Ghost Hunt:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Yumemi.sayaka: /* 3 */

2015-09-14T06:55:23Z

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	"Mai's senior..."		"Mai's senior..."

	"Ah, you called me by my [[Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator's_Notes#First ~~Name~~\|first name]]—"		"Ah, you called me by my [[Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator's_Notes#First name\|first name]]—"

	"...Didn't you just do the same thing to me?"		"...Didn't you just do the same thing to me?"
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	Hara-san looked at Bou-san as if he were something dirty, then turned around.		Hara-san looked at Bou-san as if he were something dirty, then turned around.

	This person has a bad personality too—		This person has a bad personality too—


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Yumemi.sayaka: /* Chapter 3 - Storm Warning */

2015-09-09T10:19:56Z

Chapter 3 - Storm Warning

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Krossrd: /* 3 */

2012-08-26T14:23:03Z

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	...What was that, Naru-chan. Do you just go for pretty faces? You don't speak to us with that kind of attitude.		...What was that, Naru-chan. Do you just go for pretty faces? You don't speak to us with that kind of attitude.

	The psychic medium looked at Naru-chan with a surprised expression. "~~Did~~ we...~~meet~~ before?"		The psychic medium looked at Naru-chan with a surprised expression. "Have we...met before?"

	Oh. What an old pickup phrase.		Oh. What an old pickup phrase.

Pao: /* Chapter 3 - Storm Warning */

2010-11-26T09:44:25Z

Chapter 3 - Storm Warning

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	The weather on the second day was really unnerving.		The weather on the second day was really unnerving.

	Today's Friday, and the weekend's almost here~ Plus, the weather's really nice! If I just act like my usual self, then everything will be alright.		Today's Friday, and the weekend's almost here~ Plus, the weather's really nice! If I just act like my usual self then everything will be alright.

	But in reality, I've got a lot of things on my mind to worry about. And it's all that guy's fault. All that narcissist's fault.		But in reality, I've got a lot of things on my mind to worry about. And it's all that guy's fault. All that narcissist's fault.
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	Arghh... What...do...I do? Should I tell her? No, it would just be a waste of time.		Arghh... What...do...I do? Should I tell her? No, it would just be a waste of time.

	I ~~busted~~ out laughing.		I burst out laughing.

	Keiko had a startled look on her face. "Can it be—"		Keiko had a startled look on her face. "Can it be—"
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	"Right!"		"Right!"

	It turned out like this again. Why are you guys so happy...are you idiots? Just because the rival doesn't go to our school doesn't mean that she doesn't go to another one. If he was a student at our school, then you guys can just divide him up or even snatch him from his girlfriend. But how are you gonna deal with a love rival whom you've never met before?		It turned out like this again. Why are you guys so happy...are you idiots? Just because the rival doesn't go to our school doesn't mean that she doesn't go to another one. If he was a student at our school, then you guys can just divide him up or even snatch him from his girlfriend. But how are you gonna deal with a love rival whom you've never met before?

	"Taniyama-san."		"Taniyama-san."
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	"Oh..."		"Oh..."

	"Man, she just likes to be the center of attention. No doubt she likes all the ~~flattering~~ she gets."		"Man, she just likes to be the center of attention. No doubt she likes all the flattery she gets."

	"...Oh."		"...Oh."
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	"How should I say this...could she have fallen in love with Shibuya-san at first sight?"		"How should I say this...could she have fallen in love with Shibuya-san at first sight?"

	"What!" Keiko exclaimed indignantly.		"What!?" Keiko exclaimed indignantly.

	Kuroda-san shot her a hateful look, to which Keiko immediately shut up.		Kuroda-san shot her a hateful look, to which Keiko immediately shut up.
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	"I'm Matsuzaki Ayako. Nice to meet you."		"I'm Matsuzaki Ayako. Nice to meet you."

	Her red lips ~~spreaded~~ into a big smile.		Her red lips spread into a big smile.

	Naru-chan coldly replied, "I have no interest in your name."		Naru-chan coldly replied, "I have no interest in your name."
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	"I have nothing else to add to that."		"I have nothing else to add to that."

	Bou-san coldly laughed. "...The principal also mentioned that he thought he could trust this office because of its prestigious location. He never thought that the head of the investigation would be a little kid. Boy, does he feel duped."		Bou-san coldly laughed. "...The principal also mentioned that he thought he could trust this office because of its prestigious location. He never thought that the head of the investigation would be a little kid. Boy, does he feel duped."

	"Really, now," Naru-chan said in his cold tone.		"Really, now," Naru-chan said in his cold tone.
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	"That's right," Bou-san agreed.		"That's right," Bou-san agreed.

	"An evil spirit or whatnot, is something I can easily exorcise. ...So, the kid can just leave it up to me," Miko-san said, laughing at Naru-chan.		"An evil spirit or whatnot is something I can easily exorcise. ...So, the kid can just leave it up to me," Miko-san said, laughing at Naru-chan.

	"If you could help, then that would be fine," Naru-chan said indifferently.		"If you could help, then that would be fine," Naru-chan said indifferently.
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	What does it matter? Naru-chan is the same; do all psychics have rotten personalities?		What does it matter? Naru-chan is the same; do all psychics have rotten personalities?

	While Miko-san and Bou-san ensued ~~with their argument~~, Naru-chan continued to fiddle with the equipment. What a pain... Taking a glimpse at the playground, I noticed a girl wearing a uniform walking this way.		While Miko-san and Bou-san's argument ensued, Naru-chan continued to fiddle with the equipment. What a pain... Taking a glimpse at the playground, I noticed a girl wearing a uniform walking this way.

	Oh, it's Kuroda-san.		Oh, it's Kuroda-san.
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	Brown turned towards the principal's figure, then said, "Thank ya."		Brown turned towards the principal's figure, then said, "Thank ya."

	When he said it that way, we all ~~busted~~ out laughing again.		When he said it that way, we all burst out laughing again.

	Instead of laughing, Naru-chan wore a stiff expression on his face. "Brown-san, where are you from?"		Instead of laughing, Naru-chan wore a stiff expression on his face. "Brown-san, where are you from?"
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	"Who?! Who taught this guy Japanese!" Bou-san exclaimed, his breathing becoming more and more difficult. "Listen carefully. Kansai-ben is a dialect. I suggest you not speak it anymore, got it? Otherwise it'll seem like you're speaking comic-talk."		"Who?! Who taught this guy Japanese!" Bou-san exclaimed, his breathing becoming more and more difficult. "Listen carefully. Kansai-ben is a dialect. I suggest you not speak it anymore, got it? Otherwise it'll seem like you're speaking comic-talk."

	"Ah," Brown nodded, "If I don' speak, then ever'body can jus' get 'long. Y'all ~~all~~ psychics?"		"Ah," Brown nodded, "If I don' speak, then ever'body can jus' get 'long. Y'all are psychics?"

	...It's still very strange...		...It's still very strange...
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	Naru-chan ignored him.		Naru-chan ignored him.

	Miko-san snorted in contempt. "This is all useless. Little boy, your little show is finished. It's time to ~~put~~ all your things up."		Miko-san snorted in contempt. "This is all useless. Little boy, your little show is finished. It's time to pack all your things up."

	Naru-chan ignored Miko-san.		Naru-chan ignored Miko-san.
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	"That's fine. Just do what you want," Naru-chan answered calmly, his eyes still glued to his computer.		"That's fine. Just do what you want," Naru-chan answered calmly, his eyes still glued to his computer.

	After nearly 10 television sets were stacked on top of each shelf, the TV screens changed. Now they were showing a view of the corridors. Digital numbers and letters flashed incessantly on the screens. A view of the first and second floor could be seen from the TV placed in the entrance hall. All the screens were ~~emersed~~ in blue and green speckles.		After nearly 10 television sets were stacked on top of each shelf, the TV screens changed. Now they were showing a view of the corridors. Digital numbers and letters flashed incessantly on the screens. A view of the first and second floor could be seen from the TV placed in the entrance hall. All the screens were immersed in blue and green speckles.

	"What's this?"		"What's this?"
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	And in the other screen...		And in the other screen...

	I could see the dim classroom deep in the entrance hall. Inside, the shoe cabinet ~~casted~~ off a shadow. And in the middle of the shoe cabinet was a ghost.		I could see the dim classroom deep in the entrance hall. Inside, the shoe cabinet cast off a shadow. And in the middle of the shoe cabinet was a ghost.

	"Naru-chan!" I screamed, pointing at the TV screen of the entrance hall.		"Naru-chan!" I screamed, pointing at the TV screen of the entrance hall.
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	"If it's 'cause of a ghost, then that means the person who died in the house is a Jibakurei," John continued.		"If it's 'cause of a ghost, then that means the person who died in the house is a Jibakurei," John continued.

	"You guys don't ~~think~~ believe it's an earth spirit?" Miko-san asked as she stood up.		"You guys don't believe it's an earth spirit?" Miko-san asked as she stood up.

	"I don't think so. It's Jibakurei," Bou-san said as he rose and stood beside John.		"I don't think so. It's Jibakurei," Bou-san said as he rose and stood beside John.

Sinmay: /* 2 */

2009-02-17T07:14:45Z

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	Hmph. So the principal said that Naru-chan is unreliable? Did he get more ghost hunters to come?		Hmph. So the principal said that Naru-chan is unreliable? Did he get more ghost hunters to come?

	Naru-chan smiled slightly. "Then please teach me, *Senior Teacher."~~[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Dai-Senpai]~~		Naru-chan smiled slightly. "Then please teach me, senior."

	Ayako-san's scowl widened.		Ayako-san's scowl widened.

Vaelis at 10:54, 14 February 2009

2009-02-14T10:54:54Z

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			==Chapter 3 - Storm Warning==

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	Keiko had a startled look on her face. "Can it be—"		Keiko had a startled look on her face. "Can it be—"

	"It's a secret (<3)."		"It's a secret (♥)."

	Hee hee hee. Everything in my heart just flew out. So this is my punishment. First of all, calm down.		Hee hee hee. Everything in my heart just flew out. So this is my punishment. First of all, calm down.

Sinmay: /* 4 */

2009-02-14T04:28:09Z

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	"What do you think, John?" Naru-chan turned around to look at the foreigner.		"What do you think, John?" Naru-chan turned around to look at the foreigner.

	"I'm not sure. Aren't haunted houses usually caused by spirits[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes] turning into ghosts?"		"I'm not sure. Aren't haunted houses usually caused by spirits[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Spoken_English] turning into ghosts?"

	Naru-chan looked at the nail in his hand, then nodded. "Spirit...seirei, ghost is yuurei. Are you listening, Mai?"		Naru-chan looked at the nail in his hand, then nodded. "Spirit...seirei, ghost is yuurei. Are you listening, Mai?"

Sinmay: /* 3 */

2009-02-14T04:26:12Z

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	Brown took a deep breath. "Jabanese be so dif'cult!"		Brown took a deep breath. "Jabanese be so dif'cult!"

	"Hey, kiddo[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes]!" Bou-san shouted aloud. Bou-san saying "kiddo" sure seems strange—		"Hey, kiddo[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Bouzu:_Kiddo]!" Bou-san shouted aloud. Bou-san saying "kiddo" sure seems strange—

	"I'm begging you, please don't speak in that weird Kyoto accent," Bou-san implored.		"I'm begging you, please don't speak in that weird Kyoto accent," Bou-san implored.
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	Nineteen...then that means, he's Naru-chan's senior? This foreigner really does have a baby face...		Nineteen...then that means, he's Naru-chan's senior? This foreigner really does have a baby face...

	"It's best if you don't say 'wate[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes]'," Naru-chan advised, smiling wryly again.		"It's best if you don't say 'wate[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Wate]'," Naru-chan advised, smiling wryly again.

	"If you say boku or watashi, you shouldn't say 'ansan'; otherwise , you'd be changing the meaning to 'you.'"		"If you say boku or watashi, you shouldn't say 'ansan'; otherwise , you'd be changing the meaning to 'you.'"

Sinmay: /* 3 */

2009-02-14T04:24:58Z

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	When I think about the culprit that way... The principal advanced towards us.		When I think about the culprit that way... The principal advanced towards us.

	Typically the principal is sly like a tanuki[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes], while the head instructor is like a fox. This is true in our case, as the principal really does look like a tanuki.		Typically the principal is sly like a tanuki[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Sly_Tanuki], while the head instructor is like a fox. This is true in our case, as the principal really does look like a tanuki.

	Since the principal's coming here, does that mean he has some business with us? An indistinct figure walked beside him.		Since the principal's coming here, does that mean he has some business with us? An indistinct figure walked beside him.
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	Speaking of names, John is a boy's name. So this person is a "he". Ah—he's cute.		Speaking of names, John is a boy's name. So this person is a "he". Ah—he's cute.

	Brown gave us a deep bow. "How y'all doin'?"[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes]		Brown gave us a deep bow. "How y'all doin'?"[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Kansai-ben]

	…………?		…………?
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	This person has a bad personality too—		This person has a bad personality too—


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Sinmay: /* 2 */

2009-02-14T04:23:46Z

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	The man at the side finally started guffawing.		The man at the side finally started guffawing.

	Miko-san's lips distorted. What now? Being called "Oba-san"[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes] by a 16-year old boy. Is there no way to retaliate?		Miko-san's lips distorted. What now? Being called "Oba-san"[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Oba-san] by a 16-year old boy. Is there no way to retaliate?

	The guffawing man proudly added, "She also puts on heavy makeup."		The guffawing man proudly added, "She also puts on heavy makeup."
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	Hmph. So the principal said that Naru-chan is unreliable? Did he get more ghost hunters to come?		Hmph. So the principal said that Naru-chan is unreliable? Did he get more ghost hunters to come?

	Naru-chan smiled slightly. "Then please teach me, *Senior Teacher."[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes]		Naru-chan smiled slightly. "Then please teach me, *Senior Teacher."[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Ghost_Hunt:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Dai-Senpai]

	Ayako-san's scowl widened.		Ayako-san's scowl widened.
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	Not only did this man keep his hair, but he also keeps it hung in a mess on his shoulder and in a messy bundle on his back.		Not only did this man keep his hair, but he also keeps it hung in a mess on his shoulder and in a messy bundle on his back.

	Miko-san ~~lit up a cigarrette and spat out~~, "Law-breaking monk."		Miko-san scoffed, "Law-breaking monk."

	"...But I really did stay at Kouya Mountain. Even though I'm not there right now..." the monk mumbled, his voice carrying a hint of shame.		"...But I really did stay at Kouya Mountain. Even though I'm not there right now..." the monk mumbled, his voice carrying a hint of shame.
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	All of a sudden, Kuroda-san dashed back towards the playground.		All of a sudden, Kuroda-san dashed back towards the playground.


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