Denpa Teki na Kanojo:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Elkin: Completed

2014-03-25T16:29:59Z

Completed

Elkin at 16:29, 23 March 2014

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 And he found them.
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+His senpais were making their way towards a deserted spot, in a manner that suggested that they were cornering someone.
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Elkin at 14:38, 22 March 2014

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 It was about time.
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+Looking for all the world as though he hadn't noticed the rain, Jyuu went back upstairs.
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Elkin: An update after forever... you have Mokushiroku Arisu to blame for putting me back into a novel translation mood.

2014-03-21T18:54:49Z

An update after forever... you have Mokushiroku Arisu to blame for putting me back into a novel translation mood.

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 Having been mentally driven into a corner, Jyuu wearily pondered about the strategy.
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69.151.170.90 at 04:31, 7 February 2012

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	But Jyuu guessed wrongly.		But Jyuu guessed wrongly.

	Behind the gym was a great tree. A sakura tree over 200-~~year~~ old that was here long before this school was even established. Waiting under the tree that would forgotten until next year, now that all the blossoms had already fallen, was a single girl.		Behind the gym was a great tree. A sakura tree over 200-years old that was here long before this school was even established. Waiting under the tree that would be forgotten until next year, now that all the blossoms had already fallen, was a single girl.

	Looking from a distance, Jyuu had no recollection of that girl whatsoever.		Looking from a distance, Jyuu had no recollection of that girl whatsoever.

RKazza: Grammar.

2011-08-23T07:05:25Z

Grammar.

Starkiller4299 at 18:40, 15 February 2011

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	As for Jyuu, he didn't mind this sort of treatment and so put up with it.		As for Jyuu, he didn't mind this sort of treatment and so put up with it.

	Although it's a common saying not to judge a book by its cover, as ~~long~~ as one could see, external appearances still had an impact on one's judgement.		Although it's a common saying not to judge a book by its cover, as far as one could see, external appearances still had an impact on one's judgement.

	Most students either became wary or possibly uncomfortable upon seeing this Jyuuzawa Jyuu teen.		Most students either became wary or possibly uncomfortable upon seeing this Jyuuzawa Jyuu teen.
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	Jyuu’s mind remained blank while seeing all this.		Jyuu’s mind remained blank while seeing all this.

	He thought that being in a state of thoughtlessness was great. By simply just living, one would experience for an instant the sense of living. This way, one’s life would without one realising, and surely this should be a happy thing*. It would sure be lucky to go straight to heaven in the blink of an eye without any worries in mind.		He thought that being in a state of thoughtlessness was great. By simply just living, one would experience for an instant the sense of living. This way, one’s life would end without one realising, and surely this should be a happy thing*. It would sure be lucky to go straight to heaven in the blink of an eye without any worries in mind.
	* some repetition here: ‘one’s life would end without one realising, and surely one should be happy to die without noticing it’		* some repetition here: ‘one’s life would end without one realising, and surely one should be happy to die without noticing it’

58.152.149.115 at 13:22, 30 January 2011

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	This time, he didn’t hear anyone calling him to stop from behind.		This time, he didn’t hear anyone calling him to stop from behind.


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Darklor: Denpa

2009-10-12T04:53:04Z

Denpa

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	This girl, Ochibana Ame, was weird in the head.		This girl, Ochibana Ame, was weird in the head.

	She was the type of person who spoke about hallucinations like they were real, and forced others to believe in them as well. The type that’re called denpa*.		She was the type of person who spoke about hallucinations like they were real, and forced others to believe in them as well. The type that’re called [[Talk:Denpa_Teki_na_Kanojo:Volume_1_Chapter_1\|denpa]]*.
	* Denpa: literally ‘electro-magnetic waves’ or ‘radio waves’, this term refers to the genre of mysterious girls who may or may not have powers related to waves. These powers are usually psychic in nature, for example being able to read someone’s thoughts by detecting e-m waves or electricity. Denpa girls also tend to have long black hair, long fringe optional.

	This took up way too much time, but he had no clue as to how to proceed from here.		This took up way too much time, but he had no clue as to how to proceed from here.

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	Normally, what would you think when someone asks you to go to the back of the gym after class?		Normally, what would you think when someone asks you to go to the back of the gym after class?

	If it were a friend who's calling you out, it's probably because they want to you tell some kind of secret. But if the caller is a male and, on top of that, he's no a close friend, it's probably a hint of the danger and violence to come.		If it were a friend who's calling you out, it's probably because they want to you tell some kind of secret. But if the caller is a male and, on top of that, he's not a close friend, it's probably a hint of the danger and violence to come.

	Then, suppose the caller is a girl, what then?		Then, suppose the caller is a girl, what then?
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	It was just a 951 yen cheap cloth sneaker- she actually dared to kiss it?		It was just a 951 yen cheap cloth sneaker- she actually dared to kiss it?

	What slave? What allegiance? What kind of alien language was she speaking?		What slave? What allegiance? What kind of alien language was she speaking?

	"...W- what're you doing?"		"...W- what're you doing?"
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	But, Jyuu felt it was pointless continuing the conversation.		But, Jyuu felt it was pointless continuing the conversation.

	The reason was simple: ~~because~~ this girl was on a completely different mental wavelength from him.		The reason was simple: this girl was on a completely different mental wavelength from him.

	Jyuu turned his back on the girl and legged it out of there at full speed.		Jyuu turned his back on the girl and legged it out of there at full speed.
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	The next day, in the classroom where the fourth period had just ended, Jyuu gave a big yawn.		The next day, in the classroom where the fourth period had just ended, Jyuu gave a big yawn.

	Jyuu's seat was by the window in the far-end corner of the classroom.		Jyuu's seat was by the window in the far-end corner of the classroom.
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	Jyuu’s lunch consisted of onigiris. He made them himself, so there was nothing inside. The only accompaniments were the few slices of pickled radish set down next to them. When she first saw this bento, Miya enquired, ‘You have this every day?’, and Jyuu replied, ‘This is enough for a guy’.		Jyuu’s lunch consisted of onigiris. He made them himself, so there was nothing inside. The only accompaniments were the few slices of pickled radish set down next to them. When she first saw this bento, Miya enquired, ‘You have this every day?’, and Jyuu replied, ‘This is enough for a guy’.

	Miya had been calling this a guy bento ~~every~~ since.		Miya had been calling this a guy bento ever since.

	He had the slight impression that she was treating him like an idiot, but it was probably not the case, going by this girl’s character.		He had the slight impression that she was treating him like an idiot, but it was probably not the case, going by this girl’s character.
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	This girl, Ochibana Ame, was weird in the head.		This girl, Ochibana Ame, was weird in the head.

	She was the type of person who spoke about hallucinations like they were real, and forced others to believe in them as well. The type ~~that’re~~ called [[Talk:Denpa_Teki_na_Kanojo:Volume_1_Chapter_1\|denpa]]*.		She was the type of person who spoke about hallucinations like they were real, and forced others to believe in them as well. The type that are called [[Talk:Denpa_Teki_na_Kanojo:Volume_1_Chapter_1\|denpa]]*.

	This took up way too much time, but he had no clue as to how to proceed from here.		This took up way too much time, but he had no clue as to how to proceed from here.
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	“Yesterday’s cleaning duty.”		“Yesterday’s cleaning duty.”

	“Aah, you covering for me, is that what you’re talking about?”		“Aah, you're covering for me, is that what you’re talking about?”

	“That’s exactly it. In exchange for one of your onigiris from your guy bento, I’ll forgive you.”		“That’s exactly it. In exchange for one of your onigiris from your guy bento, I’ll forgive you.”

	“Then does that mean if I make onigiris for you, you ~~always take~~ over cleaning for me?”		“Then does that mean if I make onigiris for you, you'll keep taking over cleaning for me?”

	“I’m not that cheap, you know.”		“I’m not that cheap, you know.”