon out		What Fear did first, when she entered her room, was to mount on a pillow and punch it to get some stress out of her body. The moment she got out of breath, she took the futon out
	and covered herself with it. But, that didn't completely take out her anger.		and covered herself with it. But, that didn't completely take out her anger.

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	She can't explain THAT to him. It was too embarrassing and too disappointing. She had that much pride, at least. She couldn't help it but----it was annoying.		She can't explain THAT to him. It was too embarrassing and too disappointing. She had that much pride, at least. She couldn't help it but----it was annoying.
	After letting out a big snort~~. She~~ rearranged the futon and covered her head again.		After letting out a big snort, she rearranged the futon and covered her head again.

	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

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	Baseball is great, if you'd just give it a try!"		Baseball is great, if you'd just give it a try!"

	A classmate whom Haruaki always had his lunch with spoke to him. His name was Hakuto ~~Taizo~~.		A classmate whom Haruaki always had his lunch with spoke to him. His name was Hakuto Taizou.

	"His withered expression is nothing new, but it does have a different glow compared to his usual expression. Maybe---- he made some girl pregnant? Hahaha!"		"His withered expression is nothing new, but it does have a different glow compared to his usual expression. Maybe---- he made some girl pregnant? Hahaha!"
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	"Kana! Enough of your vulgar jokes!"		"Kana! Enough of your vulgar jokes!"

	A girl with healthy sun-kissed skin, Miyama Kana, followed ~~Taizo~~'s teasing with her own.		A girl with healthy sun-kissed skin, Miyama Kana, followed Taizou's teasing with her own.
	The class rep, Ueno Kirika, remonstrated Kana about her vulgar remark.		The class rep, Ueno Kirika, remonstrated Kana about her vulgar remark.

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	"Huh? No, no, I don't have any problem. Maybe I caught a chill last night."		"Huh? No, no, I don't have any problem. Maybe I caught a chill last night."

	"Did you hear that ~~Taizo~~-san? Kirika-chan just said something like this: I'm always looking at Yachi so I know something's wrong with him! Ohh, If there was something I		"Did you hear that Taizou-san? Kirika-chan just said something like this: I'm always looking at Yachi so I know something's wrong with him! Ohh, If there was something I
	could do to comfort him..."		could do to comfort him..."

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	"Both of you! Stop s-saying nonsense! How foolish!"		"Both of you! Stop s-saying nonsense! How foolish!"

	~~Taizo~~ and Kana had been Haruaki's ~~friend~~ since his junior high years while Kirika became his friend in high school.		Taizou and Kana had been Haruaki's friends since his junior high years while Kirika became his friend in high school.

	Kirika was a formidable class rep. She was calm and composed at all times and her grades were top-notch. She always wore a knee-length long skirt, which gave her an impression		Kirika was a formidable class rep. She was calm and composed at all times and her grades were top-notch. She always wore a knee-length long skirt, which gave her an impression
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	on you two for the judge."		on you two for the judge."

	Kirika opened her lunch box and brought it to ~~Taizo~~ and Kana's table.		Kirika opened her lunch box and brought it to Taizou and Kana's table.

	"So, Kirika-chan. Do you think you have a chance of ~~success~~ today?"		"So, Kirika-chan. Do you think you have a chance of winning today?"

	"I've tasted it several times. Plus, I got hold of the fact that Yachi might have caught a cold... that means his taste organ might not be working well. I decided that today		"I've tasted it several times. Plus, I got hold of the fact that Yachi might have caught a cold... that means his taste organ might not be working well. I decided that today
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	"I've put some avocados in it. Hehe, I based it from an old cooking manga."		"I've put some avocados in it. Hehe, I based it from an old cooking manga."

	~~Taizo~~ and Kana looked at each other and nodded. They grabbed the winner's lunchbox and raised it above their heads, looking like funny symmetrical statues holding a		Taizou and Kana looked at each other and nodded. They grabbed the winner's lunchbox and raised it above their heads, looking like funny symmetrical statues holding a
	lunch box.		lunch box.

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	A little later, Haruaki heard a classmate calling out to him that he had a visitor. He looked at the door and saw a familiar face.		A little later, Haruaki heard a classmate calling out to him that he had a visitor. He looked at the door and saw a familiar face.

	"It's Konoha-san! She's just as...well, you know, as always! Damn it Haruaki, please tell her that I, ~~Taizo~~, send my appreciation for her being as beautiful as		"It's Konoha-san! She's just as...well, you know, as always! Damn it Haruaki, please tell her that I, Taizou, send my appreciation for her being as beautiful as
	a belladonna!"		a belladonna!"