Golden Time:Volume6 Chapter1 - Revision history

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 The incredibly quiet residential area was lined by fortress-like mansions and luxuriously tiled low-rise apartments.  There were no people passing by, no noisy stores, and not a single piece of trash anywhere to be seen.
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+The sidewalk was lined by beautifully cared for trees, their leaves shielding him from the still fierce rays of the sun.  The concrete pavement, the guardrails, even the paint on the crosswalks was of extremely high quality.  Everything seemed to be high-class.  He wondered if it was his imagination.
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 "What are you two first-years going to do tomorrow?  I can't get ahold of Robo-girl at all, and we need to know soon if you're coming.  The super-cool organizer guy is getting worried!  Even if it's only me."
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+A few days ago, he had received an invitation to the event from Kosshi-senpai.  It seems that they were holding a end-of-summer-vacation review meeting at a bar's private viewing spot (miraculously obtained through connections of the Omaken members) during a metro area fireworks display.  This year, for various reasons, the summer camp had been cancelled, and because the fourth year seniors would be coming, he said he wanted as many members as possible to attend.
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			Leaving his friends behind at the stylish café, Banri took the train alone to Kouko's house. After leaving the station, following directions that Mitsuo had given him on paper (Unbleached and speckled brown! So stylish!) and with the help of Google Maps, he was able to find his way without getting lost.

			He changed trains in Shibuya, which was crowded with noisy young people, and took the subway a few more stops.

			Come to think about it, when they dated, Kouko always wanted to go to places near to Banri's apartment. Until now, Banri hadn't ever gotten off at the nearest station to where Kouko lived. Because she wanted to spend every second possible with him, Kouko had insisted they meet up and separate at Banri's apartment. Then you don't need to see me off, you don't have to come out to meet me, "It's because we're Romeo and Juliet" she murmured ecstatically as if entranced by the tragedy of it all.

	<nowiki><~~73% Completed~~></nowiki> <!-- 22/30 -->		Uneasy about Kouko's generally annoying character, both of her parents seemed to be against her having a close relationship with Banri... or perhaps with any member of the opposite sex.

			In spite of this, because in the end Kouko spent nearly every day, whether it be weekday or holiday, glued to Banri's side, there was no way to hide it. He felt sure both parents knew she continued to see him, but he could not imagine how they would greet him if he suddenly showed up uninvited after what had happened. He didn't even know if they were home. He had heard that her father was a heart surgeon, and that her mother was a neurosurgeon. Just the other day, he'd received a business card from them and told to call is anything happened. Their names both had titles with "chief" attached. Right after the accident, both of them apologized and ran around dealing with the aftermath, but they seemed to be awfully busy by nature.

			Lost in thought, he was standing close to the door, not sitting in the seat, when at that moment his cell phone buzzed in his pocket. Thinking 'no way', hurriedly grabbing it and pulling it out to check the message,

			(Is that her...?)

			He was disappointed again, for the second time that day. It wasn't Kouko.

			The one who sent the message was Kosshi-senpai, who was always so helpful it would be rude to disappoint him.

			The subject: About Tomorrow.

			"What are you two first-years going to do tomorrow? I can't get ahold of Robo-girl at all, and we need to know soon if you're coming. The super-cool organizer guy is getting worried! Even if it's only me."


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+"Agreed!"  Two Dimensions raised one hand.  But Chinami, a little flustered, said, "But I can't skip out on my job!"
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 If Kouko were forced to deal with the blame by herself, without himself and his friends being made to feel the weight of guilt as well, would have to keep on bearing the weight from then on and forever.  Not only the weight of this sin, but also the weight of the crime of not having taken responsibility.
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+Besides, there was no way he could accept Kouko disappearing because she took responsibility or some such other reason.
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 "Cut it out, Oka-chan," said Banri, giving her a soft poke on the shoulder.
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+And yet, he fell asleep so easily.
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 "She was probably scolded, and besides, she's got to be worried...  I mean, seriously... what should we do now?  It was my fault in the first place.  It was my fault.  It wasn't like she wasn't tired, and she wasn't used to driving.  Why didn't I think this through better?"
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+That night, when they all got out of the car at once to check out the damages to the car, while each of them was still shaking in a state of crisis, they were trying their best to maintain their composure.  Two Dimensions returned to the driver's seat, and while keeping an eye out for following cars, moved the car to the shoulder to avoid a secondary accident.  Mitsuo went to check the guardrail.  Banri supported Kouko, whose face was ashen pale.  He kept talking to her to calm her down, telling her it was all right.  Noticing that Chinami had fallen quiet under the lights, Two Dimensions got down out of the car once more.  When he asked her what was wrong, she didn't answer, but frowning a little, held one hand over her mouth.
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 At Chinami's words, Two Dimensions, his head hanging down still, nodded deeply.
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