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Onizuka-gto: Protected "GOTH:GOTH": North American publication and released confirmed [edit=sysop:move=sysop]

2008-10-23T01:15:04Z

Protected "GOTH:GOTH": North American publication and released confirmed [edit=sysop:move=sysop]

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2007-10-13T00:13:55Z

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	What does the criminal ~~thinks~~ of this, I wonder.		What does the criminal think of this, I wonder.

	I had first, exercised my imagination concerning the criminal who had dropped the notebook.		I had first, exercised my imagination concerning the criminal who had dropped the notebook.

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2007-10-12T23:56:29Z

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	"Of course, it's amusing, isn't it?"		"Of course, it's amusing, isn't it?"

	This was Morino's make-believe play. But it was more than just a normal smiling manner, and looking into the mirror, checking her eyelashes type of imitation of a normal female high school student. It was more as if Miguchi Nanami had ~~enroached~~ upon Morino's basic nature.		This was Morino's make-believe play. But it was more than just a normal smiling manner, and looking into the mirror, checking her eyelashes type of imitation of a normal female high school student. It was more as if Miguchi Nanami had encroached upon Morino's basic nature.

	When leaving McDonald's, Morino suddenly and spontaneously took my hand as we walked. She herself didn't notice this until I pointed it out.		When leaving McDonald's, Morino suddenly and spontaneously took my hand as we walked. She herself didn't notice this until I pointed it out.

Jumpyshoes: Minor stuff. Conisdering adding a note for soba.

2007-09-09T00:08:35Z

Minor stuff. Conisdering adding a note for soba.

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	Inside, I felt a little like that too. I also knew it wasn't proper to feel that. Criminals, of course, must be punished. One should not think of them as revolutionaries or artists.		Inside, I felt a little like that too. I also knew it wasn't proper to feel that. Criminals, of course, must be punished. One should not think of them as revolutionaries or artists.

	At the same time, I knew that famous murderers would be ~~worshipped~~ by some abnormal people. I knew that it was wrong to become like that.		At the same time, I knew that famous murderers would be worshiped by some abnormal people. I knew that it was wrong to become like that.

	However, we were in thrall to the horror of deeds of the notebook's owner. This criminal had, in the moments of everyday life, crossed over a line; crushing people's individuality and dignity, and completely destroying the bodies.		However, we were in thrall to the horror of deeds of the notebook's owner. This criminal had, in the moments of everyday life, crossed over a line; crushing people's individuality and dignity, and completely destroying the bodies.

Jumpyshoes: Stuck in the wiki article. I had to guess at what it was.

2007-08-26T23:37:59Z

Stuck in the wiki article. I had to guess at what it was.

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	Kusuda Mitsue had been a high schooler in a neighboring prefecture. She had been last seen by friends who parted with her at the building in front of the station. And then Kusuda Mitsue became the first victim of the bizarre murders, even now able to cause a stir throughout Japan.		Kusuda Mitsue had been a high schooler in a neighboring prefecture. She had been last seen by friends who parted with her at the building in front of the station. And then Kusuda Mitsue became the first victim of the bizarre murders, even now able to cause a stir throughout Japan.

	There had been one more incident with the same modus operandi; they were believed to be serial murders.		There had been one more incident with the same [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Modus_operandi modus operandi]; they were believed to be serial murders.

	"And there's something written about the second victim too."		"And there's something written about the second victim too."

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2007-06-30T22:17:55Z

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	The sky that had been so cloudy before appeared to have cleared. The world outside lit by the rays of the summer sun, appeared white to eyes used to the shop's gloomy illumination. He exited the shop and walked out towards the street, and disappeared into the light.		The sky that had been so cloudy before appeared to have cleared. The world outside lit by the rays of the summer sun, appeared white to eyes used to the shop's gloomy illumination. He exited the shop and walked out towards the street, and disappeared into the light.
	<!-- <the_naming_game> holy symbolism! (sorry, both pun + batman reference intended) -->		<!-- <the_naming_game> holy symbolism! (sorry, both pun batman reference intended) -->

	The woman customer, who had been called a regular customer, rose from the table and stood in front of the cash register in order to pay. After looking around the inside of the shop, she asked me "Where's the owner?", but I merely shook my head.		The woman customer, who had been called a regular customer, rose from the table and stood in front of the cash register in order to pay. After looking around the inside of the shop, she asked me "Where's the owner?", but I merely shook my head.

60.52.178.202: HC here. Same reason for not logging in. Made some minor changes to the infamous 'friends and phone calls' line to make it sound better in English.

2007-06-12T13:28:09Z

HC here. Same reason for not logging in. Made some minor changes to the infamous 'friends and phone calls' line to make it sound better in English.

60.52.178.202: HC here again. You probably know why by now.

2007-06-12T13:23:39Z

HC here again. You probably know why by now.

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	Inside Miguchi Nanami's bag, there were things like makeup, a purse, and a handkerchief. On the train home, I looked through them.		Inside Miguchi Nanami's bag, there were things like makeup, a purse, and a handkerchief. On the train home, I looked through them.

	According to the student card in her purse, I found out that Miguchi Nanami had been a high school student in a neighboring prefecture. Inside the bag, there was also a notebook for sticking photo booth pictures. From her student card, and the [[~~Talk:~~GOTH:~~GOTH~~#photo booth pictures\|photo booth pictures]], I could see what her face had been like when alive.		According to the student card in her purse, I found out that Miguchi Nanami had been a high school student in a neighboring prefecture. Inside the bag, there was also a notebook for sticking photo booth pictures. From her student card, and the [[GOTH:Translator's Notes#photo booth pictures\|photo booth pictures]], I could see what her face had been like when alive.

	Miguchi Nanami's many friends were all smiling in the small photo booth picture.		Miguchi Nanami's many friends were all smiling in the small photo booth picture.
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	Miguchi Nanami and I had not known each other. Still, looking at Morino, I had to wonder if Miguchi Nanami would have created the same impression.		Miguchi Nanami and I had not known each other. Still, looking at Morino, I had to wonder if Miguchi Nanami would have created the same impression.

	Morino placed her elbows on the table, while acting cheerful. She had beside her what was once Miguchi Nanami's bag. Attached to the zipper pull was a [[~~Talk:~~GOTH:~~GOTH~~#keychain mascot\|keychain mascot]]		Morino placed her elbows on the table, while acting cheerful. She had beside her what was once Miguchi Nanami's bag. Attached to the zipper pull was a [[GOTH:Translator's Notes#keychain mascot\|keychain mascot]].

	"So are you planning to stay dressed like that for awhile?"		"So are you planning to stay dressed like that for awhile?"
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	When leaving McDonald's, Morino suddenly and spontaneously took my hand as we walked. She herself didn't notice this until I pointed it out.		When leaving McDonald's, Morino suddenly and spontaneously took my hand as we walked. She herself didn't notice this until I pointed it out.
	~~<!-- <the_naming_game> she didn't realize she had taken his hand. -->~~

	I was almost certain that I was being embraced by the dead Miguchi Nanami.		I was almost certain that I was being embraced by the dead Miguchi Nanami.

60.52.178.214: HC here. Can't edit while logged in. Both the 2 Wristcut edits were done by me too.

2007-06-12T13:21:28Z

HC here. Can't edit while logged in. Both the 2 Wristcut edits were done by me too.

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	After that, we would talk from time to time.		After that, we would talk from time to time.

	Morino only wore black. Everything, from her long, straight hair, to the tips of her shoes, was wrapped in darkness. In stark contrast, her skin was whiter than anyone's I had seen; her hands were as if made of porcelain. There was a small spot under her left eye, in a similar design to that of [[~~Talk:~~GOTH:~~GOTH~~#Pierrot\|Pierrot]], giving her an atmosphere of black magic.		Morino only wore black. Everything, from her long, straight hair, to the tips of her shoes, was wrapped in darkness. In stark contrast, her skin was whiter than anyone's I had seen; her hands were as if made of porcelain. There was a small spot under her left eye, in a similar design to that of [[GOTH:Translator's Notes#Pierrot\|Pierrot]], giving her an atmosphere of black magic.

	It's not that her face was less expressive than that of normal people. For example, when happily reading a book about the horrific murder of 52 women and children in Russia. There was no trace of the deathly green face she had when in the midst of noisy classmates. Rather, her eyes sparkled.		It's not that her face was less expressive than that of normal people. For example, when happily reading a book about the horrific murder of 52 women and children in Russia. There was no trace of the deathly green face she had when in the midst of noisy classmates. Rather, her eyes sparkled.

Jumpyshoes: "She had a somehow cheerful air about her," doesn't make sense, so changed it.

2007-05-28T21:22:42Z

"She had a somehow cheerful air about her," doesn't make sense, so changed it.

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	"Well I know that."		"Well I know that."

	Presenting the notebook to me, she had a ~~somehow~~ cheerful air about her.		Presenting the notebook to me, she somehow had a cheerful air about her.

	I picked the notebook up from my desk. The cover was smooth to the touch.		I picked the notebook up from my desk. The cover was smooth to the touch.

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	I tried calling her, but her cell phone wasn't connected. Did the power get cut off, or was it destroyed maybe?		I tried calling her, but her cell phone wasn't connected. Did the power get cut off, or was it destroyed maybe?

	That night, I called Morino's house. She had told me her home phone number previously. I hadn't been told it in case I wanted to call her home. She had told me previously that her home phone number, unexpectedly, using [[~~Talk:~~GOTH:~~GOTH~~#wordplay\|wordplay]], worked out to a deranged sentence. And so I had remembered that.		That night, I called Morino's house. She had told me her home phone number previously. I hadn't been told it in case I wanted to call her home. She had told me previously that her home phone number, unexpectedly, using [[GOTH:Translator's Notes#wordplay\|wordplay]], worked out to a deranged sentence. And so I had remembered that.
	<!-- <the_naming_game> Arigatou, HolyCow-san. -->		<!-- <the_naming_game> Arigatou, HolyCow-san. -->
	<!-- 彼女の家の番号がたまたまごろ合わせで頭の狂った文章になることを、以前、森野は話していた。 -->		<!-- 彼女の家の番号がたまたまごろ合わせで頭の狂った文章になることを、以前、森野は話していた。 -->
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	<!-- 「そんなにはっきりと否定しなくてもいいのよ。私にはわかってるんだから」 -->		<!-- 「そんなにはっきりと否定しなくてもいいのよ。私にはわかってるんだから」 -->

	Morino's mother had no doubt that I was her daughter's boyfriend. She explained that~~, for~~ her daughter, ~~without any~~ friends ~~who were~~ truly friends, ~~the house~~ getting a telephone call from someone was something that hadn't happened since elementary school times.		Morino's mother had no doubt that I was her daughter's boyfriend. She explained that her daughter, had no friends to be truly called 'friends', and that getting a house telephone call from someone was something that hadn't happened since elementary school times.
	<!-- <the_naming_game> I didn't understand last sentence 100% though the meaning is easy enough to guess at from context -->		<!-- <the_naming_game> I didn't understand last sentence 100% though the meaning is easy enough to guess at from context -->
	<!-- 森野の母親は、僕が娘の恋人であることを疑っていなかった。娘には友達らしい友達がおらず、家にだれかから電話がかかってきたのは小学生のとき以来であることを説明した。 -->		<!-- 森野の母親は、僕が娘の恋人であることを疑っていなかった。娘には友達らしい友達がおらず、家にだれかから電話がかかってきたのは小学生のとき以来であることを説明した。 -->
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	The only ones on the bus were the driver and me. I looked at the route map attached to the inside of the car, talked with the driver; I decided to try a place I thought the criminal might have stopped.		The only ones on the bus were the driver and me. I looked at the route map attached to the inside of the car, talked with the driver; I decided to try a place I thought the criminal might have stopped.

	From the area Morino and I lived, to N mountain, most cars likely went by the [[~~Talk:~~GOTH:~~GOTH~~#prefectural road\|prefectural road]] that passed by N mountain's east side. Originally, there were not many roads that went to N mountain; aside from that prefectural road, there were no others in the area we lived in.		From the area Morino and I lived, to N mountain, most cars likely went by the [[GOTH:Translator's Notes#prefectural road\|prefectural road]] that passed by N mountain's east side. Originally, there were not many roads that went to N mountain; aside from that prefectural road, there were no others in the area we lived in.

	Whatever place the criminal was taking Morino to at N mountain, undoubtedly he must have taken that prefectural road. According to what the driver said, the road the bus was on currently was definitely that prefectural road.		Whatever place the criminal was taking Morino to at N mountain, undoubtedly he must have taken that prefectural road. According to what the driver said, the road the bus was on currently was definitely that prefectural road.