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Grrarr at 09:28, 5 May 2013

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	I don't need that.		I don't need "that."

	I don't need something that warms my very core.		I don't need something that warms my very core.

	In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea where I numbed my body so that I would no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to ~~feel~~ warmth once more, all my ~~memories of the bitter cold~~ would ~~come rushing back~~.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr--><!-- Hm... it's not just memories, though. The warmth would cure her numbness. -->		In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea where I numbed my body so that I would no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to taste the warmth once more, all my efforts to remain numb would be for naught.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr--><!-- Hm... it's not just memories, though. The warmth would cure her numbness. --><!--Ah, ok - I think I misinterpreted the previous version (So if I happened to feel warmth, I would remember being at such a cold place.). How's this? Still a bit handwavey…-grrarr-->

	Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--><!-- Should be OK --> is my enemy.		Therefore, anyone who tries to give "that" back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--><!-- Should be OK --><!--Cool - added some quotes to line 1 and here to make parallel more obvious-grrarr--> is my enemy.


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	'''Maria Otonashi'''<br />		'''Maria Otonashi'''<br />
	A resolute beauty who pursues 'O', the distributor of the 'boxes'. She is sharp-witted and adept in the art of self-defense, but her extreme idealism prevents her from hurting others. In the endgame of 'Kingdom Royale,~~' she~~ takes on an unexpected ~~attitude toward Kazuki~~.		A resolute beauty who pursues 'O', the distributor of the 'boxes'. She is sharp-witted and adept in the art of self-defense, but her extreme idealism prevents her from hurting others. In the endgame of 'Kingdom Royale', her treatment<!--EEE:or "behavior toward"-grrarr--> of Kazuki takes on an unexpected shift.

	'''Kazuki Hoshino'''<br />		'''Kazuki Hoshino'''<br />
	A completely ordinary student who is abnormally fond of his everyday life; he has become an object of observation for 'O'. In the endgame of 'Kingdom Royale,' he finally discovers a way to ~~clear~~ the game and takes action—but not ~~without problems~~.		A completely ordinary student who is abnormally fond of his everyday life; he has become an object of observation for 'O'. In the endgame of 'Kingdom Royale', he finally discovers a way to beat the game and takes action—but his solution is not flawless.<!--libedit-grr-->

EusthEnoptEron at 08:07, 5 May 2013

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	—Maria Otonashi		—Maria Otonashi


			'''Maria Otonashi'''<br />
			A resolute beauty who pursues 'O', the distributor of the 'boxes'. She is sharp-witted and adept in the art of self-defense, but her extreme idealism prevents her from hurting others. In the endgame of 'Kingdom Royale,' she takes on an unexpected attitude toward Kazuki.

			'''Kazuki Hoshino'''<br />
			A completely ordinary student who is abnormally fond of his everyday life; he has become an object of observation for 'O'. In the endgame of 'Kingdom Royale,' he finally discovers a way to clear the game and takes action—but not without problems.

EusthEnoptEron at 08:02, 5 May 2013

2013-05-05T08:02:53Z

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	I don't need something that warms my very core.		I don't need something that warms my very core.

	In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea~~. There,~~ I numbed my body so that I'd no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to feel warmth once more, all my memories of the bitter cold would come rushing back.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr-->		In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea where I numbed my body so that I would no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to feel warmth once more, all my memories of the bitter cold would come rushing back.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr--><!-- Hm... it's not just memories, though. The warmth would cure her numbness. -->

	Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--> is my enemy.		Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--><!-- Should be OK --> is my enemy.



	~~—Hey~~, Kazuki.		''Hey, Kazuki.''

	~~So you~~ are ~~my enemy~~, ~~huh~~?		We are enemies, aren't we?

	—Maria Otonashi		—Maria Otonashi

Grrarr: at least 1 EEE question; multiple very liberal edits

2013-05-05T04:50:02Z

at least 1 EEE question; multiple very liberal edits

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	I don't need that.		I don't need that.

	I don't need something that warms ~~me up from~~ my core.		I don't need something that warms my very core.

	~~For the sake of being~~ a 'box', I ~~threw myself~~ to the bottom of ~~that~~ sea. ~~Then~~, I numbed my ~~own~~ body ~~to not~~ feel the bitter cold. ~~So if~~ I ~~happened~~ to feel warmth, I would ~~remember being at such a cold place~~.		In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea. There, I numbed my body so that I'd no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to feel warmth once more, all my memories of the bitter cold would come rushing back.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr-->

	Therefore, anyone who tries to do that is my enemy.		Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--> is my enemy.



	~~---Hey~~, Kazuki.		—Hey, Kazuki.

	So you are my enemy, huh?		So you are my enemy, huh?

	~~---Maria~~ Otonashi		—Maria Otonashi

EusthEnoptEron: uploaded a new version of "File:UtsuroNoHako4 5.jpg": Mariaa~

2011-06-15T21:35:57Z

uploaded a new version of "File:UtsuroNoHako4 5.jpg": Mariaa~

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EusthEnoptEron at 16:49, 2 August 2010

2010-08-02T16:49:09Z

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		I don't need that.

		I don't need something that warms me up from my core.

		For the sake of being a 'box', I threw myself to the bottom of that sea. Then, I numbed my own body to not feel the bitter cold. So if I happened to feel warmth, I would remember being at such a cold place.

		Therefore, anyone who tries to do that is my enemy.



		---Hey, Kazuki.

		So you are my enemy, huh?

		---Maria Otonashi

EusthEnoptEron at 10:11, 3 July 2010

2010-07-03T10:11:32Z

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