Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

47.55.249.145: 一羽 is for birds, 一匹 would be used for cats

2015-05-05T03:37:37Z

一羽 is for birds, 一匹 would be used for cats

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	She first suspected the stray cats living around the mansion.		She first suspected the stray cats living around the mansion.

	~~One of them, a~~ crafty old black cat, once sneaked into the mansion and ate the Lady's ~~parrot~~ in a grotesque manner.		A crafty old black cat once sneaked into the mansion and ate one of the Lady's parrots in a grotesque manner.

	The Lady's fury at that time was beyond normal. Thus, it had been a real bother for the servants. An incident that gets one fed up just by remembering.		The Lady's fury at that time was beyond normal. Thus, it had been a real bother for the servants. An incident that gets one fed up just by remembering.

Usagi-saki: "hunting dog breeding" was somewhat confusing so I rearranged it to "breeding hunting dogs"

2014-12-07T02:46:36Z

"hunting dog breeding" was somewhat confusing so I rearranged it to "breeding hunting dogs"

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	It was unlikely, that this could come just from playing around with the dogs. It could be said for sure, that he was always looking after them with a lot of enthusiasm.		It was unlikely, that this could come just from playing around with the dogs. It could be said for sure, that he was always looking after them with a lot of enthusiasm.

	"The Hurston family originally earned most of their fortune by hunting ~~dog breeding~~. Even the Royal dog kennel is taking in some dogs that were raised here."		"The Hurston family originally earned most of their fortune by breeding hunting dogs. Even the Royal dog kennel is taking in some dogs that were raised here."

	Dalian said, disinterestedly without looking up from her book.		Dalian said, disinterestedly without looking up from her book.

EusthEnoptEron: Putting the title where it belongs to

2012-01-28T16:44:26Z

Putting the title where it belongs to

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	~~==Chapter 2 - Pedigree <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 02: Crossbreed</span>==~~
	The housekeeper who was living at the mansion was the first to notice the abnormality.		The housekeeper who was living at the mansion was the first to notice the abnormality.

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	Then the beast disappeared, melting into the dark---		Then the beast disappeared, melting into the dark---


			==Chapter 2 - Pedigree <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 02: Crossbreed</span>==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Ssj6piccolo: gave parts 'part' prefix and put intro after chapter header

2012-01-23T11:56:11Z

gave parts 'part' prefix and put intro after chapter header

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			==Chapter 2 - Pedigree <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 02: Crossbreed</span>==
	The housekeeper who was living at the mansion was the first to notice the abnormality.		The housekeeper who was living at the mansion was the first to notice the abnormality.

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	Then the beast disappeared, melting into the dark---		Then the beast disappeared, melting into the dark---

			===Part 1===
	~~==Chapter 2 - Pedigree<br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 02: Crossbreed</span>==~~
	~~__NOTOC__~~
	===1===

	A pub near the rail station was currently crowded with people wanting lunch.		A pub near the rail station was currently crowded with people wanting lunch.
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	"Sugar..."		"Sugar..."

	===2===		===Part 2===

	While the Hurston Family didn't hold a peerage, they were a gentry family with equal fortune and authority. They owned land around the town and employed several tenant farmers. A lot of them also were working in important offices of the town, as judges or as committee members.		While the Hurston Family didn't hold a peerage, they were a gentry family with equal fortune and authority. They owned land around the town and employed several tenant farmers. A lot of them also were working in important offices of the town, as judges or as committee members.
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	It was right after this, that rude footsteps could be heard from the corridor and the door to the parlor opened violently.		It was right after this, that rude footsteps could be heard from the corridor and the door to the parlor opened violently.

	===3===		===Part 3===

	"Chez...! Is Chez here?!"		"Chez...! Is Chez here?!"
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	"I've heard your wish."		"I've heard your wish."

	===4===		===Part 4===


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	Dalian's cries resounded in the garden at evening.		Dalian's cries resounded in the garden at evening.

	===5===		===Part 5===

	Late at night. Huey and Dalian were guided to an annex of the mansion.		Late at night. Huey and Dalian were guided to an annex of the mansion.
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	At the same time, an intense stench struck his nose. The spreading fire had inflamed the chemicals stored in this underground room. The moment Huey took notice of this, a bright flash followed by a terrific blast came rushing towards them, upon which their field of vision was enveloped in darkness.		At the same time, an intense stench struck his nose. The spreading fire had inflamed the chemicals stored in this underground room. The moment Huey took notice of this, a bright flash followed by a terrific blast came rushing towards them, upon which their field of vision was enveloped in darkness.

	===6===		===Part 6===

	It looked like Huey didn't lose consciousness for too long.		It looked like Huey didn't lose consciousness for too long.
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	A tremendous flash filled the underground room and flames blazed up the dark.		A tremendous flash filled the underground room and flames blazed up the dark.

	===7===		===Part 7===

	Roy Hurston kept guffawing while he looked down on the remains of the burned and crumbled underground room.		Roy Hurston kept guffawing while he looked down on the remains of the burned and crumbled underground room.
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	===8===		===Part 8===

Unkani at 00:28, 14 August 2011

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EusthEnoptEron at 04:55, 12 August 2011

2011-08-12T04:55:34Z

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	Staring at Dalian who was wordlessly reading a book, he spoke, lightly bewildered,		Staring at Dalian who was wordlessly reading a book, he spoke, lightly bewildered,

	"Err... are you the Black ~~Yomihime (Reading Princess)~~?"		"Err... are you the Black Biblioprincess?"

	"......"		"......"
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	The old man said, in a cracking voice resembling a rusty gear.		The old man said, in a cracking voice resembling a rusty gear.

	"It is against good manners to invite the ~~Reading Princess~~ to our house and then summon her to my bedroom..."		"It is against good manners to invite the Biblioprincess to our house and then summon her to my bedroom..."

	Dalian stepped up to the old man.		Dalian stepped up to the old man.
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	A smile floated over the stale cheeks of the old man. He kissed her hand that was covered with a metallic protector.		A smile floated over the stale cheeks of the old man. He kissed her hand that was covered with a metallic protector.

	"You are without change, Black ~~Reading Princess~~... I am truly grateful... that you've come to grant my wish."		"You are without change, Black Biblioprincess... I am truly grateful... that you've come to grant my wish."

	Dalian nodded silently.		Dalian nodded silently.
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	Chez patted the back of the old man. In the meanwhile, a servant poured out water from a water jar and presented it to him. The old man grabbed the glass with trembling fingers.		Chez patted the back of the old man. In the meanwhile, a servant poured out water from a water jar and presented it to him. The old man grabbed the glass with trembling fingers.

	"Tonight... come to my room before the date changes... there... I shall conduct the inheritance... is this alright for you... Black ~~Reading Princess~~?"		"Tonight... come to my room before the date changes... there... I shall conduct the inheritance... is this alright for you... Black Biblioprincess?"

	The old man asked, while breathing painfully.		The old man asked, while breathing painfully.
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	"Brother... what have you done...?"		"Brother... what have you done...?"

	"Be quiet... this girl comes next. Phantom Book? ~~Reading Princess~~? My arse!"		"Be quiet... this girl comes next. Phantom Book? Biblioprincess? My arse!"

	After turning around, Roy pointed his gun at Dalian.		After turning around, Roy pointed his gun at Dalian.

EusthEnoptEron at 04:44, 12 August 2011

2011-08-12T04:44:21Z

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	"I was about to do him a favour by lending him the book and this stupid dog chose to carry along a corpse. Because he couldn't carry the corpse together with the book... I don't know anymore about this darn fool... that's why I hate dogs."		"I was about to do him a favour by lending him the book and this stupid dog chose to carry along a corpse. Because he couldn't carry the corpse together with the book... I don't know anymore about this darn fool... that's why I hate dogs."

	The black-dressed girl ~~raised~~ her ~~kin in a prickly attitude and looked up to~~ the sky ~~through the window~~. Her sulking did, somehow, seem like she was suppressing tears.		The black-dressed girl thrust up her chin, gazing out of the window at the sky. Her sulking did, somehow, seem like she was suppressing tears.

	Huey smiled lightly.		Huey smiled lightly.

Unkani: General grammar fixes

2011-08-11T23:28:17Z

General grammar fixes

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202.156.11.12 at 08:16, 5 August 2011

2011-08-05T08:16:33Z

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Starkiller4299 at 18:08, 1 August 2011

2011-08-01T18:08:07Z

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