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	==Chapter 1==		===Chapter 1===

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	Having forgotten his lonely future for the moment, the spring just starting looked to be exciting.		Having forgotten his lonely future for the moment, the spring just starting looked to be exciting.

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	Having forgotten his lonely future for the moment, the spring just starting looked to be exciting.		Having forgotten his lonely future for the moment, the spring just starting looked to be exciting.

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	Nodding, Yanagisawa rapidly muttered the name of his place. Even though Banri was not from Tokyo, he still recognized the name of the prestigious private school. Over the next four years, the two of them would be attending this private university, but that other school was higher in rank in every possible way.		Nodding, Yanagisawa rapidly muttered the name of his place. Even though Banri was not from Tokyo, he still recognized the name of the prestigious private school. Over the next four years, the two of them would be attending this private university, but that other school was higher in rank in every possible way.

	"Wha? Really? How come you didn't just advance to the university!? If you just stay on the ~~escalator~~<~~ref~~>~~refers to the "~~escalator~~"/"elevator" system, in which graduates from a high school attached to a university can enter it without admission exam~~</~~ref~~> it always works out... What am I saying? Did I just..."		"Wha? Really? How come you didn't just advance to the university!? If you just stay on the <span id="back_escalator">[[Golden Time:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Escalator\|escalator]]</span> it always works out... What am I saying? Did I just..."

	Banri reflexively shut up, stopping himself from running off at the mouth. This is wrong. What a fool he was. He was being insensitive. Maybe it wasn't he ''didn't'', but that ''couldn't'' advance. Suddenly being raised from the depths of solitude, his excitement was slipping out of his control.		Banri reflexively shut up, stopping himself from running off at the mouth. This is wrong. What a fool he was. He was being insensitive. Maybe it wasn't he ''didn't'', but that ''couldn't'' advance. Suddenly being raised from the depths of solitude, his excitement was slipping out of his control.

L.kostas: Changed 7-11 to 7-Eleven, the official name and company logo

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	"Parents these days don't go to college entrance ceremonies!" "That may be so at <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Tokyo Toudai]</span>, but at this place that's overdoing it. Everybody's going to think I'm some sort of mama's boy!" "Absolutely ridiculous!" "Parents don't normally come to college entrance ceremonies!" After Banri's complaints, his mother had returned home the day before. "Well, I've brought this just in case...", she said, then put a companion ticket for the admission ceremony back into her wallet, like it was something precious. He hadn't been all that seriously wishing for her not to come. But then he whined absurdly like a little kid, "I don't want you to come", in what he thought was a normal parent-child relationship.		"Parents these days don't go to college entrance ceremonies!" "That may be so at <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Tokyo Toudai]</span>, but at this place that's overdoing it. Everybody's going to think I'm some sort of mama's boy!" "Absolutely ridiculous!" "Parents don't normally come to college entrance ceremonies!" After Banri's complaints, his mother had returned home the day before. "Well, I've brought this just in case...", she said, then put a companion ticket for the admission ceremony back into her wallet, like it was something precious. He hadn't been all that seriously wishing for her not to come. But then he whined absurdly like a little kid, "I don't want you to come", in what he thought was a normal parent-child relationship.

	And now, having gotten here, already discouraged, but above all, feeling guilty of being disloyal to his parents. '''(!<!-- This sentence needs to be rephrased entirely ~ MatrixM -->)''' It weighed heavily on him. He hadn't even waved. His mother's back had gone through the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaesu Yaesu]</span> north entrance ticket gate, disappearing as he saw her off.		And now, having gotten here, already discouraged, but above all, feeling guilty of being disloyal to his parents. '''(<!-- This sentence needs to be rephrased entirely ~ MatrixM -->)''' It weighed heavily on him. He hadn't even waved. His mother's back had gone through the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaesu Yaesu]</span> north entrance ticket gate, disappearing as he saw her off.

	Without realizing it, he sighed pathetically as he stood still in the entrance, seeing the hair of people descending the steps, laughing together.		Without realizing it, he sighed pathetically as he stood still in the entrance, seeing the hair of people descending the steps, laughing together.
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	Do you really want to eat some ice cream right now? The opening ceremony has just ended, and you want ice cream from a convenience store in the middle of the way to the orientation, when the time is limited? He gazed the back of the left guy's head. "Forget it." You on the left, say it! Just what he was going to do while those guys ate ice cream, he had no idea.		Do you really want to eat some ice cream right now? The opening ceremony has just ended, and you want ice cream from a convenience store in the middle of the way to the orientation, when the time is limited? He gazed the back of the left guy's head. "Forget it." You on the left, say it! Just what he was going to do while those guys ate ice cream, he had no idea.

	"In that case I'll have some too. There ought to be a<span class="plainlinks"> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/7-Eleven 7-11]</span> around here somewhere."		"In that case I'll have some too. There ought to be a<span class="plainlinks"> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/7-Eleven 7-Eleven]</span> around here somewhere."

	"Yeah, there was a 7-11. But where was it, I wonder?"		"Yeah, there was a 7-Eleven. But where was it, I wonder?"

	They didn't hear Banri's silent message. Leaving the slow stream of passersby, the two turned down a narrow side street. This was the time when he should have bidden farewell to them, sticking to the other freshmen. Banri should have done that, but he suffered a lapse in judgment. Going along straight ahead, it wasn't easy to distinguish freshmen from businessmen right away, so without thinking he had gone along with the two down the side street. "Ah ah ah." Ignoring Banri, whose conscience tried quietly to hurry him, those two were saying things like, "Hmm, 7-11, 7-11. Over there? Over here?" Those two stayed cool and collected as they went along unfamiliar streets. Perhaps they wanted to get rid of him... among such doubts, he turned left and right, straying from the right way,		They didn't hear Banri's silent message. Leaving the slow stream of passersby, the two turned down a narrow side street. This was the time when he should have bidden farewell to them, sticking to the other freshmen. Banri should have done that, but he suffered a lapse in judgment. Going along straight ahead, it wasn't easy to distinguish freshmen from businessmen right away, so without thinking he had gone along with the two down the side street. "Ah ah ah." Ignoring Banri, whose conscience tried quietly to hurry him, those two were saying things like, "Hmm, 7-Eleven, 7-Eleven. Over there? Over here?" Those two stayed cool and collected as they went along unfamiliar streets. Perhaps they wanted to get rid of him... among such doubts, he turned left and right, straying from the right way,

	"Ah, it wasn't a 7-11 after all."		"Ah, it wasn't a 7-Eleven after all."

	They were in front of a <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FamilyMart Family Mart]</span>.		They were in front of a <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FamilyMart Family Mart]</span>.

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Hiro Hayase: spun is the past tense of spin

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	Stretching out both hands, index fingers pointing to the sky, he gave a mighty pose, shouting with all his heart.		Stretching out both hands, index fingers pointing to the sky, he gave a mighty pose, shouting with all his heart.

	At almost the same time, somebody ~~spin~~ behind him, his headdress scoring a direct hit on the back of Banri's head. Crack! An easy knockout, he was about to fall clumsily flat on his face --- or so he thought for a moment.		At almost the same time, somebody spun behind him, his headdress scoring a direct hit on the back of Banri's head. Crack! An easy knockout, he was about to fall clumsily flat on his face --- or so he thought for a moment.

	His arm was grabbed hard, he was pulled up.		His arm was grabbed hard, he was pulled up.

Rpapo: Correction to English found by Darklor . . . a German speaker.

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Correction to English found by Darklor . . . a German speaker.

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	Then he realized, after all, that he was alone again.		Then he realized, after all, that he was alone again.

	Left behind in the lecture hall, Banri looked around. Yanagisawa and Kouko's argument had drawn looks, and some glances were still turned towards Banri too. Ill at ~~easy~~, he hurriedly threw the writing instruments left scattered on the chairs, into their envelopes.		Left behind in the lecture hall, Banri looked around. Yanagisawa and Kouko's argument had drawn looks, and some glances were still turned towards Banri too. Ill at ease, he hurriedly threw the writing instruments left scattered on the chairs, into their envelopes.

	"''Yana''-ssan has left everything behind..."		"''Yana''-ssan has left everything behind..."

BladeUnderHeart at 17:53, 8 October 2013

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MatrixM: /* Chapter 1 */

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	"Parents these days don't go to college entrance ceremonies!" "That may be so at Toudai<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Tokyo Toudai]</ref>, but at this place that's overdoing it. Everybody's going to think I'm some sort of mama's boy!" "Absolutely ridiculous!" "Parents don't normally come to college entrance ceremonies!" After Banri's complaints, his mother had returned home the day before. "Well, I've brought this just in case...", she said, then put a companion ticket for the admission ceremony back into her wallet, like it was something precious. He hadn't been all that seriously wishing for her not to come. But then he whined absurdly like a little kid, "I don't want you to come", in what he thought was a normal parent-child relationship.		"Parents these days don't go to college entrance ceremonies!" "That may be so at Toudai<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Tokyo Toudai]</ref>, but at this place that's overdoing it. Everybody's going to think I'm some sort of mama's boy!" "Absolutely ridiculous!" "Parents don't normally come to college entrance ceremonies!" After Banri's complaints, his mother had returned home the day before. "Well, I've brought this just in case...", she said, then put a companion ticket for the admission ceremony back into her wallet, like it was something precious. He hadn't been all that seriously wishing for her not to come. But then he whined absurdly like a little kid, "I don't want you to come", in what he thought was a normal parent-child relationship.

	And now, having gotten here, already discouraged, but above all feeling guilty of being disloyal to his parents. It weighed heavily on him. He hadn't even waved. His mother's back had gone through the Yaesu<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaesu Yaesu]</ref> north entrance ticket gate, disappearing as he saw her off.		And now, having gotten here, already discouraged, but above all, feeling guilty of being disloyal to his parents. '''(!<!-- This sentence needs to be rephrased entirely ~ MatrixM -->)''' It weighed heavily on him. He hadn't even waved. His mother's back had gone through the Yaesu<ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yaesu Yaesu]</ref> north entrance ticket gate, disappearing as he saw her off.

	Without realizing it, he ~~let his breath out~~ pathetically, as he stood still in the entrance, seeing the hair ~~color~~ of people descending the steps, laughing together.		Without realizing it, he sighed pathetically as he stood still in the entrance, seeing the hair of people descending the steps, laughing together.

	From where he stood, he could not see anybody else who was alone. He rubbed his eyes with his middle fingers. Maybe it was pollen, or perhaps lack of sleep, but his eyes were itching strangely. A guy who forgot his handkerchief certainly wouldn't have brought eyedrops with him either.		From where he stood, he could not see anybody else who was alone. He rubbed his eyes with his middle fingers. Maybe it was pollen, or perhaps lack of sleep, but his eyes were itching strangely. A guy who forgot his handkerchief certainly wouldn't have brought eyedrops with him either.

	Things aren't looking good--- yeah, even ~~from now on~~, it ~~looks~~ like things are going to keep on going badly.		Things aren't looking good--- yeah, even as early as today, it looked like things are going to keep on going badly.

	"You gonna ride the train? Or walk?"		"You gonna ride the train? Or walk?"

MatrixM: /* Chapter 1 */

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	He dashed from the station, somehow or another arriving at the college entrance ceremony on time. Taking his seat, he composed himself like a perfect freshman while the visitors were welcomed, though he found himself disassociated from the grand occasion. That wasn't from lack of sleep, nor from bedhead.		He dashed from the station, somehow or another arriving at the college entrance ceremony on time. Taking his seat, he composed himself like a perfect freshman while the visitors were welcomed, though he found himself disassociated from the grand occasion. That wasn't from lack of sleep, nor from bedhead.

	It was because he realized, ~~that~~ he was the only one entirely alone.		It was because, he realized, he was the only one entirely alone.

	He wasn't even trying to be observant: the place was noisy the whole time from people talking. It was because everybody else had somebody to talk to. If they'd come up from an affiliated high school, they'd already formed groups of friends, guys and girls together, and if not, they were usually seated with their parents. Usually.		He wasn't even trying to be observant: the place was noisy the whole time from people talking. It was because everybody else had somebody to talk to. If they'd come up from an affiliated high school, they'd already formed groups of friends, guys and girls together, and if not, they were usually seated with their parents. Usually.

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	"''Faufaufaufaufaaaaaa!'' ...am I like this I wonder?"		"''Faufaufaufaufaaaaaa!'' ...am I like this I wonder?"

	Yanagisawa's face went white, as if the blood were draining from his head. Reaching over the desk from the seat right behind and a bit above them, both hands holding his head, there floated the perfect smile of Kaga Kouko. ~~Amongst~~ the sober shades of blue and grey, shining ~~alone~~ white in a lace two-piece dress, there she was.		Yanagisawa's face went white, as if the blood were draining from his head. Reaching over the desk from the seat right behind and a bit above them, both hands holding his head, there floated the perfect smile of Kaga Kouko. Alone amongst the sober shades of blue and grey, shining white in a lace two-piece dress, there she was.

	The whole time - - - she had been just behind them. Probably.		The whole time - - - she had been just behind them. Probably.
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	"What was that for?"		"What was that for?"

	Kouko, still smiling but with a cold voice sharp as a knife, folded her arms. Striking a pose with her chin lifted a bit, she looked down at Yanagisawa. Her large eyes shone like black jewels, mirroring the shadow of her long eyelashes. In all this, she seemed not to have noticed Banri at all.		Kouko, still smiling but with a cold voice as sharp as a knife, folded her arms. Striking a pose with her chin lifted a bit, she looked down at Yanagisawa. Her large eyes shone like black jewels, mirroring the shadow of her long eyelashes. In all this, she seemed not to have noticed Banri at all.

	"Don't you ask that! What in the world are you doing!? Why are you here in this orientation!?"		"Don't you ask that! What in the world are you doing!? Why are you here at this orientation!?"

	"I yielded to your desire and matched mine to it! I enrolled here too."		"I yielded to your desire and matched mine to it! I enrolled here too."
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	Letting out a small sigh, Kouko slid her fingers down her glossy hair which reached below to where her chest swelled out.		Letting out a small sigh, Kouko slid her fingers down her glossy hair which reached below to where her chest swelled out.

	"A small change was definitely required, but it wasn't difficult. Student life without you by my side would be meaningless. I had been thinking that you and I would go to college together, taking classes in business so we could take over my father's business. But I don't mind. It's the same for me whether my husband owns his own business or works as a ~~corporation~~ lawyer. Mitsuo, you betrayed me, planning to secretly take an outside examination. When I found out I was surprised, of course... but, rather than making a fuss to forcefully stop you, I thought it better to follow you. So I took almost all the entrance exams you took as well."		"A small change was definitely required, but it wasn't difficult. Student life without you by my side would be meaningless. I had been thinking that you and I would go to college together, taking classes in business so we could take over my father's business. But I don't mind. It's the same for me whether my husband owns his own business or works as a corporate lawyer. Mitsuo, you betrayed me, planning to secretly take an outside examination. When I found out I was surprised, of course... but, rather than making a fuss to forcefully stop you, I thought it better to follow you. So I took almost all the entrance exams you took as well."

	"...How, could the school of my choice, have gotten out... I asked my homeroom teacher to keep it secret, and yet... I didn't tell my friends, not anybody that I was taking the test..."		"...How, could the school of my choice, have gotten out... I asked my homeroom teacher to keep it secret, and yet... I didn't tell my friends, not anybody that I was taking the test..."
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	"''Yana''-ssan has left everything behind..."		"''Yana''-ssan has left everything behind..."

	Gathering under his arm printed handouts of important stuff, syllabi, and various things belonging to Yanagisawa who had forgotten about them, Banri left the lecture hall in long strides up the stairs. They ~~have~~ exchanged their cell-phone numbers and e-mail addresses anyway, so returning them tomorrow won't be a problem.		Gathering under his arm printed handouts of important stuff, syllabi, and various things belonging to Yanagisawa who had forgotten about them, Banri left the lecture hall in long strides up the stairs. They had exchanged their cell-phone numbers and e-mail addresses anyway, so returning them tomorrow won't be a problem.

	Leaving through one of the many doors out to the corridor, he joined the swarm of the other freshmen. Plans for going out, first time introductions, the voices and laughter here and there echoed like a small explosion. The school building was old. The light coming from the flourescent fixtures was going yellow, there were braces here and there to stiffen the walls against earthquakes, and for some reason the windows had iron grillwork fitted to them. It was said that at one time this college had been the site of a violent student demonstration, and those things must have been the remains of that time.		Leaving through one of the many doors out to the corridor, he joined the swarm of the other freshmen. Plans for going out, first time introductions, the voices and laughter here and there echoed like a small explosion. The school building was old. The light coming from the flourescent fixtures was going yellow, there were braces here and there to stiffen the walls against earthquakes, and for some reason the windows had iron grillwork fitted to them. It was said that at one time this college had been the site of a violent student demonstration, and those things must have been the remains of that time.

	Carrying at his side two people's worth of envelopes, Banri slowly descended the steps. In the designated smoking corner of the lobby, some freshmen (it was doubtful whether they turned twenty or not), suits still on, were already hanging out. Glancing sideways, viewing the destination of the smoke they blew, following the guy in front of him, Banri also left the building.		Carrying at his side two people's worth of envelopes, Banri slowly descended the steps. In the designated smoking corner of the lobby, some freshmen (it was doubtful whether they had turned twenty or not), suits still on, were already hanging out. Glancing sideways, viewing the destination of the smoke they blew, following the guy in front of him, Banri also left the building.

	That very moment.		That very moment.