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99.225.131.126: /* Part 15 */

2014-10-09T20:55:40Z

Part 15

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	“We will deal with the Object,” said Quenser plainly. No one thought his words could be anything but a bluff. “Froleytia, you can wait until you see the large flash of the Object blowing up, but the instant you think we could win at least send a single tank our way! That alone could completely change this situation. Please consider it!!”		“We will deal with the Object,” said Quenser plainly. No one thought his words could be anything but a bluff. “Froleytia, you can wait until you see the large flash of the Object blowing up, but the instant you think we could win at least send a single tank our way! That alone could completely change this situation. Please consider it!!”

	“Okay, but I wouldn’t get your hopes up if I ~~was~~ you.”		“Okay, but I wouldn’t get your hopes up if I were you.”

	“I’m free to get my hopes up over whatever I want,” Quenser said before switching off the radio.		“I’m free to get my hopes up over whatever I want,” Quenser said before switching off the radio.

109.151.122.174: /* Part 6 */

2013-07-26T11:09:23Z

Part 6

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	And so Quenser parted ways with Heivia and headed for the Object maintenance area.		And so Quenser parted ways with Heivia and headed for the Object maintenance area.

	It was a giant building that completely enveloped the giant weapon that was over 50 meters long. Just like the officer barracks, it too was ~~crated~~ from several vehicles linked together.		It was a giant building that completely enveloped the giant weapon that was over 50 meters long. Just like the officer barracks, it too was created from several vehicles linked together.

	Vehicles with flat beds 15 meters long and 10 meters across were lined up on both sides and two quickly constructed walls had been set up with a roof connecting them. Overall, it looked something like a cross section of a warehouse. The large maintenance area was constructed of a few of those linked together.		Vehicles with flat beds 15 meters long and 10 meters across were lined up on both sides and two quickly constructed walls had been set up with a roof connecting them. Overall, it looked something like a cross section of a warehouse. The large maintenance area was constructed of a few of those linked together.

Darkoneko: /* Part 17 */ oh come on

2013-03-16T02:10:50Z

Part 17: oh come on

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	“I see. So you’re heading straight for the ‘successful career’ path.”		“I see. So you’re heading straight for the ‘successful career’ path.”

	“You’re doing pretty much the same thing, right? I heard the military took an interest in you and gave you the special right to look through the country’s database. Now you can see as many Object blueprints as you want without having to head out to the battlefield. With so many samples to study, ~~you’re~~ learning speed should be overwhelmingly faster than those around you.”		“You’re doing pretty much the same thing, right? I heard the military took an interest in you and gave you the special right to look through the country’s database. Now you can see as many Object blueprints as you want without having to head out to the battlefield. With so many samples to study, your learning speed should be overwhelmingly faster than those around you.”

	Hearing that, Quenser pinched his cheek.		Hearing that, Quenser pinched his cheek.

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	"I see. So you're heading straight for the 'successful career' path."		"I see. So you're heading straight for the 'successful career' path."

	"You're doing pretty much the same thing, right? I heard the military took an interest in you and gave you the special right to look through the country's database. Now you can see as many Object blueprints as you want without having to head out to the battlefield. With so many samples to study, ~~your~~ learning speed should be overwhelmingly faster than those around you."		"You're doing pretty much the same thing, right? I heard the military took an interest in you and gave you the special right to look through the country's database. Now you can see as many Object blueprints as you want without having to head out to the battlefield. With so many samples to study, you're learning speed should be overwhelmingly faster than those around you."

	Hearing that, Quenser pinched his cheek.		Hearing that, Quenser pinched his cheek.

SinsI: /* Part 17 */

2013-01-07T17:53:12Z

Part 17

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	"I see. So you're heading straight for the 'successful career' path."		"I see. So you're heading straight for the 'successful career' path."

	"You're doing pretty much the same thing, right? I heard the military took an interest in you and gave you the special right to look through the country's database. Now you can see as many Object blueprints as you want without having to head out to the battlefield. With so many samples to study, ~~you're~~ learning speed should be overwhelmingly faster than those around you."		"You're doing pretty much the same thing, right? I heard the military took an interest in you and gave you the special right to look through the country's database. Now you can see as many Object blueprints as you want without having to head out to the battlefield. With so many samples to study, your learning speed should be overwhelmingly faster than those around you."

	Hearing that, Quenser pinched his cheek.		Hearing that, Quenser pinched his cheek.

Zero2001: Italicizing thought speech. Coloring murmers/whispers, I've waited long enough with no answer. Silence taken as (temporary) consent. I'll personally revert the changes if translator raises issue. etc

2012-09-30T15:40:03Z

Italicizing thought speech. Coloring murmers/whispers, I've waited long enough with no answer. Silence taken as (temporary) consent. I'll personally revert the changes if translator raises issue. etc

Zero2001 at 12:05, 19 September 2012

2012-09-19T12:05:33Z

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	==Chapter 1: The Rank and File Soldiers that Tie Up Gulliver » Battle on the Freezing Alaskan Snow==		==Chapter 1: The Rank and File Soldiers that Tie Up Gulliver >> Battle on the Freezing Alaskan Snow==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	They had left their snow shoveling duties to search for food outside the maintenance base zone. Since Heivia had also been firing his military rifle all over the place, it would have been odd if she had not been mad at them. It was on a level where they could easily be thrown in the detention barracks or possibly even court martialed.		They had left their snow shoveling duties to search for food outside the maintenance base zone. Since Heivia had also been firing his military rifle all over the place, it would have been odd if she had not been mad at them. It was on a level where they could easily be thrown in the detention barracks or possibly even court martialed.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...What are we going to do, Heivia!? This is why I told you to stop!! This was all about the rations, but I'd rather eat nothing but snow for the next three days than this!!"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...What are we going to do, Heivia!? This is why I told you to stop!! This was all about the rations, but I'd rather eat nothing but snow for the next three days than this!!"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Shut up, dammit!! God damn, is she really only 18? I know normal soldiers aren't needed on the battlefield in this day and age, but I bet she could take on an Object with nothing but a clenched fist!"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Shut up, dammit!! God damn, is she really only 18? I know normal soldiers aren't needed on the battlefield in this day and age, but I bet she could take on an Object with nothing but a clenched fist!"</span>

	"Quenser, Heivia!"		"Quenser, Heivia!"
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	Hearing that, Quenser headed for the third floor using a simple stairway that could detach at the press of a button.		Hearing that, Quenser headed for the third floor using a simple stairway that could detach at the press of a button.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Ohh. Thank goodness she's an understanding old lady. And here I thought I needed to be afraid of her."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Ohh. Thank goodness she's an understanding old lady. And here I thought I needed to be afraid of her."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Well, if he ends up not being of any use I can stuff him inside an empty drum and hit it with a metal bat from the outside."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Well, if he ends up not being of any use I can stuff him inside an empty drum and hit it with a metal bat from the outside."</span>

	As they muttered their respective comments such that the other could not hear, the two of them started their work on the third-floor passageway.		As they muttered their respective comments such that the other could not hear, the two of them started their work on the third-floor passageway.
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	Quenser was looking at the Object, so the rifle would not be much use anyway.		Quenser was looking at the Object, so the rifle would not be much use anyway.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Hey, don't hit the infrared switch. If it notices the exposure, it'll blow us away with those plasma cannons."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Hey, don't hit the infrared switch. If it notices the exposure, it'll blow us away with those plasma cannons."</span>

	Heivia was lying down next to him and giving him unnecessary warnings. That was just how nervous he was.		Heivia was lying down next to him and giving him unnecessary warnings. That was just how nervous he was.
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	They were about 300 meters from the Object, but if it noticed them, there would be no escaping. They would merely be mercilessly slaughtered. Just hearing the thundercloud-like roar spreading through the ground was enough to make them tense up with fear.		They were about 300 meters from the Object, but if it noticed them, there would be no escaping. They would merely be mercilessly slaughtered. Just hearing the thundercloud-like roar spreading through the ground was enough to make them tense up with fear.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...What is that Object doing?"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...What is that Object doing?"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Searching with its radar? ...No. It might be able to find a tank or fighter with that, but I doubt it can locate people with it."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Searching with its radar? ...No. It might be able to find a tank or fighter with that, but I doubt it can locate people with it."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...It appears to be trying to access a satellite. However, it is not going well because the signal cannot get through,"</span> added the Elite girl.		<span style="color:DimGray">"...It appears to be trying to access a satellite. However, it is not going well because the signal cannot get through,"</span> added the Elite girl.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Oh, that's right. A chaff missile was fired as a meteorological weapon. It scattered signal-blocking particles in the clouds which turned the natural clouds into giant anti-satellite shields."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Oh, that's right. A chaff missile was fired as a meteorological weapon. It scattered signal-blocking particles in the clouds which turned the natural clouds into giant anti-satellite shields."</span>

	If the Object could use the satellite, they could be found in an instant. Quenser was now immensely thankful for that waste of tax money.		If the Object could use the satellite, they could be found in an instant. Quenser was now immensely thankful for that waste of tax money.
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	As Heivia and the Elite girl spoke back and forth, Quenser remained silent and watched the Water Strider slowly move along.		As Heivia and the Elite girl spoke back and forth, Quenser remained silent and watched the Water Strider slowly move along.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...If I create some confusion, do you think we can get away?"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...If I create some confusion, do you think we can get away?"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Ahhn? You mean the C4 we scattered about? If that somehow blew up the Object, we might make it somehow."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Ahhn? You mean the C4 we scattered about? If that somehow blew up the Object, we might make it somehow."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...I'm serious here."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...I'm serious here."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...So am I."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...So am I."</span>

	Meanwhile, one of the enemy soldiers stepped forward and stood before Quenser and the others. While chewing on some gum, he spat some yellow saliva at Quenser's head.		Meanwhile, one of the enemy soldiers stepped forward and stood before Quenser and the others. While chewing on some gum, he spat some yellow saliva at Quenser's head.
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	Seeing that Object, Quenser whispered to Heivia.		Seeing that Object, Quenser whispered to Heivia.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Get down when I charge out. Use that snowplow tractor over there for cover."</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Get down when I charge out. Use that snowplow tractor over there for cover."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Hey!!"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Hey!!"</span>

	Heivia did not have time to stop him.		Heivia did not have time to stop him.
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	Objects were synonymous with war. A silent pressure beat down on Quenser telling him that the officials were not about to let go of the kind of soldiers that could destroy an Object and turn around a war.		Objects were synonymous with war. A silent pressure beat down on Quenser telling him that the officials were not about to let go of the kind of soldiers that could destroy an Object and turn around a war.

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Hey. Listen up, hero. It looks like this is no joke. I just heard that fat one over there talking. I know where we're being assigned next!"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Hey. Listen up, hero. It looks like this is no joke. I just heard that fat one over there talking. I know where we're being assigned next!"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Where we're being assigned? That's already been decided!?"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Where we're being assigned? That's already been decided!?"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Apparently, we'll be working along with the princess's Object! It seems they're thinking that, since we managed to destroy an Object on our own, we might be able to damage an enemy army even more efficiently if we have an Object working with us!!"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Apparently, we'll be working along with the princess's Object! It seems they're thinking that, since we managed to destroy an Object on our own, we might be able to damage an enemy army even more efficiently if we have an Object working with us!!"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DarkSlateGray~~">"...Are you serious? So we're going to be facing those monstrous Objects again!?"</span>		<span style="color:DimGray">"...Are you serious? So we're going to be facing those monstrous Objects again!?"</span>

	As the unexpected strength of his relationships with certain people made him dizzy, Quenser looked down at the medal hanging from his neck.		As the unexpected strength of his relationships with certain people made him dizzy, Quenser looked down at the medal hanging from his neck.

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	They had left their snow shoveling duties to search for food outside the maintenance base zone. Since Heivia had also been firing his military rifle all over the place, it would have been odd if she had not been mad at them. It was on a level where they could easily be thrown in the detention barracks or possibly even court martialed.		They had left their snow shoveling duties to search for food outside the maintenance base zone. Since Heivia had also been firing his military rifle all over the place, it would have been odd if she had not been mad at them. It was on a level where they could easily be thrown in the detention barracks or possibly even court martialed.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...What are we going to do, Heivia!? This is why I told you to stop!! This was all about the rations, but I'd rather eat nothing but snow for the next three days than this!!"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...What are we going to do, Heivia!? This is why I told you to stop!! This was all about the rations, but I'd rather eat nothing but snow for the next three days than this!!"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Shut up, dammit!! God damn, is she really only 18? I know normal soldiers aren't needed on the battlefield in this day and age, but I bet she could take on an Object with nothing but a clenched fist!"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Shut up, dammit!! God damn, is she really only 18? I know normal soldiers aren't needed on the battlefield in this day and age, but I bet she could take on an Object with nothing but a clenched fist!"</span>

	"Quenser, Heivia!"		"Quenser, Heivia!"
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	Hearing that, Quenser headed for the third floor using a simple stairway that could detach at the press of a button.		Hearing that, Quenser headed for the third floor using a simple stairway that could detach at the press of a button.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Ohh. Thank goodness she's an understanding old lady. And here I thought I needed to be afraid of her."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Ohh. Thank goodness she's an understanding old lady. And here I thought I needed to be afraid of her."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Well, if he ends up not being of any use I can stuff him inside an empty drum and hit it with a metal bat from the outside."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Well, if he ends up not being of any use I can stuff him inside an empty drum and hit it with a metal bat from the outside."</span>

	As they muttered their respective comments such that the other could not hear, the two of them started their work on the third-floor passageway.		As they muttered their respective comments such that the other could not hear, the two of them started their work on the third-floor passageway.
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	Quenser was looking at the Object, so the rifle would not be much use anyway.		Quenser was looking at the Object, so the rifle would not be much use anyway.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Hey, don't hit the infrared switch. If it notices the exposure, it'll blow us away with those plasma cannons."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Hey, don't hit the infrared switch. If it notices the exposure, it'll blow us away with those plasma cannons."</span>

	Heivia was lying down next to him and giving him unnecessary warnings. That was just how nervous he was.		Heivia was lying down next to him and giving him unnecessary warnings. That was just how nervous he was.
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	They were about 300 meters from the Object, but if it noticed them, there would be no escaping. They would merely be mercilessly slaughtered. Just hearing the thundercloud-like roar spreading through the ground was enough to make them tense up with fear.		They were about 300 meters from the Object, but if it noticed them, there would be no escaping. They would merely be mercilessly slaughtered. Just hearing the thundercloud-like roar spreading through the ground was enough to make them tense up with fear.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...What is that Object doing?"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...What is that Object doing?"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Searching with its radar? ...No. It might be able to find a tank or fighter with that, but I doubt it can locate people with it."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Searching with its radar? ...No. It might be able to find a tank or fighter with that, but I doubt it can locate people with it."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...It appears to be trying to access a satellite. However, it is not going well because the signal cannot get through,"</span> added the Elite girl.		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...It appears to be trying to access a satellite. However, it is not going well because the signal cannot get through,"</span> added the Elite girl.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Oh, that's right. A chaff missile was fired as a meteorological weapon. It scattered signal-blocking particles in the clouds which turned the natural clouds into giant anti-satellite shields."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Oh, that's right. A chaff missile was fired as a meteorological weapon. It scattered signal-blocking particles in the clouds which turned the natural clouds into giant anti-satellite shields."</span>

	If the Object could use the satellite, they could be found in an instant. Quenser was now immensely thankful for that waste of tax money.		If the Object could use the satellite, they could be found in an instant. Quenser was now immensely thankful for that waste of tax money.
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	As Heivia and the Elite girl spoke back and forth, Quenser remained silent and watched the Water Strider slowly move along.		As Heivia and the Elite girl spoke back and forth, Quenser remained silent and watched the Water Strider slowly move along.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...If I create some confusion, do you think we can get away?"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...If I create some confusion, do you think we can get away?"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Ahhn? You mean the C4 we scattered about? If that somehow blew up the Object, we might make it somehow."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Ahhn? You mean the C4 we scattered about? If that somehow blew up the Object, we might make it somehow."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...I'm serious here."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...I'm serious here."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...So am I."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...So am I."</span>

	Meanwhile, one of the enemy soldiers stepped forward and stood before Quenser and the others. While chewing on some gum, he spat some yellow saliva at Quenser's head.		Meanwhile, one of the enemy soldiers stepped forward and stood before Quenser and the others. While chewing on some gum, he spat some yellow saliva at Quenser's head.
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	Seeing that Object, Quenser whispered to Heivia.		Seeing that Object, Quenser whispered to Heivia.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Get down when I charge out. Use that snowplow tractor over there for cover."</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Get down when I charge out. Use that snowplow tractor over there for cover."</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Hey!!"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Hey!!"</span>

	Heivia did not have time to stop him.		Heivia did not have time to stop him.
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	Objects were synonymous with war. A silent pressure beat down on Quenser telling him that the officials were not about to let go of the kind of soldiers that could destroy an Object and turn around a war.		Objects were synonymous with war. A silent pressure beat down on Quenser telling him that the officials were not about to let go of the kind of soldiers that could destroy an Object and turn around a war.

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Hey. Listen up, hero. It looks like this is no joke. I just heard that fat one over there talking. I know where we're being assigned next!"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Hey. Listen up, hero. It looks like this is no joke. I just heard that fat one over there talking. I know where we're being assigned next!"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Where we're being assigned? That's already been decided!?"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Where we're being assigned? That's already been decided!?"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Apparently, we'll be working along with the princess's Object! It seems they're thinking that, since we managed to destroy an Object on our own, we might be able to damage an enemy army even more efficiently if we have an Object working with us!!"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Apparently, we'll be working along with the princess's Object! It seems they're thinking that, since we managed to destroy an Object on our own, we might be able to damage an enemy army even more efficiently if we have an Object working with us!!"</span>

	<span style="color:~~DimGray~~">"...Are you serious? So we're going to be facing those monstrous Objects again!?"</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Are you serious? So we're going to be facing those monstrous Objects again!?"</span>

	As the unexpected strength of his relationships with certain people made him dizzy, Quenser looked down at the medal hanging from his neck.		As the unexpected strength of his relationships with certain people made him dizzy, Quenser looked down at the medal hanging from his neck.