CubexCursedxCurious:Volume7 Chapter3 - Revision history

Zzhk: /* Part 6 */

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	Of course, Konoha was not holding anything in her hand. She simply swung a karate chop.		Of course, Konoha was not holding anything in her hand. She simply swung a karate chop.

	Even from a distance, Haruaki was breaking out in goosebumps, frightened by her demonic aura. The boys could not possibly be unaware. This time, they really dared not speak simply ~~stared~~ at Konoha.		Even from a distance, Haruaki was breaking out in goosebumps, frightened by her demonic aura. The boys could not possibly be unaware. This time, they really dared not speak, simply staring at Konoha.

	"Fufu... Happy little children... One suddenly wanteth to play a game with ye..."		"Fufu... Happy little children... One suddenly wanteth to play a game with ye..."

Zzhk at 03:47, 3 November 2013

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	Haruaki and Kuroe shook their heads silently.		Haruaki and Kuroe shook their heads silently.

	Fear rapidly slid the paper door ~~closed~~ and returned to Konoha's room. Then a few minutes later—		Fear rapidly slid the paper door shut and returned to Konoha's room. Then a few minutes later—

	"..."		"..."
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	Haruaki originally intended to go with Fear to buy it, but she seemed to be quite enamored with the act of "buying." In any case, since she was within sight, letting her gain some experience was not a bad idea either.		Haruaki originally intended to go with Fear to buy it, but she seemed to be quite enamored with the act of "buying." In any case, since she was within sight, letting her gain some experience was not a bad idea either.

	"~~Take this money and bring~~ a box of takoyaki back. Don't forget to get the change."		"Buy a box of takoyaki with this money and come back. Don't forget to get the change."

	"Okay, you're letting me take on the responsibility of buying things, right? Great, just wait here!"		"Okay, you're letting me take on the responsibility of buying things, right? Great, just wait here!"
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	Then she fluttered her lashes in embarrassment.		Then she fluttered her lashes in embarrassment.

	"I've been wearing this type of Japanese attire since a long time ago... So perhaps it's hard to change old habits, or maybe I just can't calm my mind unless I'm dressed like this... I'm not trying to make an excuse, but in the past, this ~~was~~ perfectly commonplace and necessary when dressed in traditional Japanese garb, umm..."		"I've been wearing this type of Japanese attire since a long time ago... So perhaps it's hard to change old habits, or maybe I just can't calm my mind unless I'm dressed like this... I'm not trying to make an excuse, but in the past, this would be perfectly commonplace and necessary when dressed in traditional Japanese garb, umm..."

	"O-Okay... I get it. I don't quite understand, but I get it. So, it'd be a great help if you could stop talking about that subject."		"O-Okay... I get it. I don't quite understand, but I get it. So, it'd be a great help if you could stop talking about that subject."

Kory: /Part 1/ - Part 7: Grammar, typo, missing word.

2013-11-03T02:17:32Z

Part 1: - Part 7: Grammar, typo, missing word.

Zzhk: /* Translator's Notes and References */

2013-11-02T05:39:00Z

Translator's Notes and References

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	\| Back to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume7_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Back to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume7_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
	\| Return to [[CubexCursedxCurious#~~Volume_7~~\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[CubexCursedxCurious#Volume_7_.28Full_Text.29\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume7_Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]		\| Forward to [[CubexCursedxCurious:Volume7_Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
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2013-10-31T14:20:02Z

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Zzhk at 06:39, 30 October 2013

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	Carrying Fear on his shoulders in this manner, Haruaki slowly made his way up the stone steps.		Carrying Fear on his shoulders in this manner, Haruaki slowly made his way up the stone steps.

	The aroma entering his nostrils along the way was that of a distinctive sauce. Probably from takoyaki octopus balls or yakisoba fried noodles? Above his head, Fear's little hands were drumming on Haruaki's hair as though in sync with the ~~drum accompaniment~~ coming from inside the shrine. Through that rhythm, Haruaki could feel her curiosity and excitement that could not be suppressed.		The aroma entering his nostrils along the way was that of a distinctive sauce. Probably from takoyaki octopus balls or yakisoba fried noodles? Above his head, Fear's little hands were drumming on Haruaki's hair as though in sync with the festival music coming from inside the shrine. Through that rhythm, Haruaki could feel her curiosity and excitement that could not be suppressed.

	Haruaki could understand more or less why she was so excited.		Haruaki could understand more or less why she was so excited.

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	Haruaki and Kuroe shook their heads silently.		Haruaki and Kuroe shook their heads silently.

	Fear rapidly slid the paper door ~~close~~ and returned to Konoha's room. Then a few minutes later—		Fear rapidly slid the paper door closed and returned to Konoha's room. Then a few minutes later—

	"..."		"..."
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	Haruaki originally intended to go with Fear to buy it, but she seemed to be quite enamored with the act of "buying." In any case, since she was within sight, letting her gain some experience was not a bad idea either.		Haruaki originally intended to go with Fear to buy it, but she seemed to be quite enamored with the act of "buying." In any case, since she was within sight, letting her gain some experience was not a bad idea either.

	"Take this money and ~~buy~~ a box of takoyaki back. Don't forget to get the change."		"Take this money and bring a box of takoyaki back. Don't forget to get the change."

	"Okay, you're letting me take on the responsibility of buying things, right? Great, just wait here!"		"Okay, you're letting me take on the responsibility of buying things, right? Great, just wait here!"
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	Then she fluttered her lashes in embarrassment.		Then she fluttered her lashes in embarrassment.

	"I've been wearing this type of Japanese attire since a long time ago... So perhaps it's hard to change old habits, or maybe I just can't calm my mind unless I'm dressed like this... I'm not trying to make an excuse, but in the past, this is perfectly commonplace and necessary when dressed in traditional Japanese garb, umm..."		"I've been wearing this type of Japanese attire since a long time ago... So perhaps it's hard to change old habits, or maybe I just can't calm my mind unless I'm dressed like this... I'm not trying to make an excuse, but in the past, this was perfectly commonplace and necessary when dressed in traditional Japanese garb, umm..."

	"O-Okay... I get it. I don't quite understand, but I get it. So, it'd be a great help if you could stop talking about that subject."		"O-Okay... I get it. I don't quite understand, but I get it. So, it'd be a great help if you could stop talking about that subject."
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	Next, Haruaki's group's festival turned into chasing after Fear whenever she rushed off after some stall caught her eye. Naturally, her interests were not limited to snack stalls but also included game stalls.		Next, Haruaki's group's festival turned into chasing after Fear whenever she rushed off after some stall that caught her eye. Naturally, her interests were not limited to snack stalls but also included game stalls.

	Walking around, Fear had a lot of fun and so did Haruaki and the rest. Without getting into how she competed with Konoha for the largest stuffed doll at a shooting contest but both of them ended up wasting all their ammunition, right now, Fear almost started a fight with a shopkeeper at a seldom encountered multicolored chicken stall due to yelling "What!? To think it's just spray painted, unforgivable!" Granted it was fun, but a little excessively violent.		Walking around, Fear had a lot of fun and so did Haruaki and the rest. Without getting into how she competed with Konoha for the largest stuffed doll at a shooting contest but both of them ended up wasting all their ammunition, right now, Fear almost started a fight with a shopkeeper at a seldom encountered multicolored chicken stall due to yelling "What!? To think it's just spray painted, unforgivable!" Granted it was fun, but a little excessively violent.
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	"Ha! Ha! Ha!"		"Ha! Ha! Ha!"

	Seeing the two of them laughing together, Haruaki trembled in terror. Mr Shopkeeper, ~~todays~~ sure is your lucky day. Had you given the okay, this girl would have taken out something like a drill.		Seeing the two of them laughing together, Haruaki trembled in terror. Mr Shopkeeper, today sure is your lucky day. Had you given the okay, this girl would have taken out something like a drill.

	Meanwhile, things were going smoothly for a certain young girl.		Meanwhile, things were going smoothly for a certain young girl.
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	Kuroe was expressionless as usual but her eyes were half-closed in a gentle display.		Kuroe was expressionless as usual but her eyes were half-closed in a gentle display.

	"To get what I really want—that's why you ~~give~~ me this coin, right?"		"To get what I really want—that's why you gave me this coin, right?"

	Fear exhaled and extended her fist that was holding the coin over the offering box.		Fear exhaled and extended her fist that was holding the coin over the offering box.
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	"Arghhhh... Not again! Those damn kids!"		"Arghhhh... Not again! Those damn kids!"

	A man's voice caused them to look back. A man, roughly fifty, was peering into the offering box with a scary expression. He was dressed in a white hakama, Japanese ~~spit~~-toed socks and leather-soled sandals. His identity was obvious from his appearance. Absolutely beyond a ~~dbout~~.		A man's voice caused them to look back. A man, roughly fifty, was peering into the offering box with a scary expression. He was dressed in a white hakama, Japanese split-toed socks and leather-soled sandals. His identity was obvious from his appearance. Absolutely beyond a doubt.

	"—Are you an offering thief? To think you're stealing the hard-earned money I tossed in there! Watch me bring divine retribution upon you!"		"—Are you an offering thief? To think you're stealing the hard-earned money I tossed in there! Watch me bring divine retribution upon you!"
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	Staring into the offering box, the priest sighed and answered.		Staring into the offering box, the priest sighed and answered.

	"You know who the ~~suspect~~ are...?"		"You know who the suspects are...?"

	"I recall you saying 'those damn kids' just now, right?"		"I recall you saying 'those damn kids' just now, right?"
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	"Wait, Fear, what on earth are you...?"		"Wait, Fear, what on earth are you...?"

	"I'm helping people. I must do things 'beneficial to people.' Also—Although my money wasn't stolen, but that's just pure luck. Had the timing been different, perhaps even the money filled with my hopes might have been stolen! So this has made me understand something even more. Stealing money that's infused with people's wishes is completely unacceptable! Those delinquents who have strayed off the proper path must be ~~take~~ care of!"		"I'm helping people. I must do things 'beneficial to people.' Also—Although my money wasn't stolen, but that's just pure luck. Had the timing been different, perhaps even the money filled with my hopes might have been stolen! So this has made me understand something even more. Stealing money that's infused with people's wishes is completely unacceptable! Those delinquents who have strayed off the proper path must be taken care of!"

	Well~ You do have a point indeed... With a reluctant expression in his eyes, Haruaki looked at the priest. The priest responded with the same type of gaze.		Well~ You do have a point indeed... With a reluctant expression in his eyes, Haruaki looked at the priest. The priest responded with the same type of gaze.
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	As soon as the unharmed boys were released, they ran for their lives while crying. Haruaki only hoped that they did not form some kind of unpleasant mental trauma... Like freezing in fear whenever they saw a butterfly mask again.		As soon as the unharmed boys were released, they ran for their lives while crying. Haruaki only hoped that they did not form some kind of unpleasant mental trauma... Like freezing in fear whenever they saw a butterfly mask again.

	Haruaki's group brought back the offering money to return to the priest and reported that the "boys promised they won't steal offering money again." The priest felt very surprised by thanked them with a sigh of relief. He even said "You've really helped me a lot. Would you like some tea?" However, Haruaki's group firmly refused the invitation and went back to the festival.		Haruaki's group brought back the offering money to return to the priest and reported that the "boys promised they won't steal offering money again." The priest felt very surprised and thanked them with a sigh of relief. He even said "You've really helped me a lot. Would you like some tea?" However, Haruaki's group firmly refused the invitation and went back to the festival.

	"Gwah—I'm dead tired..."		"Gwah—I'm dead tired..."

CubexCursedxCurious:Volume7 Chapter3 - Revision history

Zzhk: /* Part 6 */

Zzhk at 03:47, 3 November 2013

Kory: /*Part 1*/ - Part 7: Grammar, typo, missing word.

Zzhk: /* Translator's Notes and References */

Zzhk: /* Part 7 */

Zzhk: /* Part 6 */

Zzhk at 09:23, 31 October 2013

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

Zzhk at 06:39, 30 October 2013

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

Kory: /Part 1/ - Part 7: Grammar, typo, missing word.