Fate/stay night ~French~ 凛ルート三日目-06.ks - Revision history

Bejarid at 20:17, 4 April 2009

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	[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-06.ks_english Anglais]		[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-06.ks_english Anglais]

	== ~~Memo Technique~~ ==		== Mémo technique ==

			Script corrigé : [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Fate/stay_night_%7EFrench%7E_%E5%87%9B%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%88%E4%B8%89%E6%97%A5%E7%9B%AE-06.ks_script Anglais]

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	"No! Come back, Saber!"		"No! Come back, Saber[line4]!"
	When I notice, I'm yelling at the top of my lungs.		When I notice, I'm yelling at the top of my lungs.
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	"Master!?"		"Master[line4]!?"
	She looks dumbfounded.		She looks dumbfounded.
	Saber slows down as she hears my voice.		Saber slows down as she hears my voice.
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	I reach out to her with my hand.		I reach out to her with my hand.
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	"I am...? !?"		"I am...? [line4]!?"
	She must have understood me, as she turns her back to Berserker and jumps away with all her might.		She must have understood me, as she turns her back to Berserker and jumps away with all her might.
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	But at that moment...		But at that moment...
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	""		"[wacky len=15]"
	The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might		The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might[line4]
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	In that instant...		[line4]In that instant...
	All sound is lost.		All sound is lost.
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	"!"		"[line8]!"
	I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself.		I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself.
	Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything.		Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything.
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	I manage to survive the destruction.		I manage to survive the destruction.
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	"Wha"		"Wha[line4]"
	Saber is staring in astonishment.		Saber is staring in astonishment.
	...I'm doing the same as well.		...I'm doing the same as well.
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	But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.		But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
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	"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm"		"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm[line4]"
	Saber's voice is weak.		Saber's voice is weak.
	Sparks are flying through the night air.		Sparks are flying through the night air.
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	...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.		...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
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	""		"[line8]"
	I don't know why it catches my attention so much.		I don't know why it catches my attention so much.
	The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire.		The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire.
	It fades away like candy melting under heat.		It fades away like candy melting under heat.
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	It		It[line4]
	Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.		[line4]Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
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	"Shirou, that was..."		"[line4]Shirou, that was..."
	"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it."		"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it."
	I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.		I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
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	"!"		"[line8]!"
	I shouldn't be able to see him.		I shouldn't be able to see him.
	I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do.		I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do.
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	He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.		He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
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	"Damn him!"		"Damn him[line4]!"
	I feel a headache.		I feel a headache.
	The chill running down my back won't go away.		The chill running down my back won't go away.
	My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit		My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit[line4]
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	"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good."		"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good."
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	The giant starts to retreat through the fire.		The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
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	"What? You're running away after all this?"		"[line3]What? You're running away after all this?"
	"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."		"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
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	"Thank you, Master. I would have been hit by Archer's Noble Phantasm if you had not called out to me."		"Thank you, Master. I would have been hit by Archer's Noble Phantasm if you had not called out to me."
	"~~OOh~~, I'm glad to hear that."		"O[line4]Oh, I'm glad to hear that."
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	"Master...?"		"Master...?"
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	But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.		But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
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	What's left is this throbbing within me.		[line4]What's left is this throbbing within me.
	What's irritating me?		What's irritating me?
	And what am I so concerned about?		And what am I so concerned about?
	...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb.		...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb.
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Bejarid: 凛ルート三日目-06.ks moved to Fate/stay night ~French~ 凛ルート三日目-06.ks

2008-12-26T09:04:09Z

凛ルート三日目-06.ks moved to Fate/stay night ~French~ 凛ルート三日目-06.ks

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"No! Come back, Saber!"
When I notice, I'm yelling at the top of my lungs.
*page1|
"Master!?"
She looks dumbfounded.
Saber slows down as she hears my voice.
But that's not enough. She won't make it if she only slows down...!
*page2|
"It is dangerous, so please stay back...!"
"No, you're in danger! Just come here...!"
I reach out to her with my hand.
*page3|
"I am...? !?"
She must have understood me, as she turns her back to Berserker and jumps away with all her might.
*page4|
Right after her retreat...
He shoots the "arrow".
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Saber jumps back like a spark, and Berserker tries to pursue Saber.
Archer's arrow is fired right between them.
Archer's arrows have not had any effect so far.
The black giant ignores it, as if saying it's not worth blocking.
*page6|
But at that moment...
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""
The black giant turns his back to us and attacks the "arrow" coming at him with all his might
*page8|
In that instant...
All sound is lost.
*page9|
"!"
I throw myself on top of Saber and brace myself.
Maybe I've gone deaf, as I can't hear anything.
All I can feel is the heat burning my skin and the shaking of the ground.
Many things go flying through the air, and a piece of something pierces my back.
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"......!"
I grit my teeth and endure it.
The blinding light must have only lasted for an instant.
I manage to survive the destruction.
*page11|
"Wha"
Saber is staring in astonishment.
...I'm doing the same as well.
I don't know what happened.
Archer's "arrow" razed this cemetery in an instant.
There's a crater at the center of the explosion.
Archer has created this destruction.
But the giant still exists in spite of such abolition.
*page12|
"Berserker... He is unwounded even after taking a direct hit from a Rank-A Noble Phantasm"
Saber's voice is weak.
Sparks are flying through the night air.
The black giant is standing still in the fire, and everybody here watches this terrible spectacle without words.
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The crackling of the flames is the only sound present.
Right when I start to think that this might turn into a big fire...
"Huh...?"
Something rolls towards me with a noise.
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"...A sword?"
No, it is an "arrow".
An arrow with a gorgeous hilt and a spiral blade.
...Even if it's a sword, it is an "arrow" if it's used as a projectile.
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""
I don't know why it catches my attention so much.
The arrow broken by Berserker disappears as if melting into the fire.
It fades away like candy melting under heat.
*page16|
It
Makes me feel like vomiting for some reason.
*page17|
"Shirou, that was..."
"It was Archer's arrow. I don't know anything else about it."
I raise my head to look at the distant Archer.
*page18|
"!"
I shouldn't be able to see him.
I shouldn't be able to see him, but I do.
He's smiling.
He's smiling as if to tell me that he wasn't aiming just at Berserker.
*page19|
"Damn him!"
I feel a headache.
The chill running down my back won't go away.
My spine is burning like it does when I fail to create a Magic Circuit
*page20|
"...Hm. I have a better opinion of you, Rin. Your Archer's pretty good."
The girl's cheerful voice echoes through the air.
*page21|
"All right, come back, Berserker. I wanted to get the boring stuff over with first, but I've changed my mind."
...The black shadow wavers.
The giant starts to retreat through the fire.
*page22|
"What? You're running away after all this?"
"Yup, I've changed my mind. I don't want Saber, but I'm interested in Archer now. So I'll let you live for a bit longer."
*page23|
The giant disappears.
The girl giggles.
"Goodbye. Let's play again, Onii-chan."
Saying this, she goes away.
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"......"
The unexpected disaster leaves.
Tohsaka must not intend to follow that girl in spite of what she said.
Even I can tell that the girl let us go.
So I don't think Tohsaka will go and seek out such a reckless fight.
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"Thank you, Master. I would have been hit by Archer's Noble Phantasm if you had not called out to me."
"OOh, I'm glad to hear that."
*page26|
"Master...?"
...What's wrong with me?
Even though I'm not wounded, I feel sick, and my consciousness is...
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"Emiya-kun? You look really pale."
"Master...? Shirou...!"
...My knees buckle.
My vision goes white.
*page28|
"Please pull yourself together! What is going on...!?"
...I feel someone support me as I start to fall.
But the feeling fades as all my senses go away.
*page29|
What's left is this throbbing within me.
What's irritating me?
And what am I so concerned about?
...I'm about to fall unconscious, but my head continues to throb.
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