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L.kostas: /* Chapter 1 */ Edited links

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Chapter 1: Edited links

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	Wandering about without a body as a ghost, I drift about like this, always near Banri's side.		Wandering about without a body as a ghost, I drift about like this, always near Banri's side.

	...That shouldn't be all that difficult for a living human being to believe. But as for me, while I was living, I hadn't believed in the existence of ghosts. From my own experience, I've gained an alternate view of the world. Even now I know nothing about the existence of UFOs. Neither do I know anything about the ~~continent of Mu~~<~~ref~~>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mu_(lost_continent)</~~ref~~>. Nor do I know anything about sea serpents nor the Loch Ness Monster. Nor about ESP. But one thing I do know about: the existence of ghosts.		...That shouldn't be all that difficult for a living human being to believe. But as for me, while I was living, I hadn't believed in the existence of ghosts. From my own experience, I've gained an alternate view of the world. Even now I know nothing about the existence of UFOs. Neither do I know anything about the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mu_(lost_continent) continent of Mu]</span>. Nor do I know anything about sea serpents nor the Loch Ness Monster. Nor about ESP. But one thing I do know about: the existence of ghosts.

	While I was alive, my name was Tada Banri. I was Tada Banri. From the time I was born for eighteen years, I existed as Tada Banri.		While I was alive, my name was Tada Banri. I was Tada Banri. From the time I was born for eighteen years, I existed as Tada Banri.
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	"Huh, what's that? That's sparkling something awful!"		"Huh, what's that? That's sparkling something awful!"

	While Mitsuo laughed, he wasn't pointing at his face, but rather at the incredibly flashy mirror in Banri's hand. For something a college male might have, it was too much, overly luxurious like something from ~~Swarovski~~<~~ref~~>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swarovski</~~ref~~>.		While Mitsuo laughed, he wasn't pointing at his face, but rather at the incredibly flashy mirror in Banri's hand. For something a college male might have, it was too much, overly luxurious like something from <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swarovski Swarovski]</span>.

	"...Ah, you noticed, of course? Do you think it strange that I have it?"		"...Ah, you noticed, of course? Do you think it strange that I have it?"
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	The mirror weighed heavily in his hand.		The mirror weighed heavily in his hand.

	Chunky and rounded like a ~~faba bean~~<~~ref~~>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vicia_faba</~~ref~~>, on the silver back in white Swarovski crystal an extravagant rose was depicted. Obviously expensive, completely feminine, it didn't suit Banri in the least.		Chunky and rounded like a <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vicia_faba faba bean]</span>, on the silver back in white Swarovski crystal an extravagant rose was depicted. Obviously expensive, completely feminine, it didn't suit Banri in the least.

	The more he looked at it, the more truly difficult, incredibly complex and extremely hard to describe the feeling became. But Banri carried it around, stuffed in his pocket. He polished it every time fingerprints got on it, and he was careful how he used it.		The more he looked at it, the more truly difficult, incredibly complex and extremely hard to describe the feeling became. But Banri carried it around, stuffed in his pocket. He polished it every time fingerprints got on it, and he was careful how he used it.
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	"Eeee..."		"Eeee..."

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Rpapo: Reverted edits by 189.31.29.226 (talk) to last revision by Perfect Chaos

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Reverted edits by 189.31.29.226 (talk) to last revision by Perfect Chaos

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	Tada Banri was being dumped by a girl.		Tada Banri was being dumped by a girl.

	Because of the overly annoying noise coming from several ~~g nhjuys~~ at five in the afternoon at a Caffe Veloce, Banri was still off guard,		Because of the overly annoying noise coming from several guys at five in the afternoon at a Caffe Veloce, Banri was still off guard,

	"But we only just started going out,"		"But we only just started going out,"

189.31.29.226: /* Golden Time 2: Chapter 1 */

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Golden Time 2: Chapter 1

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	Tada Banri was being dumped by a girl.		Tada Banri was being dumped by a girl.

	Because of the overly annoying noise coming from several ~~guys~~ at five in the afternoon at a Caffe Veloce, Banri was still off guard,		Because of the overly annoying noise coming from several g nhjuys at five in the afternoon at a Caffe Veloce, Banri was still off guard,

	"But we only just started going out,"		"But we only just started going out,"

Perfect Chaos at 09:44, 16 November 2013

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	"Mornin' to you too, Kaga-san! Wow, your clothes are really pretty again today. I knew it, from a distance, I said to myself, 'That's Kaga-san!' "		"Mornin' to you too, Kaga-san! Wow, your clothes are really pretty again today. I knew it, from a distance, I said to myself, 'That's Kaga-san!' "

	Though Chinami was innocently jumping around, Banri, remembered the danger she was in and gasped. Why Oka-chan, why are you acting like that, off guard in front of Kouko? Shouldn't you be careful of those fingernails? The person before you is the snake killer Kaga Kouko!		Though Chinami was innocently jumping around, Banri remembered the danger she was in and gasped. Why Oka-chan, why are you acting like that, off guard in front of Kouko? Shouldn't you be careful of those fingernails? The person before you is the snake killer Kaga Kouko!

	"...Okachi, nami..."		"...Okachi, nami..."
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	Kouko slowly turned around, looking down at Chinami, muttering with an expression like Cleopatra's, tasting poison.		Kouko slowly turned around, looking down at Chinami, muttering with an expression like Cleopatra's, tasting poison.

	"Ahaha, I got the break wrong~! It ~~wasn~~'t Okachi, but rather Oka, Chinami!"		"Ahaha, you got the break wrong~! It's not Okachi, but rather Oka, Chinami!"

	Then why so off guard! Banri casually put his foot out to the side, try to insert himself halfway into the space between Kouko and Chinami.		Then why so off guard! Banri casually put his foot out to the side, try to insert himself halfway into the space between Kouko and Chinami.
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	Having heard such cheery talk, Banri of course,		Having heard such cheery talk, Banri of course,

	"I'll go! Of course I'll go, ~~when we going~~? Thanks for the invitation!"		"I'll go! Of course I'll go, whenever it is? Thanks for the invitation!"

	In good spirits, he couldn't help but raise his hand. What's more, with that hand,		In good spirits, he couldn't help but raise his hand. What's more, with that hand,

Perfect Chaos at 07:25, 16 November 2013

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	"No, you're wrong! Swallowed is the right word! Because while it was trying to bite, it was trying to suck the flesh of my calf into it's throat! It was sucking really hard! Like this!? Such a snake in my back yard!"		"No, you're wrong! Swallowed is the right word! Because while it was trying to bite, it was trying to suck the flesh of my calf into it's throat! It was sucking really hard! Like this!? Such a snake in my back yard!"

	Suddenly Kouko, moving her hands as if she were a udon noodle maker, tossed Banri's hoodie into the air, stretching it ~~our~~ long and thin. "M, my hoodie", Banri moaned,		Suddenly Kouko, moving her hands as if she were a udon noodle maker, tossed Banri's hoodie into the air, stretching it out long and thin. "M, my hoodie", Banri moaned,

	"Give it to me! Because,"		"Give it to me! Because,"

Perfect Chaos at 09:57, 14 November 2013

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	In reality, about this thing, she had said, 'In thanks for your having gone out with me to have fun, and in apology for having gotten drunk and caused you trouble. And, as proof of our friendship from now on', as if it were a blessing over the present. Apparently.		In reality, about this thing, she had said, 'In thanks for your having gone out with me to have fun, and in apology for having gotten drunk and caused you trouble. And, as proof of our friendship from now on', as if it were a blessing over the present. Apparently.

	Written on the black paper bag in white letters was "<span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barneys_New_York ~~Barney's~~ New York]</span>".		Written on the black paper bag in white letters was "<span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barneys_New_York Barneys New York]</span>".

	From the neat and tidy appearance of the paper bag, it looked like it might be something high class, so Banri immediately raised both his hands in front of him. He made that gesture of refusal, and also said with his expression, "You needn't bother with getting such a present."		From the neat and tidy appearance of the paper bag, it looked like it might be something high class, so Banri immediately raised both his hands in front of him. He made that gesture of refusal, and also said with his expression, "You needn't bother with getting such a present."

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	"Mornin' to you too, Kaga-san! Wow, your clothes are really pretty again today. I knew it, from a distance, I said to myself, 'That's Kaga-san!' "		"Mornin' to you too, Kaga-san! Wow, your clothes are really pretty again today. I knew it, from a distance, I said to myself, 'That's Kaga-san!' "

	Though Chinami was innocently jumping around, Banri, remembered the danger she was in and gasped. Why Oka-chan, why are you ~~doing~~ like that, off guard in front of Kouko? Shouldn't you be careful of those fingernails? The person before you is the snake killer Kaga Kouko!		Though Chinami was innocently jumping around, Banri, remembered the danger she was in and gasped. Why Oka-chan, why are you acting like that, off guard in front of Kouko? Shouldn't you be careful of those fingernails? The person before you is the snake killer Kaga Kouko!

	"...Okachi, nami..."		"...Okachi, nami..."
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	Chinami wasn't at all defeated. Slapping her stomach like a sea otter hitting a shellfish,		Chinami wasn't at all defeated. Slapping her stomach like a sea otter hitting a shellfish,

	"You see, I wanted to hear about your ~~schedule~~, Banri and Kaga-san."		"You see, I wanted to hear about your schedules, Banri and Kaga-san."

	On her smooth cheeks, dimples stood out clearly. Chinami smiled happily while Banri and Kouko looked at each other. Sparkling to the point you could almost hear it, those cheerful eyes frankly shone. For some reason or other, Banri and Kouko wordlessly exchanged glances. When their gazes met, he felt he heard a nod... he wanted to think it was his imagination.		On her smooth cheeks, dimples stood out clearly. Chinami smiled happily while Banri and Kouko looked at each other. Sparkling to the point you could almost hear it, those cheerful eyes frankly shone. For some reason or other, Banri and Kouko wordlessly exchanged glances. When their gazes met, he felt he heard a nod... he wanted to think it was his imagination.

Rpapo: Use yen, not dollars.

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Use yen, not dollars.

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	"Fifth period! Tsuka who?! Why take such a little thing as civil law, nobody else took such a thing!"		"Fifth period! Tsuka who?! Why take such a little thing as civil law, nobody else took such a thing!"

	"No, though the guys in the second period were decent... rather, I had already bought the textbook for Logic... ~~$50~~... they change only the color of the binding from year to year, and I heard if you didn't show the professor your brand new textbook, he wouldn't accept you for the class..."		"No, though the guys in the second period were decent... rather, I had already bought the textbook for Logic... 4500 yen... they change only the color of the binding from year to year, and I heard if you didn't show the professor your brand new textbook, he wouldn't accept you for the class..."

	"So expensive! Garbage!"		"So expensive! Garbage!"
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	On her smooth cheeks, dimples stood out clearly. Chinami smiled happily while Banri and Kouko looked at each other. Sparkling to the point you could almost hear it, those cheerful eyes frankly shone. For some reason or other, Banri and Kouko wordlessly exchanged glances. When their gazes met, he felt he heard a nod... he wanted to think it was his imagination.		On her smooth cheeks, dimples stood out clearly. Chinami smiled happily while Banri and Kouko looked at each other. Sparkling to the point you could almost hear it, those cheerful eyes frankly shone. For some reason or other, Banri and Kouko wordlessly exchanged glances. When their gazes met, he felt he heard a nod... he wanted to think it was his imagination.

	"All I wanted to ask was, wouldn't you like to do a drinking party? I was thinking, let's invite you! Hey, look, didn't we talk about it before? We talked about having a party of people with two-syllable last names. Well, it would be called a gathering of people with two-syllable surnames for the time being. I was thinking I wanted to have a drinking party for just the first-years. I was the first to say something, so I'm the organizer. This week or next, wherever, I've planned for a budget of about ~~$35~~. If there's any day that doesn't work because of part time jobs or whatever, we can adjust a bit too. What would be good for you two?"		"All I wanted to ask was, wouldn't you like to do a drinking party? I was thinking, let's invite you! Hey, look, didn't we talk about it before? We talked about having a party of people with two-syllable last names. Well, it would be called a gathering of people with two-syllable surnames for the time being. I was thinking I wanted to have a drinking party for just the first-years. I was the first to say something, so I'm the organizer. This week or next, wherever, I've planned for a budget of about 3000 yen. If there's any day that doesn't work because of part time jobs or whatever, we can adjust a bit too. What would be good for you two?"

	"A drinking party!?"		"A drinking party!?"

BladeUnderHeart at 22:51, 29 October 2012

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Rpapo: Correction of correction.

2012-09-11T21:44:15Z

Correction of correction.

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	Wandering about without a body as a ghost, I drift about like this, always near Banri's side.		Wandering about without a body as a ghost, I drift about like this, always near Banri's side.

	...~~that~~ shouldn't be all that difficult for a living human being to believe. But as for me, while I was living, I hadn't believed in the existence of ghosts. From my own experience, I've gained an alternate view of the world. Even now I know nothing about the existence of UFOs. Neither do I know anything about the continent of Mu<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mu_(lost_continent)</ref>. Nor do I know anything about sea serpents nor the Loch Ness Monster. Nor about ESP. But one thing I do know about: the existence of ghosts.		...That shouldn't be all that difficult for a living human being to believe. But as for me, while I was living, I hadn't believed in the existence of ghosts. From my own experience, I've gained an alternate view of the world. Even now I know nothing about the existence of UFOs. Neither do I know anything about the continent of Mu<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mu_(lost_continent)</ref>. Nor do I know anything about sea serpents nor the Loch Ness Monster. Nor about ESP. But one thing I do know about: the existence of ghosts.

	While I was alive, my name was Tada Banri. I was Tada Banri. From the time I was born for eighteen years, I existed as Tada Banri.		While I was alive, my name was Tada Banri. I was Tada Banri. From the time I was born for eighteen years, I existed as Tada Banri.

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	The first-period Chinese I lecture finished, their busy old Chinese lecturer left the small classroom and then the students followed, one by one, out into the dark corridor. Up to thirty people were allowed to enroll for the language lecture, and it happened that all of them were freshmen.		The first-period Chinese I lecture finished, their busy old Chinese lecturer left the small classroom and then the students followed, one by one, out into the dark corridor. Up to thirty people were allowed to enroll for the language lecture, and it just so happened that all of them were freshmen.

	"Tada Banri, well done."		"Tada Banri, well done."
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	He couldn't look over at Mitsuo. He had no idea what kind of face he was showing.		He couldn't look over at Mitsuo. He had no idea what kind of face he was showing.

	In reality, about this thing, she said, 'In thanks for your having gone out with me to have fun, and in apology for having gotten drunk and caused you trouble. And, as proof of our friendship from now on', as if it were a blessing over the present. Apparently.		In reality, about this thing, she had said, 'In thanks for your having gone out with me to have fun, and in apology for having gotten drunk and caused you trouble. And, as proof of our friendship from now on', as if it were a blessing over the present. Apparently.

	Written on the black paper bag in white letters was "<span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barneys_New_York Barney's New York]</span>".		Written on the black paper bag in white letters was "<span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barneys_New_York Barney's New York]</span>".
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	But, in what was practically a show of strength, Kouko had restrained him deftly. In front of him, her eyes glistening, she had said, 'I wanted to buy it for you, no matter what! Please! Accept it!'. Being asked so very beautifully, there was no way he could not receive it.		But, in what was practically a show of strength, Kouko had restrained him deftly. In front of him, her eyes glistening, she had said, 'I wanted to buy it for you, no matter what! Please! Accept it!'. Being asked so very beautifully, there was no way he could not receive it.

	And then, encouraged to go ahead and remove the wrapping still on it, this beautiful hand-mirror with a rose design was revealed ~~to view~~.		And then, encouraged to go ahead and remove the wrapping still on it, this beautiful hand-mirror with a rose design was revealed.

	However you looked at it, it was girlish thing, and very expensive. This time, for sure, Banri was seriously bewildered. It was a shock. How was such a slight, careless, round-faced, hunched over bumpkin to receive this sparking, shiny, gorgeous rose mirror, fit for a queen?		However you looked at it, it was a girlish thing, and very expensive. This time, for sure, Banri was seriously bewildered. It was a shock. How was such a slight, careless, round-faced, hunched over bumpkin to receive this sparking, shiny, gorgeous rose mirror, fit for a queen?

	Besides, looking at it from his own point of view, even calling it proof of their friendship from now on was rather strange. In other words, this was a memento of his being dumped... he thought, was it a sort of consolation prize?		Besides, looking at it from his own point of view, even calling it proof of their friendship from now on was rather strange. In other words, this was a memento of his being dumped... he thought, was it a sort of consolation prize?
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	But, according to Kouko, 'It may not be Banri-like, but, no matter what I want you to make use of it! Because in this mirror there is meaning, an awful lot of meaning!' --- and so on.		But, according to Kouko, 'It may not be Banri-like, but, no matter what I want you to make use of it! Because in this mirror there is meaning, an awful lot of meaning!' --- and so on.

	Thinking back upon yesterday's give and take with Kouko was a bit late, and to no purpose when right before him, Mitsuo snorted, as if a little disgusted.		Thinking back upon yesterday's give and take with Kouko was a bit late, and to no purpose, when right before him Mitsuo snorted, as if a little disgusted.

	Banri somehow, timidly raised his face. At least, nothing worse was happening.		Banri somehow, timidly raised his face. At least, nothing worse was happening.
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	While comparing Banri and the mirror sidelong, Mitsuo's inquiring voice seemed really doubtful. Well then, first of all, shall we get on with this worthless piece of fiction? It feels like we're making a mountain out of a molehill.		While comparing Banri and the mirror sidelong, Mitsuo's inquiring voice seemed really doubtful. Well then, first of all, shall we get on with this worthless piece of fiction? It feels like we're making a mountain out of a molehill.

	He couldn't help but ask himself, after all, it was something only Banri, by himself, of his own accord, felt. Just a little. What of it?		He couldn't help but ask himself; after all, it was something only Banri, by himself, of his own accord, felt. Just a little. What of it?

	Besides, he couldn't tell the whole truth, he was not under such an obligation. But, he thought, shouldn't he keep his relationship with Kouko entirely to himself~~, right~~? Perhaps? He might have been forgetting how he was managing his relationship with Kouko.		Besides, he couldn't tell the whole truth, he was not under such an obligation. But, he thought, shouldn't he keep his relationship with Kouko entirely to himself? Perhaps? He might have been forgetting about how he was managing his relationship with Kouko.

	In that case, remember you idiot! Surrendering himself to the growing opportunity,		In that case, remember you idiot! Surrendering himself to the growing opportunity,
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	Abbreviate the middle part. ...Besides, he didn't think he was under any obligation to tell it fully.		Abbreviate the middle part. ...Besides, he didn't think he was under any obligation to tell it fully.

	"---Because of that, on Saturday, we went together to get it back. The stuff we forgot, that is. Then, when we were having tea, inside my nose ~~suddenly~~ there was Pettonton, the semi-transparent self-absorbed alien."		"---Because of that, on Saturday, we went together to get it back. The stuff we forgot, that is. Then, when we were having tea, suddenly inside my nose there was Pettonton, the semi-transparent self-absorbed alien."

	He stole a sidelong fleeting glance at Mitsuo's face.		He stole a sidelong fleeting glance at Mitsuo's face.