Fate/Zero:Act 1 Part 5 - Revision history

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2021-09-30T11:59:29Z

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	“Thou seven heavens, clad in a trinity of words, come past they restraining rings, and be thou the hands that protect the balance – !”		“Thou seven heavens, clad in a trinity of words, come past they(?) restraining rings, and be thou the hands that protect the balance – !”

	With this as the end of his prayers, Tokiomi felt that the acceleration of the prana that raced in his body had reached its uttermost limit.		With this as the end of his prayers, Tokiomi felt that the acceleration of the prana that raced in his body had reached its uttermost limit.

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2021-09-30T11:47:25Z

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	Waver carefully spread the chicken blood on the ground as he chanted the incantation.		Waver carefully spread the chicken blood on the ground as he chanted the incantation.
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	In the underground workshop of the Tōsaka residence in the same small mountainous town, the same preparations were being made for the same ritual.		In the underground workshop of the Tōsaka residence in the same small mountainous town, the same preparations were being made for the same ritual.
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	Tokiomi’s reasons for his confidence were finally understood. No Servant can defeat the Heroic Spirit that Tokiomi have chosen.		Tokiomi’s reasons for his confidence were finally understood. No Servant can defeat the Heroic Spirit that Tokiomi have chosen.

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	At the same time, in the distant castle of the Einzberns, Emiya Kiritsugu was examining the completed state of the summoning circle scribed on the floor of the ceremony room.		At the same time, in the distant castle of the Einzberns, Emiya Kiritsugu was examining the completed state of the summoning circle scribed on the floor of the ceremony room.
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	“According to this, victory should be within our hands.”		“According to this, victory should be within our hands.”
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	“Have you accurately memorized the incantations of summoning?”		“Have you accurately memorized the incantations of summoning?”
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	“Kariya, as the Master of Berserker, fight for me with all that you’ve got.”		“Kariya, as the Master of Berserker, fight for me with all that you’ve got.”

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	On that day, incantations from different lands and aimed at different entities were chanted almost simultaneously, a harmony so coincidental it can hardly be regarded as an accident of chance.		On that day, incantations from different lands and aimed at different entities were chanted almost simultaneously, a harmony so coincidental it can hardly be regarded as an accident of chance.
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	Kiritsugu gave no thought to the severe pain created by this discord that was enough to make one want to scream out loud, and concentrated on pronouncing his incantation. Even the presence of Irisviel, who stood beside him holding her breath, was no longer present in his consciousness.		Kiritsugu gave no thought to the severe pain created by this discord that was enough to make one want to scream out loud, and concentrated on pronouncing his incantation. Even the presence of Irisviel, who stood beside him holding her breath, was no longer present in his consciousness.

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	Adding the forbidden alien ingredient in the incantations of summoning, Kariya included two lines of incantations that would rob the sanity of the summoned Heroic Spirit and demote the hero to a level of a berserker.		Adding the forbidden alien ingredient in the incantations of summoning, Kariya included two lines of incantations that would rob the sanity of the summoned Heroic Spirit and demote the hero to a level of a berserker.
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	Thinking about the duty that he bore on his back – then he would not shrink back at this moment.		Thinking about the duty that he bore on his back – then he would not shrink back at this moment.

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	“Thou seven heavens, clad in a trinity of words, come past they restraining rings, and be thou the hands that protect the balance – !”		“Thou seven heavens, clad in a trinity of words, come past they restraining rings, and be thou the hands that protect the balance – !”

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2021-09-30T11:30:00Z

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	Waver carefully spread the chicken blood on the ground as he chanted the incantation.		Waver carefully spread the chicken blood on the ground as he chanted the incantation.
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	In the underground workshop of the Tōsaka residence in the same small mountainous town, the same preparations were being made for the same ritual.		In the underground workshop of the Tōsaka residence in the same small mountainous town, the same preparations were being made for the same ritual.
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	“According to this, victory should be within our hands.”		“According to this, victory should be within our hands.”
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	“Have you accurately memorized the incantations of summoning?”		“Have you accurately memorized the incantations of summoning?”

Toshiya: /* -270:08:57 */ Einsbern -> Einzbern

2017-07-28T03:38:17Z

-270:08:57: Einsbern -> Einzbern

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	At the same time, in the distant castle of the ~~Einsberns~~, Emiya Kiritsugu was examining the completed state of the summoning circle scribed on the floor of the ceremony room.		At the same time, in the distant castle of the Einzberns, Emiya Kiritsugu was examining the completed state of the summoning circle scribed on the floor of the ceremony room.
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Brynhilde: /* -270:08:57 */

2009-04-01T20:20:27Z

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	Waver carefully spread the chicken blood on the ground as he chanted the incantation.		Waver carefully spread the chicken blood on the ground as he chanted the incantation.
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	In the underground workshop of the Tōsaka residence in the same small mountainous town, the same preparations were being made for the same ritual.		In the underground workshop of the Tōsaka residence in the same small mountainous town, the same preparations were being made for the same ritual.
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	At the same time, in the distant castle of the Einsberns, Emiya Kiritsugu was examining the completed state of the summoning circle scribed on the floor of the ceremony room.		At the same time, in the distant castle of the Einsberns, Emiya Kiritsugu was examining the completed state of the summoning circle scribed on the floor of the ceremony room.

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	Full of the foul odor of rot and dampness, a green darkness as that of the depth of the sea. This is the worm storage hidden deep beneath the ground of the Matō residence that stood on the hill of the small mountainous town.		Full of the foul odor of rot and dampness, a green darkness as that of the depth of the sea. This is the worm storage hidden deep beneath the ground of the Matō residence that stood on the hill of the small mountainous town.

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	Zōken declared loudly with an overjoyed face, as if welcoming the disastrous implications contained within it.		Zōken declared loudly with an overjoyed face, as if welcoming the disastrous implications contained within it.

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	If thou submitteth to the call of the Holy Grail, and if thou wilt obey this mind, this reason, then thou shalt respond.”		If thou submitteth to the call of the Holy Grail, and if thou wilt obey this mind, this reason, then thou shalt respond.”

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	“ – Yet, thou serves with thine eyes clouded in chaos. Thou, bound in the cage of madness. I am he who commands those chains – ”		“ – Yet, thou serves with thine eyes clouded in chaos. Thou, bound in the cage of madness. I am he who commands those chains – ”

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	“…We’ve won, Kirei. Our battle is won…”		“…We’ve won, Kirei. Our battle is won…”

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61.31.140.102: (minor) fixed timestamp, capitalization, some wording -CanonRap

2008-09-24T05:40:25Z

(minor) fixed timestamp, capitalization, some wording -CanonRap

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Epicnoses: Undo revision 27753 by Special:Contributions/Epicnoses (User talk:Epicnoses)

2008-05-09T03:09:38Z

Undo revision 27753 by Special:Contributions/Epicnoses (User talk:Epicnoses)

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	Matō Zōken reminded Kariya again and again for safety’s sake. The latter nodded in the darkness.		Matō Zōken reminded Kariya again and again for safety’s sake. The latter nodded in the darkness.

	Full of the foul ~~odor~~ of rot and dampness, a green darkness as that of the depth of the sea. This is the worm storage hidden deep beneath the ground of the Matō residence that stood on the hill of the small mountainous town.		Full of the foul odour of rot and dampness, a green darkness as that of the depth of the sea. This is the worm storage hidden deep beneath the ground of the Matō residence that stood on the hill of the small mountainous town.
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	“That’s good. Only, midway through the incantation, add two more lines of incantations.”		“That’s good. Only, midway through the incantation, add two more lines of incantations.”

Epicnoses: /* 270:08:57 */ British ENG to American ENG

2008-05-09T01:53:01Z

270:08:57: British ENG to American ENG

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	Matō Zōken reminded Kariya again and again for safety’s sake. The latter nodded in the darkness.		Matō Zōken reminded Kariya again and again for safety’s sake. The latter nodded in the darkness.

	Full of the foul ~~odour~~ of rot and dampness, a green darkness as that of the depth of the sea. This is the worm storage hidden deep beneath the ground of the Matō residence that stood on the hill of the small mountainous town.		Full of the foul odor of rot and dampness, a green darkness as that of the depth of the sea. This is the worm storage hidden deep beneath the ground of the Matō residence that stood on the hill of the small mountainous town.
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	“That’s good. Only, midway through the incantation, add two more lines of incantations.”		“That’s good. Only, midway through the incantation, add two more lines of incantations.”

Epicnoses: /* 270:08:57 */

2008-05-08T21:51:46Z

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	“Have you accurately ~~memorised~~ the incantations of summoning?”		“Have you accurately memorized the incantations of summoning?”

	Matō Zōken reminded Kariya again and again for safety’s sake. The latter nodded in the darkness.		Matō Zōken reminded Kariya again and again for safety’s sake. The latter nodded in the darkness.

Brynhilde at 20:36, 17 December 2007

2007-12-17T20:36:05Z

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	A hope about a miracle. The summons pronounced to the heroes on the other side of the universe by these humans, who will brutally slaughter each other to achieve this miracle, were ringing out from the earth at the same time.		A hope about a miracle. The summons pronounced to the heroes on the other side of the universe by these humans, who will brutally slaughter each other to achieve this miracle, were ringing out from the earth at the same time.
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	“Set –”		“Set –”

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	Kiritsugu gave no thought to the severe pain created by this discord that was enough to make one want to scream out loud, and concentrated on pronouncing his incantation. Even the presence of Irisviel, who stood beside him holding her breath, was no longer present in his consciousness.		Kiritsugu gave no thought to the severe pain created by this discord that was enough to make one want to scream out loud, and concentrated on pronouncing his incantation. Even the presence of Irisviel, who stood beside him holding her breath, was no longer present in his consciousness.
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	Adding the forbidden alien ingredient in the incantations of summoning, Kariya included two lines of incantations that would rob the sanity of the summoned heroic spirit and demote the hero to a level of a berserker.		Adding the forbidden alien ingredient in the incantations of summoning, Kariya included two lines of incantations that would rob the sanity of the summoned heroic spirit and demote the hero to a level of a berserker.
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	Arriving from the other side and landing here, a legendary illusion wrapped in tornado and lightening.		Arriving from the other side and landing here, a legendary illusion wrapped in tornado and lightening.
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	Originally of human kind but separated from the mortal plane. Elevated to the level of elementals through powers not of men. The place where the supernatural primates gathered… from the Throne of Heroes that had its power of the gods suppressed, the heroic spirits weaved from the dreams of countless ordinary men descended on the earth at the same time.		Originally of human kind but separated from the mortal plane. Elevated to the level of elementals through powers not of men. The place where the supernatural primates gathered… from the Throne of Heroes that had its power of the gods suppressed, the heroic spirits weaved from the dreams of countless ordinary men descended on the earth at the same time.