Fate/Zero:Act 10 Part 5 - Revision history

Miyu at 16:53, 22 March 2021

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	Like so, when he saw that man taking his last breath, the incomparable king realized – the way that this man, who was human but wanted to surpass humanity, had lived, was even more precious and more brilliant than all the treasures he had collected.		Like so, when he saw that man taking his last breath, the incomparable king realized – the way that this man, who was human but wanted to surpass humanity, had lived, was even more precious and more brilliant than all the treasures he had collected.

	"~~You fools~~ who ~~stretch your~~ hands towards realms not of man… There's only one person in Heaven or Earth who can love your ruin. That is none other than I, Gilgamesh. Sink into my embrace, oh you glorious and illusionary men. That is my decision.”		"A fool who stretches their hands towards realms not of man… There's only one person in Heaven or Earth who can love your ruin. That is none other than I, Gilgamesh. Sink into my embrace, oh you glorious and illusionary men. That is my decision.”

Miyu at 01:39, 22 March 2021

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	– Once ~~upon a time~~, there was a man.		– Once, there was a human man.

	He was ~~a foolish and ridiculous fellow whom, despite having a body~~ made of mud ~~and soil~~, ~~set his heart~~ to stand ~~shoulder~~ to ~~shoulder with gods~~.		Although his human body was made of mud, he was a foolish jester who stretched out to stand next to the son of god as his equal.

	~~Of course~~, his hubris and disrespectful arrogance offended the gods in heaven. The man suffered divine retribution and lost his life.		However, his hubris and disrespectful arrogance offended the gods in heaven. The man suffered divine retribution and lost his life.

	Even ~~to this day~~, the King of Heroes ~~still couldn’t~~ forget ~~the way that he passed away with tears streaming down~~ his face.		Even now, the King of Heroes can not forget his tearstained face as he died.

	~~''Why~~ are you ~~crying~~?~~'' The King of Heroes had asked.~~		He asked why he was crying. "At this stage, are you regretting the stupidity of putting yourself beside me?"

	~~''Could it be that, only now, you are regretting having taken my side?''~~		"It’s not that–" He replied. “Who will understand you after I die? Who will walk beside you? My friend… when I imagine that you will be alone from now on, I can’t help but shed tears…”

	''It’s not ~~that –''~~ He ~~had answered~~.

	“Who ~~would~~ understand you after I die? Who ~~else would march forward by your side~~? My friend… when I ~~think~~ that you will ~~live~~ on ~~all alone henceforth~~, I can’t help but shed tears…”

	Like so, when he saw that man taking his last breath, the incomparable king realized – the way that this man, who was human but wanted to surpass humanity, had lived, was even more precious and more brilliant than all the treasures he had collected.		Like so, when he saw that man taking his last breath, the incomparable king realized – the way that this man, who was human but wanted to surpass humanity, had lived, was even more precious and more brilliant than all the treasures he had collected.

	~~“You fool~~ who stretch your ~~hand~~ towards realms not of ~~men…~~ There is only one person in ~~heaven~~ or ~~earth who’s worthy of appreciating~~ your ~~destruction, and that~~ is none other than I, Gilgamesh.		"You fools who stretch your hands towards realms not of man… There's only one person in Heaven or Earth who can love your ruin. That is none other than I, Gilgamesh. Sink into my embrace, oh you glorious and illusionary men. That is my decision.”

	Sink into my embrace, oh you glorious and illusionary men. That is my decision.”

MaggiPower at 07:06, 8 May 2018

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	At the fierceness and purity of this beam of light, no one could speak a single word.		At the fierceness and purity of this beam of light, no one could speak a single word.

	It was the gallant figure of a knight who once shone the light of purification upon ~~into~~ a battle-ravaged world, a darkness blacker than night.		It was the gallant figure of a knight who once shone the light of purification upon a battle-ravaged world, a darkness blacker than night.

	Unyielding for ten years, undefeated in twelve battles. These peerless feats of arms and this glory were eternal, transcending time.		Unyielding for ten years, undefeated in twelve battles. These peerless feats of arms and this glory were eternal, transcending time.

MaggiPower at 21:48, 7 May 2018

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	The bullets pouring out like torrential rain swept behind the galloping Saber, missing her by a hair, and scattered raging sheets of water like the streams of an upward waterfall.		The bullets pouring out like torrential rain swept behind the galloping Saber, missing her by a hair, and scattered raging sheets of water like the streams of an upward waterfall.

	Regardless of the size of the caliber, something on the level of ''mere cannon shells'' pose no threat to Servants at all. This is especially so with Saber, whose physical abilities would ~~also~~ her to evade them with no difficulty, and even deflect the shots back with the blade of her sword if she wanted to. However – no matter how extraordinary the Heroic Spirit may be, the 12,000 rounds-per-minute of the pride of America's General Electric, the M61 autocannon, presented an unmanageable amount of shots. Worse yet, as a weapon carrying the properties of a Noble Phantasm due to Berserker’s prana, a single shot would instantly be fatal.		Regardless of the size of the caliber, something on the level of ''mere cannon shells'' pose no threat to Servants at all. This is especially so with Saber, whose physical abilities would allow her to evade them with no difficulty, and even deflect the shots back with the blade of her sword if she wanted to. However – no matter how extraordinary the Heroic Spirit may be, the 12,000 rounds-per-minute of the pride of America's General Electric, the M61 autocannon, presented an unmanageable amount of shots. Worse yet, as a weapon carrying the properties of a Noble Phantasm due to Berserker’s prana, a single shot would instantly be fatal.

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	Carrying the six barrels and the cylindrical ammunition casing, weighing 200 kilogram in total, Berserker once again aimed from the sky at Saber below him. The rotary cannon, accelerated by prana, spun up in the blink of an eye. Saber finally realized that she had nowhere else to turn in the instant the torrential bullets were about to surge out.		Carrying the six barrels and the cylindrical ammunition casing, weighing 200 kilogram in total, Berserker once again aimed from the sky at Saber below him. The rotary cannon, accelerated by prana, spun up in the blink of an eye. Saber finally realized that she had nowhere else to turn in the instant the torrential bullets were about to surge out.

	The firing distance for Berserker, having jumped down from the aircraft and continuing to aim at Saber as he descended. was exceptionally closer than before. Saber no longer had time to anticipate for the initial velocity of the rounds, and no matter which way she may dodge, she couldn’t get out of the range of the rain of shells about to pour onto her.		The firing distance for Berserker, having jumped down from the aircraft and continuing to aim at Saber as he descended, was exceptionally closer than before. Saber no longer had time to anticipate for the initial velocity of the rounds, and no matter which way she may dodge, she couldn’t get out of the range of the rain of shells about to pour onto her.

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	“…O, Oh…”		“…O, Oh…”

	Yes – it was ~~unmistakeably~~ a light he had once seen in the distant past.		Yes – it was unmistakably a light he had once seen in the distant past.

	Had he not once been a knight who pursued and rode after this light?		Had he not once been a knight who pursued and rode after this light?
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	Tonight, witnessing with his own eyes that incomparable light lead the thoughts of the primeval Heroic Spirit back to the distant past.		Tonight, witnessing with his own eyes that incomparable light lead the thoughts of the primeval Heroic Spirit back to the distant past.



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	Even to this day, the King of Heroes still couldn’t forget the way that he passed away with tears streaming down his face.		Even to this day, the King of Heroes still couldn’t forget the way that he passed away with tears streaming down his face.

	Why are you crying? The King of Heroes had asked. ~~Could it be that, only now, you are regretting having taken my side?~~		''Why are you crying?'' The King of Heroes had asked.

	~~It’s not~~ that –		''Could it be that, only now, you are regretting having taken my side?''

	He had answered.		''It’s not that –'' He had answered.

	“Who would understand you after I die? Who else would march forward by your side? My friend… when I think that you will live on all alone henceforth, I can’t help but shed tears…”		“Who would understand you after I die? Who else would march forward by your side? My friend… when I think that you will live on all alone henceforth, I can’t help but shed tears…”
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	Sink into my embrace, oh you glorious and illusionary men. That is my decision.”		Sink into my embrace, oh you glorious and illusionary men. That is my decision.”

	~~The golden majestic brilliance disappeared in the night mist, leaving only an evil laughter echoing long after.~~


			The golden majestic brilliance disappeared in the night mist, leaving only an evil laughter echoing long after.

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	Originally, this armament called a flare dispenser simply launched out decoy heat sources in order to throw off the enemy’s heat-seeking missiles. However, as a result of being eroded by Berserker’s prana and demonized, they have even transfigured into tracking incendiary weapons. Based on their dogfight up until now, Archer made the hasty conclusion that the enemy doesn’t have a way of attacking against an enemy behind him, and therefore couldn’t cope in time to this unexpected counterattack. The bow of the Vimana plunged into the hive of roaring fire balls, lost control while surrounded by the crimson flames, and fell towards the surface of the river in a spiral.		Originally, this armament called a flare dispenser simply launched out decoy heat sources in order to throw off the enemy’s heat-seeking missiles. However, as a result of being eroded by Berserker’s prana and demonized, they have even transfigured into tracking incendiary weapons. Based on their dogfight up until now, Archer made the hasty conclusion that the enemy doesn’t have a way of attacking against an enemy behind him, and therefore couldn’t cope in time to this unexpected counterattack. The bow of the Vimana plunged into the hive of roaring fire balls, lost control while surrounded by the crimson flames, and fell towards the surface of the river in a spiral.

	Although he finally obtained the result of felling Archer, Berserker thought nothing of it right now. The fiendish steel bird did not even ~~confirming~~ the whereabouts of Archer after he sunk into the river, and with nothing but relentlessness, instead tracked down Saber and mercilessly poured down a rain of 20mm rounds.		Although he finally obtained the result of felling Archer, Berserker thought nothing of it right now. The fiendish steel bird did not even confirm the whereabouts of Archer after he sunk into the river, and with nothing but relentlessness, instead tracked down Saber and mercilessly poured down a rain of 20mm rounds.

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	Now that it has come to this, Saber was prepared to resort to using her Noble Phantasm, misplaced though it may be; the instant she swung the sword over her head, streaks of shining steel came flying in from an impossible angle and struck Berserker head on.		Now that it has come to this, Saber was prepared to resort to using her Noble Phantasm, misplaced though it may be; the instant she swung the sword over her head, streaks of shining steel came flying in from an impossible angle and struck Berserker head on.

	Hammer, axe and bolt gouged the jet black armor, and a giant sickle cleaved the body of the revolving gun barrel in half. Furthermore, a flaming bolt hit the ~~ammunication~~ storage directly, igniting all the remaining 20mm shells, blossoming wild crimson flames in the air. Berserker, washed over by the fragments and blast, was helplessly blown away, drawing a parabola in the empty air before sinking into the river surface like a thrown rock.		Hammer, axe and bolt gouged the jet black armor, and a giant sickle cleaved the body of the revolving gun barrel in half. Furthermore, a flaming bolt hit the ammunition storage directly, igniting all the remaining 20mm shells, blossoming wild crimson flames in the air. Berserker, washed over by the fragments and blast, was helplessly blown away, drawing a parabola in the empty air before sinking into the river surface like a thrown rock.

	Astounded, Saber turned around and, looking up, saw Archer standing haughtily on the top of the arch of the Fuyuki Bridge. The shooting Noble Phantasms encircled him, surrounding him like an halo. He let out a wicked smile.		Astounded, Saber turned around and, looking up, saw Archer standing haughtily on the top of the arch of the Fuyuki Bridge. The shooting Noble Phantasms encircled him, surrounding him like an halo. He let out a wicked smile.

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