Golden Time:Volume4 Prologue - Revision history

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Rpapo: Corrections in light of the last few pages of the book (volume 4).

2015-07-20T13:42:33Z

Corrections in light of the last few pages of the book (volume 4).

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	But, before long.		But, before long.

	Slowly, ~~his~~ lips started to move,		Slowly, her lips started to move,

Rpapo: Added link to next chapter.

2014-02-11T18:11:19Z

Added link to next chapter.

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	\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume4 Illustrations\|Illustrations]]		\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume4 Illustrations\|Illustrations]]
	\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 4: Don't Look Back\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 4: Don't Look Back\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Golden Time:Volume4 Chapter1\|Chapter 1]]
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L.kostas: a few corrections

2014-02-11T07:26:23Z

a few corrections

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	"...Ugh. They're cold, of course...!"		"...Ugh. They're cold, of course...!"

	Pulling on his loafers for the walk home, Banri having completed today's Last Act alone, he left through the deserted ~~student~~'s entrance.		Pulling on his loafers for the walk home, Banri having completed today's Last Act alone, he left through the deserted students' entrance.

	Just then, blown against his face by a cold winter wind from the north, the freezing raindrops made him gasp.		Just then, blown against his face by a cold winter wind from the north, the freezing raindrops made him gasp.
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	Standing up upon seeing Banri, Linda opened her mouth as if struggling to do so, but in the end she didn't say anything. Banri didn't say anything either.		Standing up upon seeing Banri, Linda opened her mouth as if struggling to do so, but in the end she didn't say anything. Banri didn't say anything either.

	Still without a word, several seconds passed. The two which been friends until ten days earlier both looked down at their feet.		Still without a word, several seconds passed. The two which had been friends until ten days earlier both looked down at their feet.

	The one who moved forward was Banri.		The one who moved forward was Banri.
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	But still not of a mind to say anything at all, Banri turned around. Once he handed over the umbrella, he intended to run away at once.		But still not of a mind to say anything at all, Banri turned around. Once he handed over the umbrella, he intended to run away at once.

	Her hair wet from the rain, Linda looked at Banri. She had been watching the whole time. Her two dark eyes, quietly, weakly glittering, were just like twinkling ~~raindrop~~ in the night. Slowly, as if he were slowly beginning to dissolve, Banri involuntarily forgot to breathe.		Her hair wet from the rain, Linda looked at Banri. She had been watching the whole time. Her two dark eyes, quietly, weakly glittering, were just like twinkling raindrops in the night. Slowly, as if he were slowly beginning to dissolve, Banri involuntarily forgot to breathe.

	But, before long.		But, before long.

Rpapo: Pages 23-25 done. Volume 3 Prologue done.

2014-02-10T19:32:44Z

Pages 23-25 done. Volume 3 Prologue done.

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	If she doesn't like me, I'll be fine. He wondered if as things were it would become a non-relationship anyway, with Linda not caring at all. He wondered if she'd even think about him at all. If it turned out that way, that was fine. Forgotten entirely, made into something that never was. Even here, he did not want to beg a person who did not like him to stay on good terms with him.		If she doesn't like me, I'll be fine. He wondered if as things were it would become a non-relationship anyway, with Linda not caring at all. He wondered if she'd even think about him at all. If it turned out that way, that was fine. Forgotten entirely, made into something that never was. Even here, he did not want to beg a person who did not like him to stay on good terms with him.

			As things were, he was irritated, because she was embarassed of his being by her side, not guessing what he might think of her, without even doubting, making that face as if it were her natural right.

	<nowiki><~~73% Completed~~></nowiki><!-- 11 of 15 pages -->		So Banri thought. It was unexpectedly clownish. For more than two years, Linda, while acting all friendly on the surface, when she saw him was deep inside thinking he was a guy she didn't like.

			(As for the precious time you've spent keeping an eye on me even though you didn't like me, I'm very sorry for having been a problem for you! Please, from now on, spend the time of your life on the guy you love!)

			---Shaking it all off and leaving it all behind, Banri broke into a run on the way home, as if he were escaping. Banri's view of the world had gone blank, as if somebody had painted it over in white.

			It had been like that for ten days now.

			Linda, over the past ten days had tried to call out to him cheerfully "Yo Banri!", tried to call out to him softly "Hey, Banri...", tried to call out to him indirectly "Want some candy?", tried to call out to him directly "About what happened the other day...", tried to call out to him by e-mail "Good effort at today's club activity✩" and even tried to use her brother like a caveman messenger sent from the jungle to call out to him "Uvoi! How ya been!? Whatcha doing!? Oh, wanna banana!?" At any rate, she freely used all sorts of methods to try and establish communications with Banri.

			Banri ignored them all.


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L.kostas: A few corrections

2014-02-06T06:21:52Z

A few corrections

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	Banri, stood there alone, even stupidly, paralyzed, his eyes wide as if he'd just been given an electric shock. The voices just now were of the first-year girls, he thought. But, what the? What in the world were they suddenly talking about?		Banri, stood there alone, even stupidly, paralyzed, his eyes wide as if he'd just been given an electric shock. The voices just now were of the first-year girls, he thought. But, what the? What in the world were they suddenly talking about?

	Though he had no intention to eavesdrop, he could hear everything from the very start, the thin door providing no soundproofing effect at all. To Banri's ears, the ~~girl~~'s conversation... was what you'd call '~~girls~~ talk', and for guys, that just goes straight in one ear and out the other.		Though he had no intention to eavesdrop, he could hear everything from the very start, the thin door providing no soundproofing effect at all. To Banri's ears, the girls' conversation... was what you'd call 'girl talk', and for guys, that just goes straight in one ear and out the other.

	Shouldn't a guy get a move on? Still bewildered, he thought so in a moment of honesty, but,		Shouldn't a guy get a move on? Still bewildered, he thought so in a moment of honesty, but,
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	It wasn't even for a few seconds, but how'd you like my foolishness in soaring lightly, high in the air? The simplicity of it. Acting like it was one big misunderstanding. One giant misunderstanding. He was ashamed of everything, and accursed. He could not help but be detestable. Too indecent even to look at. An overly showy exercise in futility. A sharp, stabbing pain.		It wasn't even for a few seconds, but how'd you like my foolishness in soaring lightly, high in the air? The simplicity of it. Acting like it was one big misunderstanding. One giant misunderstanding. He was ashamed of everything, and accursed. He could not help but be detestable. Too indecent even to look at. An overly showy exercise in futility. A sharp, stabbing pain.

	Banri, without realizing it, bit his lip firmly and raised his face. Squaring his uniformed shoulder, he took a breath, in and out. His parents expectations were excessive. In all the time since he entered high school, Banri's build hadn't gotten any bigger. Well, he was still growing. Though it may not look like it, he was taller than he was last year.		Banri, without realizing it, bit his lip firmly and raised his face. Squaring his uniformed shoulder, he took a breath, in and out. His parents' expectations were excessive. In all the time since he entered high school, Banri's build hadn't gotten any bigger. Well, he was still growing. Though it may not look like it, he was taller than he was last year.

	Besides, in particular. It is.		Besides, in particular. It is.
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	He didn't like things like this with Linda.		He didn't like things like this with Linda.

	He understood how she might not want say she didn't like him, or other such things, directly.		He understood how she might not want to say she didn't like him, or other such things, directly.

	It was just,		It was just,

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2014-02-05T22:49:25Z

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2014-02-02T12:38:17Z

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 He said "What?" but there were so many stupid voices spilling out at once that in spite of the noise he made, they still hadn't noticed his presence.
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 He had suddenly become like this by simply being made aware.  It seemed to him as if Linda's smile was floating in his mind, its brightness blurring slightly, as if it were melting.  What a simple person I am.
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+"Ah yes, ah yes..." they said, in a tone of voice as if they were teasing their respected senpai Linda, some of the girls joining together in a falsetto.
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