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[Hesitation]

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	"Yes."		"Yes."

	The second I sat down on the passenger seat, Konan began talking in a earnest voice.		The second I sat down on the passenger seat, Konan began talking in an earnest voice.

	The authority he emitted made it seem as though the air of the car had been compressed in a split second, sending the previously peaceful mood away far away.		The authority he emitted made it seem as though the air of the car had been compressed in a split second, sending the previously peaceful mood away far away.

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2011-09-15T23:33:41Z

[Hesitation]

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	«I forgot how cold-hearted you are.»		«I forgot how cold-hearted you are.»

	She had surely realized that mailing me would have done the job. I sensed a kind of unyielding spirit and pride from fact that she still chose to stick to those messages.		She had surely realized that mailing me would have done the job. I sensed a kind of unyielding spirit and pride from the fact that she still chose to stick to those messages.

	By the way, I had indulged myself in a midday nap during that lunch break. Because I would have to deal with her at work after school anyway.		By the way, I had indulged myself in a midday nap during that lunch break. Because I would have to deal with her at work after school anyway.

EusthEnoptEron at 21:23, 13 July 2011

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	I sat down again on the bench and peeked at her seemingly brooding face from the side.		I sat down again on the bench and peeked at her seemingly brooding face from the side.

	"...Konan and I are like brothers, you say? Haven't you also compared Mirai-san and me in a similar way?"		"...Konan-san and I are like brothers, you say? Haven't you also compared Mirai-san and me in a similar way?"

	"Yes, I have. Now that you say it, all three of you resemble each other. Of course I don't mean your looks by that, you understand?"		"Yes, I have. Now that you say it, all three of you resemble each other. Of course I don't mean your looks by that, you understand?"

EusthEnoptEron at 04:54, 12 July 2011

2011-07-12T04:54:04Z

Senile seinen: Yet more word choice, and phrasing with some questions.

2011-07-11T23:22:10Z

Yet more word choice, and phrasing with some questions.

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2011-06-13T04:11:32Z

[Hesitation]

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	"I don't think so," Konan flashed a masterful grin, "But I'm an adult, experienced in the ways of the world and all, you know, so I just can't think as straightly as you do."		"I don't think so," Konan flashed a masterful grin, "But I'm an adult, experienced in the ways of the world and all, you know, so I just can't think as straightly as you do."

	Seeing how he was able to conclude so much just with the little information he had, he deserved his title as a detective. He really ''was'' extremely capable person. He made me understand that once more.		Seeing how he was able to conclude so much just with the little information he had, he deserved his title as a detective. He really ''was'' an extremely capable person. He made me understand that once more.

	I even found myself impatient for more—		I even found myself impatient for more—

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	Konan was in a good humor as always.		Konan was in a good humor as always.

	"What do you want from me this time?"<!-- Who is speaking here? -->		"What do you want from me this time?"<!-- Who is speaking here? --><!-- Nonomiya. The following sentence refers to this dialog, but I left it down there because the "therefore" refers back to the "Konan was in a good humor..." -->

	Therefore I responded purposefully in ill-humor.		Therefore I responded purposefully in ill-humor.
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	I reconsidered that night with the events Konan pointed out in mind.		I reconsidered that night with the events Konan pointed out in mind.

	—It was as though a crumbled block <!-- an apartment building? -->was reconstructed at a terrific speed. And the newly built block had a completely different shape.		—It was as though a crumbled block <!-- an apartment building? --><!-- I think it's more like an abstract image here. -->was reconstructed at a terrific speed. And the newly built block had a completely different shape.

	While crushing his cigarette in the ashtray, he continued, "I think you got it. She assigned the task of discovering the suicide note to you."		While crushing his cigarette in the ashtray, he continued, "I think you got it. She assigned the task of discovering the suicide note to you."
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	Don't talk big like that! You don't know her as well as I do!—I found myself fighting with the urge to shout out all this.		Don't talk big like that! You don't know her as well as I do!—I found myself fighting with the urge to shout out all this.

	What compelled me~~<!--gibts das?--><!-- anscheinend -->~~ that moment was not impatience anymore but raw anger. Hearing someone else talk about her like that irritated me as if having my garden trampled down by strangers.		What compelled me that moment was not impatience anymore but raw anger. Hearing someone else talk about her like that irritated me as if having my garden trampled down by strangers.

	Konan pulled the car onto the sidewalk and smiled "We're there."		Konan pulled the car onto the sidewalk and smiled "We're there."
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	"Why should I need an apology? We have ''not at all'' had an argument with each other, have we?" she answered while sorting one chit after the other.		"Why should I need an apology? We have ''not at all'' had an argument with each other, have we?" she answered while sorting one chit after the other.

	"~~her~~ highness begs to differ, I fear?"		"Her highness begs to differ, I fear?"

	"Just look, does that look to you like she's not angry at you? She couldn't make it more obvious! Now, come on, I'm bothering to act as a go-between for you, so take action and say you're sorry already."		"Just look, does that look to you like she's not angry at you? She couldn't make it more obvious! Now, come on, I'm bothering to act as a go-between for you, so take action and say you're sorry already."
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	"We can consider ourselves lucky to have someone that worries so much about us. Don't you agree?"<!--lucky => an das "lucky I have such classmates" von youko am anfang-->		"We can consider ourselves lucky to have someone that worries so much about us. Don't you agree?"<!--lucky => an das "lucky I have such classmates" von youko am anfang-->

	The sour but refreshing taste of the orange juice soothed my boisterous <!-- I don't like this word, but haven't come up with a better one yet. Original? -->feelings effectively.		The sour but refreshing taste of the orange juice soothed my boisterous <!-- I don't like this word, but haven't come up with a better one yet. Original? --><!-- ささくれ立った感情, meaning he was on the edge, irritated -->feelings effectively.

	"...It's as you say. I'm sorry."		"...It's as you say. I'm sorry."