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Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Already Present Before One Could Notice / "A pebble, a pebble and more pebbles" */

2014-10-23T07:08:51Z

Chapter 1 - Already Present Before One Could Notice / "A pebble, a pebble and more pebbles"

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	Without stopping his combing motions, the man shrugged lightly:		Without stopping his combing motions, the man shrugged lightly:

	"The task itself, of persuading her, finished quickly. But there was some trouble when retrieving her beloved Wathe from the police's evidence vault. That's why I was late to pick you up at the rendezvous point last time—I ran into someone from the Frontline Gathering Knights' Dominion."		"The task itself, of persuading her, finished quickly. But there was some trouble when retrieving her beloved Wathe from the police's evidence vault. That's why I was late to pick you up at the rendezvous point last time—I ran into someone from the Frontline Gathering Knights Dominion."

	"Ara, showing up to destroy my beloved Wathes again, what a bunch of villains."		"Ara, showing up to destroy my beloved Wathes again, what a bunch of villains."
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	"I have you. This alone is enough to reassure me completely."		"I have you. This alone is enough to reassure me completely."

	"Praise the Lord, I shall commit these blissful words of yours to memory. But let me confirm first, must we invite Fear-in-Cube to our Family by any means necessary? As the current situation stands, you are not at peak condition and there is potential interference from the Knights' Dominion. I don't think we should stretch ourselves. Why are you so obsessed with Fear-in-Cube?"		"Praise the Lord, I shall commit these blissful words of yours to memory. But let me confirm first, must we invite Fear-in-Cube to our Family by any means necessary? As the current situation stands, you are not at peak condition and there is potential interference from the Knights Dominion. I don't think we should stretch ourselves. Why are you so obsessed with Fear-in-Cube?"

	"...To be honest, I have no idea why. However, I knew on first sight that I must love her like family no matter what. Yes—simply stated, this is my willfulness on whim. Is that unacceptable...?"		"...To be honest, I have no idea why. However, I knew on first sight that I must love her like family no matter what. Yes—simply stated, this is my willfulness on whim. Is that unacceptable...?"

Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Already Present Before One Could Notice / "A pebble, a pebble and more pebbles" */

2014-10-19T03:10:55Z

Chapter 1 - Already Present Before One Could Notice / "A pebble, a pebble and more pebbles"

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	"Since the master of the house said so, I have no objections. But are you okay on the money side of things?"		"Since the master of the house said so, I have no objections. But are you okay on the money side of things?"

	"You never care about that normally, why would you suddenly say that only now... Hmm, it should be okay. In actual fact, ~~Old~~ Pops started transferring a little more money this month. That stupid ~~Old~~ Pops, did it finally occur to him to consider the situation here?"		"You never care about that normally, why would you suddenly say that only now... Hmm, it should be okay. In actual fact, Pops started transferring a little more money this month. That stupid Pops, did it finally occur to him to consider the situation here?"

	"Muu, then it's decided, that! Didn't you mention about giving me an allowance? How about it?"		"Muu, then it's decided, that! Didn't you mention about giving me an allowance? How about it?"

Zzhk at 19:25, 19 August 2013

2013-08-19T19:25:06Z

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	"Pretty much."		"Pretty much."

	Saying that, Fear jumped off the veranda and used her foot to fish out the communal ~~slippers~~ kept beneath the veranda.		Saying that, Fear jumped off the veranda and used her foot to fish out the communal sandals kept beneath the veranda.

	"They're nice people. Let's go say hi!"		"They're nice people. Let's go say hi!"
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	"...Perhaps so... You may be right."		"...Perhaps so... You may be right."

	Putting on the ~~slippers~~, Aiko also descended from the veranda. Along the way, circling around the house towards the entryway—		Putting on the sandals, Aiko also descended from the veranda. Along the way, circling around the house towards the entryway—

	"But, surely I'm... Compared to Fear, I deserve even more to be cursed..."		"But, surely I'm... Compared to Fear, I deserve even more to be cursed..."

Zzhk at 13:28, 5 August 2013

2013-08-05T13:28:46Z

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	\| Back to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume4_Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| Back to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume4_Prologue\|Prologue]]
	\| Return to [[CubexCursedxCurious\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[CubexCursedxCurious#Volume_4_.28Full_Text.29\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume4_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Forward to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume4_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
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Zzhk: /* Part 5 */

2013-07-05T11:57:57Z

Part 5

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	"H-Hey Kana, do I really have to say it?"		"H-Hey Kana, do I really have to say it?"

	"This is the deal. I'll definitely help you find a good part-time job, so all you need to do is say this one sentence! No matter what, please just say this one sentence! ~~Giggle~~!"		"This is the deal. I'll definitely help you find a good part-time job, so all you need to do is say this one sentence! No matter what, please just say this one sentence! ''Nishishi''!"

	"A-Absolutely ridiculous...!"		"A-Absolutely ridiculous...!"

Zzhk: /* Part 5 */

2013-06-16T14:28:21Z

Part 5

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	Arriving unnoticed outside, Fear began to grumble gravely: "Shameless, shameless, completely and utterly shameless...!" Konoha screamed "Eeee~~!" loudly while her hands naturally went for Haruaki's throat; Kirika's head remained bowed, her body shaking nonstop; Aiko simply watched everything in head-tilted puzzlement.		Arriving unnoticed outside, Fear began to grumble gravely: "Shameless, shameless, completely and utterly shameless...!" Konoha screamed "Eeee~~!" loudly while her hands naturally went for Haruaki's throat; Kirika's head remained bowed, her body shaking nonstop; Aiko simply watched everything in head-tilted puzzlement.
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	Only Kana was laughing her ass off in delight.		Only Kana was laughing her ass off in delight.

Zzhk: /* Part 5 */

2013-06-16T13:05:36Z

Part 5

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Zzhk at 09:14, 16 June 2013

2013-06-16T09:14:23Z

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	These girls possessed the dual natures of humans and tools simultaneously. Hence, these two natures would interact and affect each other.		These girls possessed the dual natures of humans and tools simultaneously. Hence, these two natures would interact and affect each other.

	In the same way a human could recover naturally from minor injuries, damage incurred in their tool forms could also self-repair naturally to a certain extent—Conversely, even after taking human form, they would still feel tool-like desires such as "wanting to be used by someone." This was the unavoidable karma known as "~~possession~~ desire."		In the same way a human could recover naturally from minor injuries, damage incurred in their tool forms could also self-repair naturally to a certain extent—Conversely, even after taking human form, they would still feel tool-like desires such as "wanting to be used by someone." This was the unavoidable karma known as "ownership desire."

	Furthermore, suppressing this desire was apparently quite a painful experience. Enduring hunger, enduring sleeplessness, even enduring lack of air... In any case, it would be like suppressing the three major human desires! Haruaki recalled Konoha telling him in the past. When exactly, he could not remember.		Furthermore, suppressing this desire was apparently quite a painful experience. Enduring hunger, enduring sleeplessness, even enduring lack of air... In any case, it would be like suppressing the three major human desires! Haruaki recalled Konoha telling him in the past. When exactly, he could not remember.

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2013-06-16T08:45:27Z

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Zzhk: subordinating conjunctions such as "as if" are not preceded by commas

2013-06-15T15:58:31Z

subordinating conjunctions such as "as if" are not preceded by commas

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	"Really? I'm so glad! Ufufu!"		"Really? I'm so glad! Ufufu!"

	"Chomp chomp chomp. Hmph, just as always, you prepare food that faithfully ~~reflects~~ your figure. Stuffy, a sore sight and ugly, furthermore—Feels greasy and blub blub in texture."		"Chomp chomp chomp. Hmph, just as always, you prepare food that faithfully recreates your figure. Stuffy, a sore sight and ugly, furthermore—Feels greasy and blub blub in texture."

	"W-What's with your onomatopoeia and descriptions? If you have any objections, don't eat it!"		"W-What's with your onomatopoeia and descriptions? If you have any objections, don't eat it!"
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	Aiko nodded extremely slowly.		Aiko nodded extremely slowly.

	Haruaki felt relaxed, as if he had breathed a sigh of relief.		Haruaki felt relaxed as if he had breathed a sigh of relief.

	"Great, it's decided. Rather than wandering around aimlessly, this is definitely better... Hmm~ Although even if you had an owner, I'd still try offering you an invitation. Let's get along together from now on, Aiko."		"Great, it's decided. Rather than wandering around aimlessly, this is definitely better... Hmm~ Although even if you had an owner, I'd still try offering you an invitation. Let's get along together from now on, Aiko."
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	"I never said anything like that! Don't fabricate memories!"		"I never said anything like that! Don't fabricate memories!"

	Fear argued noisily, Konoha sighed in exasperation, Kuroe stirred things up from the said in amusement.		Fear argued noisily; Konoha sighed in exasperation; Kuroe stirred things up from the said in amusement.

	This was a scene unfolding as usual in this home. Amongst it all, Haruaki noticed.		This was a scene unfolding as usual in this home. Amongst it all, Haruaki noticed.
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	Extremely shy and a little timid as she was, perhaps this could not be helped. One day, she will surely smile—He thought to himself. Haruaki hoped to see her smile.		Extremely shy and a little timid as she was, perhaps this could not be helped. One day, she will surely smile—He thought to himself. Haruaki hoped to see her smile.

	But currently she still ~~did~~ not smile.		But currently she still could not smile.

	As though she was still wondering whether she allowed herself to do so—		As though she was still wondering whether she allowed herself to do so—