Fate/stay night ~French~ 凛ルート三日目-04.ks - Revision history

Bejarid at 20:17, 4 April 2009

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	[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-04.ks_english Anglais]		[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-04.ks_english Anglais]

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Bejarid at 03:21, 26 March 2009

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	I can't do anything even if I follow them, and Saber should be able to run away if she's by herself.		I can't do anything even if I follow them, and Saber should be able to run away if she's by herself.
	Saber got Berserker away from here.		Saber got Berserker away from here.
	If she was protecting me, I can't stay in this dangerous place forever		If she was protecting me, I can't stay in this dangerous place forever[line4]
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	"Haa... Haa... Haa..."		"Haa... Haa... Haa..."
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	...Anyway, I desperately ran here.		...Anyway, I desperately ran here.
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	""		"[line8]"
	...The living room is just as I left it.		...The living room is just as I left it.
	The air has been motionless ever since Lancer attacked and Tohsaka came here.		The air has been motionless ever since Lancer attacked and Tohsaka came here.
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	No matter who won, I'm sure the battle is over now.		No matter who won, I'm sure the battle is over now.
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	""		"[line8]"
	I should go back.		I should go back.
	When I raise my head to turn the lights on and cheer myself up...		When I raise my head to turn the lights on and cheer myself up...
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	I can tell there's someone in front of me, the one who stabbed my heart, but I can't see very clearly.		I can tell there's someone in front of me, the one who stabbed my heart, but I can't see very clearly.
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	" ? , "		" [line3]? , "
	The one in front of me sneers and tells me I am stupid.		The one in front of me sneers and tells me I am stupid.
	The one in front of me is laughing that I have no way of surviving without my Servant.		The one in front of me is laughing that I have no way of surviving without my Servant.
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	"Oh........"		"Oh[line4]........"
	...That's right.		...That's right.
	Emiya Shirou will be killed the instant Saber is lost.		Emiya Shirou will be killed the instant Saber is lost.
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	It doesn't matter if I'm in the house or if I run away somewhere.		It doesn't matter if I'm in the house or if I run away somewhere.
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	"~~Guh~~"		"G[line3]uh[line4]"
	...My mind starts to fade.		...My mind starts to fade.
	I don't care who it is or what I got stabbed by.		I don't care who it is or what I got stabbed by.
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	Because...		Because...
	The instant my Command Spell lost its brightness, my life was lost as well		The instant my Command Spell lost its brightness, my life was lost as well[line4]
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I can't be a burden on Saber.
I can't do anything even if I follow them, and Saber should be able to run away if she's by herself.
Saber got Berserker away from here.
If she was protecting me, I can't stay in this dangerous place forever
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"Haa... Haa... Haa..."
I passed the bridge from Shinto and ran straight home.
I never looked back as I ran.
I don't know if I was scared of the unknown pursuer or if I felt guilty for leaving Saber behind.
...Anyway, I desperately ran here.
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""
...The living room is just as I left it.
The air has been motionless ever since Lancer attacked and Tohsaka came here.
I go near the restored window.
I find two small pieces of glass on the floor that Tohsaka must have overlooked.
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"...There's no crack in the glass... I wonder how Tohsaka made up for these pieces."
I murmur to myself.
...I don't know why, but I don't feel like turning the lights on.
I hide in the darkness as if to hide my weakness.
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"......"
What I should be thinking about.
What I should say.
I'm running away from these things.
...The people that were here until a few hours ago.
The people who were by my side until a few minutes ago.
I have to ask myself if it was right to leave them behind, but I can't bring myself to get out of the dark.
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The wall clock points to three.
...It's been thirty minutes since then.
No matter who won, I'm sure the battle is over now.
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""
I should go back.
When I raise my head to turn the lights on and cheer myself up...
A sharp pain runs through my left hand.
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"...The Command Spell...?"
The color has faded from my Command Spell.
Even though the shape is still there, the bright light that proves I am Saber's Master has disappeared.
I understand instinctively what that means.
"Saber...!"
I follow my instinct and run out from the darkness.
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I run outside.
I won't make it now.
I know I can't make it, but I start to run back...
And I'm stabbed in the heart by some unknown thing.
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" , "
...I can't hear too well.
I can tell there's someone in front of me, the one who stabbed my heart, but I can't see very clearly.
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" ? , "
The one in front of me sneers and tells me I am stupid.
The one in front of me is laughing that I have no way of surviving without my Servant.
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"Oh........"
...That's right.
Emiya Shirou will be killed the instant Saber is lost.
As I don't have a way to protect myself, I have no way to survive without Saber.
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But I didn't realize that, and I secluded myself.
This is the result.
It doesn't matter if I'm in the house or if I run away somewhere.
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"Guh"
...My mind starts to fade.
I don't care who it is or what I got stabbed by.
It doesn't matter if I die today or tomorrow.
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Because...
The instant my Command Spell lost its brightness, my life was lost as well
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