Fate/Zero:Act 8 Part 4 - Revision history

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	''Isn’t this the result you're waiting anxiously for?''		''Isn’t this the result you're waiting anxiously for?''

	''You've already gotten some response from your investigation. Isn't that a sign of a good start?'' Rin planned to go through all suspicious spots in Shinto and check Kotone’s presence one by one. Here, the first place she checked, already has something.		''You've already gotten some response from your investigation. Isn't that a sign of a good start?''

			Rin planned to go through all suspicious spots in Shinto and check Kotone’s presence one by one. Here, the first place she checked, already has something.

	''Come now, let's step into the inside of the alley and check what's there.''		''Come now, let's step into the inside of the alley and check what's there.''
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	But Kariya had no answer to this final call; he walked slowly away, dragging his destroyed left leg. Aoi didn’t have the courage to follow him. Right now, she could only cry alone with her daughter in her arms.		But Kariya had no answer to this final call; he walked slowly away, dragging his destroyed left leg. Aoi didn’t have the courage to follow him. Right now, she could only cry alone with her daughter in her arms.

	Her ~~mother’s~~ tears dropped on Rin’s sweetly sleeping face.		Her motherly tears dropped on Rin’s sweetly sleeping face.

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	Even if she was in there, she wouldn’t be the same Kotone as before.		Even if she was in there, she wouldn’t be the same Kotone as before.

	If she was thinking of finding Kotone in the darkness of Shinto, from the start, Rin should have aimed to find Kotone's ~~** **~~ instead.		If she was thinking of finding Kotone in the darkness of Shinto, from the start, Rin should have aimed to find Kotone's ▉▉▉▉ ▉▉▉▉ instead.

	“NO!!”		“NO!!”

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	Rin had always obeyed her parents’ words, but she couldn’t leave a friend who was in a dangerous situation.		Rin had always obeyed her parents’ words, but she couldn’t leave a friend who was in a dangerous situation.

	And then- no matter what, she only had to go through one sleepless night.		And then - no matter what, she only had to go through one sleepless night.


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	Gathering her courage and pride, Rin told herself she’s not like those fearful normal children. She chased away the cowardice in her heart and started to walk towards the closest cable car station. Fuyuki Shinto is only one station away, and the change she had were just enough for the ticket.		Gathering her courage and pride, Rin told herself she’s not like those fearful normal children. She chased away the cowardice in her heart and started to walk towards the closest cable car station. Fuyuki Shinto is only one station away, and the change she had were just enough for the ticket.

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	She did miss the Fuyuki night air. The icy cold scent of winter was just the right thing to cool down her burning hot skin.		She did miss the Fuyuki night air. The icy cold scent of winter was just the right thing to cool down her burning hot skin.
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2009-06-30T11:39:50Z

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	Tōsaka Rin was prepared.		Tōsaka Rin was prepared.

	Since she was the inheritor of a family of magi, she was ~~bond~~ to walk a path different from that of ordinary girls.		Since she was the inheritor of a family of magi, she was bound to walk a path different from that of ordinary girls.

	There was a very good example beside her: the greatest, most handsome, and most gentle adult she ever knew.		There was a very good example beside her: the greatest, most handsome, and most gentle adult she ever knew.

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2009-06-22T03:06:50Z

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	“What? What’s going on? How come you are here?”		“What? What’s going on? How come you are here?”

	Slightly confused, Aoi asked the childhood ~~sweatheart~~ in front of her continuously. But Kariya didn’t answer any questions, and just continued on the previous topic with a gentle tone.		Slightly confused, Aoi asked the childhood sweetheart in front of her continuously. But Kariya didn’t answer any questions, and just continued on the previous topic with a gentle tone.

	“But, Sakura-chan is fine. Before she becomes like this as well… I must save her and take her out.”		“But, Sakura-chan is fine. Before she becomes like this as well… I must save her and take her out.”
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	Kariya returned to the Matō family, and led his Servant to participate in the Heaven’s Feel.		Kariya returned to the Matō family, and led his Servant to participate in the Heaven’s Feel.

	This means her husband and her childhood ~~sweatheart~~ were about to unleash an extraordinary gruesome slaughter between each other.		This means her husband and her childhood sweetheart were about to unleash an extraordinary gruesome slaughter between each other.

	“… Oh God…”		“… Oh God…”

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	That inescapable, incomprehensible, purely despairing feel of ‘death’.		That inescapable, incomprehensible, purely despairing feel of ‘death’.

	On that day, little Rin felt the essence of magecraft from ~~this~~ experience.		On that day, little Rin felt the essence of magecraft from that experience.

	She couldn’t move; she couldn’t even yell. A terror unbearable to ordinary humans was more than enough to crush such a young girl.		She couldn’t move; she couldn’t even yell. A terror unbearable to ordinary humans was more than enough to crush such a young girl.

	Strange buzzing sounds started by her ears, and Rin thought it was triggered by the icy cold despair pressing down on her heart. Her thoughts were probably starting to destroy her five senses’ perception.		Strange buzzing sounds started by her ears, and Rin thought it was triggered by the icy cold despair pressing down on her heart.

			Her thoughts were probably starting to destroy her five senses’ perception.

	A humming started, monotonous yet maniacal, as if a swamp of giant wasps were raiding towards her…		A humming started, monotonous yet maniacal, as if a swamp of giant wasps were raiding towards her…

	~~And then, a sound~~ louder ~~than the humming approached~~.		The buzzing became steadily louder. ''It was approaching her.''

	In the blink of an eye, the stuff on top of Rin’s head rushed inward like a cover of black fog.		In the blink of an eye, the stuff on top of Rin’s head rushed inward like a cover of black fog.
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	But his right eye eluded a deep loneliness and melancholy.		But his right eye eluded a deep loneliness and melancholy.

	~~It feels like she’s~~ seen this ~~kind of look~~ before –		''I think I have seen this expression somewhere before...''

			Rin thought so before she lost consciousness.


	~~Rin thought before she lost consciousness.~~

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	An hour later, Tōsaka Aoi finally discovered her daughter had disappeared.		An hour later, Tōsaka Aoi finally discovered her daughter had disappeared.
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	Aoi was immediately overwhelmed with regret. Rin mentioned Kotone during dinner, and questioned Aoi about Fuyuki’s current situation.		Aoi was immediately overwhelmed with regret. Rin mentioned Kotone during dinner, and questioned Aoi about Fuyuki’s current situation.

	Back then, Aoi thought she shouldn’t hide anything about it, so she said bluntly – ~~forget about~~ this friend.		Back then, Aoi thought she shouldn’t hide anything about it, so she said bluntly – "Forget this friend already."

	Tokiomi should be informed – but this thought was immediately damped down by her conscience.		Tokiomi should be informed – but this thought was immediately damped down by her conscience.
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	The only one who could protect Rin now was Aoi herself.		The only one who could protect Rin now was Aoi herself.

	~~Rin~~ ran out of the Zenjō house wearing only her household clothes, and galloped on the night state highway with her car.		Aoi ran out of the Zenjō house wearing only her household clothes, and galloped on the night state highway with her car.

	Since she didn’t know exactly where Rin went, then she could only guess her range of movement and check the places she might go to one by one.		Since she didn’t know exactly where Rin went, then she could only guess her range of movement and check the places she might go to one by one.
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	Terror, sadness, and a large amount of confusion made Aoi at a loss for words.		Terror, sadness, and a large amount of confusion made Aoi at a loss for words.

	Kariya returned to the Matō family, ~~leading~~ his Servant to participate in the Heaven’s Feel.		Kariya returned to the Matō family, and led his Servant to participate in the Heaven’s Feel.

	This means her husband and her childhood sweatheart were about to unleash an extraordinary gruesome slaughter between each other.		This means her husband and her childhood sweatheart were about to unleash an extraordinary gruesome slaughter between each other.
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	Her mother’s tears dropped on Rin’s sweetly sleeping face.		Her mother’s tears dropped on Rin’s sweetly sleeping face.



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	In the darkness, a few Assassins traversed in silence, moving to report everything they’ve gathered to Kirei.		In the darkness, a few Assassins traversed in silence, moving to report everything they’ve gathered to Kirei.

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	But even if there were no curfews, there shouldn’t be many citizens who still liked to wonder at night. Nowadays something unwholesome was lurking in the Shinto night; human instincts would have already detected this.		But even if there were no curfews, there shouldn’t be many citizens who still liked to wonder at night. Nowadays something unwholesome was lurking in the Shinto night; human instincts would have already detected this.

	“– Aaa, as I thought.” The red police light lit up further down the street and Rin hid in the shadow of a building in fright. The patrolling police car was driving slowly, searching for any citizen who was walking alone at night. There was no way the police would leave her alone if they see her, and if that happens she wouldn’t be able to go save Kotone.		“– Aaa, as I thought.”

			The red police light lit up further down the street and Rin hid in the shadow of a building in fright. The patrolling police car was driving slowly, searching for any citizen who was walking alone at night. There was no way the police would leave her alone if they see her, and if that happens she wouldn’t be able to go save Kotone.

	Rin finally relaxed as she watched the light move slowly away –		Rin finally relaxed as she watched the light move slowly away –
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	“…”		“…”

	Isn’t ~~that what she wanted to find~~?		''Isn’t this the result you're waiting anxiously for?''

	~~Getting~~ some ~~clues so quickly, this is such~~ a good start. Rin planned to go through all suspicious spots in Shinto and check Kotone’s presence one by one. Here, the first place she checked, already has something.		''You've already gotten some response from your investigation. Isn't that a sign of a good start?'' Rin planned to go through all suspicious spots in Shinto and check Kotone’s presence one by one. Here, the first place she checked, already has something.

	~~Good~~, ~~then it’s better to go up~~ and ~~see what’s~~ there.		''Come now, let's step into the inside of the alley and check what's there.''

	“No.”		“No!”

	Maybe clues ~~concerning~~ Kotone ~~are~~ right there, ~~or maybe~~ Kotone is ~~right~~ there.		''Maybe there are some clues about Kotone right there. Or maybe, Kotone herself is there.''

	“Absolutely not.”		“Absolutely not!”

	There ~~were~~ no ~~reasons~~ to hesitate~~; otherwise she wouldn’t~~ be coming ~~here at all~~. ~~Rin didn’t want to leave her~~ friend ~~alone; moreover,~~ as one of the Tōsaka ~~family, she has to use her courage~~ to prove that ~~she has the right to~~ become ~~her father’s~~ successor ~~in the future~~.		''There's no reason to hesitate. If not, there would be no meaning coming this far. You are not a coward. You would not do things such as abandoning your friend as well. That's because you are one of the Tōsaka with a long and distinguished history. So you have to prove that you're brave and can become your great father's successor.''

	“No no no absolutely not ~~no…”~~		“No no no absolutely not no no no no noooooo…!”

	~~Some thing’s breath spread out from~~ the ~~depth of~~ the ~~alleyway~~, ~~feeling~~ as if ~~a wet scent was rushing~~ towards her ~~face~~.		A wet sound could be heard. ''Splash, splash'', ''Something'' lurking at the deep inside the alley was breathing, as if sneering her, creeping towards her.

	Rin finally realized that this journey of exploration, aimed to recover her best friend, was definitely not as easy to complete as she thought.		Rin finally realized that this journey of exploration, aimed to recover her best friend, was definitely not as easy to complete as she thought.

	Kotone’s figure wasn’t in the depth of the darkness. Even if she was in there, she wouldn’t be the same Kotone as before.		Kotone’s figure wasn’t in the depth of the darkness.

			Even if she was in there, she wouldn’t be the same Kotone as before.

	If ~~Rin~~ was ~~really to recover anything tonight~~, ~~her target~~ should ~~probably not be~~ Kotone ~~but her dead body~~.		If she was thinking of finding Kotone in the darkness of Shinto, from the start, Rin should have aimed to find Kotone's ** ** instead.

	~~“No –~~ ”		“NO!!”

	In fact, Tōsaka Rin ~~possesses~~ excellent aptitude to be a magus.		In fact, Tōsaka Rin possessed excellent aptitude to be a magus.

	She had never seen a demon, nor had she been touched by one, but from mere instinct she could tell she was in a very dangerous situation right now.		She had never seen a demon, nor had she been touched by one, but from mere instinct she could tell she was in a very dangerous situation right now.

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	Rin had always obeyed her parents’ words, but she couldn’t leave a friend who was in a dangerous situation.		Rin had always obeyed her parents’ words, but she couldn’t leave a friend who was in a dangerous situation.

	"And then- no matter what, she only had to go through one sleepless night."		And then- no matter what, she only had to go through one sleepless night.

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	Rin had always obeyed her parents’ words, but she couldn’t leave a friend who was in a dangerous situation.		Rin had always obeyed her parents’ words, but she couldn’t leave a friend who was in a dangerous situation.

	~~Also – there would be~~ only one sleepless night.		"And then- no matter what, she only had to go through one sleepless night."



	Actually, back then Rin only knew parts of the truth, and her mind was not yet mature.		Actually, back then Rin only knew parts of the truth, and her mind was not yet mature.

	Unknown to her, whether due to her sense of duty or the so-called conscience’s call, she was brought into an area that she should never had stepped in, while she herself didn’t realize it at all at that time.		Unknown to her, whether due to her sense of duty or the so-called conscience’s call, she was brought into an area that she should never had stepped in, while she herself didn’t realize it at all at that time.



	Compared to the Tōsaka house, tightly surrounded with bounded fields, it was all too easily escaping from her room in the Zenjō house.		Compared to the Tōsaka house, tightly surrounded with bounded fields, it was all too easily escaping from her room in the Zenjō house.

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	Tōsaka Rin was prepared.		Tōsaka Rin was prepared.

	Since she is the inheritor of a family of magi, she was bond to walk a path different from that of ordinary girls.		Since she was the inheritor of a family of magi, she was bond to walk a path different from that of ordinary girls.

	There was a very good example beside her: the greatest, most handsome, and most gentle adult she ever knew.		There was a very good example beside her: the greatest, most handsome, and most gentle adult she ever knew.
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	Although his throat was already ruined, Aoi felt this voice was familiar.		Although his throat was already ruined, Aoi felt this voice was familiar.

	~~“…Kariya…”~~		“…Kariya-kun…”

	The figure stopped. After a temporary hesitation, he finally took off the scarf and showed his true face.		The figure stopped. After a temporary hesitation, he finally took off the scarf and showed his true face.
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	Slightly confused, Aoi asked the childhood sweatheart in front of her continuously. But Kariya didn’t answer any questions, and just continued on the previous topic with a gentle tone.		Slightly confused, Aoi asked the childhood sweatheart in front of her continuously. But Kariya didn’t answer any questions, and just continued on the previous topic with a gentle tone.

	“But, Sakura is fine. Before she becomes like this as well… I must save her and take her out.”		“But, Sakura-chan is fine. Before she becomes like this as well… I must save her and take her out.”

	“Sakura –”		“Sakura –”
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	Speaking of it, wasn’t it exactly a year ago when Kariya saw Aoi last?		Speaking of it, wasn’t it exactly a year ago when Kariya saw Aoi last?

	“All Zōken wants is the Holy Grail. He promised me he’d release Sakura as long as I help him get the Holy Grail.”		“All Zōken wants is the Holy Grail. He promised me he’d release Sakura-chan as long as I help him get the Holy Grail.”

	The “Holy Grail” Kariya spoke of made Aoi feel an evil chill from nowhere.		The “Holy Grail” Kariya spoke of made Aoi feel an evil chill from nowhere.
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	Kariya ignored Aoi’s lament; he took the meaning of the tears seeping out of her eyes the wrong way.		Kariya ignored Aoi’s lament; he took the meaning of the tears seeping out of her eyes the wrong way.

	“Right now, Sakura doesn’t even want to have hope. So… you must take that child’s place. Aoi, you need to believe instead, pray instead of her. Pray for my victory and Sakura’s future.”		“Right now, Sakura-chan doesn’t even want to have hope. So… you must take that child’s place. Aoi, you need to believe instead, pray instead of her. Pray for my victory and Sakura’s future.”

	The left eye, hollow as the dead, glared at Aoi as if cursing her.		The left eye, hollow as the dead, glared at Aoi as if cursing her.
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	The right eye, belonging to the gentle old friend, gazed at Aoi as if begging her.		The right eye, belonging to the gentle old friend, gazed at Aoi as if begging her.

	“Kariya, do you…”		“Kariya-kun, do you…”

	Want to die?		''Want to die?''

	Want to die ~~by Tokiomi’s hand~~?		''Want to kill Tokiomi and die?''

	Aoi couldn’t ask that. Despair rooted deeply in her heart.		Aoi couldn’t ask that. Despair rooted deeply in her heart.
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	Aoi’s eyes were clutched tightly shut. Kariya’s gentle and agonized voice sounded beside her ears.		Aoi’s eyes were clutched tightly shut. Kariya’s gentle and agonized voice sounded beside her ears.

	“One day, we’d come here to play like before. Rin and Sakura would return to being a pair of good sisters like before… so, Aoi, don’t cry anymore.”		“One day, we’d come here to play like before. Rin-chan and Sakura-chan would return to being a pair of good sisters like before… so, Aoi, don’t cry anymore.”

	“Kariya, wait –”		“Kariya-kun, wait –”

	But Kariya had no answer to this final call; he walked slowly away, dragging his destroyed left leg. Aoi didn’t have the courage to follow him. Right now, she could only cry alone with her daughter in her arms.		But Kariya had no answer to this final call; he walked slowly away, dragging his destroyed left leg. Aoi didn’t have the courage to follow him. Right now, she could only cry alone with her daughter in her arms.