DOWL Master:Volume1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	But as expected for those who were chosen as a commanding officer, the squad leader prefer logic over emotion.		But as expected for those who were chosen as a commanding officer, the squad leader prefer logic over emotion.

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	''“Unit number twenty five to twenty eight is to rescue the reconnaissance squad, the others are to continue marching forward.”''		''“Unit number twenty five to twenty eight is to rescue the reconnaissance squad, the others are to continue marching forward.”''

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	Akari immediately let go of her weapon.		Akari immediately let go of her weapon.
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	“The victim of an accident that happens during Alliance’s training would be honorably remove from Polis as killed in action. Your family would not be neglect.”		“The victim of an accident that happens during Alliance’s training would be honorably remove from Polis as killed in action. Your family would not be neglect.”
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	“After all, the practice that happen at Iwato training school be treat as military service. The Alliance would not stay quiet if the family of the people who engage in their operation and was killed in action got chase out of the Polis.”		“After all, the practice that happen at Iwato training school be treat as military service. The Alliance would not stay quiet if the family of the people who engage in their operation and was killed in action got chase out of the Polis.”

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2015-11-01T12:34:52Z

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Umini: Just a few minor edits, will edit more when I find them :D I kept general pieces of knowledge in present tense, actions in past tense and events which took place long ago (such as the beginning segment) in past perfect simple (use of 'had' and so on)

2015-10-25T23:05:01Z

Just a few minor edits, will edit more when I find them :D I kept general pieces of knowledge in present tense, actions in past tense and events which took place long ago (such as the beginning segment) in past perfect simple (use of 'had' and so on)

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	“The victim of an accident that happens during Alliance’s training would be honorably remove from Polis as killed in action. Your family would not be neglect.”		“The victim of an accident that happens during Alliance’s training would be honorably remove from Polis as killed in action. Your family would not be neglect.”
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	“After all, the practice that happen at Iwato training school be treat as military service. The Alliance would not stay quiet if the family of the people who engage in their operation and was killed in action got chase out of the Polis.”		“After all, the practice that happen at Iwato training school be treat as military service. The Alliance would not stay quiet if the family of the people who engage in their operation and was killed in action got chase out of the Polis.”

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	To defeat ExA with his non-ExA self.		To defeat ExA with his non-ExA self.

	The enemy Ryoichi gazing at was Dorji’s Rudra, the ~~SOFAE~~ behind his back and the Solar System Alliance itself.		The enemy Ryoichi gazing at was Dorji’s Rudra, the SOFEA behind his back and the Solar System Alliance itself.
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2015-10-20T11:00:19Z

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	''“Scarlet-two speaking. That was some showing thing you did there. Let me see…. the enemies are five units of Zetes. They maybe reconnaissance DOWL, but that was still some considerable feat.”		''“Scarlet-two speaking. That was some showing thing you did there. Let me see…. the enemies are five units of Zetes. They maybe reconnaissance DOWL, but that was still some considerable feat.”
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	“This is Scarlet-three. Akarii, left us some bonus too.”''		''“This is Scarlet-three. Akarii, left us some bonus too.”''

	What returned was an answer with no evil intend. Akari was not really blaming them anyway, this kind of frivolous talk was perfect in this kind of place.		What returned was an answer with no evil intend. Akari was not really blaming them anyway, this kind of frivolous talk was perfect in this kind of place.
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	Aoi keep tapping at his sister’s arm that was doing the sleeper hold on his neck as he deliriously blurted out his incomplete sentence.		Aoi keep tapping at his sister’s arm that was doing the sleeper hold on his neck as he deliriously blurted out his incomplete sentence.

	Probably satisfied with his sorry stated (the thing she was actually satisfied with was a mystery), Akari released Aoi ~~and intentionally~~ and intentionally let out a huge sigh.		Probably satisfied with his sorry stated (the thing she was actually satisfied with was a mystery), Akari released Aoi and intentionally let out a huge sigh.

	“I guess that’s inevitable. If you’re also decided on that I guess we should start preparing, then.”		“I guess that’s inevitable. If you’re also decided on that I guess we should start preparing, then.”

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2015-10-20T08:48:59Z

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	“The victim of an accident that happens during Alliance’s training would be honorably remove from Polis as killed in action. Your family would not be neglect.”		“The victim of an accident that happens during Alliance’s training would be honorably remove from Polis as killed in action. Your family would not be neglect.”

	“After all, the practice that happen at Iwato training school be treat as military service. The Alliance would not stay quiet if the family of the people who engage in their operation and was in action got chase out of the Polis.”		“After all, the practice that happen at Iwato training school be treat as military service. The Alliance would not stay quiet if the family of the people who engage in their operation and was killed in action got chase out of the Polis.”

	After Rose and Felicia mutual explanation, Ryoichi finally understood what they were trying to say. He thought that it was an effective way. However he did not think that Alliance’s high class training school is some place that could be easily slip in.		After Rose and Felicia mutual explanation, Ryoichi finally understood what they were trying to say. He thought that it was an effective way. However he did not think that Alliance’s high class training school is some place that could be easily slip in.

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2015-10-20T07:06:37Z

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	If pursuit was possible, Aoi would probably shot down Yokohama army’s ace and achieve a most spectacular victory. But it was not the time, only small crevice was open for the door of possibility.		If pursuit was possible, Aoi would probably shot down Yokohama army’s ace and achieve a most spectacular victory. But it was not the time, only small crevice was open for the door of possibility.

	It would seem that fate has no intention to perform anymore services.		It would seem that fate has no intention to perform anymore services.

	Not just Shakara, but Talos IV’s Pyscronics engine was also silent. Easily put, even though it is different, overheated.		Not just Shakara, but Talos IV’s Pyscronics engine was also silent. Easily put, even though it is different, overheated.
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	“Yes. My brother used Talos IV to combat with Shakara. Although, due to Psycronics breakdown, he is not fit for combat and was force fully ejected with the cockpit unit”		“Yes. My brother used Talos IV to combat with Shakara. Although, due to Psycronics breakdown, he is not fit for combat and was force fully ejected with the cockpit unit”

	“I see… Akari, could you introduce your brother to us?”		''“I see… Akari, could you introduce your brother to us?”''

	“I don’t really mind…”		“I don’t really mind…”

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2015-10-20T07:02:15Z

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	Talos III exceeds Shakara in terms of unit weight. Shakara’s DOWL Master, Kisaragi Ryoichi did not brace his legs at the increased inertia, he neutralize inertia at the time of contact reducing the damage received from the crash to almost zero. And while in midair he used water jet on both his shoulder to spayed high pressure water and use that knock back to control his unit.		Talos III exceeds Shakara in terms of unit weight. Shakara’s DOWL Master, Kisaragi Ryoichi did not brace his legs at the increased inertia, he neutralize inertia at the time of contact reducing the damage received from the crash to almost zero. And while in midair he used water jet on both his shoulder to spayed high pressure water and use that knock back to control his unit.

	“Get down, Aoi!”		''“Get down, Aoi!”''

	Yelling at her brother and kicked off the pavement at the same time. As the ruin road collapsed under the size her feet, Akari closed in on Shakara.		Yelling at her brother and kicked off the pavement at the same time. As the ruin road collapsed under the size her feet, Akari closed in on Shakara.

	Looking through Shakara, no, overlapping field of vision with Shakara, Ryoichi focus on the charging Talos.		Looking through Shakara, no, overlapping field of vision with Shakara, Ryoichi focus on the charging Talos.
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	Shakara’s lance pieced not the red-tea colored but the black-ash colored unit, Aoi’s Talos IV.		Shakara’s lance pieced not the red-tea colored but the black-ash colored unit, Aoi’s Talos IV.

	''“Aoi!?”''		''“Aoi!?”''

	Akari screamed.		Akari screamed.

	As if to say its ok, the Talos IV that has intergraded with Aoi turned its face and nod.		As if to say its ok, the Talos IV that has intergraded with Aoi turned its face and nod.

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2015-10-20T06:59:17Z

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	Hiding his intention to fight, Ryoichi sent transmission to Tokushaka.		Hiding his intention to fight, Ryoichi sent transmission to Tokushaka.
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	“The Polis did not order for a ceasefire.”''		''“The Polis did not order for a ceasefire.”''

	The answer to Ryoichi question was in according to the regulations. They were dispatch with an order to occupy the terrestrial heat power plant under Odawara control. What SOFEA demanded was contrary to that order. As long as Polis government do not change the order to occupy, they, the regular army, have no authority to stop the battle.		The answer to Ryoichi question was in according to the regulations. They were dispatch with an order to occupy the terrestrial heat power plant under Odawara control. What SOFEA demanded was contrary to that order. As long as Polis government do not change the order to occupy, they, the regular army, have no authority to stop the battle.
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	Through Rudra’s eyes, Doriji has grasp that the Shakara - it’s DOWL Master, Kisaragi Ryoichi has decided to fight him.		Through Rudra’s eyes, Doriji has grasp that the Shakara - it’s DOWL Master, Kisaragi Ryoichi has decided to fight him.

	“Lieutenant, the enemy unit, Shakara’s SIMA reaction is increasing! Please be careful!”		''“Lieutenant, the enemy unit, Shakara’s SIMA reaction is increasing! Please be careful!”''

	From the mother ship Glenblu, Rea Pudi’s panic voice was transmitted through communicator.		From the mother ship Glenblu, Rea Pudi’s panic voice was transmitted through communicator.
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	“Roger that.”		“Roger that.”

	Now that you mention it, this is the first time Rea has been in a real battle. Dorji casually though.		''Now that you mention it, this is the first time Rea has been in a real battle.'' Dorji casually though.

	It has been a year of real combat for him too. At first, his enemies would lost their will to fight just seeing Rudra’s silhouette. So for Dorji who felt somewhat unsatisfied, seeing Shakara showing its fighting spirit, he felt somewhat exited.		It has been a year of real combat for him too. At first, his enemies would lost their will to fight just seeing Rudra’s silhouette. So for Dorji who felt somewhat unsatisfied, seeing Shakara showing its fighting spirit, he felt somewhat exited.

	If it was possible to avoid battle, he would do avoid it. He has no intention on raising objection to the repeatedly preach theory from his ~~bad companion~~. However it cannot be help that he has a warlike personality, Dorji defiantly thought. Ironically, the combat duty has only been given to the battle-hating '''her''', giving him no chance to exercise his talent. Leaving Dorji a bit frustrated.		If it was possible to avoid battle, he would do avoid it. He has no intention on raising objection to the repeatedly preach theory from his old friend. However it cannot be help that he has a warlike personality, Dorji defiantly thought. Ironically, the combat duty has only been given to the battle-hating '''her''', giving him no chance to exercise his talent. Leaving Dorji a bit frustrated.

	He imagined a scene where a castle gate was opening. Not from inside but outside, gazing from the meadow while riding a house. Just like that Dorji can feel '''a power welled up from within''', as usual. Then guided that power below the navel, the center of DOWL’s body or just below the cockpit.		He imagined a scene where a castle gate was opening. Not from inside but outside, gazing from the meadow while riding a house. Just like that Dorji can feel '''a power welled up from within''', as usual. Then guided that power below the navel, the center of DOWL’s body or just below the cockpit.