Golden Time:Volume2 Chapter2 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 01:22, 9 November 2013

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	"Sure seems like it", said Banri, his hand supporting his cheek, blending his sigh with Kouko's, who was also in the same attitude, cheek in hand. His left hand supported the left side of his chin, and his legs were crossed, left foot on top.		"Sure seems like it", said Banri, his hand supporting his cheek, blending his sigh with Kouko's, who was also in the same attitude, cheek in hand. His left hand supported the left side of his chin, and his legs were crossed, left foot on top.

	"Because after all, idealism by itself will not suddenly make you a dancer. In the worst case, even if you are truly a woman refreshed and relieved, moving ~~forwards~~ in life, even so you might have nothing to do with Awa Odori."		"Because after all, idealism by itself will not suddenly make you a dancer. In the worst case, even if you are truly a woman refreshed and relieved, moving forward in life, even so you might have nothing to do with Awa Odori."

	"I was given proof of that today."		"I was given proof of that today."

Hiro Hayase at 00:51, 9 November 2013

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	She chuckled.		She chuckled.

	Her dry lips lighting up with the three syllables, "Fi-nal-ly!", and ~~gaving~~ an embarrassed smile, Kouko rubbed her sticky face with her fingertips. Laughing at the state she was in, and looking like she was trying to clean herself up, she shrugged her shoulders.		Her dry lips lighting up with the three syllables, "Fi-nal-ly!", and giving an embarrassed smile, Kouko rubbed her sticky face with her fingertips. Laughing at the state she was in, and looking like she was trying to clean herself up, she shrugged her shoulders.

	To put it mildly, she was a mess.		To put it mildly, she was a mess.

BladeUnderHeart at 00:26, 11 October 2013

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	His voice was intended to be boundlessly cheerful, but unexpectedly, a bit of irritation got mixed in. As if he'd been plainly attacked, he was not entirely in control of himself.		His voice was intended to be boundlessly cheerful, but unexpectedly, a bit of irritation got mixed in. As if he'd been plainly attacked, he was not entirely in control of himself.

	What on earth was Kouko ~~intending to get~~ worried about? When she doesn't even know anything about the situation. When she doesn't know anything about Linda nor Banri. And where in this self, where in the world, is the part she wants to worry about, so to speak? Or is there? When I haven't even told close friends nor anybody, you want me to explain it all to you, is that what you want me to tell you?		What on earth was Kouko worried about? When she doesn't even know anything about the situation. When she doesn't know anything about Linda nor Banri. And where in this self, where in the world, is the part she wants to worry about, so to speak? Or is there? When I haven't even told close friends nor anybody, you want me to explain it all to you, is that what you want me to tell you?

	Almost, almost you--- taking a breath, ready to open his mouth and tell Kouko something he didn't know for himself,		Almost, almost you--- taking a breath, ready to open his mouth and tell Kouko something he didn't know for himself,
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	Before his eyes was Kouko.		Before his eyes was Kouko.

	The girl to whom he even ~~had~~ confessed his love. Even now, he thought regretfully, his companion. Prettier than anyone else, awkward, but truly a gentle woman.		The girl to whom he had even confessed his love. Even now, he thought regretfully, his companion. Prettier than anyone else, awkward, but truly a gentle woman.

	In complete desperation, he too yelled back "Yo!" with the breath he had been holding. So that nothing else could happen, he pulled himself together, got himself moving, and distributed the sitting cushions like a good underclassman.		In complete desperation, he too yelled back "Yo!" with the breath he had been holding. So that nothing else could happen, he pulled himself together, got himself moving, and distributed the sitting cushions like a good underclassman.
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	Already, Yana-ssan, Oka-chan, they truly had nothing to do with matters. As it was, he himself was happy. He was truly looking forward to being able to go to the party with Kouko.		Already, Yana-ssan, Oka-chan, they truly had nothing to do with matters. As it was, he himself was happy. He was truly looking forward to being able to go to the party with Kouko.

	To where even though ~~even if~~ she had been invited to the get-together by the hated Oka Chinami, she would come. Such a thing--- excellent, maybe there was still hope. His thoughts had gone as far as that.		To where even though she had been invited to the get-together by the hated Oka Chinami, she would come. Such a thing--- excellent, maybe there was still hope. His thoughts had gone as far as that.

	They were together in the club, together dancing, lunching together; they would even be showing up to the drinking party as a pair. Even with how stubbornly she had avoided trying or doing anything, she was coming because he had asked her. She was going out, with him only. It would become common knowledge. That felt good already, absolutely so. Even more than anything up to this point, it made him feel that things were going well.		They were together in the club, together dancing, lunching together; they would even be showing up to the drinking party as a pair. Even with how stubbornly she had avoided trying or doing anything, she was coming because he had asked her. She was going out, with him only. It would become common knowledge. That felt good already, absolutely so. Even more than anything up to this point, it made him feel that things were going well.

Rpapo: Changes while working on manga chapter 17,

2013-08-31T16:12:33Z

Changes while working on manga chapter 17,

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	It was no joke. Just being pitied like this was meaningless. Lowering his spoon into his latte, he spoke distinctly. Although he didn't want to speak, he had to speak this once so she would know.		It was no joke. Just being pitied like this was meaningless. Lowering his spoon into his latte, he spoke distinctly. Although he didn't want to speak, he had to speak this once so she would know.

	"Because it's not a big deal. Because I live like anyone else. Though I cannot say that there isn't anything that worries me, but normally I am not even aware of the memory loss, and it's not really a problem for me, and more than anything else, I want to be so. ~~Therefore~~, could you ~~truly~~ stop ~~speaking~~ like ~~that, like the nurses in the hospital, that is, out of pity?~~"		"Because it's not a big deal. Because I live like anyone else. Though I cannot say that there isn't anything that worries me, but normally I am not even aware of the memory loss, and it's not really a problem for me, and more than anything else, I want to be so. So, could you stop acting like you're nursing somebody pitiful and sick...!"

	"But I didn't mean anything like that...! But, OK. Sure. I understand. If you say so, I won't say anything more. ...I swear by Starbucks."		"But I didn't mean anything like that...! But, OK. Sure. I understand. If you say so, I won't say anything more. ...I swear by Starbucks."

Rpapo: Corrections while working on manga chapter 17.

2013-08-31T16:08:21Z

Corrections while working on manga chapter 17.

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	Mumbling, he avoided the issue. He tried to lower his head as if it hurt. Geh, Banri frowned.		Mumbling, he avoided the issue. He tried to lower his head as if it hurt. Geh, Banri frowned.

	"No, or rather, no way. ~~Seriously, it isn't that.~~"		"No, or rather, no way. There is really no way!"

	It was no joke. Just being pitied like this was meaningless. Lowering his spoon into his latte, he spoke distinctly. Although he didn't want to speak, he had to speak this once so she would know.		It was no joke. Just being pitied like this was meaningless. Lowering his spoon into his latte, he spoke distinctly. Although he didn't want to speak, he had to speak this once so she would know.

Rpapo: Corrections while working on manga chapter 17.

2013-08-31T16:05:54Z

Corrections while working on manga chapter 17.

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	Seeming suddenly surprised by that word, Banri looked back at Kouko. Kouko blinked as if in surprise from his expression,		Seeming suddenly surprised by that word, Banri looked back at Kouko. Kouko blinked as if in surprise from his expression,

	"Eh? But... it's a mess, isn't it? But look, ~~that~~... ~~one of~~ your memories... ~~it isn~~'t..."		"Eh? But... it's a mess, isn't it? But look, those... your memories... they aren't..."

	Mumbling, he avoided the issue. He tried to lower his head as if it hurt. Geh, Banri frowned.		Mumbling, he avoided the issue. He tried to lower his head as if it hurt. Geh, Banri frowned.

Rpapo: Correction while working on manga chapter 17.

2013-08-30T23:53:33Z

Correction while working on manga chapter 17.

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	"Because it's not a big deal. Because I live like anyone else. Though I cannot say that there isn't anything that worries me, but normally I am not even aware of the memory loss, and it's not really a problem for me, and more than anything else, I want to be so. Therefore, could you truly stop speaking like that, like the nurses in the hospital, that is, out of pity?"		"Because it's not a big deal. Because I live like anyone else. Though I cannot say that there isn't anything that worries me, but normally I am not even aware of the memory loss, and it's not really a problem for me, and more than anything else, I want to be so. Therefore, could you truly stop speaking like that, like the nurses in the hospital, that is, out of pity?"

	"~~You can~~'t ~~be planning to be~~ that ~~way~~! But, OK. Sure. ~~Understood~~. If you say so, I won't say anything more. ...I swear by Starbucks."		"But I didn't mean anything like that...! But, OK. Sure. I understand. If you say so, I won't say anything more. ...I swear by Starbucks."

	As if taking an oath, Kouko placed her right hand on her cup, and lifted her left hand. OK then, watching that, Banri took a manly gulp of his slightly cooled latte. That he'd managed to not poke his face with the handle of his spoon, he didn't even realize. But,		As if taking an oath, Kouko placed her right hand on her cup, and lifted her left hand. OK then, watching that, Banri took a manly gulp of his slightly cooled latte. That he'd managed to not poke his face with the handle of his spoon, he didn't even realize. But,

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Rpapo: Dollars to Yen.

2012-11-19T00:46:47Z

Dollars to Yen.

L.kostas: "I am emotional disaster " - "She was going to out"

2012-11-05T12:49:48Z

"I am emotional disaster " - "She was going to out"

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	Then,		Then,

	"...You understand just how entirely useless I am. Even that uselessness you forgive me. Thank you. Besides behaving like a brat, just now I cried. Once again, excuse me. It seems every day I am emotional disaster by your side..."		"...You understand just how entirely useless I am. Even that uselessness you forgive me. Thank you. Besides behaving like a brat, just now I cried. Once again, excuse me. It seems every day I am an emotional disaster by your side..."

	"A 'disaster'?"		"A 'disaster'?"
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	To where even though even if she had been invited to the get-together by the hated Oka Chinami, she would come. Such a thing--- excellent, maybe there was still hope. His thoughts had gone as far as that.		To where even though even if she had been invited to the get-together by the hated Oka Chinami, she would come. Such a thing--- excellent, maybe there was still hope. His thoughts had gone as far as that.

	They were together in the club, together dancing, lunching together; they would even be showing up to the drinking party as a pair. Even with how stubbornly she had avoided trying or doing anything, she was coming because he had asked her. She was going to out, with him only. It would become common knowledge. That felt good already, absolutely so. Even more than anything up to this point, it made him feel that things were going well.		They were together in the club, together dancing, lunching together; they would even be showing up to the drinking party as a pair. Even with how stubbornly she had avoided trying or doing anything, she was coming because he had asked her. She was going out, with him only. It would become common knowledge. That felt good already, absolutely so. Even more than anything up to this point, it made him feel that things were going well.

	So it is. From friendship comes affection. Isn't that the way it always is in this world? If they could be 'good friends', if he carefully built up their friendship like that, if he continued being Kouko's hoped-for perfect friend, then it would eventually work out . . . perhaps.		So it is. From friendship comes affection. Isn't that the way it always is in this world? If they could be 'good friends', if he carefully built up their friendship like that, if he continued being Kouko's hoped-for perfect friend, then it would eventually work out . . . perhaps.

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	"Yes, good thing you showed up. Do you wear these too?"		"Yes, good thing you showed up. Do you wear these too?"

	"There was a guy who wanted to buy these, and all of us were trying them out. But they're oddly small and narrow, and they don't fit anybody. If they fit you, he said you can have them for ~~$65~~."		"There was a guy who wanted to buy these, and all of us were trying them out. But they're oddly small and narrow, and they don't fit anybody. If they fit you, he said you can have them for 5000 yen."

	Banri looked over the sneakers once more, this time carefully, as something to be bought. Might the soles have been made thick enough to stand up to abuse?		Banri looked over the sneakers once more, this time carefully, as something to be bought. Might the soles have been made thick enough to stand up to abuse?
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	"Sixty-five is it...? That's rather steep, I haven't got a part-time job yet... ah, but, these sure are cool."		"Sixty-five is it...? That's rather steep, I haven't got a part-time job yet... ah, but, these sure are cool."

	"Aren't they? They're cool! They haven't been worn but once since they were bought, but even were they used, they might as well have been new. Besides, this is a popular model, shown in magazines. Wouldn't they usually be ~~$250~~ or more?"		"Aren't they? They're cool! They haven't been worn but once since they were bought, but even were they used, they might as well have been new. Besides, this is a popular model, shown in magazines. Wouldn't they usually be 20000 yen or more?"

	Normally over ~~$250~~... Banri took one of the sneakers in each hand, looking them over hard.		Normally over 20000 yen... Banri took one of the sneakers in each hand, looking them over hard.

	So light they felt as if they were floating in his hands, they were <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Balance NewBalance]</span> running shoes.		So light they felt as if they were floating in his hands, they were <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Balance NewBalance]</span> running shoes.

	With regards to footwear at the present time he had: the leather shoes he'd worn for the entrance ceremony, his favorite Jack Purcells he wore nearly every day, some sandals from a convenience store, and then of course his least favorite, some cheap, out of style, no-brand sneakers he wore on rainy days. Just those. As a male college freshman, he was about ready to have another pair of shoes. Besides, if he bought new shoes, what kind would he get for ~~$25~~ to ~~$40~~? These might be good at ~~$65~~.		With regards to footwear at the present time he had: the leather shoes he'd worn for the entrance ceremony, his favorite Jack Purcells he wore nearly every day, some sandals from a convenience store, and then of course his least favorite, some cheap, out of style, no-brand sneakers he wore on rainy days. Just those. As a male college freshman, he was about ready to have another pair of shoes. Besides, if he bought new shoes, what kind would he get for 2000 to 3000 yen? These might be good at 5000 yen.

	"OK then. Well, give it a try!"		"OK then. Well, give it a try!"
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	His feet accustomed to the heavy Jack Purcells, these modern, stylishly and lovingly crafted running shoes, they seemed as if he were wearing wings. Perhaps because he was on tatami mats, the firm souls felt comfortable under his feet. This is good. Absolutely good.		His feet accustomed to the heavy Jack Purcells, these modern, stylishly and lovingly crafted running shoes, they seemed as if he were wearing wings. Perhaps because he was on tatami mats, the firm souls felt comfortable under his feet. This is good. Absolutely good.

	"I've decided! I'll buy them! I want 'em! At ~~$65~~, I'll go for it! But who should I be paying?"		"I've decided! I'll buy them! I want 'em! At 5000 yen, I'll go for it! But who should I be paying?"

	Just as Banri carefully stepped back to the spread-out paper, he saw the entrance door opening. Linda entered first, then some older girls, and then, done changing, Kouko came inside the room.		Just as Banri carefully stepped back to the spread-out paper, he saw the entrance door opening. Linda entered first, then some older girls, and then, done changing, Kouko came inside the room.
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	"What was that we heard!?" "For free!?" "Isn't that favoritism!?" There was an uproar amongst the upperclassmen. "If it's free I want it.", "No, I want it for me.", "Auction it.", "I wouldn't make my little brother wear worn shoes." --- talking altogether like the French palace guards in '<span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Rose_of_Versailles Rose of Versailles]</span>' upon finding something had been completely sold out.		"What was that we heard!?" "For free!?" "Isn't that favoritism!?" There was an uproar amongst the upperclassmen. "If it's free I want it.", "No, I want it for me.", "Auction it.", "I wouldn't make my little brother wear worn shoes." --- talking altogether like the French palace guards in '<span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Rose_of_Versailles Rose of Versailles]</span>' upon finding something had been completely sold out.

	"No way, no, no, way. If you guys buy it, you'll pay me ~~$65~~! Are you underclassmen? Cute, precious, one of only two first-years? This isn't about money. Right?"		"No way, no, no, way. If you guys buy it, you'll pay me 5000 yen! Are you underclassmen? Cute, precious, one of only two first-years? This isn't about money. Right?"

	With a smile, Linda tried to pique Banri's interest.		With a smile, Linda tried to pique Banri's interest.
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	"It's OK, really. I caught a glimpse of them in the store, and they told me they were the very last pair. Even though they didn't have my size, I bought it in a hurry, on impulse. Then, as you might expect, it turned out to be too big for me. Even with the laces tied, my heels rattled around, and they didn't look good. I don't know anything about an auction and any such thing. Still, we're only spiffing up the little guy because he's always unfortunate, you see, but he wears them well. I'm telling you guys, this guy was born for these shoes!"		"It's OK, really. I caught a glimpse of them in the store, and they told me they were the very last pair. Even though they didn't have my size, I bought it in a hurry, on impulse. Then, as you might expect, it turned out to be too big for me. Even with the laces tied, my heels rattled around, and they didn't look good. I don't know anything about an auction and any such thing. Still, we're only spiffing up the little guy because he's always unfortunate, you see, but he wears them well. I'm telling you guys, this guy was born for these shoes!"

	"Ah, then, I'll pay just half price! Please let me pay ~~$33~~, even that would still be an incredible bargain!"		"Ah, then, I'll pay just half price! Please let me pay 25, even that would still be an incredible bargain!"

	While Banri started looking through his stuff for his wallet, Linda took the shoes from Banri's hands.		While Banri started looking through his stuff for his wallet, Linda took the shoes from Banri's hands.