Fate/stay night ~French~ 凛ルート三日目-05.ks - Revision history

Bejarid at 20:17, 4 April 2009

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	[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-05.ks_english Anglais]		[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-05.ks_english Anglais]

	== ~~Memo Technique~~ ==		== Mémo technique ==

			Script corrigé : [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-05.ks_script Anglais]

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Bejarid at 03:21, 26 March 2009

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	...The battle continues.		...The battle continues.
	Saber is fighting to protect me.		Saber is fighting to protect me.
	~~ThenI~~ should go even if there's nothing I can do.		Then[line3]I should go even if there's nothing I can do.
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	The two Command Spells engraved on my hand...		The two Command Spells engraved on my hand...
	I am standing here after swearing to fight as a Master and shaking hands with Saber.		I am standing here after swearing to fight as a Master and shaking hands with Saber.
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	"~~GeezWhat~~ am I doing...!?"		"Geez[line4]What am I doing...!?"
	I run, ignoring all hesitation and fear.		I run, ignoring all hesitation and fear.
	I'll be killed if I go after them.		[line3]I'll be killed if I go after them.
	I suppress my trembling body with force and obstinacy, and I run up the hill.		I suppress my trembling body with force and obstinacy, and I run up the hill.
	"Get back, Emiya-kun. You'll get in Saber's way if you go any farther."		"Get back, Emiya-kun. You'll get in Saber's way if you go any farther."
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	Tohsaka snorts and hides behind the tree.		Tohsaka snorts and hides behind the tree.
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	Clashing swords.		[line4]Clashing swords.
	Berserker's attacks smash through empty space and only destroy his surroundings.		Berserker's attacks smash through empty space and only destroy his surroundings.
	Between the attacks...		Between the attacks...
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	"Yup. It's suicidal to fight Berserker in a place without cover. That's why Saber chose this place as the battleground. She did it naturally, too. She got Berserker away from you, all the while she pretended to be cornered."		"Yup. It's suicidal to fight Berserker in a place without cover. That's why Saber chose this place as the battleground. She did it naturally, too. She got Berserker away from you, all the while she pretended to be cornered."
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	""		"[line8]"
	...Then...		...Then...
	Saber must have determined that this place was a suitable battlefield when we were walking down the hill.		Saber must have determined that this place was a suitable battlefield when we were walking down the hill.
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	But those words catch my attention.		But those words catch my attention.
	Archer isn't here.		Archer isn't here.
	If he really is an archer, he should not fight hand-to-hand, but		If he really is an archer, he should not fight hand-to-hand, but[line4]
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	"She got him!"		"She got him[line4]!"
	Tohsaka snaps her fingers.		Tohsaka snaps her fingers.
	Just as she said... Saber's sword must have hit Berserker, or Berserker must have lost his footing.		Just as she said... Saber's sword must have hit Berserker, or Berserker must have lost his footing.
	Berserker's body, holding firm until now, loses its balance.		Berserker's body, holding firm until now, loses its balance.
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	""		"[wacky len=9][line7]"
	The beast lashes out desperately.		The beast lashes out desperately.
	Saber dodges it by jumping back, and holds her sword with both hands.		Saber dodges it by jumping back, and holds her sword with both hands.
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	This is it.		[line4]This is it.
	As his desperate attack was dodged, Berserker loses his balance even more,		As his desperate attack was dodged, Berserker loses his balance even more,
	and Saber bends her knees to charge in with all her power.		and Saber bends her knees to charge in with all her power.
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	Right then...		Right then...
	"Archer...? What do you mean, get away...?"		"[line4]Archer...? What do you mean, get away...?"
	I notice Tohsaka's confused voice and sense an intent to kill aimed from a faraway place.		I notice Tohsaka's confused voice and sense an intent to kill aimed from a faraway place.
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	""		"[line8]"
	Behind me.		Behind me.
	I see the knight in red standing on a rooftop hundreds of meters away, readying his bow.		I see the knight in red standing on a rooftop hundreds of meters away, readying his bow.
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	""		"[line8]"
	It's either nausea or a chill.		It's either nausea or a chill.
	He's readying a bow.		He's readying a bow.
	A bow that's not any different from before.		A bow that's not any different from before.
	It cannot even scratch Berserker, even with a direct hit.		It cannot even scratch Berserker, even with a direct hit.
	So there is no need to feel any threat from it		So there is no need to feel any threat from it[line4]
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	""		"[line8]"
	I feel a chill.		[line3]I feel a chill.
	What he is readying in his bow is not an "arrow", but something completely different.		What he is readying in his bow is not an "arrow", but something completely different.
	And his intent to kill isn't just directed at Berserker.		And his intent to kill isn't just directed at Berserker.
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	"Sab"		"Sab[line4]"
	I act instantly.		I act instantly.
	I		I[line3]
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...The battle continues.
Saber is fighting to protect me.
ThenI should go even if there's nothing I can do.
*page1|
The two Command Spells engraved on my hand...
I am standing here after swearing to fight as a Master and shaking hands with Saber.
*page2|
"GeezWhat am I doing...!?"
I run, ignoring all hesitation and fear.
I'll be killed if I go after them.
I suppress my trembling body with force and obstinacy, and I run up the hill.
"Get back, Emiya-kun. You'll get in Saber's way if you go any farther."
I stop as she grabs my shoulder.
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"Did you hear me? I told you that you should keep quiet and watch since Saber's going to win.
...Well, I think you can tell that yourself though."
She must have been hiding behind a tree, as she calls out to me with a calm voice.
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"Huh? Saber will win...?"
Against that monster?
Saber will win against that giant she couldn't even match until now?
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"Heh. You look like you don't believe me.
Why don't you take a look? I don't want to admit this, but your Servant is great in all aspects. Saber should be able to beat Berserker."
Tohsaka snorts and hides behind the tree.
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Clashing swords.
Berserker's attacks smash through empty space and only destroy his surroundings.
Between the attacks...
Within the swinging whirlwind, flying clods, and the rain of broken gravestones, Saber rushes in without even dirtying her armor and attacks Berserker.
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"......"
It is a divine work of utmost excellence.
My fear has disappeared, seeing this battle that is totally impossible for mere humans.
Instead, I am fascinated.
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I could not believe I was in this Holy Grail War thing, and I also had some uneasiness.
But all that is blown away when I see her.
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Dancing swords.
Within the whirlwind of fatal destruction, the knight challenges the enemy without hesitation.
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...Maybe this scene made me accept everything.
No matter what may befall us in the future...
I'm convinced that I will be able to match even a fierce god if I have Saber with me.
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"...I thought so. It was strange, but she blocked Berserker's sword on purpose."
Tohsaka murmurs without emotion.
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"...Was that to lure Berserker here?"
"Yup. It's suicidal to fight Berserker in a place without cover. That's why Saber chose this place as the battleground. She did it naturally, too. She got Berserker away from you, all the while she pretended to be cornered."
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""
...Then...
Saber must have determined that this place was a suitable battlefield when we were walking down the hill.
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"But you can't expect backup in a battle like this.
Our enemy is a monster that even nullifies Archer's arrows.
Backup was meaningless from the start."
Tohsaka murmurs as she watches the battle between Saber and Berserker.
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"...Archer's arrows..."
But those words catch my attention.
Archer isn't here.
If he really is an archer, he should not fight hand-to-hand, but
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"She got him!"
Tohsaka snaps her fingers.
Just as she said... Saber's sword must have hit Berserker, or Berserker must have lost his footing.
Berserker's body, holding firm until now, loses its balance.
*page17|
""
The beast lashes out desperately.
Saber dodges it by jumping back, and holds her sword with both hands.
*page18|
This is it.
As his desperate attack was dodged, Berserker loses his balance even more,
and Saber bends her knees to charge in with all her power.
*page19|
Right then...
"Archer...? What do you mean, get away...?"
I notice Tohsaka's confused voice and sense an intent to kill aimed from a faraway place.
*page20|
""
Behind me.
I see the knight in red standing on a rooftop hundreds of meters away, readying his bow.
*page21|
""
It's either nausea or a chill.
He's readying a bow.
A bow that's not any different from before.
It cannot even scratch Berserker, even with a direct hit.
So there is no need to feel any threat from it
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""
I feel a chill.
What he is readying in his bow is not an "arrow", but something completely different.
And his intent to kill isn't just directed at Berserker.
*page23|
"Sab"
I act instantly.
I
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