Fate/Zero:Act 1 Part 4 - Revision history

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	Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.		Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.

	Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy color of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was harboring a crawling mess of inky black cracks.~~lol~~		Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy color of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was harboring a crawling mess of inky black cracks.

	Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.		Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.

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	Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.		Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.

	Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy color of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was harboring a crawling mess of inky black cracks.		Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy color of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was harboring a crawling mess of inky black cracks.lol

	Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.		Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.

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	Kariya does not only have to fight against the other six Masters. It could be said that his greatest enemy are the creatures hosted within him.		Kariya does not only have to fight against the other six Masters. It could be said that his greatest enemy are the creatures hosted within him.

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	That night, as Kariya approached the basement of the Matō residence to face the final test, he accidentally met Sakura in the corridor.		That night, as Kariya approached the basement of the Matō residence to face the final test, he accidentally met Sakura in the corridor.

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	Sakura said dejectedly after a pause.		Sakura said dejectedly after a pause.

	“...I don’t have people that I can call by those names anymore. Grandfather told me that I should treat them as no longer ~~existed~~.”		“...I don’t have people that I can call by those names anymore. Grandfather told me that I should treat them as no longer existing.”

	“I see…” A reply with an indecisive voice.		“I see…” A reply with an indecisive voice.

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	The Heaven’s Feel has entered into its countdown stage. If all seven Servants are summoned the war may even begin tomorrow. The duration of the war, according to past experiences, should be about two weeks. Sometime before Kariya’s death.		The Heaven’s Feel has entered into its countdown stage. If all seven Servants are summoned the war may even begin tomorrow. The duration of the war, according to past experiences, should be about two weeks. Sometime before Kariya’s death.

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	“– Uncle Kariya, you are like a different person now.”		“– Uncle Kariya, you are like a different person now.”

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	He had suffered from the piercing pain of the parasite worms eroding away his body, and suffered from the worse and overwhelming guilt that sought to devour his soul.		He had suffered from the piercing pain of the parasite worms eroding away his body, and suffered from the worse and overwhelming guilt that sought to devour his soul.

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	Kariya knelt down in front of Sakura, and with his still mobile right hand held her shoulders softly in an embrace. With her head buried in his chest Sakura can no longer see Kariya’s face. He would therefore not be afraid of her seeing his crying countenance.		Kariya knelt down in front of Sakura, and with his still mobile right hand held her shoulders softly in an embrace. With her head buried in his chest Sakura can no longer see Kariya’s face. He would therefore not be afraid of her seeing his crying countenance.

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	Words of farewell seemed appropriate for this situation. She had accurately felt this even though she was only a child.		Words of farewell seemed appropriate for this situation. She had accurately felt this even though she was only a child.

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	Kariya turned around and slowly, but resolutely, took a step on the staircase leading towards the worm storage room underground.		Kariya turned around and slowly, but resolutely, took a step on the staircase leading towards the worm storage room underground.


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2009-03-09T03:08:43Z

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	Undoubtedly he was one of the reasons that resulted in Sakura’s anguish. Kariya cursed Matō Zōken, cursed Tōsaka Tokiomi, and in the same time placed this curse upon himself.		Undoubtedly he was one of the reasons that resulted in Sakura’s anguish. Kariya cursed Matō Zōken, cursed Tōsaka Tokiomi, and in the same time placed this curse upon himself.

	The only consolation was that – the Sakura that ~~have~~ turned as introverted as a doll was only carefree when with Kariya, and even occasionally uttering words innocence when they met. Whether it was a relationship shared by those who endure the same pain, or a friendship forged while she was still called Tōsaka Sakura, this girl continued to regard him as different compared to her ‘tutors,' Zōken and Byakuya.		The only consolation was that – the Sakura that has turned as introverted as a doll was only carefree when with Kariya, and even occasionally uttering words of innocence when they met. Whether it was a relationship shared by those who endure the same pain, or a friendship forged while she was still called Tōsaka Sakura, this girl continued to regard him as different compared to her ‘tutors,' Zōken and Byakuya.

	“I don’t need to go to the worm storage room today. Grandfather said that’s because something more important is going to happen there.”		“I don’t need to go to the worm storage room today. Grandfather said that’s because something more important is going to happen there.”

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	Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.		Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.

	Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy ~~color~~ of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was ~~harboring~~ a crawling mess of inky black cracks.		Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy colour of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was harbouring a crawling mess of inky black cracks.

	Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.		Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.
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	“Ha ha, maybe that is the case.”		“Ha ha, maybe that is the case.”

	With a dry laugh as ~~pretense~~ the matter was vaguely passed over.		With a dry laugh as pretence the matter was vaguely passed over.

	“– I can say the same about you, Sakura.”		“– I can say the same about you, Sakura.”
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	Children’s minds are immature.		Children’s minds are immature.

	They do not possess a firm resolve and the strength to turn their misery to anger. Confronted with a cruel fate, they were not provided with the choice of having a strong will. Moreover, as they have not lived through and comprehended life, ideals such as ~~honor~~ and hope are yet to be completely nurtured in them.		They do not possess a firm resolve and the strength to turn their misery to anger. Confronted with a cruel fate, they were not provided with the choice of having a strong will. Moreover, as they have not lived through and comprehended life, ideals such as honour and hope are yet to be completely nurtured in them.

	Therefore in moments of despair children are more prone than adults to seal away their own mind, lock up their own heart.		Therefore in moments of despair children are more prone than adults to seal away their own mind, lock up their own heart.
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	As the only way she knew how to protect herself, Sakura had tried hard to paralyze her mind through despair and resignation. In order to counter the unbearable pain, the hapless girl can only destroy the sense of self that is still able to feel.		As the only way she knew how to protect herself, Sakura had tried hard to paralyze her mind through despair and resignation. In order to counter the unbearable pain, the hapless girl can only destroy the sense of self that is still able to feel.

	How can you say cruel words such as ‘you should keep hoping’ and ‘you should look after yourself’ to a child like this? These lines that confer temporary solace can only save the speaker. Giving her hope means to take away the ~~armor~~ named ‘despair’ that was cast upon her soul. If that is to happen, Sakura’s young and tender mind would collapse within a night.		How can you say cruel words such as ‘you should keep hoping’ and ‘you should look after yourself’ to a child like this? These lines that confer temporary solace can only save the speaker. Giving her hope means to take away the armour named ‘despair’ that was cast upon her soul. If that is to happen, Sakura’s young and tender mind would collapse within a night.

	Therefore –		Therefore –

	Although they both lived in the Matō residence Kariya had never claimed to be Sakura’s ~~‘savior’~~. He can only protect her by standing beside her, as an adult that is also been ‘bullied’ by Zōken and as powerless as Sakura.		Although they both lived in the Matō residence Kariya had never claimed to be Sakura’s ‘saviour’. He can only protect her by standing beside her, as an adult that is also been ‘bullied’ by Zōken and as powerless as Sakura.

	“– Goodbye then. Uncle’s gotta go now.”		“– Goodbye then. Uncle’s gotta go now.”

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	Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.		Matō Kariya’s mental strength had, in conclusion, withstood the bitter pain, but his physical body had reached its limit.

	Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy ~~colour~~ of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was ~~harbouring~~ a crawling mess of inky black cracks.		Within three months all his hair had turned white. His skin was covered with emerging lesions interspersed with regions devoid of the rosy color of living flesh, turning instead into a sepulchral shade of earthen grey. The poison named prana that circulated in his veins can be seen to expand beneath his semi-transparent flesh, as if his torso was harboring a crawling mess of inky black cracks.

	Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.		Like so, his body collapsed at a rate faster than he had ever imagined. The impact was particularly heavy on the left side of his body and its nerves, so much so that at one stage his left wrist and ankle were completely paralyzed. A temporary rehabilitation program got them back to work, but the left hand still reacted slower than the right, and a quicker stride would result in a dragging left feet.
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	“Ha ha, maybe that is the case.”		“Ha ha, maybe that is the case.”

	With a dry laugh as ~~pretence~~ the matter was vaguely passed over.		With a dry laugh as pretense the matter was vaguely passed over.

	“– I can say the same about you, Sakura.”		“– I can say the same about you, Sakura.”
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	Children’s minds are immature.		Children’s minds are immature.

	They do not possess a firm resolve and the strength to turn their misery to anger. Confronted with a cruel fate, they were not provided with the choice of having a strong will. Moreover, as they have not lived through and comprehended life, ideals such as ~~honour~~ and hope are yet to be completely nurtured in them.		They do not possess a firm resolve and the strength to turn their misery to anger. Confronted with a cruel fate, they were not provided with the choice of having a strong will. Moreover, as they have not lived through and comprehended life, ideals such as honor and hope are yet to be completely nurtured in them.

	Therefore in moments of despair children are more prone than adults to seal away their own mind, lock up their own heart.		Therefore in moments of despair children are more prone than adults to seal away their own mind, lock up their own heart.
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	As the only way she knew how to protect herself, Sakura had tried hard to paralyze her mind through despair and resignation. In order to counter the unbearable pain, the hapless girl can only destroy the sense of self that is still able to feel.		As the only way she knew how to protect herself, Sakura had tried hard to paralyze her mind through despair and resignation. In order to counter the unbearable pain, the hapless girl can only destroy the sense of self that is still able to feel.

	How can you say cruel words such as ‘you should keep hoping’ and ‘you should look after yourself’ to a child like this? These lines that confer temporary solace can only save the speaker. Giving her hope means to take away the ~~armour~~ named ‘despair’ that was cast upon her soul. If that is to happen, Sakura’s young and tender mind would collapse within a night.		How can you say cruel words such as ‘you should keep hoping’ and ‘you should look after yourself’ to a child like this? These lines that confer temporary solace can only save the speaker. Giving her hope means to take away the armor named ‘despair’ that was cast upon her soul. If that is to happen, Sakura’s young and tender mind would collapse within a night.

	Therefore –		Therefore –

	Although they both lived in the Matō residence Kariya had never claimed to be Sakura’s ~~‘saviour’~~. He can only protect her by standing beside her, as an adult that is also been ‘bullied’ by Zōken and as powerless as Sakura.		Although they both lived in the Matō residence Kariya had never claimed to be Sakura’s ‘savior’. He can only protect her by standing beside her, as an adult that is also been ‘bullied’ by Zōken and as powerless as Sakura.

	“– Goodbye then. Uncle’s gotta go now.”		“– Goodbye then. Uncle’s gotta go now.”

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	A gaze as hollow and dim as that of a doll. The various emotions behind those pair of eyes were never seen by him in this whole year. The innocent face of the girl that followed her elder sister Rin and played carelessly like a puppy had long ago disappeared.		A gaze as hollow and dim as that of a doll. The various emotions behind those pair of eyes were never seen by him in this whole year. The innocent face of the girl that followed her elder sister Rin and played carelessly like a puppy had long ago disappeared.

	This is understandable. Just consider the cruel training that Sakura undertook this year in order to become the successor of the ~~magic~~ of the Matōs.		This is understandable. Just consider the cruel training that Sakura undertook this year in order to become the successor of the magecraft of the Matōs.

	Sakura’s body does indeed have fitting potentials to become a magus. On this matter she was far better than Kariya and his elder brother Byakuya. Yet, it was inevitably a potential more appropriate for the Tōsakas’ ~~magic~~, with fundamental differences to the ~~magic~~ of the Matōs.		Sakura’s body does indeed have fitting potentials to become a magus. On this matter she was far better than Kariya and his elder brother Byakuya. Yet, it was inevitably a potential more appropriate for the Tōsakas’ magecraft, with fundamental differences to the magecraft of the Matōs.

	Acclimatization was needed in order to allow Sakura’s body to adapt to the ~~magic~~ of the Matōs. The treatments of this so called acclimatization are the tortures that occurred in the underground worm storage of the Matō residence every day and night in the name of ‘education’.		Acclimatization was needed in order to allow Sakura’s body to adapt to the magecraft of the Matōs. The treatments of this so called acclimatization are the tortures that occurred in the underground worm storage of the Matō residence every day and night in the name of ‘education’.

	Children’s minds are immature.		Children’s minds are immature.