Fate/Zero:Act 4 Part 3 - Revision history

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	The proud maiden knight will cleave out a path for Irisviel to survive, at the ~~expanse~~ of her own life.		The proud maiden knight will cleave out a path for Irisviel to survive, at the expense of her own life.

	Irisviel shook her head decisively. She did not expect Saber to sacrifice herself in even the smallest of ways.		Irisviel shook her head decisively. She did not expect Saber to sacrifice herself in even the smallest of ways.

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	The iron pole in Berserker's hands was being tainted in black. Black lines were spreading and multiplying like the veins of a leaf, invading the iron pole.		The iron pole in Berserker's hands was being tainted in black. Black lines were spreading and multiplying like the veins of a leaf, invading the iron pole.

	The starting point was Berserker's two hands. The black lines ~~erre~~ spreading on the entire pole like a spider's web from where the black gauntlets are holding it.		The starting point was Berserker's two hands. The black lines were spreading on the entire pole like a spider's web from where the black gauntlets are holding it.

	This was Berserker's prana — the prana muddled with bloodthrist and hatred, possessed only by the black knight. The iron pole was receiving it by permeation from his hands.		This was Berserker's prana — the prana muddled with bloodthrist and hatred, possessed only by the black knight. The iron pole was receiving it by permeation from his hands.

Brynhilde at 02:56, 16 November 2009

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	The wound on Saber’s finger cost her the ~~manoeuvrability~~ of her sword. Saber was keenly anxious because of that.		The wound on Saber’s finger cost her the maneuverability of her sword. Saber was keenly anxious because of that.

	Of course she was aware of how dangerous her situation is. While she needed to stall Rider, who was observing at one side, Berserker’s fight with her had also become a stalemate. In the current situation – she didn’t have any strength to fight Berserker anymore.		Of course she was aware of how dangerous her situation is. While she needed to stall Rider, who was observing at one side, Berserker’s fight with her had also become a stalemate. In the current situation – she didn’t have any strength to fight Berserker anymore.

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	Saber recognised the deeper meaning hidden in the sentence, but she was still very puzzled.		Saber recognised the deeper meaning hidden in the sentence, but she was still very puzzled.

	Kiritsugu – Is he here?		''Kiritsugu – Is he here?''

	Actually, Irisviel did not help with Saber’s confusion, but she had always believed firmly in Kiritsugu.		Actually, Irisviel did not help with Saber’s confusion, but she had always believed firmly in Kiritsugu.
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	The two spears of exorcism and mortality, the iron soaked through with the black aura of the kill, did not threaten Irisviel. All this is proceeding as Kiritsugu had planned. That is – Saber and Irisviel should now be in an advantage.		The two spears of exorcism and mortality, the iron soaked through with the black aura of the kill, did not threaten Irisviel. All this is proceeding as Kiritsugu had planned. That is – Saber and Irisviel should now be in an advantage.

	Therefore – the rest is up to you, dear.		''Therefore – the rest is up to you, dear.''

	Faced towards her husband who was nowhere to be seen, Irisviel prayed with total conviction.		Faced towards her husband who was nowhere to be seen, Irisviel prayed with total conviction.

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	"No, I can’t see him."		"No, I can’t see him."

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	Kiritsugu sighted his rifle towards the top of the crane once again. The Assassin with the skull mask was still sitting there. Just one moment of carelessness might cost Kiritsugu his life.		Kiritsugu sighted his rifle towards the top of the crane once again. The Assassin with the skull mask was still sitting there. Just one moment of carelessness might cost Kiritsugu his life.

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	Of course, the black knight ignored Saber’s question, but threw the iron pole following his piercing vigor.		Of course, the black knight ignored Saber’s question, but threw the iron pole following his piercing vigor.

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	Although this is a fight to the death, Saber was immensely touched by Lancer’s words. The Heroic Spirit of the Spear devotedly believes in the same ‘chivalry' as she does.		Although this is a fight to the death, Saber was immensely touched by Lancer’s words. The Heroic Spirit of the Spear devotedly believes in the same ‘chivalry' as she does.

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	The tip of the red spear reversed direction and attacked, flying towards Saber with a low whistle. The two demonic spears, long and short, brushed past the shoulders of the rapidly retreating Saber one after the other in front of her face, sweeping across the sky.		The tip of the red spear reversed direction and attacked, flying towards Saber with a low whistle. The two demonic spears, long and short, brushed past the shoulders of the rapidly retreating Saber one after the other in front of her face, sweeping across the sky.

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	If her left hand was not injured, she might be able to fight her way out of this.		If her left hand was not injured, she might be able to fight her way out of this.

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	Saber nonchalantly reported this quick decision to Irisviel, but Irisviel did not detect Saber’s true intention.		Saber nonchalantly reported this quick decision to Irisviel, but Irisviel did not detect Saber’s true intention.

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	According to Maiya’s report – the shooting range was adjusted to 500 meters. The reticle in the scope should be identical to the bullet’s flight path, from the muzzle to 500 meters out.		According to Maiya’s report – the shooting range was adjusted to 500 meters. The reticle in the scope should be identical to the bullet’s flight path, from the muzzle to 500 meters out.

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	To reduce the risk, Kiritsugu is timing his shots with Maiya's. Her AUG fires a 5.56mm Remington high-velocity catridge. This power will not damage the Servant Assassin. However, if Assassin comes under sudden fire he might ignore the other sniper in front of him – it goes without saying that the preparations are severely deficient.		To reduce the risk, Kiritsugu is timing his shots with Maiya's. Her AUG fires a 5.56mm Remington high-velocity catridge. This power will not damage the Servant Assassin. However, if Assassin comes under sudden fire he might ignore the other sniper in front of him – it goes without saying that the preparations are severely deficient.

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	"Aaalalalalalalaie!"		"Aaalalalalalalaie!"

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	Rider’s Noble Phantasm sped across in front of Saber. Upon seeing the Noble Phantasm’s overwhelming power of destruction, Saber was speechless.		Rider’s Noble Phantasm sped across in front of Saber. Upon seeing the Noble Phantasm’s overwhelming power of destruction, Saber was speechless.

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	"Have Lancer retreat. If you still insist in humiliating him further, then I will join Saber and the two of us will defeat your Servant, how is that?"		"Have Lancer retreat. If you still insist in humiliating him further, then I will join Saber and the two of us will defeat your Servant, how is that?"

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	Soon after, as thought suddenly remembered, the sound of the waves smashing against the cliff and the bustle of faraway streets crept back into the night sky. Lancer’s Master must have released the barrier cast in the neighboring area.		Soon after, as thought suddenly remembered, the sound of the waves smashing against the cliff and the bustle of faraway streets crept back into the night sky. Lancer’s Master must have released the barrier cast in the neighboring area.

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	"Enough, enough, don’t be so vigorous."		"Enough, enough, don’t be so vigorous."

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	"Farewell!"		"Farewell!"

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	"Yes. The hand hurts too much, what a disgrace. Like what Rider said, if I do not end my duel with Lancer and remove the curse of this wound, it will interfere with my battles with other Servants."		"Yes. The hand hurts too much, what a disgrace. Like what Rider said, if I do not end my duel with Lancer and remove the curse of this wound, it will interfere with my battles with other Servants."

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	The girl stared at the southern sky and proclaimed calmly.		The girl stared at the southern sky and proclaimed calmly.

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	The first to be protected is ‘the Vessel of the Grail’, Irisviel. Since Saber can no longer protect her Master, right now no hesitation can be afforded.		The first to be protected is ‘the Vessel of the Grail’, Irisviel. Since Saber can no longer protect her Master, right now no hesitation can be afforded.

	"...Maiya. Match my ~~down~~ and attack Assassin. Restrain him."		"...Maiya. Match my countdown and attack Assassin. Restrain him."

	The answer ‘Understood’ immediately came from the other side of the radio. The air was soaked with tension.		The answer ‘Understood’ immediately came from the other side of the radio. The air was soaked with tension.
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	Kiritsugu began to count in a low voice, and focused the heat-vision scope towards Lancer’s Master.		Kiritsugu began to count in a low voice, and focused the heat-vision scope towards Lancer’s Master.

	After the WA200 sniper rifle was ~~completed~~ it was tested outside the country before it came into Japan, therefore Kiritsugu was already familiar with the gun’s characteristics. However, he hasn’t tested its compatibility with the night scope system... At this time, he can only rely on Maiya’s skill.		After the WA200 sniper rifle was customized it was tested outside the country before it came into Japan, therefore Kiritsugu was already familiar with the gun’s characteristics. However, he hasn’t tested its compatibility with the night scope system... At this time, he can only rely on Maiya’s skill.

	" – Five."		" – Five."

	According to Maiya’s report – the shooting range was adjusted to 500 meters. The reticle in the scope ~~and~~ the bullet’s flight path, from the muzzle to 500 meters out~~, are identical~~.		According to Maiya’s report – the shooting range was adjusted to 500 meters. The reticle in the scope should be identical to the bullet’s flight path, from the muzzle to 500 meters out.

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