CubexCursedxCurious:Volume6 Chapter5 - Revision history

Zzhk at 07:14, 23 October 2014

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	"Oh, you're mistaken. That's also fake. Satsuko has nothing to with the Knight's Dominion at all. Satsuko only borrowed that name because it matched the setting of Satsuko being hunted down."		"Oh, you're mistaken. That's also fake. Satsuko has nothing to with the Knight's Dominion at all. Satsuko only borrowed that name because it matched the setting of Satsuko being hunted down."

	"What... You're not part of the Knights' Dominion? In that case, why!? Why did you do this? Deliberately getting in our good graces—Then proceeding to make enemies of us!"		"What... You're not part of the Knights Dominion? In that case, why!? Why did you do this? Deliberately getting in our good graces—Then proceeding to make enemies of us!"

	"Hasn't Satsuko explained it already?"		"Hasn't Satsuko explained it already?"

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

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Part 2

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	Hearing Kuroe sound so leisurely, Kirika finally erupted in a scolding tone of voice, but Kuroe explained nonchalantly:		Hearing Kuroe sound so leisurely, Kirika finally erupted in a scolding tone of voice, but Kuroe explained nonchalantly:

	"Of course I'm serious. I will try out any method as long as it's within my ability. Even if it's lame or completely pointless, I'll try it out first before judging... This is all done for the sake of rescuing ~~Sove~~-chan and Shiraho-chan."		"Of course I'm serious. I will try out any method as long as it's within my ability. Even if it's lame or completely pointless, I'll try it out first before judging... This is all done for the sake of rescuing Sovey-chan and Shiraho-chan."

	Kuroe's eyes were the same as usual, partially closed as though she were sleepy. But in spite of that, one could feel a sense of seriousness from her. No, rather than serious—It would be better to say she was filled with grim determination. Her eyes displayed resolve and great anxiety, as well as anger that was not overtly expressed.		Kuroe's eyes were the same as usual, partially closed as though she were sleepy. But in spite of that, one could feel a sense of seriousness from her. No, rather than serious—It would be better to say she was filled with grim determination. Her eyes displayed resolve and great anxiety, as well as anger that was not overtly expressed.

Zzhk: stoic: someone indifferent to pleasure or pain; Stoic: someone subscribing to the philosophy of Zeno

2013-08-13T05:49:20Z

stoic: someone indifferent to pleasure or pain; Stoic: someone subscribing to the philosophy of Zeno

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	"What do you mean, it can't be helped!? Clearly you planned all of this. You two—are exactly the same as all those people I've encountered to this date! You're all crazy!"		"What do you mean, it can't be helped!? Clearly you planned all of this. You two—are exactly the same as all those people I've encountered to this date! You're all crazy!"

	"So mean~ Satsuko wishes that you'd call her a ~~Stoic~~. The Draconians simply work hard to make themselves stronger, that's all..."		"So mean~ Satsuko wishes that you'd call her a stoic. The Draconians simply work hard to make themselves stronger, that's all..."

	Satsuko shuddered her shoulders like a puppy—But thrusting forward was a cursed drill that could easily skewer a human body. Fear used her giant drill to deflect the tool.		Satsuko shuddered her shoulders like a puppy—But thrusting forward was a cursed drill that could easily skewer a human body. Fear used her giant drill to deflect the tool.

Kory: //Part 4/ & Part 5: Typos, missing words, missing period.

2013-08-13T03:35:32Z

/Part 4: & Part 5: Typos, missing words, missing period.

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2013-08-12T17:55:35Z

Part 4

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	"Ah—Ahhh—Actually, I've been looking for a chance to use this gimmick for a while. Enter stage."		"Ah—Ahhh—Actually, I've been looking for a chance to use this gimmick for a while. Enter stage."

	Satsuko suddenly felt her left hand weighted down as well. A closer look showed that it was entangled by black hair. There were ~~tarzan~~ ropes above the long and narrow swimming pool that was located along a wall in the Jungle Area. Using one of them, Kuroe had moved over to Satsuko's back all at once.		Satsuko suddenly felt her left hand weighted down as well. A closer look showed that it was entangled by black hair. There were Tarzan ropes above the long and narrow swimming pool that was located along a wall in the Jungle Area. Using one of them, Kuroe had moved over to Satsuko's back all at once.

	While holding onto the rope firmly, Kuroe gazed mistily as she wrapped her around Satsuko's left arm, immobilizing it. As for her right hand, the drill was still stuck in Kirika's hand. Without notice, the belt came to entangle Satsuko again.		While holding onto the rope firmly, Kuroe gazed mistily as she wrapped her around Satsuko's left arm, immobilizing it. As for her right hand, the drill was still stuck in Kirika's hand. Without notice, the belt came to entangle Satsuko again.

Zzhk: /* Part 5 */

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2013-08-12T10:52:13Z

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Kory: /Part 2/ & Part 3: Typos, grammar, missing/extra word. Changed a word so the sentence would make sense.

2013-08-11T07:39:28Z

Part 2: & Part 3: Typos, grammar, missing/extra word. Changed a word so the sentence would make sense.

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2013-08-11T06:44:52Z

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	"Damn it, excuse us, everyone! Please hang in there a little longer!"		"Damn it, excuse us, everyone! Please hang in there a little longer!"

	Fear's group began to conduct a search while staying vigilant of the enemies' movements. Instead of going over to help Konoha and the others, Fear and Kaidou went over to the messy pool side in search of their target. Konoha, Kuroe and Kirika's puzzled gazes felt painful—In actual fact, things would become even simpler had they asked for Konoha's help. However, Konoha was the only one capable of engaging in ~~closequarters~~ combat Satsuko who was closing in on them. Hence, they could not ask her to help.		Fear's group began to conduct a search while staying vigilant of the enemies' movements. Instead of going over to help Konoha and the others, Fear and Kaidou went over to the messy pool side in search of their target. Konoha, Kuroe and Kirika's puzzled gazes felt painful—In actual fact, things would become even simpler had they asked for Konoha's help. However, Konoha was the only one capable of engaging in close quarters combat with Satsuko who was closing in on them. Hence, they could not ask her to help.

	Shortly after.		Shortly after.
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	Haruaki pondered as his gaze wandered. Just as he was doing that, his attention was suddenly drawn to a certain spot on the wall in the pool area.		Haruaki pondered as his gaze wandered. Just as he was doing that, his attention was suddenly drawn to a certain spot on the wall in the pool area.

	He slowly turned his head and examined the school swimsuit-clad ~~boy~~ of Fear—who was desperately urging "Let's hurry" with great agitation—and recalled a fact.		He slowly turned his head and examined the school swimsuit-clad body of Fear—who was desperately urging "Let's hurry" with great agitation—and recalled a fact.

	"W-What are you staring at me for!? You shameless brat, I'll curse you!"		"W-What are you staring at me for!? You shameless brat, I'll curse you!"
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	"What do you mean, it can't be helped!? Clearly you planned all of this. You two—are exactly the same as all those people I've encountered to this date! You're all crazy!"		"What do you mean, it can't be helped!? Clearly you planned all of this. You two—are exactly the same as all those people I've encountered to this date! You're all crazy!"

	"So mean~ Satsuko wishes that you'd call her a ~~stoic~~. The Draconians simply work hard to make themselves stronger, that's all..."		"So mean~ Satsuko wishes that you'd call her a Stoic. The Draconians simply work hard to make themselves stronger, that's all..."

	Satsuko shuddered her shoulders like a puppy—But thrusting forward was a cursed drill that could easily skewer a human body. Fear used her giant drill to deflect the tool.		Satsuko shuddered her shoulders like a puppy—But thrusting forward was a cursed drill that could easily skewer a human body. Fear used her giant drill to deflect the tool.
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	"Hah... Excuse me but I have no intention of having a drill duel with you! Instead, you should drill holes in those wooden blocks over there on your side! That'll definitely be more fun than this kind of fight!"		"Hah... Excuse me but I have no intention of having a drill duel with you! Instead, you should drill holes in those wooden blocks over there on your side! That'll definitely be more fun than this kind of fight!"

	"H-How could that be possible? Where are you ~~goin~~? What about the friendship fight with Satsuko...!?"		"H-How could that be possible? Where are you going? What about the friendship fight with Satsuko...!?"

	"That has nothing to do with me!"		"That has nothing to do with me!"
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	To think that her opponent would ignore her and go over to Fourteen's side.		To think that her opponent would ignore her and go over to Fourteen's side.

	Was it really because she was very weak? Because fighting with her was no fun at all? Troubling, how extremely troubling. She had become friends with her only because she wished to fight Ahhh, I really treated her as a friend, fighting everyone really has been painful—Even so, the fight must go on. Should the fight end here, then all meaning would be lost.		Was it really because she was very weak? Because fighting with her was no fun at all? Troubling, how extremely troubling. She had become friends with her only because she wished to fight. Ahhh, I really treated her as a friend, fighting everyone really has been painful—Even so, the fight must go on. Should the fight end here, then all meaning would be lost.

	Carrying such thoughts, fueled purely by the desire to pursue strength, Ontenzaki Satsuko prepared to chase Fear. However—		Carrying such thoughts, fueled purely by the desire to pursue strength, Ontenzaki Satsuko prepared to chase Fear. However—
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	Satsuko suddenly felt her left hand weighted down as well. A closer look showed that it was entangled by black hair. There were Tarzan ropes above the long and narrow swimming pool that was located along a wall in the Jungle Area. Using one of them, Kuroe had moved over to Satsuko's back all at once.		Satsuko suddenly felt her left hand weighted down as well. A closer look showed that it was entangled by black hair. There were Tarzan ropes above the long and narrow swimming pool that was located along a wall in the Jungle Area. Using one of them, Kuroe had moved over to Satsuko's back all at once.

	While holding onto the rope firmly, Kuroe gazed mistily as she wrapped her around Satsuko's left arm, immobilizing it. As for her right hand, the drill was still stuck in Kirika's hand. Without notice, the belt came to entangle Satsuko again.		While holding onto the rope firmly, Kuroe gazed mistily as she wrapped her hair around Satsuko's left arm, immobilizing it. As for her right hand, the drill was still stuck in Kirika's hand. Without notice, the belt came to entangle Satsuko again.

	"Ah~ Facing a crisis here. But once this challenge is overcome, Satsuko should be able to emerge stronger—"		"Ah~ Facing a crisis here. But once this challenge is overcome, Satsuko should be able to emerge stronger—"
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	In the Jungle Area which had become the main battlefield, a few dozen people were lying on the floor. They all had their eyes closed but there were no external injuries.		In the Jungle Area which had become the main battlefield, a few dozen people were lying on the floor. They all had their eyes closed but there were no external injuries.

	Satsuko and Fourteen's bodies were tied up using Kuroe's hardened hair. Apart from having her weapons ~~confiscat~~, Satsuko was also placed quite some distance away, lying unconscious. Seeing as Satsuko was being held as a hostage, Fourteen probably would not dare to make any false moves.		Satsuko and Fourteen's bodies were tied up using Kuroe's hardened hair. Apart from having her weapons confiscated, Satsuko was also placed quite some distance away, lying unconscious. Seeing as Satsuko was being held as a hostage, Fourteen probably would not dare to make any false moves.

	At last, the primary objective of rescuing the hostages was completed. Haruaki muttered "how troubling" and sighed.		At last, the primary objective of rescuing the hostages was completed. Haruaki muttered "how troubling" and sighed.
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	"Anyway, isn't it fine as long as we beat them up if they come? But more importantly, what are we going to do with these two here? We can't help it if new enemies visit. But we can't just leave these two here like this..."		"Anyway, isn't it fine as long as we beat them up if they come? But more importantly, what are we going to do with these two here? We can't help it if new enemies visit. But we can't just leave these two here like this..."

	Fear murmured with displeased look. At this moment, Satsuko opened her mouth wide and said: "Oh, Satsuko almost forgot."		Fear murmured with a displeased look. At this moment, Satsuko opened her mouth wide and said: "Oh, Satsuko almost forgot."

	"There's something you need to know about the Draconians! How should this be phrased? Basically, the agreement when a battle is lost. Anyway, there are two essential details of that sort."		"There's something you need to know about the Draconians! How should this be phrased? Basically, the agreement when a battle is lost. Anyway, there are two essential details of that sort."

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	(How troubling~ I must at least confirm whether she's fine. Otherwise, there's no way I can go back to help the girls without worrying...)		(How troubling~ I must at least confirm whether she's fine. Otherwise, there's no way I can go back to help the girls without worrying...)

	Although Haruaki was unable help out much, he decided it would better to keep more options open by being there to wield Konoha in case she needed to transform into a sword.		Although Haruaki was unable help out much, he decided it would be better to keep more options open by being there to wield Konoha in case she needed to transform into a sword.

	Just when Haruaki was sighing and wondering what he should do next, suddenly entering his view was—		Just when Haruaki was sighing and wondering what he should do next, suddenly entering his view was—
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	"Ah~ Satsuko believes that Fear and the others will return eventually, anyway... Having to fight the gentle Konoha-san who lent Satsuko her pajamas, Satsuko feels so conflicted... Oh how her heart breaks. But it'd be meaningless unless Satsuko does this, so Satsuko will try hard..."		"Ah~ Satsuko believes that Fear and the others will return eventually, anyway... Having to fight the gentle Konoha-san who lent Satsuko her pajamas, Satsuko feels so conflicted... Oh how her heart breaks. But it'd be meaningless unless Satsuko does this, so Satsuko will try hard..."

	"Actually, I'm not gentle at all, so don't feel ~~free~~ brokenhearted. You'd better not expect me to show any mercy."		"Actually, I'm not gentle at all, so don't feel brokenhearted. You'd better not expect me to show any mercy."

	"Sob sob, Satsuko is very weak, please pay attention when the time comes..."		"Sob sob, Satsuko is very weak, please pay attention when the time comes..."
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	"Oh dear... Kono-san looks quite tied up."		"Oh dear... Kono-san looks quite tied up."

	"Yes, that doesn't look like an easy opponent at all... How many more lies did that girl tell ~~actually~~?"		"Yes, that doesn't look like an easy opponent at all... How many more lies did that girl actually tell?"

	Kirika dodged ~~teh~~ incoming timber as she replied to Kuroe, but just at this moment—		Kirika dodged the incoming timber as she replied to Kuroe, but just at this moment—

	"...For the sake of Satsuko's honor, let me first correct you two here. Satsuko was not trying to deceive... Indeed, some call her the «Tailender Syndrome»."		"...For the sake of Satsuko's honor, let me first correct you two here. Satsuko was not trying to deceive... Indeed, some call her the «Tailender Syndrome»."
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	"I see. If she attacks too much, she could end up losing more than she bargained for... Ah!"		"I see. If she attacks too much, she could end up losing more than she bargained for... Ah!"

	Kuroe's hair swiftly deflected an ~~attack~~ block of wood and changed its trajectory. Flying into a pool, the wood made a huge splash.		Kuroe's hair swiftly deflected an incoming block of wood and changed its trajectory. Flying into a pool, the wood made a huge splash.

	"It's true that I don't want to fire any more pillars... But simply stated, if your plan is to exhaust my ammunition, that is futile. The space I can use is vast. The poltergeists have endless toys to play with."		"It's true that I don't want to fire any more pillars... But simply stated, if your plan is to exhaust my ammunition, that is futile. The space I can use is vast. The poltergeists have endless toys to play with."
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	At this moment, in her heart—There were still doubts.		At this moment, in her heart—There were still doubts.

	Namely, doubts regarding why ~~Kadou~~ was unable to fight as a result of cowardice.		Namely, doubts regarding why Kaidou was unable to fight as a result of cowardice.

	After hearing Kaidou's words, Fear concluded that what she needed to do had not changed. Just like just now.		After hearing Kaidou's words, Fear concluded that what she needed to do had not changed. Just like just now.
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	"O-Of course it's very odd!"		"O-Of course it's very odd!"

	Indeed, Fear was very agitated. If the weak really should stay ~~way~~ from the action instead of getting in the way—		Indeed, Fear was very agitated. If the weak really should stay away from the action instead of getting in the way—

	''Then what about Haruaki here''?		''Then what about Haruaki here''?
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	"What you mean is... You do not need... this...?"		"What you mean is... You do not need... this...?"

	"I believe that everything's screwed if I ~~took~~ that shovel away now. It feels like the chance for me and you to become strong together will never come again if I did that... So..."		"I believe that everything's screwed if I take that shovel away now. It feels like the chance for me and you to become strong together will never come again if I did that... So..."

	With greatly troubled eyes, Kaidou bowed her head to look at the returned shovel. Fear impatiently tapped her fingers on her arm as she waited for Kaidou's response. Grinning cheerfully, Haruaki spoke up:		With greatly troubled eyes, Kaidou bowed her head to look at the returned shovel. Fear impatiently tapped her fingers on her arm as she waited for Kaidou's response. Grinning cheerfully, Haruaki spoke up:

CubexCursedxCurious:Volume6 Chapter5 - Revision history

Zzhk at 07:14, 23 October 2014

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

Zzhk: stoic: someone indifferent to pleasure or pain; Stoic: someone subscribing to the philosophy of Zeno

Kory: //*Part 4*/ & Part 5: Typos, missing words, missing period.

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

Zzhk: /* Part 5 */

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

Kory: /*Part 2*/ & Part 3: Typos, grammar, missing/extra word. Changed a word so the sentence would make sense.

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

Kory: //Part 4/ & Part 5: Typos, missing words, missing period.

Kory: /Part 2/ & Part 3: Typos, grammar, missing/extra word. Changed a word so the sentence would make sense.