Fate/Zero:Act 13 Part 2 - Revision history

71.241.138.177 at 23:06, 22 March 2016

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	Upon calm contemplation.		Upon calm contemplation.

	~~Originally~~, ~~as Saber’s~~ Noble Phantasm~~, Avalon~~ had ~~the ability to provide prana to~~ the Servant. ~~Now, since Irisviel could~~ no ~~longer participate in~~ front~~-line battles with Saber~~, ~~continuing~~ to ~~equip her~~ with ~~Avalon no~~ longer ~~had any strategic meaning~~.		Avalon, which was originally Saber's property, was a Noble Phantasm that would only show its effect once it had a supply of magical energy from the Servant. Since she had no hope of joining Saber on the front lines, there was no strategic merit to Irisviel being equipped with it any longer.

	Even if this Noble Phantasm could slow the speed of her destruction, it did no good in the bigger picture – the most correct choice now was to repossess this Noble Phantasm from her.		Even if this Noble Phantasm could slow the speed of her destruction, it did no good in the bigger picture – the most correct choice now was to repossess this Noble Phantasm from her.

Simon: /* -47:42:07 */ xkcd.com/1144/

2012-12-14T19:41:33Z

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	“… Sorry, there are many, many promises left unfulfilled.”		“… Sorry, there are many, many promises left unfulfilled.”

	<i>I said I’d get you out of that eternally wintry castle and go look at the flowers blossoming outside, to look at the sea that sparkled with light on the waves.		<i>I said I’d get you out of that eternally wintry castle and go look at the flowers blossoming outside, to look at the sea that sparkled with light on the waves.</i>

	I once promised you that I’d one day bring you with me and look at all those things.</i>		<i>I once promised you that I’d one day bring you with me and look at all those things.</i>

	Now that he remembered it, it had been such an irresponsible promise.		Now that he remembered it, it had been such an irresponsible promise.

115.163.171.148 at 06:42, 8 August 2012

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	Irisviel didn’t complain about those promises that couldn’t be fulfilled and said with a smile.		Irisviel didn’t complain about those promises that couldn’t be fulfilled and said with a smile.

	“All those happinesses I didn’t experience… all that was left undone, please give them to ~~Illya~~. Your daughter – my most important ~~Illya~~.”		“All those happinesses I didn’t experience… all that was left undone, please give them to Ilya. Your daughter – our most important Ilya.”

	At that moment, Kiritsugu finally understood the reason why Irisviel, who was approaching the edge of destruction, could still smile with such strength.		At that moment, Kiritsugu finally understood the reason why Irisviel, who was approaching the edge of destruction, could still smile with such strength.

Fishnchips: /* -47:42:07 */

2010-12-20T03:45:54Z

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65.175.149.141 at 20:59, 12 December 2010

2010-12-12T20:59:06Z

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	Irisviel didn’t complain about those promises that couldn’t be fulfilled and said with a smile.		Irisviel didn’t complain about those promises that couldn’t be fulfilled and said with a smile.

	“All those ~~happiness~~ that I didn’t experience… all that was left undone, please give them to Illya. Your daughter – my most important Illya.”		“All those happinesses that I didn’t experience… all that was left undone, please give them to Illya. Your daughter – my most important Illya.”

	At that moment, Kiritsugu finally understood the reason why Irisviel, who was approaching the edge of destruction, could still smile with such strength.		At that moment, Kiritsugu finally understood the reason why Irisviel, who was approaching the edge of destruction, could still smile with such strength.

Brynhilde: /* -47:42:07 */

2010-08-26T00:08:42Z

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	“… Sorry, there were many many promises that are unfulfilled.”		“… Sorry, there were many many promises that are unfulfilled.”

	I had said that I’ll get you out of that eternally wintery castle and go look at the flowers blossoming outside, to look at the sea that sparkled with light on the waves.		<i>I had said that I’ll get you out of that eternally wintery castle and go look at the flowers blossoming outside, to look at the sea that sparkled with light on the waves.

	I had once promised you that I’ll one day bring you with me and look at all those things.		I had once promised you that I’ll one day bring you with me and look at all those things.</i>

	Now that he remembers it, what an irresponsible promise that was.		Now that he remembers it, what an irresponsible promise that was.
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	Quivering, Irsiviel placed her hand on her chest, and then concentrated all the prana within her onto her fingertips.		Quivering, Irsiviel placed her hand on her chest, and then concentrated all the prana within her onto her fingertips.

	Suddenly, in her ~~originally~~ empty ~~hands~~, a golden light started shining, and enveloped the entire storeroom into with a cover of warm brilliance.		Suddenly, in her hands that were empty, a golden light started shining, and enveloped the entire storeroom into with a cover of warm brilliance.

	“…”		“…”

70.72.158.117 at 07:43, 30 July 2010

2010-07-30T07:43:12Z

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	Saber was not here. He can feel the Servant’s presence through his Command Seals, but now he didn’t feel anything at all. Perhaps she was on her way towards Rider’s headquarters. Realizing this, Kiritsugu planned to follow her.		Saber was not here. He can feel the Servant’s presence through his Command Seals, but now he didn’t feel anything at all. Perhaps she was on her way towards Rider’s headquarters. Realizing this, Kiritsugu planned to follow her.

	It will be very easy to assassinate an apprentice magus like Waver once his hiding spot becomes known – however, he can only make his move once Saber lured away the opposing Servant. Kiritsugu also followed Tōsaka Tokiomi, who left Fuyuki Church by himself, all the way to the Tōsaka house last night, but he didn’t find an opportunity to strike at all. He could feel that Archer was looking over the situation from some unknown location. If he boldly strikes his Master under such a situation, it would have been nothing less than suicide.		It will be very easy to assassinate an apprentice magus like Waver once his hiding spot becomes known – however, he can only make his move once Saber has lured away the opposing Servant. Kiritsugu also followed Tōsaka Tokiomi, who left Fuyuki Church by himself, all the way to the Tōsaka house last night, but he didn’t find an opportunity to strike at all. He could feel that Archer was looking over the situation from some unknown location. If he boldly strikes his Master under such a situation, it would have been nothing less than suicide.

	Although he had affirmed the target’s location, Kiritsugu didn’t go to the scene straightaway. Instead, he rushed towards this abandoned building that served as temporary headquarters.		Although he had affirmed the target’s location, Kiritsugu didn’t go to the scene straightaway. Instead, he rushed towards this abandoned building that served as temporary headquarters.

70.72.158.117: easily->easy

2010-07-30T07:41:14Z

easily->easy

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	Saber was not here. He can feel the Servant’s presence through his Command Seals, but now he didn’t feel anything at all. Perhaps she was on her way towards Rider’s headquarters. Realizing this, Kiritsugu planned to follow her.		Saber was not here. He can feel the Servant’s presence through his Command Seals, but now he didn’t feel anything at all. Perhaps she was on her way towards Rider’s headquarters. Realizing this, Kiritsugu planned to follow her.

	It will be very ~~easily~~ to assassinate an apprentice magus like Waver once his hiding spot becomes known – however, he can only make his move once Saber lured away the opposing Servant. Kiritsugu also followed Tōsaka Tokiomi, who left Fuyuki Church by himself, all the way to the Tōsaka house last night, but he didn’t find an opportunity to strike at all. He could feel that Archer was looking over the situation from some unknown location. If he boldly strikes his Master under such a situation, it would have been nothing less than suicide.		It will be very easy to assassinate an apprentice magus like Waver once his hiding spot becomes known – however, he can only make his move once Saber lured away the opposing Servant. Kiritsugu also followed Tōsaka Tokiomi, who left Fuyuki Church by himself, all the way to the Tōsaka house last night, but he didn’t find an opportunity to strike at all. He could feel that Archer was looking over the situation from some unknown location. If he boldly strikes his Master under such a situation, it would have been nothing less than suicide.

	Although he had affirmed the target’s location, Kiritsugu didn’t go to the scene straightaway. Instead, he rushed towards this abandoned building that served as temporary headquarters.		Although he had affirmed the target’s location, Kiritsugu didn’t go to the scene straightaway. Instead, he rushed towards this abandoned building that served as temporary headquarters.

Shadow: /* -47:42:07 */ fell does not make sense - assumed to be a typo.

2010-07-21T03:09:42Z

-47:42:07: fell does not make sense - assumed to be a typo.

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	Saber was not here. He can feel the Servant’s presence through his Command Seals, but now he didn’t feel anything at all. Perhaps she was on her way towards Rider’s headquarters. Realizing this, Kiritsugu planned to follow her.		Saber was not here. He can feel the Servant’s presence through his Command Seals, but now he didn’t feel anything at all. Perhaps she was on her way towards Rider’s headquarters. Realizing this, Kiritsugu planned to follow her.

	It will be very easily to assassinate an apprentice magus like Waver once his hiding spot becomes known – however, he can only make his move once Saber lured away the opposing Servant. Kiritsugu also followed Tōsaka Tokiomi, who left Fuyuki Church by himself, all the way to the Tōsaka house last night, but he didn’t find an opportunity to strike at all. He could ~~fell~~ that Archer was looking over the situation from some unknown location. If he boldly strikes his Master under such a situation, it would have been nothing less than suicide.		It will be very easily to assassinate an apprentice magus like Waver once his hiding spot becomes known – however, he can only make his move once Saber lured away the opposing Servant. Kiritsugu also followed Tōsaka Tokiomi, who left Fuyuki Church by himself, all the way to the Tōsaka house last night, but he didn’t find an opportunity to strike at all. He could feel that Archer was looking over the situation from some unknown location. If he boldly strikes his Master under such a situation, it would have been nothing less than suicide.

	Although he had affirmed the target’s location, Kiritsugu didn’t go to the scene straightaway. Instead, he rushed towards this abandoned building that served as temporary headquarters.		Although he had affirmed the target’s location, Kiritsugu didn’t go to the scene straightaway. Instead, he rushed towards this abandoned building that served as temporary headquarters.

68.224.43.60: /* -47:42:07 */ 3 small changes: "affectedr" to "affected", "was believes in" to "believes in", and "couldn't fufilled" to "couldn't be fufilled"

2010-07-20T11:36:54Z

-47:42:07: 3 small changes: "affectedr" to "affected", "was believes in" to "believes in", and "couldn't fufilled" to "couldn't be fufilled"

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	“Ahh, yes.”		“Ahh, yes.”

	It was easier than he thought, and he could still easily speak. It was the same when he sank Natalia. Language and actions were not ~~affectedr~~ at all. No matter how tangled his heart is or how frayed his emotions become, his two hands can still complete the job very precisely.		It was easier than he thought, and he could still easily speak. It was the same when he sank Natalia. Language and actions were not affected at all. No matter how tangled his heart is or how frayed his emotions become, his two hands can still complete the job very precisely.

	He can obtain victory – he ~~was~~ believes in that firmly.		He can obtain victory – he believes in that firmly.

	Now, Emiya Kiritsugu had prepared everything, and can completely guarantee the trustworthiness of his functions. The strength of humans was never something that Kiritsugu was bothered with. No amounts of confusion or anguish can affect his work. For Kiritsugu, his mental system of recognizing a goal and act towards it can function without being disturbed from anything whatsoever.		Now, Emiya Kiritsugu had prepared everything, and can completely guarantee the trustworthiness of his functions. The strength of humans was never something that Kiritsugu was bothered with. No amounts of confusion or anguish can affect his work. For Kiritsugu, his mental system of recognizing a goal and act towards it can function without being disturbed from anything whatsoever.
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	“No, it was good enough. Mmm.”		“No, it was good enough. Mmm.”

	Irisviel didn’t complain about those promises that couldn’t fulfilled and said with a smile.		Irisviel didn’t complain about those promises that couldn’t be fulfilled and said with a smile.

	“All those happiness that I didn’t experience… all that was left undone, please give them to Illya. Your daughter – my most important Illya.”		“All those happiness that I didn’t experience… all that was left undone, please give them to Illya. Your daughter – my most important Illya.”