Denpa Teki na Kanojo:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	Bathed in the curious gazes of his classmates, Jyuu left the classroom together with Ame.		Bathed in the curious gazes of his classmates, Jyuu left the classroom together with Ame.


	~~While he allowed Ame to remain alongside him, it didn’t mean Jyuu was going to pay her any mind. If she wished to stay, she could stay.~~

	~~Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.~~

	~~And besides, it was bound to get old sooner or later.~~

	~~Not for Jyuu, but for Ame. Ame would eventually get bored. Bored by the dullness of a youth named Jyuuzawa Jyuu.~~

	~~That’s what Jyuu thought.~~

	~~So this was the sort of friendship that would not last too long.~~

	He was worried that her behavior would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn’t. After leaving school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu and the other students, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful.

	Now that the incident with Ochibana Ame was all taken care of, Jyuu wondered for a moment if he should dye his hair again, but decided against it. It seemed awkward to change the color of his hair for that reason.

	Ihara and the rest of the upperclassmen hadn’t said a word since then. They seemed to think that the incident was a trap set by Jyuu. The fact that their focus shifted from revenge to avoidance was both pitiable and gratifying. They now avoided him to the extent that they would not even make eye contact with him if they encountered him in or out of school.

	As he walked to the train station, Ame was walking at a discrete distance behind Jyuu, but she didn't say a word. Perhaps she was just quiet by nature, or maybe she just didn't have a topic to talk about, or maybe she was waiting for Jyuu to speak, or maybe she was just thinking about something. It was hard to know exactly what kind of person Ochibana Ame was just from the information Miya had shared with him.

	~~She was not a bad person, though.~~

	~~But she was a nutcase, that's for sure.~~

	~~She was an existence that was impossible to deal with.~~

	~~The two rode the train without exchanging any words and got off at the same station.~~

	Jyuu suspected that she was just following him, but she told him that she lived rather close by. She did. The address Ame had told Ju was not exactly familiar to him, but it was a quiet neighborhood nearby.

	~~Just like Jyuu, it seemed that Ame also lived in the same area.~~

	~~That means that they may have seen each other on the street some time before....~~

	He searched his memory, but he still couldn't recall it. Jyuu could often remember a man's face, but he had a tendency to forget a woman's face unless it was very attractive. Still, to this day, he couldn't seem to recall the
	~~faces of any of the female students except for Miya, Ame, and Kanako.~~

	~~The names and faces barely matched.~~

	~~The fact it turned out they lived in the same area as each other eased some of Jyuu's tension.~~

	[To be continued...]		[To be continued...]

Rit at 01:26, 27 June 2020

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	While he allowed Ame to remain alongside him, it didn’t mean Jyuu was going to pay her any mind. ~~If she wished to stay, she could stay.~~ If she wished to stay, she could stay.		While he allowed Ame to remain alongside him, it didn’t mean Jyuu was going to pay her any mind. If she wished to stay, she could stay.

	Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.		Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.
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	The fact it turned out they lived in the same area as each other eased some of Jyuu's tension.		The fact it turned out they lived in the same area as each other eased some of Jyuu's tension.

			[To be continued...]

Rit at 01:25, 27 June 2020

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-While he allowed Ame to remain alongside him, it didn’t mean Jyuu was going to pay her any mind.  If she wished to stay, she could stay.
+While he allowed Ame to remain alongside him, it didn’t mean Jyuu was going to pay her any mind.  If she wished to stay, she could stay. If she wished to stay, she could stay.
 Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.
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 So this was the sort of friendship that would not last too long.
-He was worried that her behavior would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn’t.  After leaving school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful.
+He was worried that her behavior would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn’t.  After leaving school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu and the other students, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful.
-Now that the incident with Ame no longer seemed to matter, Jyuu wondered for a moment if he should dye his hair again, but decided against it.  It seemed awkward to change the color of his hair for that reason.
+Now that the incident with Ochibana Ame was all taken care of, Jyuu wondered for a moment if he should dye his hair again, but decided against it.  It seemed awkward to change the color of his hair for that reason.
-Ihara and his group of upperclassmen hadn’t said a word since then. It seemed that they thought that the incident was a hoax arranged by Jyuu.  It was both humbling and a relief that their thinking veered toward avoidance instead of revenge for it.
+Ihara and the rest of the upperclassmen hadn’t said a word since then. They seemed to think that the incident was a trap set by Jyuu.  The fact that their focus shifted from revenge to avoidance was both pitiable and gratifying.  They now avoided him to the extent that they would not even make eye contact with him if they encountered him in or out of school.

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	And besides, it was bound to get old sooner or later.		And besides, it was bound to get old sooner or later.

	Not for Jyuu, but for Ame. Ame ~~will~~ eventually get bored. Bored by the dullness of a youth named Jyuuzawa Jyuu.		Not for Jyuu, but for Ame. Ame would eventually get bored. Bored by the dullness of a youth named Jyuuzawa Jyuu.

	That’s what Jyuu thought.		That’s what Jyuu thought.
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	So this was the sort of friendship that would not last too long.		So this was the sort of friendship that would not last too long.

	He was worried that ~~the~~ behavior ~~of the female companion~~ would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn’t. After leaving school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu ~~and his friend~~, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful.		He was worried that her behavior would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn’t. After leaving school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful.

	Now that the incident with Ame no longer seemed to matter, Jyuu wondered for a moment if he should dye his hair again, but decided against it. It seemed awkward to change the color of his hair for that reason.		Now that the incident with Ame no longer seemed to matter, Jyuu wondered for a moment if he should dye his hair again, but decided against it. It seemed awkward to change the color of his hair for that reason.

	Ihara and his group of upperclassmen hadn’t said a word since then. It seemed that they thought that the incident was a hoax arranged by Jyuu. It was both humbling and a relief that their thinking veered toward avoidance instead of revenge for it.		Ihara and his group of upperclassmen hadn’t said a word since then. It seemed that they thought that the incident was a hoax arranged by Jyuu. It was both humbling and a relief that their thinking veered toward avoidance instead of revenge for it.

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	~~Jyuu acknowledged that~~ Ame ~~was on his side~~, ~~but that~~ didn’t mean he was going to ~~care for~~ her. ~~It was only a matter of time that she’d go away~~.		While he allowed Ame to remain alongside him, it didn’t mean Jyuu was going to pay her any mind. If she wished to stay, she could stay.

	Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.		Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.

	And, ~~surely~~ it ~~would~~ get ~~tiresome~~ sooner or later.		And besides, it was bound to get old sooner or later.

	Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.		Not for Jyuu, but for Ame. Ame will eventually get bored. Bored by the dullness of a youth named Jyuuzawa Jyuu.

	~~Ame would get bored. Bored of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu~~.		That’s what Jyuu thought.

	~~That’s what Jyuu thought~~.		So this was the sort of friendship that would not last too long.

	~~So this~~ was ~~a friendship~~ that would ~~not last too long~~.		He was worried that the behavior of the female companion would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn’t. After leaving school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu and his friend, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful.

	~~He was worried~~ that the ~~behavior of~~ his ~~female companion would be noticeable~~, but ~~surprisingly,~~ it ~~wasn't~~.		Now that the incident with Ame no longer seemed to matter, Jyuu wondered for a moment if he should dye his hair again, but decided against it. It seemed awkward to change the color of his hair for that reason.

	~~Aside from the school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu~~ and his ~~friend after~~ they ~~left the school, and~~ the ~~atmosphere~~ was ~~calm and peaceful~~. ~~Now he~~ was ~~so often avoided by them~~ that ~~he wouldn't even look at them if he met them in or out~~ of ~~school.~~		Ihara and his group of upperclassmen hadn’t said a word since then. It seemed that they thought that the incident was a hoax arranged by Jyuu. It was both humbling and a relief that their thinking veered toward avoidance instead of revenge for it.

	~~On the way to the train station, Ame walked obliquely behind Jyuu, but he didn’t say a word~~.

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	Jyuu acknowledged that Ame was on his side, but that didn’t mean he was going to care for her. It was only a matter of time that she’d go away.		Jyuu acknowledged that Ame was on his side, but that didn’t mean he was going to care for her. It was only a matter of time that she’d go away.

	Being around Jyuu would neither be ~~positive~~ or ~~negative~~ for Ame.		Being around Jyuu would neither be good or bad for Ame.

	And, surely it would get tiresome sooner or later.		And, surely it would get tiresome sooner or later.

Rit at 05:07, 11 June 2020

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	Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.		Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.

	Ame would get bored. Bored of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu.		Ame would get bored. Bored of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu.

	That’s what Jyuu thought.		That’s what Jyuu thought.

			So this was a friendship that would not last too long.

			He was worried that the behavior of his female companion would be noticeable, but surprisingly, it wasn't.

			Aside from the school, there was no one paying attention to Jyuu and his friend after they left the school, and the atmosphere was calm and peaceful. Now he was so often avoided by them that he wouldn't even look at them if he met them in or out of school.

			On the way to the train station, Ame walked obliquely behind Jyuu, but he didn’t say a word.

Rit at 03:40, 9 June 2020

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	Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.		Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.

	Ame would get bored. ~~To the boredom~~ of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu.		Ame would get bored. Bored of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu.

	That’s what Jyuu thought.		That’s what Jyuu thought.

Rit at 03:31, 9 June 2020

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	Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.		Not for Jyuu, but for Ame.

	Ame would get bored. To the boredom of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu. That’s what Jyuu thought.		Ame would get bored. To the boredom of a youth named Jyuuzawa Juu.

			That’s what Jyuu thought.

Rit at 03:28, 9 June 2020

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	Bathed in the curious gazes of his classmates, Jyuu left the classroom together with Ame.		Bathed in the curious gazes of his classmates, Jyuu left the classroom together with Ame.


	Jyuu acknowledged that Ame was on his side, but that didn’t mean he was going to care for her. It was only a matter of time that she’d go away.		Jyuu acknowledged that Ame was on his side, but that didn’t mean he was going to care for her. It was only a matter of time that she’d go away.