Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

EusthEnoptEron: Putting the title where it belongs to

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Putting the title where it belongs to

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	~~==Chapter 3 - The Book of Wisdom <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 03: Liber Sapientiae</span>==~~
	It was afternoon in the town. A couple of children were sitting in a circle in a small, dirty classroom.		It was afternoon in the town. A couple of children were sitting in a circle in a small, dirty classroom.

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	The Book of Wisdom. That was the title of the book.		The Book of Wisdom. That was the title of the book.

			==Chapter 3 - The Book of Wisdom <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 03: Liber Sapientiae</span>==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
	Huey awoke in darkness that day.		Huey awoke in darkness that day.

Ssj6piccolo: put intro after chapter header, re-activated TOC & added 'Part' prefix to all parts

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put intro after chapter header, re-activated TOC & added 'Part' prefix to all parts

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			==Chapter 3 - The Book of Wisdom <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 03: Liber Sapientiae</span>==
	It was afternoon in the town. A couple of children were sitting in a circle in a small, dirty classroom.		It was afternoon in the town. A couple of children were sitting in a circle in a small, dirty classroom.

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	The Book of Wisdom. That was the title of the book.		The Book of Wisdom. That was the title of the book.

			===Part 1===
	~~==Chapter 3 - The Book of Wisdom<br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 03: Liber Sapientiae</span>==~~
	~~__NOTOC__~~

	===1===
	Huey awoke in darkness that day.		Huey awoke in darkness that day.

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	There was still nothing but darkness beyond the window.		There was still nothing but darkness beyond the window.

	===2===		===Part 2===
	That bookstore was situated in a side street of the university town <!-- Oxford, presumably --> which was lively with restaurants and shops.		That bookstore was situated in a side street of the university town <!-- Oxford, presumably --> which was lively with restaurants and shops.

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	After putting back the book to its original place, Dalian walked towards her. Then she turned back to Huey and urged him with reproaching eyes, "What are you waiting for? We're going!"		After putting back the book to its original place, Dalian walked towards her. Then she turned back to Huey and urged him with reproaching eyes, "What are you waiting for? We're going!"

	===3===		===Part 3===

	Huey and Dalian were taken to Camilla's holiday house within the town.		Huey and Dalian were taken to Camilla's holiday house within the town.
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	Camilla twisted her lips bewilderedly upon accidentally responding to Dalian by giving her thumbs up as well.		Camilla twisted her lips bewilderedly upon accidentally responding to Dalian by giving her thumbs up as well.

	===4===		===Part 4===

	Mildred Dewar's mansion was just on the opposite side of the river.		Mildred Dewar's mansion was just on the opposite side of the river.

Unkani: General grammar fixes

2011-08-12T21:05:26Z

General grammar fixes

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EusthEnoptEron at 04:56, 12 August 2011

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	"We are, so?"		"We are, so?"

	"Are you the Black ~~Yomihime~~ and her ~~Key Warder~~?"		"Are you the Black Biblioprincess and her keykeeper?"

	"The caretaker of the Bibliotheca Mystica de Dantalian, huh... ~~Oho, it did~~ actually ~~exist~~?"		"The caretaker of the Bibliotheca Mystica de Dantalian, huh... Most interesting. It actually exists?"

	"Did you come for the 'Book of Wisdom'?"		"Did you come for the 'Book of Wisdom'?"
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	"...Do you know about us?"		"...Do you know about us?"

	Only a very small number of people, familiar with occult knowledge like magic, were supposed to know about the ~~Yomihime~~, proprietor of the phantom library called "Bibliotheca Mystica de Dantalian", and her servant.		Only a very small number of people, familiar with occult knowledge like magic, were supposed to know about the Biblioprincess, proprietor of the phantom library called "Bibliotheca Mystica de Dantalian", and her servant.

	Mere common children couldn't possibly know those terms, no matter how high their intelligence was. But they responded easily, while Huey was more and more surprised.		Mere common children couldn't possibly know those terms, no matter how high their intelligence was. But they responded easily, while Huey was more and more surprised.

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	"Only a very small part has been passed on to our age in form of mathematics and fortune-telling."		"Only a very small part has been passed on to our age in form of mathematics and fortune-telling."

	"The real technologies of the ancient priests have been lost along with ~~the~~ their ruin."		"The real technologies of the ancient priests have been lost along with their ruin."

	"Well, and one of those you find in this book. A technique they had used to train new priests and priestesses."		"Well, and one of those you find in this book. A technique they had used to train new priests and priestesses."

202.156.11.12 at 08:39, 5 August 2011

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	"Monsters?" Huey wrinkled his brow. "It's cruel to call your own students like this."		"Monsters?" Huey wrinkled his brow. "It's cruel to call your own students like this."

	"Oh, you know nothing, do you?" Mildred laughed out. It was a very bitter ~~laugher~~, as if an hole opened in a beautiful sculpture. "Those children have surpassed us humans. They have monstrous computational ability, a perfect power of understanding and have knowledge in all kinds of fields... in their eyes we're just lower creatures in line with monkeys!"		"Oh, you know nothing, do you?" Mildred laughed out. It was a very bitter laugh, as if a hole opened in a beautiful sculpture. "Those children have surpassed us humans. They have monstrous computational ability, a perfect power of understanding and have knowledge in all kinds of fields... in their eyes we're just lower creatures in line with monkeys!"

	Huey's expression disappeared more and more from his face. Not because he was frightened, but because he was fed up from the bottom of his heart with the nuisance he had earned himself.		Huey's expression disappeared more and more from his face. Not because he was frightened, but because he was fed up from the bottom of his heart with the nuisance he had earned himself.

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	"Monsters?" Huey wrinkled his brow. "It's cruel to call your own students like this."		"Monsters?" Huey wrinkled his brow. "It's cruel to call your own students like this."

	"Oh, you know nothing, do you?" Mildred laughed out. It was a very bitter laugher, as if an hole opened in a beautiful sculpture. "Those children have surpassed us humans. They have monstrous computational a ability, a perfect power of understanding and have knowledge in all kinds of fields... in their eyes we're just lower creatures in line with monkeys!"		"Oh, you know nothing, do you?" Mildred laughed out. It was a very bitter laugher, as if an hole opened in a beautiful sculpture. "Those children have surpassed us humans. They have monstrous computational ability, a perfect power of understanding and have knowledge in all kinds of fields... in their eyes we're just lower creatures in line with monkeys!"

	Huey's expression disappeared more and more from his face. Not because he was frightened, but because he was fed up from the bottom of his heart with the nuisance he had earned himself.		Huey's expression disappeared more and more from his face. Not because he was frightened, but because he was fed up from the bottom of his heart with the nuisance he had earned himself.

202.156.11.12 at 08:36, 5 August 2011

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	It was a physical impossibility that by reading a book, the intelligence of a student would rise so abruptly as to frighten the teacher—if it was just a normal book.		It was a physical impossibility that by reading a book, the intelligence of a student would rise so abruptly as to frighten the teacher—if it was just a normal book.

	If something of that kind had really happened, then they were made read a abnormal book.		If something of that kind had really happened, then they were made to read an abnormal book.

	"I see...," Dalian put a frown on her clean face and sighed. "I may have come upon something. It's presumably a real phantom book. The so-called Liber Sapientiae which was written by a nameless latin. To think that such a thing was still out there somewhere..."		"I see...," Dalian put a frown on her clean face and sighed. "I may have come upon something. It's presumably a real phantom book. The so-called Liber Sapientiae which was written by a nameless latin. To think that such a thing was still out there somewhere..."

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	"That was ages ago! She went to the new continent<!-- America --> for a while."		"That was ages ago! She went to the new continent<!-- America --> for a while."

	"New continent?" Dalian slightly raised am eyebrow.		"New continent?" Dalian slightly raised an eyebrow.

	"Yay!" Camilla showed her the thumbs up and nodded over-cheerfully.		"Yay!" Camilla showed her the thumbs up and nodded over-cheerfully.
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	Though not as much as Dalian, her appearance was also quite uncommon.		Though not as much as Dalian, her appearance was also quite uncommon.

	[[Image:Dantalian no Shoka-vol1-p139.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:Dantalian no Shoka-vol1-p139.jpg\|thumb\|Camilla]]

	She wore a white blouse with a necktie, and a fedora on her head. Her slightly peculiar yet pretty fair hair was cut at shoulder length and on her feet were tall lace-up boots. The unadorned skirt she wore was fastened with a leather belt so massive one could tuck a gun into it. She looked much more like one of the pioneers of the new continent rather than a daughter of a wealthy man in the capital.		She wore a white blouse with a necktie, and a fedora on her head. Her slightly peculiar yet pretty fair hair was cut at shoulder length and on her feet were tall lace-up boots. The unadorned skirt she wore was fastened with a leather belt so massive one could tuck a gun into it. She looked much more like one of the pioneers of the new continent rather than a daughter of a wealthy man in the capital.

202.156.11.12 at 08:27, 5 August 2011

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	"...What's strange is your head. What is wrong with buying books in a bookstore?" A teary-eyed Dalian looked up at him with resenting eyes while holding her reddened forehead.		"...What's strange is your head. What is wrong with buying books in a bookstore?" A teary-eyed Dalian looked up at him with resenting eyes while holding her reddened forehead.

	"You know, you don't normally buy whole shelves! We haven't come here to buy ~~ahead~~ sardines or something, after all."		"You know, you don't normally buy whole shelves! We haven't come here to buy a head of sardines or something, after all."

	"But Wez has always bought books this way."		"But Wez has always bought books this way."