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	Kirei nodded decisively, but Archer narrowed his eyes.		Kirei nodded decisively, but Archer narrowed his eyes.

	~~"Kirei~~, it ~~seems like~~ have ~~found a reason to fight~~. ~~Even now,~~ do you still have ~~no prayer to entrust~~ to the Holy Grail? ~~Even~~ if a miracle ~~is in your hands一 you desire nothing~~?"		“Kirei, it looks as if you have understood the meaning of this war. But do you still not have a wish to bestow upon the Holy Grail? Not a single wish, even if you do manage to obtain the miracle?”

	~~"Ah, so what~~?"		“That’s right. What’s wrong with that?”

	~~"Although it is still unfinished~~, the ~~'vessel' itself~~ is already in your hands. It may accept a ‘pre-ordered’ wish, you know."		“Although it’s yet to be completed, the ‘vessel’ is already in your hands. It may accept a ‘pre-ordered’ wish, you know.”

	~~"....~~Hmm, I see. If that ~~were~~ possible, the ~~miracle would be carried out immediately as soon as~~ the Holy Grail descends, ~~yes~~?"		“… Hmm, I see. You’re saying that, if possible, a miracle can occur at the same time when the Holy Grail descends, right?”
	~~Sighing casually, Kirei thought for a while, but in the end, he shook his head in repudiation.~~

	~~"I still can't think of any wishes. If I'm forced to give one一 there is an extra hindrance in this final battle. Although~~ it ~~can't be helped, the surrounding area is private houses~~. In ~~order to settle this without restraint~~, ~~I would like to thoroughly clear the people from this place~~."		Kirei sighed disinterestedly and thought about it for a while. In the end, he still shook his head.

	To this ~~uninteresting and tasteless reply~~, Gilgamesh ~~snorted in amazement. "Good grief~~. ~~As before~~, the ~~things hidden~~ in your heart ~~must~~ be understood ~~from~~ the Holy Grail."		“I still don’t have a wish. If I have to have one – then I wish for there not to be any innocent people meddling with us in the final battle. Unfortunately, there are residents all around us. I had wanted to fight for my victory somewhere desolate if possible.”

			Hearing this completely boring answer, Gilgamesh said with derision.

			“Hah, the thing hiding in your heart will only be truly understood in the presence of the Holy Grail.”

	At the end of the day, even if those two were closer to the Holy Grail than anyone else, they also cared the least for it. For those two, compared to gaining the Holy Grail, it was more meaningful to chase away those who had gathered because of it.		At the end of the day, even if those two were closer to the Holy Grail than anyone else, they also cared the least for it. For those two, compared to gaining the Holy Grail, it was more meaningful to chase away those who had gathered because of it.

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	Kirei nodded decisively, but Archer narrowed his eyes.		Kirei nodded decisively, but Archer narrowed his eyes.

	~~“Kirei~~, it ~~looks as if you~~ have ~~understood the meaning of this war~~. ~~But~~ do you still ~~not~~ have ~~a wish~~ to ~~bestow upon~~ the Holy Grail? ~~Not~~ a ~~single wish, even if~~ you ~~do manage to obtain the miracle~~?”		"Kirei, it seems like have found a reason to fight. Even now, do you still have no prayer to entrust to the Holy Grail? Even if a miracle is in your hands一 you desire nothing?"

	~~“That’s right. What’s wrong with that~~?”		"Ah, so what?"

	~~“Although it’s yet to be completed~~, the ~~‘vessel’~~ is already in your hands. It may accept a ‘pre-ordered’ wish, you know.”		"Although it is still unfinished, the 'vessel' itself is already in your hands. It may accept a ‘pre-ordered’ wish, you know."

	“… Hmm, I see. ~~You’re saying~~ that~~, if~~ possible, a miracle ~~can occur at the same time when~~ the Holy Grail descends, ~~right~~?”		"....Hmm, I see. If that were possible, the miracle would be carried out immediately as soon as the Holy Grail descends, yes?"
			Sighing casually, Kirei thought for a while, but in the end, he shook his head in repudiation.

	~~Kirei sighed disinterestedly and thought about~~ it ~~for a while~~. In the ~~end, he still shook his head~~.		"I still can't think of any wishes. If I'm forced to give one一 there is an extra hindrance in this final battle. Although it can't be helped, the surrounding area is private houses. In order to settle this without restraint, I would like to thoroughly clear the people from this place."

	“I still don’t have a wish. If I have to have one – then I wish for there not to be any innocent people meddling with us in the final battle. Unfortunately, there are residents all around us. I had wanted to fight for my victory somewhere desolate if possible.”		To this uninteresting and tasteless reply, Gilgamesh snorted in amazement. "Good grief. As before, the things hidden in your heart must be understood from the Holy Grail."

	~~Hearing~~ this ~~completely boring answer~~, Gilgamesh ~~said with derision~~.

	~~“Hah~~, the ~~thing hiding~~ in your heart ~~will only~~ be ~~truly~~ understood ~~in the presence of~~ the Holy Grail.”

	At the end of the day, even if those two were closer to the Holy Grail than anyone else, they also cared the least for it. For those two, compared to gaining the Holy Grail, it was more meaningful to chase away those who had gathered because of it.		At the end of the day, even if those two were closer to the Holy Grail than anyone else, they also cared the least for it. For those two, compared to gaining the Holy Grail, it was more meaningful to chase away those who had gathered because of it.

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	Kirei was shaken by this in the beginning, but now it was familiar. Really, I wonder if I am excited - he understood himself as though he was analyzing the business of another.		Kirei was shaken by this in the beginning, but now it was familiar. Really, I wonder if I am excited - he understood himself as though he was analyzing the business of another.

	The King of Heroes, who had just returned from the nightlife districts, still wore his flamboyant and luxurious casual clothing. His ~~seductive~~ pair of red eyes left behind the afterglow of pleasure, and he showed no sense of urgency to face the decisive battle. This Heroic Spirit would never separate his outer appearance from his inner feelings. After all, for him the conclusion over the Holy Grail was not out of the realm of entertainment.		The King of Heroes, who had just returned from the nightlife districts, still wore his flamboyant and luxurious casual clothing. His bewitching pair of red eyes left behind the afterglow of pleasure, and he showed no sense of urgency to face the decisive battle. This Heroic Spirit would never separate his outer appearance from his inner feelings. After all, for him the conclusion over the Holy Grail was not out of the realm of entertainment.

	“Well, what do you want to do, Kirei? Is it alright if I just wait here?”		“Well, what do you want to do, Kirei? Is it alright if I just wait here?”

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	“Hmm, you look unprecedently ferocious tonight. Kirei.”		“Hmm, you look unprecedently ferocious tonight. Kirei.”

	With the gentle sound of his shoes, Archer appeared on the rooftop of the township. ~~In his innermost thoughts~~, Kirei smiled wryly.		With the gentle sound of his shoes, Archer appeared on the rooftop of the township. On the inside, Kirei smiled wryly.

	How does his iron mask, which should be the same as usual, look reflected in the eyes of this Heroic Spirit who sees through everything? Even the subtleties in his emotions that he himself could not detect did not escape from Archer’s eyes.		How does his iron mask, which should be the same as usual, look reflected in the eyes of this Heroic Spirit who sees through everything? Even the subtleties in his emotions that he himself could not detect did not escape from Archer’s eyes.

	Kirei was shaken by this in the beginning, but now it was familiar. Really, I wonder if I am excited - he understood himself as though he was analyzing the business of another.		Kirei was shaken by this in the beginning, but now it was familiar. Really, I wonder if I am excited - he understood himself as though he was analyzing the business of another.

	The King of Heroes, who had just returned from the nightlife districts, still wore his flamboyant and luxurious casual clothing. His seductive pair of red eyes left behind the afterglow of pleasure, and he showed no sense of urgency to face the decisive battle. ~~However, this~~ Heroic Spirit would never separate his outer appearance from his inner feelings. After all, for him the conclusion over the Holy Grail was not out of the realm of entertainment.		The King of Heroes, who had just returned from the nightlife districts, still wore his flamboyant and luxurious casual clothing. His seductive pair of red eyes left behind the afterglow of pleasure, and he showed no sense of urgency to face the decisive battle. This Heroic Spirit would never separate his outer appearance from his inner feelings. After all, for him the conclusion over the Holy Grail was not out of the realm of entertainment.

	“Well, what do you want me to do, Kirei? Is it alright if I just wait here?”		“Well, what do you want to do, Kirei? Is it alright if I just wait here?”

	One wrong command could make Archer question the worth of his Master. Kirei, who knew this very well, shook his head after thinking carefully.		One wrong command could make Archer question the worth of his Master. Kirei, who knew this very well, shook his head after thinking carefully.

	“If you unleash your power near the Holy Grail, you may endanger the ritual itself. If you want to do it, then intercept them.”		“If you unleash your power near the Holy Grail, you may endanger the ritual itself. If you want to do so, then intercept them.”

	“Yes, very well. But what do you plan to do if you’re attacked while I’m away?”		“Yes, very well. But what do you plan to do if you’re attacked while I’m away?”

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	~~“Hmph~~. ~~Your face tonight is as cold as ever,~~ Kirei.”		“Hmm, you look unprecedently ferocious tonight. Kirei.”

	Archer~~, who was walking up to~~ the rooftop ~~with a relaxed gait~~, ~~mocked him.~~ Kirei ~~laughed bitterly in his heart~~.		With the gentle sound of his shoes, Archer appeared on the rooftop of the township. In his innermost thoughts, Kirei smiled wryly.

	~~What did~~ his ~~face~~, ~~emotionless~~ as ~~always~~, look ~~like~~ in the eyes of this Heroic Spirit who ~~could see~~ through everything? Even the ~~shifts~~ in his emotions that he himself could not detect ~~were unable to~~ escape from ~~the Heroic Spirit’s~~ eyes.		How does his iron mask, which should be the same as usual, look reflected in the eyes of this Heroic Spirit who sees through everything? Even the subtleties in his emotions that he himself could not detect did not escape from Archer’s eyes.

	~~Although his heart had wavered~~ in the beginning, ~~Kirei~~ was ~~used to it by now~~. ~~Yes~~, ~~he was a cold man in truth –~~ he understood himself as though he was analyzing the business of another.		Kirei was shaken by this in the beginning, but now it was familiar. Really, I wonder if I am excited - he understood himself as though he was analyzing the business of another.

	The King of Heroes, who had just returned from the ~~night market in the street~~, still wore his flamboyant and luxurious casual clothing. ~~A residual tint~~ of ~~indulgence remained in those crimson~~ eyes, and he showed no sense of urgency at the ~~approaching~~ battle. However, this Heroic Spirit would never separate his outer appearance from his inner feelings. ~~The battle surrounding~~ the Holy Grail ~~only seemed like child’s play to him~~.		The King of Heroes, who had just returned from the nightlife districts, still wore his flamboyant and luxurious casual clothing. His seductive pair of red eyes left behind the afterglow of pleasure, and he showed no sense of urgency to face the decisive battle. However, this Heroic Spirit would never separate his outer appearance from his inner feelings. After all, for him the conclusion over the Holy Grail was not out of the realm of entertainment.

	~~“What~~ do you want me to do ~~next~~, Kirei? ~~Just~~ wait here?”		“Well, what do you want me to do, Kirei? Is it alright if I just wait here?”

	One wrong command could make Archer question the worth of his Master. Kirei, who knew this very well, shook his head after ~~having thought about it for a while~~.		One wrong command could make Archer question the worth of his Master. Kirei, who knew this very well, shook his head after thinking carefully.

	~~“The ceremony will be in jeopardy if~~ your power ~~is released close to~~ the Holy Grail. If you want to ~~have fun~~, then ~~attack head-on~~.”		“If you unleash your power near the Holy Grail, you may endanger the ritual itself. If you want to do it, then intercept them.”

	~~“Mm~~, ~~fine~~. But what do you plan to do if you’re attacked while I’m away?”		“Yes, very well. But what do you plan to do if you’re attacked while I’m away?”

	“Get Berserker to stall ~~the enemies~~ and ~~I’ll use~~ that ~~time to summon~~ you back. I ~~would have to~~ borrow the power of the Command Seals~~, though~~. You wouldn’t mind, would you?”		“Get Berserker to stall, and in that gap, call you back. At that time, I will borrow the power of the Command Seals to save myself. You wouldn’t mind, would you?”

	“It is permitted. However, I can’t guarantee the safety of the Holy Grail. I ~~won’t be merciful~~ tonight. ~~This narrow little room may~~ be ~~completely destroyed~~.”		“It is permitted. However, I can’t guarantee the safety of the Holy Grail. I won't hold back tonight. Such a cramped pavilion could be blown away entirely.”

	“That would be the worst outcome, but it would ~~also~~ be fate.”		“That would be the worst outcome, but if that happens, it would be fate.”

	Kirei nodded decisively, but Archer narrowed his eyes.		Kirei nodded decisively, but Archer narrowed his eyes.

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	“There were seven big blocks in Illya’s heart. When Illya felt like she was about to break and was so scared but couldn’t run away, she heard Justicia-sama’s voice, and there was a big black hole above my head…”		“There were seven big blocks in Illya’s heart. When Illya felt like she was about to break and was so scared but couldn’t run away, she heard Justicia-sama’s voice, and there was a big black hole above my head…”

	~~Iriviel~~ embraced her daughter tightly. Her silver-white fringe brushed past her daughter’s face, which was wet with tears.		Irisviel embraced her daughter tightly. Her silver-white fringe brushed past her daughter’s face, which was wet with tears.

	“It’s alright, it’s alright… That won’t happen. You won’t see such things, Illya.”		“It’s alright, it’s alright… That won’t happen. You won’t see such things, Illya.”

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	This shackle would not break until someone claimed victory.		This shackle would not break until someone claimed victory.

	The Third Magic, the ~~Cup of~~ Heaven – that achievement was the only salvation.		The Third Magic, the Heaven's Feel – that achievement was the only salvation.

	Many sounds rushed towards Irisviel. She chanted with her countless sisters.		Many sounds rushed towards Irisviel. She chanted with her countless sisters.

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	And here she finally remembered – what she was looking down upon was the Einsbern family's thousand-year-long pilgrimage for the Holy Grail.		And here she finally remembered – what she was looking down upon was the Einsbern family's thousand-year-long pilgrimage for the Holy Grail.

	The primeval ~~Justizia~~ and the female dolls modeled after her… They were homunculi, fake living beings.		The primeval Justicia and the female dolls modeled after her… They were homunculi, fake living beings.

	They were humanoid disposables created with the secret craft of alchemy and used to fulfill the unattainable lasting wish.		They were humanoid disposables created with the secret craft of alchemy and used to fulfill the unattainable lasting wish.
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	Irisviel finally understood. She was looking inside the Holy Grail.		Irisviel finally understood. She was looking inside the Holy Grail.

	It was the Greater Grail that embraced the primeval ~~Justizia~~, the Greater Grail of Mount Enzō. All homunculi were manufactured to the standard of the ‘Lady of Winter’, using her as their model. Therefore, they shared the same pain.		It was the Greater Grail that embraced the primeval Justicia, the Greater Grail of Mount Enzō. All homunculi were manufactured to the standard of the ‘Lady of Winter’, using her as their model. Therefore, they shared the same pain.

	– No, was that really the truth?		– No, was that really the truth?
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	Although her heart was terrified, Illyaviel’s two red eyes still looked at Irisviel with trust. Though her face looked the same as her mother's and all of her sisters', this child was different. She was more adorable than anyone else –		Although her heart was terrified, Illyaviel’s two red eyes still looked at Irisviel with trust. Though her face looked the same as her mother's and all of her sisters', this child was different. She was more adorable than anyone else –

	“There were seven big blocks in Illya’s heart. When Illya felt like she was about to break and was so scared but couldn’t run away, she heard ~~Justizia~~-sama’s voice, and there was a big black hole above my head…”		“There were seven big blocks in Illya’s heart. When Illya felt like she was about to break and was so scared but couldn’t run away, she heard Justicia-sama’s voice, and there was a big black hole above my head…”

	Iriviel embraced her daughter tightly. Her silver-white fringe brushed past her daughter’s face, which was wet with tears.		Iriviel embraced her daughter tightly. Her silver-white fringe brushed past her daughter’s face, which was wet with tears.

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	Dispel all sorrows and chase away all worries.		Dispel all sorrows and chase away all worries.

	Soon, she would receive the power to fulfill wishes and become the omnipotent wish-granting vessel that could ~~grant~~ all.		Soon, she would receive the power to fulfill wishes and become the omnipotent wish-granting vessel that could realize all.

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	It was recounting the story of a clan that had sealed all it possessed within a castle of deep winter.		It was recounting the story of a clan that had sealed all it possessed within a castle of deep winter.

	And here she finally remembered – what she was looking down upon was the ~~Einsbern~~ family's thousand-year-long pilgrimage for the Holy Grail.		And here she finally remembered – what she was looking down upon was the Einzbern family's thousand-year-long pilgrimage for the Holy Grail.

	The primeval ~~Justicia~~ and the female dolls modeled after her… They were homunculi, fake living beings.		The primeval Justeaze and the female dolls modeled after her… They were homunculi, fake living beings.

	They were humanoid disposables created with the secret craft of alchemy and used to fulfill the unattainable lasting wish.		They were humanoid disposables created with the secret craft of alchemy and used to fulfill the unattainable lasting wish.

	This lost and confused history of the ~~Einsbern~~ clan was written with their blood and tears as ink and their broken bones and frozen fingertips as pens. Their sighs and their despair made Irisviel’s heart clench tight.		This lost and confused history of the Einzbern clan was written with their blood and tears as ink and their broken bones and frozen fingertips as pens. Their sighs and their despair made Irisviel’s heart clench tight.

	If any place had existed such that allowed her to see all of this, then it could only be the epicenter of the entire conflict, within the thing that had witnessed all.		If any place had existed such that allowed her to see all of this, then it could only be the epicenter of the entire conflict, within the thing that had witnessed all.
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	Irisviel finally understood. She was looking inside the Holy Grail.		Irisviel finally understood. She was looking inside the Holy Grail.

	It was the Greater Grail that embraced the primeval ~~Justicia~~, the Greater Grail of Mount Enzō. All homunculi were manufactured to the standard of the ‘Lady of Winter’, using her as their model. Therefore, they shared the same pain.		It was the Greater Grail that embraced the primeval Justeaze, the Greater Grail of Mount Enzō. All homunculi were manufactured to the standard of the ‘Lady of Winter’, using her as their model. Therefore, they shared the same pain.

	– No, was that really the truth?		– No, was that really the truth?
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	Out of the many generations of homunculi, she had been the first to give birth to a child from her womb. Out of all of her kind, only she had been given a love for her child. But even so, the fate she carried was just as lamentable.		Out of the many generations of homunculi, she had been the first to give birth to a child from her womb. Out of all of her kind, only she had been given a love for her child. But even so, the fate she carried was just as lamentable.

	Illyasviel von ~~Einsbern~~ was the next Vessel of the Grail, and also a mechanical part swept up in the thousand-year-old cogwheel of delusion and stubbornness.		Illyasviel von Einzbern was the next Vessel of the Grail, and also a mechanical part swept up in the thousand-year-old cogwheel of delusion and stubbornness.

	This shackle would not break until someone claimed victory.		This shackle would not break until someone claimed victory.