Golden Time:Volume2 Chapter3 - Revision history

BladeUnderHeart at 05:27, 11 October 2013

2013-10-11T05:27:46Z

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	When everybody was making arrangements back in the student hall, at that time, "Today they'll surely be on good terms", was the extent of his plans. He thought so even before Chinami or anybody could put anything in his ears. But it seemed that was not to be. ...By e-mail or any other way, it would have been better to say something, of course. Advising him beforehand, even telling him strangely, "Well, I can't say!", he thought. Just then.		When everybody was making arrangements back in the student hall, at that time, "Today they'll surely be on good terms", was the extent of his plans. He thought so even before Chinami or anybody could put anything in his ears. But it seemed that was not to be. ...By e-mail or any other way, it would have been better to say something, of course. Advising him beforehand, even telling him strangely, "Well, I can't say!", he thought. Just then.

	Kouko too looked over towards Mitsuo, but presently, for some reason, she looked over towards Banri. Being looked at too was embarrassing. Mitsuo, continuing further in, said "since I've come this far, I'm coming in" to ~~the~~ those around, and advanced into the room. Saying "Sorry, coming through", as he passed behind some people, he came closer.		Kouko too looked over towards Mitsuo, but presently, for some reason, she looked over towards Banri. Being looked at too was embarrassing. Mitsuo, continuing further in, said "since I've come this far, I'm coming in" to those around, and advanced into the room. Saying "Sorry, coming through", as he passed behind some people, he came closer.

	"Yana-ssan, well, eh, why don't you sit down there for now."		"Yana-ssan, well, eh, why don't you sit down there for now."
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	"That was exhausting. Really and truly."		"That was exhausting. Really and truly."

	They turned towards Chinami and tried to smile. Chinami kept herself apart from them ~~from~~ just a moment, and returned their smiles. Her flushed cheeks shone roundly. And then, pointing to herself,		They turned towards Chinami and tried to smile. Chinami kept herself apart from them for just a moment, and returned their smiles. Her flushed cheeks shone roundly. And then, pointing to herself,

	"Demon?"		"Demon?"

Rpapo: Changes while working on manga chapter 17.

2013-09-01T10:31:02Z

Changes while working on manga chapter 17.

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	"By the way, hey, umm, ...what about Mitsuo? Didn't he say he was coming?"		"By the way, hey, umm, ...what about Mitsuo? Didn't he say he was coming?"

	"Ah, he may be a little delayed. ~~He wanted~~ to stop by a convenience store beforehand."		"Ah, he may be a little delayed. And so, I want to stop by a convenience store beforehand."

	Hearing Banri's reply, her lightly sparkling eyelids lowered a bit.		Hearing Banri's reply, her lightly sparkling eyelids lowered a bit.

Rpapo: Correction while working on manga chapter 17. "Byoin" means anything from a hospital to a small doctor's office.

2013-09-01T10:28:00Z

Correction while working on manga chapter 17. "Byoin" means anything from a hospital to a small doctor's office.

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	"Really? If so that's good, but did you go to the hospital after all?"		"Really? If so that's good, but did you go to the hospital after all?"

	"At home, ~~because~~ our house functions as a ~~hospital~~. Even my mother, as a doctor, took a look at it for me."		"At home, since our house functions as a clinic. Even my mother, as a doctor, took a look at it for me."

	"Hey, so that's how it is. I see, a hospital. Some sort of arrangement, as you would expect: rather like a princess. Your mother, for sure, wasn't she worried?"		"Hey, so that's how it is. I see, a hospital. Some sort of arrangement, as you would expect: rather like a princess. Your mother, for sure, wasn't she worried?"

L.kostas: minor grammar fix

2013-04-01T14:35:46Z

minor grammar fix

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	Those guys, doing like this, will continue forever with their useless yapping and fighting. Mr. Two Dimensions, long ago already tired of intervening, was amazed.		Those guys, doing like this, will continue forever with their useless yapping and fighting. Mr. Two Dimensions, long ago already tired of intervening, was amazed.

	It had to do with their earlier "agreement" that Banri had told Mitsuo about. That is, that Kouko from the very start wasn't the one who organized the party, nor, it seemed, did she even ask to come. It appeared that Mitsuo started spouting foolishness, which would have been OK if he could have passed it off as a joke, but he simply couldn't do anything so clever for Kouko, and with a "What the!?", she struck back at him, and it turned into a fight. "If Mitsuo in particular has never had the chance to party in all his life, then this agreement has no meaning, does it? As for me, because we do have an pact, then three people can always get together, though for Mitsuo even that is nothing, isn't it? Even being able to do so, it's a matter of 'I have no friends.', right? Such a pitiful looking thing, left entirely alone, I might have pitied him, but by our agreement, because we cannot take you in even if you are at death's door, don't go waiting miserably in line! If that be the case---", and from there one and one, for at least an hour. As for Banri and Mr. Two Dimensions, they disagreed constantly as to which of them they were on better terms with, and as to which was really their friend.		It had to do with their earlier "agreement" that Banri had told Mitsuo about. That is, that Kouko from the very start wasn't the one who organized the party, nor, it seemed, did she even ask to come. It appeared that Mitsuo started spouting foolishness, which would have been OK if he could have passed it off as a joke, but he simply couldn't do anything so clever for Kouko, and with a "What the!?", she struck back at him, and it turned into a fight. "If Mitsuo in particular has never had the chance to party in all his life, then this agreement has no meaning, does it? As for me, because we do have a pact, then three people can always get together, though for Mitsuo even that is nothing, isn't it? Even being able to do so, it's a matter of 'I have no friends.', right? Such a pitiful looking thing, left entirely alone, I might have pitied him, but by our agreement, because we cannot take you in even if you are at death's door, don't go waiting miserably in line! If that be the case---", and from there one and one, for at least an hour. As for Banri and Mr. Two Dimensions, they disagreed constantly as to which of them they were on better terms with, and as to which was really their friend.

	Can we even be friends, with things like this?		Can we even be friends, with things like this?

L.kostas: don't have the self-confidence go around

2013-03-28T12:50:12Z

don't have the self-confidence go around

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	What Mr. Two Dimensions said certainly seemed likely, and Banri had no choice but to nod deeply also.		What Mr. Two Dimensions said certainly seemed likely, and Banri had no choice but to nod deeply also.

	"Sure seems like it. I mean, I simply don't have the self-confidence go around asking people, 'Let's have a party!' Looking lonely, seeming alone, sitting by myself, saying 'Ah, somebody else is coming now!' and so forth to the waiters in apology while talking like crazy on the cell-phone, but not finding anybody else... it seems. ...I wonder how it is that Oka-chan made so many acquaintances in only one month?"		"Sure seems like it. I mean, I simply don't have the self-confidence to go around asking people, 'Let's have a party!' Looking lonely, seeming alone, sitting by myself, saying 'Ah, somebody else is coming now!' and so forth to the waiters in apology while talking like crazy on the cell-phone, but not finding anybody else... it seems. ...I wonder how it is that Oka-chan made so many acquaintances in only one month?"

	"...Though we're all human beings of the same year, going through the same clubs with the same students, what the heck is the difference...?"		"...Though we're all human beings of the same year, going through the same clubs with the same students, what the heck is the difference...?"

L.kostas at 10:37, 28 March 2013

2013-03-28T10:37:35Z

L.kostas: these had already come to and end

2013-03-27T12:09:28Z

these had already come to and end

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	There are limits.		There are limits.

	The kind, true feelings, the ulterior motives he had wanted to hide, the regrets, whatever other thoughts as well, these had already come to ~~and~~ end. Exhausted, there was already nothing more to come out of Banri.		The kind, true feelings, the ulterior motives he had wanted to hide, the regrets, whatever other thoughts as well, these had already come to an end. Exhausted, there was already nothing more to come out of Banri.

	If there's no love, then so be it. There was no use complaining about it. He had just enough wisdom to think so. But, still, still and yet, and yet--- he didn't want to make use of it.		If there's no love, then so be it. There was no use complaining about it. He had just enough wisdom to think so. But, still, still and yet, and yet--- he didn't want to make use of it.

L.kostas: minor grammar fix

2013-02-05T08:40:56Z

minor grammar fix

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	Examining the pretty thing a little bit,		Examining the pretty thing a little bit,

	"Answer 'yes'! I don't want to be friends with Kaga-san anymore. After all, you said this and that, but always about Yana-ssan. Only about Yana-ssan. Yana-ssan said he loved Oka-chan, and you cried and made fuss about it... Did you happen to consider my feelings, as I was made to watch that happen next to me? You didn't, right? If we were friends, just what did you think I was supposed to do? Those who don't care for me, I cannot care for either. It's about time we split, seriously. Like that. Now, shouldn't we?"		"Answer 'yes'! I don't want to be friends with Kaga-san anymore. After all, you said this and that, but always about Yana-ssan. Only about Yana-ssan. Yana-ssan said he loved Oka-chan, and you cried and made a fuss about it... Did you happen to consider my feelings, as I was made to watch that happen next to me? You didn't, right? If we were friends, just what did you think I was supposed to do? Those who don't care for me, I cannot care for either. It's about time we split, seriously. Like that. Now, shouldn't we?"

	Extending his arm, he presented it to Kouko.		Extending his arm, he presented it to Kouko.
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	Banri stood up despite how light-headed he had gotten and extended her bag to Kouko. With an uncertain gait, she finally descended from the bench for him. As if clinging to the hand which held the bag, Banri jerked his chin 'Let's go'.		Banri stood up despite how light-headed he had gotten and extended her bag to Kouko. With an uncertain gait, she finally descended from the bench for him. As if clinging to the hand which held the bag, Banri jerked his chin 'Let's go'.

	"Even if you don't come, I'm not waiting. Wherever you escape to, I'm won't be chasing after you anymore."		"Even if you don't come, I'm not waiting. Wherever you escape to, I won't be chasing after you anymore."

	"...Tada-kun...! I, I..."		"...Tada-kun...! I, I..."

Rpapo: Added link to next chapter.

2013-02-04T19:29:17Z

Added link to next chapter.

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	\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 2: The Answer is YES\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 2: The Answer is YES\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Golden Time:Volume2 Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
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Rpapo: Pages 215-220 done. Chapter 3 done.

2013-02-04T00:27:27Z

Pages 215-220 done. Chapter 3 done.

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	According to Mitsuo's sources, she was certainly from one of the metropolitan high schools. Mr. Two Dimensions, when told so by Banri, gave a strange sigh.		According to Mitsuo's sources, she was certainly from one of the metropolitan high schools. Mr. Two Dimensions, when told so by Banri, gave a strange sigh.

	"Then ~~off~~ course she's incredible. Just by her communications skills. Me, I'm just a stupid guy who doesn't talk. Are these friends of yours, Banri?"		"Then of course she's incredible. Just by her communications skills. Me, I'm just a stupid guy who doesn't talk. Are these friends of yours, Banri?"

	Banri looked around the area for a bit too,		Banri looked around the area for a bit too,
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	Without hesitating, he elaborated.		Without hesitating, he elaborated.

	"In short, Oka Chinami-chan is the connection between everybody. If I were suddenly told I would be managing a party, absolutely would never be able to gather people like that. Our current 'situation', is that we've been 'granted' the chance to be part of a huge group, with Oka Chinami-chan at the center, it seems."		"In short, Oka Chinami-chan is the connection between everybody. If I were suddenly told I would be managing a party, I absolutely would never be able to gather people like that. Our current 'situation', is that we've been 'granted' the chance to be part of a huge group, with Oka Chinami-chan at the center, it seems."

	What Mr. Two Dimensions said certainly seemed likely, and Banri had no choice but to nod deeply also.		What Mr. Two Dimensions said certainly seemed likely, and Banri had no choice but to nod deeply also.
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	Though there had been no toasts yet, the noisy merry-making students' faces, faces and more faces.		Though there had been no toasts yet, the noisy merry-making students' faces, faces and more faces.

	Every one of them, complete strangers, even their names unknown. Something that in one breath could easily be spread around, even they never met again.		Every one of them, complete strangers, even their names unknown. Something that in one breath could easily be spread around, even if they never met again.

	Nothing but such people, this world...		Nothing but such people, this world...
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	The one who had opened his mouth just now was Mr. Two Dimensions. Looking at Banri's and Kouko's faces while lowering his voice as if to escape from the tumult,		The one who had opened his mouth just now was Mr. Two Dimensions. Looking at Banri's and Kouko's faces while lowering his voice as if to escape from the tumult,

	"If by any chance it happens that one of has to organize a party or something like that, always, no matter what, we all need to attend. That way, there will absolutely be at least three people able to get together. The organizer will never get lonely. ...How about it? I will swear. The day before yesterday I completed writing, from first to last, an original near-future novel about beautiful female armored cavalry, 'Blood and Iron Girls! ~We are the ones~'. By those 347 kilobytes I swear."		"If by any chance it happens that one of us has to organize a party or something like that, always, no matter what, we all need to attend. That way, there will absolutely be at least three people able to get together. The organizer will never get lonely. ...How about it? I will swear. The day before yesterday I completed writing, from first to last, an original near-future novel about beautiful female armored cavalry, 'Blood and Iron Girls! ~We are the ones~'. By those 347 kilobytes I swear."

	He reached his hand out under the table.		He reached his hand out under the table.