Fate/Zero:Act 7 Part 4 - Revision history

MaggiPower at 12:09, 13 February 2018

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	Although Irisviel's body, from magecraft's perspective, is artificial, the art of self-healing when the practitioner is unconscious wasn’t added in. What healed her was a miracle that had nothing to do with Einzbern's magecraft.		Although Irisviel's body, from magecraft's perspective, is artificial, the art of self-healing when the practitioner is unconscious wasn’t added in. What healed her was a miracle that had nothing to do with Einzbern's magecraft.

	The Noble Phantasm Avalon • All is a Distant Utopia – it heals all it's bearer's wounds, and even stops his aging. The sheath of the holy sword Excalibur. The artifact used back at the Einzbern's castle to summon Heroic Spirit ~~Arturia~~ was now sealed inside Irisviel as a conceptual weapon.		The Noble Phantasm Avalon • All is a Distant Utopia – it heals all it's bearer's wounds, and even stops his aging. The sheath of the holy sword Excalibur. The artifact used back at the Einzbern's castle to summon Heroic Spirit Artoria was now sealed inside Irisviel as a conceptual weapon.

	Normally, it should be a trump card that the Master, Kiritsugu, should equip. But then, serving as the front line substitute Master Irisviel's protection, he left this utmost defensive Noble Phantasm in the hands of his wife. Anyway, if its real owner Saber wasn't near supporting prana, the sheath wouldn't have any properties. To Kiritsugu, who decided from the start to act separately from Saber, it was a useless thing.		Normally, it should be a trump card that the Master, Kiritsugu, should equip. But then, serving as the front line substitute Master Irisviel's protection, he left this utmost defensive Noble Phantasm in the hands of his wife. Anyway, if its real owner Saber wasn't near supporting prana, the sheath wouldn't have any properties. To Kiritsugu, who decided from the start to act separately from Saber, it was a useless thing.

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	"Woman, I will ask you a question."		"Woman, I will ask you a question."
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	"But it's not only me who is protecting Kiritsugu... right, Miss Maiya?"		"But it's not only me who is protecting Kiritsugu... right, Miss Maiya?"

	~~Because~~ Maiya had ~~been~~ anesthetized in ~~the~~ preparation ~~before~~ healing her ~~pained expression had become serene~~. She hadn't regained consciousness yet, and without the usual rejecting, sinister expression on her sleeping face, she just seemed an innocent girl.		Maiya's pained expression had become serene because of being anesthetized in preparation for healing her. She hadn't regained consciousness yet, and without the usual rejecting, sinister expression on her sleeping face, she just seemed an innocent girl.

	She should hate her. Irisviel wasn't inhuman anymore. Because her soul became one of a woman, a wife who loved a man.		She should hate her. Irisviel wasn't inhuman anymore. Because her soul became one of a woman, a wife who loved a man.
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	After setting a new oath, Irisviel began to concentrate on healing Maiya's bruised body.		After setting a new oath, Irisviel began to concentrate on healing Maiya's bruised body.

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	Kirei threw off the growing suspicions in his heart, as if escaping from those thoughts, and gritted his teeth as he ran through the forest alone.		Kirei threw off the growing suspicions in his heart, as if escaping from those thoughts, and gritted his teeth as he ran through the forest alone.

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	Kirei was really interested in this question's answer. Who was the person who set such a pointless obstacle in his path to Kiritsugu. That truth is very important for him.		Kirei was really interested in this question's answer. Who was the person who set such a pointless obstacle in his path to Kiritsugu. That truth is very important for him.

	But Kirei did ~~saw~~ through one thing. No matter how he searched for them, there were no Command Seals on the body of the homunculus. She was not any Servant's Master. This recent, rash move was one that no Master would do.		But Kirei did see through one thing. No matter how he searched for them, there were no Command Seals on the body of the homunculus. She was not any Servant's Master. This recent, rash move was one that no Master would do.

	In that case, it really was like what he and Tokiomi had known from the very beginning – Emiya Kiritsugu was indeed Saber's master, and these women were merely his pawns.		In that case, it really was like what he and Tokiomi had known from the very beginning – Emiya Kiritsugu was indeed Saber's master, and these women were merely his pawns.

64.59.144.87: /* -l30:32:15 */ "miss" is being used to address Maiya as a title, so it needs to be capitalized. Hisau is spelt incorrectly.

2009-04-23T08:15:13Z

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	This wasn't the end. Next time, Kirei will challenge Emiya Kiritsugu again.		This wasn't the end. Next time, Kirei will challenge Emiya Kiritsugu again.

	"But it's not only me who is protecting Kiritsugu... right, ~~miss~~ Maiya?"		"But it's not only me who is protecting Kiritsugu... right, Miss Maiya?"

	Because Maiya had been anesthetized in the preparation before healing her pained expression had become serene. She hadn't regained consciousness yet, and without the usual rejecting, sinister expression on her sleeping face, she just seemed an innocent girl.		Because Maiya had been anesthetized in the preparation before healing her pained expression had become serene. She hadn't regained consciousness yet, and without the usual rejecting, sinister expression on her sleeping face, she just seemed an innocent girl.

	She should hate her. Irisviel wasn't inhuman anymore. Because her soul became one of a woman, a wife who loved a man.		She should hate her. Irisviel wasn't inhuman anymore. Because her soul became one of a woman, a wife who loved a man.
	But now, Irisviel must thank ~~Hissau~~ Maiya. Because it was Maiya who told Irisviel her objectives in this War.		But now, Irisviel must thank Hisau Maiya. Because it was Maiya who told Irisviel her objectives in this War.

	"Next time we must win. We'll protect him together..."		"Next time we must win. We'll protect him together..."

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2009-04-23T08:11:39Z

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	"He escaped. If only I was here a bit earlier, this wouldn't have happened."		"He escaped. If only I was here a bit earlier, this wouldn't have happened."

	"...and ~~miss~~ Maiya?..."		"...and Miss Maiya?..."

	"Although she's also heavily wounded, they aren't life threatening. Yours are worse! The amount of blood coming out from this -		"Although she's also heavily wounded, they aren't life threatening. Yours are worse! The amount of blood coming out from this -

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	Irisviel heard someone calling for her from far away, and dimly opened her eyes.		Irisviel heard someone calling for her from far away, and dimly opened her eyes.

Brynhilde at 23:50, 2 April 2009

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Flamerare at 13:16, 2 April 2009

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	Kirei used one hand to grasp and softly raise the silent ~~Einsbern~~'s homunculus. Her statue-like, demure and beautiful face was torn apart by the grief inside her.		Kirei used one hand to grasp and softly raise the silent Einzbern's homunculus. Her statue-like, demure and beautiful face was torn apart by the grief inside her.

	"I'll ask once again. Woman, under whose orders you two fought me?"		"I'll ask once again. Woman, under whose orders you two fought me?"
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	If it was Kiritsugu who commanded these women to fight him, then he would have underestimated him. These women, as adversaries, were defeated by him without much effort.		If it was Kiritsugu who commanded these women to fight him, then he would have underestimated him. These women, as adversaries, were defeated by him without much effort.

	There was also the possibility that someone else had ordered this. The main goal for the ~~Einsbern~~ was to conceal Kiritsugu, as a Master. For this purpose they would sacrifice anything. They were probably willing to sacrifice lives just to gain some time.		There was also the possibility that someone else had ordered this. The main goal for the Einzbern was to conceal Kiritsugu, as a Master. For this purpose they would sacrifice anything. They were probably willing to sacrifice lives just to gain some time.

	Still, every possibility led to this one question.		Still, every possibility led to this one question.

	Kirei carefully looked again at the face of the silver haired girl who was gasping for oxygen. It was a doll-like face, too beautiful and well-crafted. Her red pupils were like rubies. She was exactly like the portrait of the "Lady of Winter", Lizleihi Justizia von ~~Einsbern~~ that was passed down through the ages.		Kirei carefully looked again at the face of the silver haired girl who was gasping for oxygen. It was a doll-like face, too beautiful and well-crafted. Her red pupils were like rubies. She was exactly like the portrait of the "Lady of Winter", Lizleihi Justizia von Einzbern that was passed down through the ages.

	This homunculus wasn't a Master, but she still participated in the Holy Grail War. So she should be the marionette with the responsibility of being the "Grail Vessel". Then she should be a being of great importance in the final stages of the Holy Grail War. To send such a pawn to the front line of the war, and expose her in midst of danger, it's definitely not a foolish move made by amateurs due to a lack of manpower.		This homunculus wasn't a Master, but she still participated in the Holy Grail War. So she should be the marionette with the responsibility of being the "Grail Vessel". Then she should be a being of great importance in the final stages of the Holy Grail War. To send such a pawn to the front line of the war, and expose her in midst of danger, it's definitely not a foolish move made by amateurs due to a lack of manpower.
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	That was true hatred. Their killing intent were definitely not coming from their sense of duty or doing their job.		That was true hatred. Their killing intent were definitely not coming from their sense of duty or doing their job.

	Those women were not trying to achieve victory for the ~~Einsberns~~, but instead they were protecting that man, Emiya Kiritsugu. If it was the former, both women would probably be in the city with Kiritsugu, fighting their enemies. They didn't use this sort of steadfast battle tactics, but instead they were putting aside Kiritsugu and advancing defensively.		Those women were not trying to achieve victory for the Einzberns, but instead they were protecting that man, Emiya Kiritsugu. If it was the former, both women would probably be in the city with Kiritsugu, fighting their enemies. They didn't use this sort of steadfast battle tactics, but instead they were putting aside Kiritsugu and advancing defensively.

	Even staying away from Emiya Kiritsugu, they were still willing to protect him. With a persistent desire to win a battle that can't be won.		Even staying away from Emiya Kiritsugu, they were still willing to protect him. With a persistent desire to win a battle that can't be won.
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	"It's actually thanks to you, Saber..."		"It's actually thanks to you, Saber..."

	Although Irisviel's body, from magecraft's perspective, is artificial, the art of self-healing when the practitioner is unconscious wasn’t added in. What healed her was a miracle that had nothing to do with ~~Einsbern~~'s magecraft.		Although Irisviel's body, from magecraft's perspective, is artificial, the art of self-healing when the practitioner is unconscious wasn’t added in. What healed her was a miracle that had nothing to do with Einzbern's magecraft.

	The Noble Phantasm Avalon • All is a Distant Utopia – it heals all it's bearer's wounds, and even stops his aging. The sheath of the holy sword Excalibur. The artifact used back at the ~~Einsbern~~'s castle to summon Heroic Spirit Arturia was now sealed inside Irisviel as a conceptual weapon.		The Noble Phantasm Avalon • All is a Distant Utopia – it heals all it's bearer's wounds, and even stops his aging. The sheath of the holy sword Excalibur. The artifact used back at the Einzbern's castle to summon Heroic Spirit Arturia was now sealed inside Irisviel as a conceptual weapon.

	Normally, it should be a trump card that the Master, Kiritsugu, should equip. But then, serving as the front line substitute Master Irisviel's protection, he left this utmost defensive Noble Phantasm in the hands of his wife. Anyway, if its real owner Saber wasn't near supporting prana, the sheath wouldn't have any properties. To Kiritsugu, who decided from the start to act separately from Saber, it was a useless thing.		Normally, it should be a trump card that the Master, Kiritsugu, should equip. But then, serving as the front line substitute Master Irisviel's protection, he left this utmost defensive Noble Phantasm in the hands of his wife. Anyway, if its real owner Saber wasn't near supporting prana, the sheath wouldn't have any properties. To Kiritsugu, who decided from the start to act separately from Saber, it was a useless thing.