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	A golden light immediately arrived following Rider's bellow.		A golden light immediately arrived following Rider's bellow.

	The light was still faltering out, and there already was no surprise left in the heart of the spectators. It wasn't just a wild guess anymore that this was a fourth Servant who had made an appearance responding to Rider's provocation. The dreadful point is that the beginning of the hostilities was a gathering of four Servants already. Nobody could possibly conjecture what the turn of events ~~would be~~.		The light was still faltering out, and there already was no surprise left in the heart of the spectators. It wasn't just a wild guess anymore that this was a fourth Servant who had made an appearance responding to Rider's provocation. The dreadful point is that the beginning of the hostilities was a gathering of four Servants already. Nobody could possibly conjecture what would be the outcome of turn of such events.

	As expected, the golden light came from 10 meters above, atop a street pole, where a figure standing in a shining armor could be seen. Waver held his breath at the sight of such dazzling dignity.		As expected, the golden light came from 10 meters above, atop a street pole, where a figure standing in a shining armor could be seen. Waver held his breath at the sight of such dazzling dignity.
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	"This guy is..."		"This guy is..."

	He had seen him for only ~~one~~ instant the previous time, but there was no mistaking such an intense existence. The one standing calmly atop the street light was none other than the enigmatic Servant who had ~~sent~~ into oblivion with an overwhelming<!-- ==== Page 336 ==== --> destructive power ~~the Assassin who was invading the Tōsaka mansion the previous night~~.		He had seen him for only a instant the previous time, but there was no mistaking such an intense existence. The one standing calmly atop the street light was none other than the enigmatic Servant that had sent the Assassin who had invaded the Tõsaka mansion, the previous night into oblivion with an overwhelming<!-- ==== Page 336 ==== --> destructive power.

	This couldn't be Caster, his entire body covered in armor. If he had materialized in response to Rider's call, it meant he had the sense to recognize the provocation as such, thus he couldn't be Berserker.		This couldn't be the Caster, his entire body covered in armor. If he had materialized in response to Rider's call, it meant he had the sense to recognize the provocation as such, thus he couldn't be the Berserker either.

	By elimination, the only one left was― the last of the three Knight classes, Archer.		By elimination, the only one left was― the last of the three Knight classes, Archer.
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	"I didn't expect there would be two fools in one night to have the insolence of calling themselves "kings" and ignore me."		"I didn't expect there would be two fools in one night to have the insolence of calling themselves "kings" and ignore me."

	For his very first words, the golden Heroic Spirit looked very displeased, scorning from above at the three Servants with a glare. His arrogance and his tone were comparable to Rider's haughtiness, but it differed from the very root. There was never cruelty and mercilessness in the voice and eyes of the King of Conquerors.		For his very first words, the golden Heroic Spirit looked very displeased, scorning from above at the three Servants with a glare. His arrogance and his tone were comparable to Rider's haughtiness, but it differed from the very root. There was never a cruelty and mercilessness in the voice and eyes of the King of Conquerors.

	Even Rider didn't expect anyone more domineering than himself to show up, as he was stroking his chin with a bewildered look void of malice.		Even Rider didn't expect anyone more domineering than himself to show up, as he was stroking his chin with a bewildered look, void of malice.

	"You are mistaken... I, Alexander, am the one who is well known throughout the world as the King of Conquerors."		"You are mistaken... I, Alexander, am the one who is well known throughout the world as the King of Conquerors."
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	Without a doubt, this is the same thing as the previous night― the mysterious attack that unilaterally wiped out Assassin. All of those who were observing the Tōsaka mansion the previous night understand that.		Without a doubt, this is the same thing as the previous night― the mysterious attack that unilaterally wiped out the Assassin. All of those who were observing the Tōsaka mansion the previous night understand that.

	"...hh"		"...hh"

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	A Servant. That was plain. Yet, just what Heroic Spirit was this sinister appearance?		A Servant. That was plain. Yet, just what Heroic Spirit was this sinister appearance?

	This black knight definitely didn't have any of the "radiance" that bore the other Servants who were already there. ~~Arturia~~, Diarmuid, and the King of Conquerors Alexander as well as the yet unannounced golden Archer all have that "shine". This is the expression of the pride of a Heroic Spirit. The honor of the legends everyone praises and longs for. This is an essential element of their "noble phantasm".		This black knight definitely didn't have any of the "radiance" that bore the other Servants who were already there. Artoria, Diarmuid, and the King of Conquerors Alexander as well as the yet unannounced golden Archer all have that "shine". This is the expression of the pride of a Heroic Spirit. The honor of the legends everyone praises and longs for. This is an essential element of their "noble phantasm".

	But the newly appeared black knight had none of it. You could say he was closer to an Assassin. The darkness around the black armor definitely held a "negative surge".		But the newly appeared black knight had none of it. You could say he was closer to an Assassin. The darkness around the black armor definitely held a "negative surge".

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	There is one problematic person left.		There is one problematic person left.

	Berserker. Nobody could figure out what was the intention of the black knight in materializing here and now. It added to the mayhem in which nobody could take control of the situation. No prudent Master would think of ~~putting~~ his Servant in the middle of this chaos.		Berserker. Nobody could figure out what was the intention of the black knight in materializing here and now. It added to the mayhem in which nobody could take control of the situation. No prudent Master would think of pitting his Servant in the middle of this chaos.

	No doubt anyone would be equally wary of Berserker, yet there was one exception. There was no doubt or hesitation in Archer's crimson eyes, only an absolute anger and murderous intent he was holding in while looking down at Berserker.		No doubt anyone would be equally wary of Berserker, yet there was one exception. There was no doubt or hesitation in Archer's crimson eyes, only an absolute anger and murderous intent he was holding in while looking down at Berserker.

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	There is one problematic person left.		There is one problematic person left.

	Berserker. Nobody could figure out what was the intention of the black knight in materializing here and now. It added to the mayhem in which nobody could take control of the situation. No prudent Master would think of ~~pitting~~ his Servant in the middle of this chaos.		Berserker. Nobody could figure out what was the intention of the black knight in materializing here and now. It added to the mayhem in which nobody could take control of the situation. No prudent Master would think of putting his Servant in the middle of this chaos.

	No doubt anyone would be equally wary of Berserker, yet there was one exception. There was no doubt or hesitation in Archer's crimson eyes, only an absolute anger and murderous intent he was holding in while looking down at Berserker.		No doubt anyone would be equally wary of Berserker, yet there was one exception. There was no doubt or hesitation in Archer's crimson eyes, only an absolute anger and murderous intent he was holding in while looking down at Berserker.

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	Saber nodded at ~~Irisvie’sl~~ murmur.		Saber nodded at Irisviel’s murmur.

	"That's not all. With now four opponents, we can't do any careless movement."		"That's not all. With now four opponents, we can't do any careless movement."

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	"You mad dog, do you expect pity from me?"		"You mad dog, do you expect pity from me?"

	A lowlife's gaze is equally lowly and filthy. Being poured by this gaze is an intolerable disgrace for a nobleman. To Archer who claims the title of king even more than Rider, Berserker's ill ~~maners~~ made him a complete criminal.		A lowlife's gaze is equally lowly and filthy. Being poured by this gaze is an intolerable disgrace for a nobleman. To Archer who claims the title of king even more than Rider, Berserker's ill manners made him a complete criminal.
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	In the thick dust, the shadow of a dark, tall figure wavered into their visibility.		In the thick dust, the shadow of a dark, tall figure wavered into their visibility.

	Berserker stood unharmed. He had merely moved from his starting point, where the road had become a crater. Out of the weapons thrown by Archer, the spear is ~~thecause~~ of this, hitting its target after being delayed a little. And the sword that should have reached its target a little before the spear had brought no destruction.		Berserker stood unharmed. He had merely moved from his starting point, where the road had become a crater. Out of the weapons thrown by Archer, the spear is the cause of this, hitting its target after being delayed a little. And the sword that should have reached its target a little before the spear had brought no destruction.
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	The treasure swords and spears all around him changed direction. Their tip was now fully aiming at the new target, that is, Berserker.		The treasure swords and spears all around him changed direction. Their tip was now fully aiming at the new target, that is, Berserker.

	"You shall at least ~~enjoy~~ me when you scatter away, mongrel."		"You shall at least entertain me when you scatter away, mongrel."

	A sword and a spear bustle in the air at the heartless verdict.		A sword and a spear bustle in the air at the heartless verdict.
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	In the thick dust, the shadow of a dark, tall figure wavered into their visibility.		In the thick dust, the shadow of a dark, tall figure wavered into their visibility.

	Berserker ~~was fine~~. He had merely moved from his starting point, where the road had become a crater. ~~Amongst~~ the weapons thrown by Archer, ~~this~~ is ~~the result~~ of ~~the spear~~ hitting its target after being delayed a little. And the sword that should have reached its target a little before the spear had brought no destruction.		Berserker stood unharmed. He had merely moved from his starting point, where the road had become a crater. Out of the weapons thrown by Archer, the spear is thecause of this, hitting its target after being delayed a little. And the sword that should have reached its target a little before the spear had brought no destruction.
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