Golden Time:Volume2 Chapter4 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 07:08, 9 November 2013

2013-11-09T07:08:21Z

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	It was only the smell, but from now on it will seem like vomit. But though he hesitated, and he felt awful, he muttered to himself "Whatever...", and tasted it. Feeling about ready to throw up, he thought he should gulp it down all at once.		It was only the smell, but from now on it will seem like vomit. But though he hesitated, and he felt awful, he muttered to himself "Whatever...", and tasted it. Feeling about ready to throw up, he thought he should gulp it down all at once.

	Gulping it down, the feel of the cold beer passing down his throat was nevertheless pleasant for now, he drank it all down in one gulp, even the foam head. He peeked quietly, sidelong, at Kouko, who for a while had hardly touched her ~~uulong~~ tea, now, as if resolved to do it, seized her beer mug. She tasted it, tossed her head back, and emptied her mug with gusto no less than Banri's.		Gulping it down, the feel of the cold beer passing down his throat was nevertheless pleasant for now, he drank it all down in one gulp, even the foam head. He peeked quietly, sidelong, at Kouko, who for a while had hardly touched her oolong tea, now, as if resolved to do it, seized her beer mug. She tasted it, tossed her head back, and emptied her mug with gusto no less than Banri's.

	"Is she okay!? 'Cause I don't see any problems at all so far..", Banri muttered to himself, but,		"Is she okay!? 'Cause I don't see any problems at all so far..", Banri muttered to himself, but,

Hiro Hayase at 06:50, 9 November 2013

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	Banri followed behind Linda, until they got to the table in front of the bulletin board.		Banri followed behind Linda, until they got to the table in front of the bulletin board.

	A bunch of ~~uper classmen~~, all sitting back relaxed on a bench, waved him over.		A bunch of upperclassmen, all sitting back relaxed on a bench, waved him over.

	"Aren't you Tada Banri? You sit over there!"		"Aren't you Tada Banri? You sit over there!"

Hiro Hayase at 02:15, 9 November 2013

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	"Why are you running away!? Is it something I did!? Am I that awful!?"		"Why are you running away!? Is it something I did!? Am I that awful!?"

	Awfully fast, from behind, Kouko voice like a shout reached him.		Awfully fast, from behind, Kouko's voice like a shout reached him.

	"Noooooooooooooooooo!"		"Noooooooooooooooooo!"

Hiro Hayase at 01:59, 9 November 2013

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	They were light. His feet--- no, his shoes were light.		They were light. His feet--- no, his shoes were light.

	Was this speed given him by Linda?		Was this speed given to him by Linda?

	Could this body move like this? It was the first time he'd been this fast. In the shoulders, arms, back, chest, hips, thighs, knees, ankles and toes. Where had such flexibility, such power been hidden? Banri ran through the night streets like a wild animal. Wanting to leave everything behind, he ran, his whole body desperate.		Could this body move like this? It was the first time he'd been this fast. In the shoulders, arms, back, chest, hips, thighs, knees, ankles and toes. Where had such flexibility, such power been hidden? Banri ran through the night streets like a wild animal. Wanting to leave everything behind, he ran, his whole body desperate.

Rpapo: Suggestion from l.kostas.

2013-11-06T10:57:34Z

Suggestion from l.kostas.

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	While waving her finger from left to right, one lone police-woman stood in front of Banri, blocking his way. And then one simple phrase:		While waving her finger from left to right, one lone police-woman stood in front of Banri, blocking his way. And then one simple phrase:

	"<span id="back_matanai">[[Golden Time:Volume2_Translator%27s_Notes#Matanai\|~~You will not wait~~]]</span>!"		"<span id="back_matanai">[[Golden Time:Volume2_Translator%27s_Notes#Matanai\|No waiting!]]</span>!"

Rpapo: Change after seeing the manga version of this scene.

2013-10-30T22:56:01Z

Change after seeing the manga version of this scene.

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	Not having an answer, he emptied his next mug in one gulp. While he refilled it from the pitcher,		Not having an answer, he emptied his next mug in one gulp. While he refilled it from the pitcher,

	"---Even hearing that, ~~after all~~ you ~~did~~ answer 'there wasn't'? There was nobody, right? Yes yes, I understand, senpai. There was nobody. Sure. Nobody, nobody. Nobody at all. It was something that never happened. It's like that. He never existed."		"---Even hearing that, you answer 'there wasn't' anyhow? There was nobody, right? Yes yes, I understand, senpai. There was nobody. Sure. Nobody, nobody. Nobody at all. It was something that never happened. It's like that. He never existed."

	He didn't look at Linda's face as he argued. There was no answer.		He didn't look at Linda's face as he argued. There was no answer.

BladeUnderHeart at 05:58, 11 October 2013

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	So it was. I--- Tada Banri, for a second time had decided to not wait for anybody.		So it was. I--- Tada Banri, for a second time had decided to not wait for anybody.

	That was decided, that day. I existed then, that, other day. The Banri existing now shouldn't know about that morning.		That was decided, that day. I existed then, that other day. The Banri existing now shouldn't know about that morning.

	Alighting from the stool, I stepped softly over Mitsuo and Two Dimension's bodies and sat down on the corner of the risen Banri's bed. What was originally me leaned in close to Banri's body, and in the warmth the dead me started helplessly reviewing the memories.		Alighting from the stool, I stepped softly over Mitsuo and Two Dimension's bodies and sat down on the corner of the risen Banri's bed. What was originally me leaned in close to Banri's body, and in the warmth the dead me started helplessly reviewing the memories.
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	By any chance, was this the state the world called 'being hung over'?		By any chance, was this the state the world called 'being hung over'?

	In this condition since the morning, for now he wondered if would it help if he ate something, though he suspected that wolfing down lunch wouldn't be a good idea. But even more than usual, the school cafeteria daily special was a mixture of fried stuff, and eating lunch without anybody to talk to, he cleaned his plate entirely, as fast as he could.		In this condition since the morning, for now he wondered if it would help if he ate something, though he suspected that wolfing down lunch wouldn't be a good idea. But even more than usual, the school cafeteria daily special was a mixture of fried stuff, and eating lunch without anybody to talk to, he cleaned his plate entirely, as fast as he could.

	Yesterday, he'd noticed some friends heading towards an afterparty. From what he saw and heard, they seemed to be excited about a dirt-cheap karaoke place. In the end, five places... until seven in the morning, they said they drank. "What do you expect, though we left the fifth party", they'd laughed, their faces ghastly pale.		Yesterday, he'd noticed some friends heading towards an afterparty. From what he saw and heard, they seemed to be excited about a dirt-cheap karaoke place. In the end, five places... until seven in the morning, they said they drank. "What do you expect, though we left the fifth party", they'd laughed, their faces ghastly pale.

Rpapo: Added link to postscript.

2013-03-23T23:12:54Z

Added link to postscript.

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	\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume2 Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]		\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume2 Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
	\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 2: The Answer is YES\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 2: The Answer is YES\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Golden Time:Volume2 Postscript\|Postscript]]
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	\|}		\|}

L.kostas: minor grammar fix

2013-03-22T12:07:51Z

minor grammar fix

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	Despite clinging to somebody like Banri, falling to the dirty ground and crying, Kouko seemed to be happy.		Despite clinging to somebody like Banri, falling to the dirty ground and crying, Kouko seemed to be happy.

	"...For that reason, I wanted to wait. My heart always wanted to shout 'yes'. I thought that if I shouted, the world would change. To the point of forgiving myself my own behavior, even as I came to like you I drifted along, thinking it 'bad' or 'incorrect', living unworthily but not thinking about it. Until the time came, I wanted to keep waiting. But... I ~~couild~~ not follow my 'scenario'. You said, 'I will not wait.' You said, 'I'm not chasing you anymore.' In that moment I thought, 'Well, as things are now, we are separated.' To which I said, '...Forget the 'scenario'!' Whether it was bad, or whatever, even being wrong is fine! Not being correct is fine! For me, there is something I cannot lose! My heart shouted that. Therefore, as for me, towards you,"		"...For that reason, I wanted to wait. My heart always wanted to shout 'yes'. I thought that if I shouted, the world would change. To the point of forgiving myself my own behavior, even as I came to like you I drifted along, thinking it 'bad' or 'incorrect', living unworthily but not thinking about it. Until the time came, I wanted to keep waiting. But... I could not follow my 'scenario'. You said, 'I will not wait.' You said, 'I'm not chasing you anymore.' In that moment I thought, 'Well, as things are now, we are separated.' To which I said, '...Forget the 'scenario'!' Whether it was bad, or whatever, even being wrong is fine! Not being correct is fine! For me, there is something I cannot lose! My heart shouted that. Therefore, as for me, towards you,"

	Even more, both of Kouko's arms tightened.		Even more, both of Kouko's arms tightened.

Rpapo: Added translation note.

2013-03-21T23:44:45Z

Added translation note.

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	While waving her finger from left to right, one lone police-woman stood in front of Banri, blocking his way. And then one simple phrase:		While waving her finger from left to right, one lone police-woman stood in front of Banri, blocking his way. And then one simple phrase:

	"You will not wait!"		"<span id="back_matanai">[[Golden Time:Volume2_Translator%27s_Notes#Matanai\|You will not wait]]</span>!"