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EusthEnoptEron: EusthEnoptEron uploaded a new version of "File:UtsuroNoHako5 4.jpg"

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Grrarr at 01:49, 17 June 2013

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	—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.		—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.

	You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but I can assure you that ~~I am telling but the truth~~.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE --><!--EEE: hm, ok - that's messy to deal with. Maybe some kind of scene/line divider so it's clear that it's separate? or is the graphic already separate from the previous bit of text in the actual image? Separately, is this better?-grrarr--><!-- The problem is that the picture doesn't treat it as a different scene. -EEE -->		You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but I can assure you that such doubts are misplaced.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE --><!--EEE: hm, ok - that's messy to deal with. Maybe some kind of scene/line divider so it's clear that it's separate? or is the graphic already separate from the previous bit of text in the actual image? Separately, is this better?-grrarr--><!-- The problem is that the picture doesn't treat it as a different scene. -EEE --><!--EEE: double urg. ok. so does the text above still manage to avoid deviating too far from original context and actual cover text?-grrarr-->

EusthEnoptEron at 21:29, 16 June 2013

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	—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.		—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.

	You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but I can assure you that ~~you're wrong~~.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE --><!--EEE: hm, ok - that's messy to deal with. Maybe some kind of scene/line divider so it's clear that it's separate? or is the graphic already separate from the previous bit of text in the actual image? Separately, is this better?-grrarr-->		You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but I can assure you that I am telling but the truth.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE --><!--EEE: hm, ok - that's messy to deal with. Maybe some kind of scene/line divider so it's clear that it's separate? or is the graphic already separate from the previous bit of text in the actual image? Separately, is this better?-grrarr--><!-- The problem is that the picture doesn't treat it as a different scene. -EEE -->

Grrarr at 20:55, 16 June 2013

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	—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.		—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.

	You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but you ~~may rest assured~~ that I'~~m absolutely sincere~~.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE -->		You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but I can assure you that you're wrong.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE --><!--EEE: hm, ok - that's messy to deal with. Maybe some kind of scene/line divider so it's clear that it's separate? or is the graphic already separate from the previous bit of text in the actual image? Separately, is this better?-grrarr-->

EusthEnoptEron at 20:20, 16 June 2013

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	—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.		—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.

	You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but you may rest assured that I'm absolutely sincere.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr-->.		You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but you may rest assured that I'm absolutely sincere.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr--><!-- This was a bit taken out of context. "You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but let me assure you that this fact will be of no comfort to you." ( -> Furthermore, you may be wondering whether 'Close-Up Goodbye' is an accurate depiction of the past. To answer your question: no, it is not ) -EEE -->

Grrarr at 20:16, 16 June 2013

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	My name is 'A' and I am the guide to this cinema.		My name is 'A' and I am the guide to<!--mildawk-grrarr--> this cinema.

	This place has but one purpose: crushing your 'box'.		This place has but one purpose: crushing your 'box'.

	The ~~list~~ of movies—		The slate of movies—

	'Close-Up Goodbye'		'Close-Up Goodbye'
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	'Piercing at Fifteen'		'Piercing at Fifteen'

	~~—are all~~ intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.		—is intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.

	You seem ~~to be~~ doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but you may rest assured.		You seem doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but you may rest assured that I'm absolutely sincere.<!--EEE:libedit, but also because not sure what the TL means here. Is this correct?-grrarr-->.


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	''''A''''<br />		''''A''''<br />
	An artificial personality that belongs to the 'Wish-Crushing Cinema', the 'box' ~~that is meant~~ to destroy Daiya's. She acts as a guide as the movies are being screened.		An artificial personality that belongs to the 'Wish-Crushing Cinema', the 'box' intended to destroy Daiya's 'box'. She acts as a guide as the movies are being screened.

EusthEnoptEron at 12:58, 16 June 2013

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		My name is 'A' and I am the guide to this cinema.

		This place has but one purpose: crushing your 'box'.

		The list of movies—

		'Close-Up Goodbye'

		'60 Feet and 6 Inches Apart'

		'Repeat, Reset, Reset'

		'Piercing at Fifteen'

		—are all intended to make you abandon your 'wish'.

		You seem to be doubtful, Mr. Oomine, but you may rest assured.


		——'A'


		''''A''''<br />
		An artificial personality that belongs to the 'Wish-Crushing Cinema', the 'box' that is meant to destroy Daiya's. She acts as a guide as the movies are being screened.

EusthEnoptEron: EusthEnoptEron uploaded a new version of "File:UtsuroNoHako5 4.jpg"

2013-03-09T21:37:50Z

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EusthEnoptEron at 22:45, 14 July 2012

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