Golden Time:Volume5 Chapter4 - Revision history

Rpapo at 16:18, 26 July 2020

2020-07-26T16:18:36Z

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2020-07-26T16:17:08Z

Pages 234 & 235 done. Chapter 4 done. Volume 5 done.

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 A girl with long hair turned around before Banri's eyes.
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+"I'm telling you to do your best!  ...There's not much else I can say."
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 I can't.  I might fall asleep now.  ...Even though he thought so, his body wouldn't move.
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+On the inside of his completely closed and tightly stuck together eyelids, the fun scenes of the day spun past him bewilderingly.  Kouko's face laughing out loud.  A blue swimsuit with a adult design.  Friends in high spirits.  Oka-chan insisting they challenge the surf, Two Dimensions running furiously down the sandy beach with her and the two of them making a sudden about face.  As they shook their heads and shouted "No way, no way, no way!"  And when Mitsuo caught it, he laughed so hard he fell from his chair.  Kouko laughed to death seeing the foolishness... they had fun.  Really.
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 At Banri's words, Two Dimensions yawned and headed for the back seat.  Two petite Chinami sat between the two guys, Banri in the passenger seat, and in the driver's seat Kouko.
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+In high spirits, Kouko put the car into motion.
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 Chinami, laughing and clutching her O-Camera, was recording the idiot couple using enhanced imaging.  When he noticed, Banri flashed her a peace sign.
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+"Hm!?  Eh!?  Ho, hold on!  Hey, hey, hey!"
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2020-04-05T19:46:11Z

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 "Eh!?  Eh, eh, eeeeh!?"
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+Lifting his butt from the seat, he pulled his jeans down to the ankles in one motion.  At the gaudy, rainbow color, he was pierced by Kouko's and then by Chinami's gaze next to her.
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2020-04-05T19:20:40Z

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	"We don't have an umbrella. Though for now, there seems to be a restroom over there..."		"We don't have an umbrella. Though for now, there seems to be a restroom over there..."

	He pointed towards the parking lot entrance. There was definitely a public restroom there, but the heavy rain blowing at an angle across the sandy surface was like a bad joke. Kouko looked outside for a while, and at last as if exhausted buried her nose in Banri's shoulder. ~~About to ask~~ if ~~there were~~ a ~~ghost~~, the answer was "it's real, it's real!" When he pushed up her white forehead with his finger, Kouko frowned as if she were annoyed.		He pointed towards the parking lot entrance. There was definitely a public restroom there, but the heavy rain blowing at an angle across the sandy surface was like a bad joke. Kouko looked outside for a while, and at last as if exhausted buried her nose in Banri's shoulder. When he asked if it was a phantom urge, the answer was "it's real, it's real!" When he pushed up her white forehead with his finger, Kouko frowned as if she were annoyed.

	"Did you wear your swimsuit?"		"Did you wear your swimsuit?"

2020-03-15T18:00:06Z

Pages 221 & 222 done.

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 That was what Linda had done for me.
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+Next time Banri would be the one sending the signal.
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	That's fine. Really, it's okay.		That's fine. Really, it's okay.

	The hope that Linda gave him, was just like flames running across the ground. Hot and blazing bright. The burning flames had given him to energy to return to life once more.		The hope that Linda gave him, was just like flames running across the ground. Hot and blazing bright. The burning flames had given him the energy to return to life once more.

	That was what Linda had done for me.		That was what Linda had done for me.