Fate/Zero:Act 12 Part 1 - Revision history

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	This person was not a stranger to Kariya.		This person was not a stranger to Kariya.

	That was the ~~Einsberns’~~ Servant – Saber...		That was the Einzberns’ Servant – Saber...

	"This is my disgrace—		"This is my disgrace—
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	Kariya began sobbing silently.		Kariya began sobbing silently.

70.26.207.91 at 11:04, 29 April 2010

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	The dream of just now, compared to ~~the~~ reality, exactly which world seemed more merciful to Kariya—		The dream of just now, compared to reality, exactly which world seemed more merciful to Kariya—

	At least, from the one fact of being able to forget that this body was about to die, perhaps remaining in the world of nightmares would be happier.		At least, from the one fact of being able to forget that this body was about to die, perhaps remaining in the world of nightmares would be happier.
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	“Perhaps adding one more lock on you is not a bad idea. Ah Kariya, since things have come to this point I will pass on to you the ‘trump card’ I have secreted away for this day, come on—“		“Perhaps adding one more lock on you is not a bad idea. Ah Kariya, since things have come to this point I will pass on to you the ‘trump card’ I have secreted away for this day, come on—“

	Ku, ~~the~~ crutch suddenly ~~pushing~~ at the hollow of Kariya’s throat, forcing him to open his mouth. Immediately, ~~Zōken’s crutch~~ moved upward like a mouse, fiercely ~~stabbing~~ into Kariya’s mouth.		Ku, Zōken’s crutch suddenly pushed at the hollow of Kariya’s throat, forcing him to open his mouth. Immediately after, it moved upward like a mouse, and was fiercely stabbed into Kariya’s mouth.

	“Ah, uu…!?”		“Ah, uu…!?”

	Kariya fainted from the pain. The worms followed the cavity of his mouth and mercilessly invaded his gullet, finally arriving within the spasming abdomen. Now, even if he had wanted to vomit, it was already too late.		Kariya fainted from the pain. The worms followed the cavity of his mouth and mercilessly invaded his gullet, finally arriving within the spasming abdomen. Now, even if he had wanted to vomit, he could not; it was already too late.

	After which—as if a red-hot block of metal had been placed into his stomach, an intense burning sensation grilled Kariya’s body from the inside.		After which—as if a red-hot block of metal had been placed into his stomach, an intense burning sensation grilled Kariya’s body from the inside.
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	"Uu… ah!?"		"Uu… ah!?"

	Kariya began to struggle in agony; the cuffs on his hands jangled. The blood which seemed to have stagnated now boiled, runaway, his heart also ~~pounding~~ crazily almost to the point of breaking apart.		Kariya began to struggle in agony; the cuffs on his hands jangled. The blood which seemed to have stagnated now boiled, runaway, and his heart also pounded crazily, almost to the point of breaking apart.

	That had been a piece of prana ~~that had been concentrated~~. The Crest Worms within Kariya’s body, which had temporarily regained vitality, began to move again. The mock prana circuits of Kariya’s entire body also ~~began~~ to pulse like never before, his limbs beginning to feel pain as if they were being torn apart—but this also meant that Kariya’s numb arms and legs could feel again.		That had been a piece of concentrated prana. The Crest Worms within Kariya’s body, which had temporarily regained vitality, began to move again. The mock prana circuits of Kariya’s entire body also started to pulse like never before, and his limbs were beginning to feel pain as if they were being torn apart—but this also meant that Kariya’s numb arms and legs could feel again.

	Seeing the 'trump card' take effect, Zōken jeered loudly.		Seeing the 'trump card' take effect, Zōken jeered loudly.
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	Do you know? That piece of prana you swallowed just now came from a Lust Worm. The one that first absorbed Sakura’s innocence. How about that, Kariya? The vitality of a young girl, absorbed continuously over the course of this past year—it is the best magecraft energy of all, yes?"		Do you know? That piece of prana you swallowed just now came from a Lust Worm. The one that first absorbed Sakura’s innocence. How about that, Kariya? The vitality of a young girl, absorbed continuously over the course of this past year—it is the best magecraft energy of all, yes?"

	And perhaps it was this chain of cruel actions that satisfied his sadistic heart; the elderly magus turned around ~~with~~ his face ~~all~~ smiles. Just as he was about to leisurely leave the worm storage, his ~~mocking~~ once again pierced into Kariya’s ears.		And perhaps it was this chain of cruel actions that satisfied his sadistic heart; the elderly magus turned around, his face full of smiles. Just as he was about to leisurely leave the worm storage, his derisive mockeries once again pierced into Kariya’s ears.

	"Go forth to fight, Kariya. Burn up completely the life snatched from Sakura. Do not be stingy with your blood and flesh, but bring back the Grail! If one like you can do it, that is."		"Go forth and fight, Kariya. Burn up completely the life snatched from Sakura. Do not be stingy with your blood and flesh, but bring back the Grail! If one like you can do it, that is."

	After which, with the heavy closing of the doors, the surroundings were once again only icy darkness, and the noise of worms ~~crawling~~.		After which, with the heavy closing of the doors, the surroundings were once again only filled with icy darkness and the noise of crawling worms.

	Kariya began sobbing silently.		Kariya began sobbing silently.

Brynhilde at 02:40, 28 April 2010

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	"I am—		"I am—

	The alienated—		The alienated—

	The ridiculed—		The ridiculed—

	The despised—"		The despised—"

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	"No need to praise my name—		"No need to praise my name—

	No need to envy my body—		No need to envy my body—

	I am the shadow under the radiance of heroic spirits—		I am the shadow under the radiance of heroic spirits—

	Birthed of the darkness of glorious legend—"		Birthed of the darkness of glorious legend—"

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	"And so—		"And so—

	I hate—		I hate—

	I resent—		I resent—

	Nourished by the sighs of the people precipitated within the darkness, people that curse the light—"		Nourished by the sighs of the people precipitated within the darkness, people that curse the light—"

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	A sword shining bright light, and holding onto the hilt, a radiant young warrior.		A sword shining bright light, and holding onto the hilt, a radiant young warrior.

	This person was not a stranger to Kariya.		This person was not a stranger to Kariya.

	That was the Einsberns’ Servant – Saber...		That was the Einsberns’ Servant – Saber...

	"This is my disgrace—		"This is my disgrace—

	Because of her unsullied glory, I must forever be belittled—"		Because of her unsullied glory, I must forever be belittled—"

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	"Good, give me more—		"Good, give me more—

	Your blood and flesh, your life—		Your blood and flesh, your life—

	Let them ignite my hatred—!!"		Let them ignite my hatred—!!"

	No...		No...

	Stop...		Stop...

	Save me!		Save me!

	Kariya used all the words he could think of to beg forgiveness, hoping there would be someone to extend a helping hand, but in this darkness, it was impossible for him to obtain salvation.		Kariya used all the words he could think of to beg forgiveness, hoping there would be someone to extend a helping hand, but in this darkness, it was impossible for him to obtain salvation.

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	His limbs felt dulled, but he knew that he was chained to a wall, his hands shackled. He could not stand on his own feet; his shoulders, supporting the weight of his entire body, hurt as if they were about to be torn from their sockets. But compared to the itch of the worms covering his body, it was not even worth mentioning.		His limbs felt dulled, but he knew that he was chained to a wall, his hands shackled. He could not stand on his own feet; his shoulders, supporting the weight of his entire body, hurt as if they were about to be torn from their sockets. But compared to the itch of the worms covering his body, it was not even worth mentioning.

	The worms licked at burnt skin, and under that skin was new skin colored pink. It looked as if the burns were currently healing—though the reason was unknown.		The worms licked at burnt skin, and under that skin was new skin colored pink. It looked as if the burns were currently healing—though the reason was unknown.

Brynhilde at 02:38, 28 April 2010

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	~~Gaps =~~ <center>※※※※※</center>		<center>※※※※※</center>

Brynhilde at 02:37, 28 April 2010

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	Matō Kariya had fallen into a pitch-black dream.		Matō Kariya had fallen into a pitch-black dream.

Brynhilde at 02:36, 28 April 2010

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98.208.58.11 at 17:22, 12 March 2010

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Shadow: Corrected Links.

2010-02-21T09:33:52Z

Corrected Links.

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Shadow: Links.

2010-02-21T09:33:16Z

Links.

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Shadow at 09:31, 21 February 2010

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