Golden Time:Volume5 Chapter3 - Revision history

Rpapo: Added link to next chapter.

2019-01-06T10:39:38Z

Added link to next chapter.

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	\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume5_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume5_Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
	\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 5: The Ghost of Summer, Japanese Summer\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 5: The Ghost of Summer, Japanese Summer\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Golden Time:Volume5_Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
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Rpapo: Page 180 done. Chapter 3 done.

2018-12-24T10:59:39Z

Page 180 done. Chapter 3 done.

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 Walking together in the not quite completely dark, but noisy district, before long they could see the one izakaya that Chinami was pointing them to.
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Rpapo: Pages 178 & 179 done.

2018-12-23T23:49:00Z

Pages 178 & 179 done.

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 "Let's go!  Look, didn't we promise before at Banri's place!?  Let's bring Oka-chan along too!  Wouldn't it be no good for Oka-chan's summer to end as things are, feeling like it does now?"
-The sea… the sea I’d promised to go to with Kouko.  The sea which had come to make Kouko cry like that.
+The sea... the sea I'd promised to go to with Kouko.  The sea which had come to make Kouko cry like that.
 Without thinking, Banri looked over towards Kouko and,
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 Like somebody who had just awakened, Kouko stared at the ceiling with her big eyes wide open.  Then, suddenly sitting up,
-"Ultrasonic!  Do you have a swimsuit!?  The sea!  Let’s go!"
+"Ultrasonic!  Do you have a swimsuit!?  The sea!  Let's go!"
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+"Swim, swimsuit... Yes, I have one!  The sea!  When!?  When are we going!?  I have to schedule it properly!"
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Rpapo: A correction, a footnote and a little more translation.

2018-12-23T21:51:50Z

A correction, a footnote and a little more translation.

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	Suddenly sitting up straight, he said, "The sea."		Suddenly sitting up straight, he said, "The sea."

	Banri pointed at him ~~while making a~~ "death ~~penalty~~" pose.		Banri pointed at him in the "<span id="back_gakideka">[[Golden Time:Volume5_Translator%27s_Notes#I sentence you to death!\|I sentence you to death!]]</span>" pose.

	"Let's go! Look, didn't we promise before at Banri's place!? Let's bring Oka-chan along too! Wouldn't it be no good for Oka-chan's summer to end as things are, feeling like it does now?"		"Let's go! Look, didn't we promise before at Banri's place!? Let's bring Oka-chan along too! Wouldn't it be no good for Oka-chan's summer to end as things are, feeling like it does now?"

			The sea… the sea I’d promised to go to with Kouko. The sea which had come to make Kouko cry like that.

			Without thinking, Banri looked over towards Kouko and,

			"...That's right. Let's go? Everybody, together."

			Like somebody who had just awakened, Kouko stared at the ceiling with her big eyes wide open. Then, suddenly sitting up,

			"Ultrasonic! Do you have a swimsuit!? The sea! Let’s go!"

Rpapo: Fixed Kouko's name for Chinami.

2018-12-23T21:10:49Z

Fixed Kouko's name for Chinami.

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	"I'm no 'blooming carnivore'..., eh, 'going out'? What's that about?"		"I'm no 'blooming carnivore'..., eh, 'going out'? What's that about?"

	"Don't even think of trying to trick us. Because we'll see through your deceptions no matter what. I mean, frankly, we were already about to collapse. It was a matter of life and death! Even if my armpits were dry, our whole bodies were soaked and we were on the verge of dehydration. Something needs to be done before somebody collapses of heatstroke, here and now. Answer me, ~~Supersonic~~. You aren't going out with Mitsuo, are you?"		"Don't even think of trying to trick us. Because we'll see through your deceptions no matter what. I mean, frankly, we were already about to collapse. It was a matter of life and death! Even if my armpits were dry, our whole bodies were soaked and we were on the verge of dehydration. Something needs to be done before somebody collapses of heatstroke, here and now. Answer me, Ultrasonic. You aren't going out with Mitsuo, are you?"

	"...Huh? Wh, why are you talking about that again? There's no such thing. Not at all."		"...Huh? Wh, why are you talking about that again? There's no such thing. Not at all."
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	The two guys said, "We don't mind!" "Oh, thank you thank you!" and slightly abashed, knelt side by side on a corner of the rug.		The two guys said, "We don't mind!" "Oh, thank you thank you!" and slightly abashed, knelt side by side on a corner of the rug.

	"~~Supersonic~~... are you okay?"		"Ultrasonic... are you okay?"

	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

Rpapo: Pages 176 & 177 done.

2018-12-02T23:40:21Z

Pages 176 & 177 done.

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 Suddenly, even to Chinami's wide eyes, a quiet shadow fell.
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+An empty house.  A family moved far away.  Starting to live alone, this summer...
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Rpapo: Pages 174 & 175 done.

2018-11-11T21:28:16Z

Pages 174 & 175 done.

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 "Hey now, could you please stop talking like the family was breaking up?  It can sound pretty bad."
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+Dripping with an "I'm relaxing at home" mood, Chinami pulled hairpins from her hair one by one.
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Rpapo: Pages 172 & 173 done.

2018-10-29T11:18:10Z

Pages 172 & 173 done.

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 "What're you saying!?  This isn't a haunted mansion!  And from the start, this home was never a mansion!  I've been living perfectly fine here, and though there might be spirits, there shouldn't be!  Look here, sit down!  Seriously!  Because I'm giving you tea!"
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+"Hey, what was that you said!?  No matter how you put it, it was just too rude!"
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Rpapo: Pages 170 & 171 done.

2018-10-07T22:27:02Z

Pages 170 & 171 done.

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 There were two cameras on the counter.  The treasured o-camera was enshrined there as well.  There were a few beads and turquoise accessories.  Roughly taken off and scattered about were some thick rags, a light hoodie and the black day-pack they remembered seeing before.  Hanging on the closet knob there was an antique-looking tiny leather shoulder bag.
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+Lying face-down on the rug, books that looked like she'd been reading them.  The books looked second-hand, or that they'd been re-read over and over again, wearing the covers ragged.  A somewhat intellectual air about them, piled up in stacks by her bedside, though he was relieved when he realized it was just "<span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oishinbo Oishinbo]</span>."  Over in that direction, was that Saitou Takao's "<span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shikake-nin_Baian Shikake-nin Baian]</span>?"  Yep, heavy stuff.
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Rpapo: /* Chapter 3 */

2018-09-25T10:45:53Z

Chapter 3

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	First there was a decent TV, and on a simple white bed with a gaudy Indian-style print cover, something you might see in an Asian store. On the desk there was a still-open MacBook. Though her bookshelves were large, it was filled to overflowing with books, paperbacks, DVDs and CDs. Looking like it wouldn't handle a 2.0 earthquake, it reminded him of the mountain of CDs in Mitsuo's room.		First there was a decent TV, and on a simple white bed with a gaudy Indian-style print cover, something you might see in an Asian store. On the desk there was a still-open MacBook. Though her bookshelves were large, it was filled to overflowing with books, paperbacks, DVDs and CDs. Looking like it wouldn't handle a 2.0 earthquake, it reminded him of the mountain of CDs in Mitsuo's room.

	There were two cameras on the counter. The treasured o-camera was enshrined there as well. There a few beads and turquoise accessories. Roughly taken off and scattered about were some thick rags, a light hoodie and the black day-pack they remembered seeing before. Hanging on the closet knob there was an antique-looking tiny leather shoulder bag.		There were two cameras on the counter. The treasured o-camera was enshrined there as well. There were a few beads and turquoise accessories. Roughly taken off and scattered about were some thick rags, a light hoodie and the black day-pack they remembered seeing before. Hanging on the closet knob there was an antique-looking tiny leather shoulder bag.