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Hiro Hayase at 06:42, 22 January 2013

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	“I have no choice,” said Charlotte in annoyance. Her shoulders relaxed even further and she placed even more weight on Quenser. “I only have jurisdiction over official soldiers and other combat elements cooperating on the battlefield. I have no authority over a civilian student.”		“I have no choice,” said Charlotte in annoyance. Her shoulders relaxed even further and she placed even more weight on Quenser. “I only have jurisdiction over official soldiers and other combat elements cooperating on the battlefield. I have no authority over a civilian student.”

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Zero2001: Almost forgot this.

2012-09-30T16:17:54Z

Almost forgot this.

Zero2001 at 16:15, 30 September 2012

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	Quenser whispered to Charlotte.		Quenser whispered to Charlotte.

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"I'll deal with him somehow. You hide over there.</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"I'll deal with him somehow. You hide over there."</span>

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...You!!</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...You!!"</span>

	She called out to stop him, but Quenser ignored her and ducked underneath one of the conveyer belts. The conveyer belt was supported by pillars about as thick as his index finger, and he could move along beneath it by crouching.		She called out to stop him, but Quenser ignored her and ducked underneath one of the conveyer belts. The conveyer belt was supported by pillars about as thick as his index finger, and he could move along beneath it by crouching.

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Zakashi: brilliant chapter as always :D

2012-07-30T14:19:09Z

brilliant chapter as always :D

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	Quenser was still supporting Charlotte. He was also still carrying her assault rifle.		Quenser was still supporting Charlotte. He was also still carrying her assault rifle.

	It would be better to head up rather than waste time in these labyrinthine tunnels.”		"It would be better to head up rather than waste time in these labyrinthine tunnels.”

	“Will we head to Point 1 aboveground?”		“Will we head to Point 1 aboveground?”
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	She seemed to truly detest that “Oh ho ho”.		She seemed to truly detest that “Oh ho ho”.

	It was unbelievable that she was continuing to make small movements to evade the Wing Balancer’s weapons fire.		It was unbelievable that she was continuing to make small movements to evade the Wing Balancer’s weapons' fire.

	“I’d love to help out, but I don’t have enough information,” said Quenser. “Have you figured out any characteristics of the Object while fighting it? Like what areas its movements suggest it is more carefully protecting or something like that.”		“I’d love to help out, but I don’t have enough information,” said Quenser. “Have you figured out any characteristics of the Object while fighting it? Like what areas its movements suggest it is more carefully protecting or something like that.”
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	The Wing Balancer showed no mercy.		The Wing Balancer showed no mercy.

	As soon it lined up its sights, it fired.		As soon as it lined up its sights, it fired.

	“Quenser!!”		“Quenser!!”
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	He then aimed the assault rifle straight up without bothering to close the cover.		He then aimed the assault rifle straight up without bothering to close the cover.

	(~~…those~~ lenses!! It uses infrared!!)		(…Those lenses!! It uses infrared!!)

	He moved his finger.		He moved his finger.
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	“Get out of the way!!” needlessly shouted the princess.		“Get out of the way!!” needlessly shouted the princess.

	Quenser ~~was~~ already started moving to the side as quickly as he could.		Quenser had already started moving to the side as quickly as he could.

	Immediately afterwards, a great crater was created on the Kamchatka Peninsula.		Immediately afterwards, a great crater was created on the Kamchatka Peninsula.
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	“Ask them to surrender.”		“Ask them to surrender.”

	“First, I will fire ~~form~~ the side and destroy the Wing Balancer’s main cannon.”		“First, I will fire from the side and destroy the Wing Balancer’s main cannon.”

	With a great roar, the Faith Organization’s last hope of resistance was suppressed. The shockwave sent Quenser rolling once more.		With a great roar, the Faith Organization’s last hope of resistance was suppressed. The shockwave sent Quenser rolling once more.
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	They were clear grains.		They were clear grains.

	They were the ~~ore~~ commonly referred to as diamonds.		They were the ores commonly referred to as diamonds.

	“…You.”		“…You.”

User753 at 18:23, 29 July 2012

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	===Part 13===		===Part 13===

	Quenser and Charlotte decided to head ~~aboveground~~.		Quenser and Charlotte decided to head above ground.

	As Heivia and Myonri had gone on ahead, Quenser and Charlotte did not know what path led to Point 1.		As Heivia and Myonri had gone on ahead, Quenser and Charlotte did not know what path led to Point 1.
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	“Did you hear?” asked Heivia as he walked up. “The Indigo Plasma’s 24th Mobile Maintenance Battalion has made an official declaration. The Councilors and the Sovereign Parliament are still arguing, but it’s more or less decided. Our next enemies are fellow Legitimacy Kingdomers.”		“Did you hear?” asked Heivia as he walked up. “The Indigo Plasma’s 24th Mobile Maintenance Battalion has made an official declaration. The Councilors and the Sovereign Parliament are still arguing, but it’s more or less decided. Our next enemies are fellow Legitimacy Kingdomers.”

	“…I don’t like that. I reminds me of Councilor Flide.”		“…I don’t like that. It reminds me of Councilor Flide.”

	“Oh, oh. That damn old man who used an Elite little girl as his pawn? I remember him.”		“Oh, oh. That damn old man who used an Elite little girl as his pawn? I remember him.”

Js06 at 15:01, 29 July 2012

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	He opened the message and found a list of various materials with numbers next to them. The primary item on the list was welding gas. She seemed to be telling him to get the materials they were lacking.		He opened the message and found a list of various materials with numbers next to them. The primary item on the list was welding gas. She seemed to be telling him to get the materials they were lacking.

	~~【“…Tch~~. Why do they always give me odd jobs that have nothing to do with Object design?”】		“(…Tch. Why do they always give me odd jobs that have nothing to do with Object design?)”

	“Did you say something, boy?”		“Did you say something, boy?”
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	Heivia frowned at Froleytia’s slightly stiff voice.		Heivia frowned at Froleytia’s slightly stiff voice.

	~~【“Ahn~~? What’s with her? She’s started some odd lip service all of a sudden. Her usual sharp edge and impeccable timing are missing. I didn’t take her for the type to get nervous at this kind of briefing.”】		“(Ahn? What’s with her? She’s started some odd lip service all of a sudden. Her usual sharp edge and impeccable timing are missing. I didn’t take her for the type to get nervous at this kind of briefing.)”

	~~【“Heivia~~, Heivia. Look over at the back right edge of the room. It’s hard to see because it’s so small, but that’s a CS TV camera.”】		“(Heivia, Heivia. Look over at the back right edge of the room. It’s hard to see because it’s so small, but that’s a CS TV camera.)”

	~~【“What~~ a pain in the ass!! I thought she liked to stand out, so why is she not acting like herself here!?”】		“(What a pain in the ass!! I thought she liked to stand out, so why is she not acting like herself here!?)”

	~~【“The~~ military show this will be part of acts as a form of propaganda to get more recruits and to get the people to understand what their taxes are going to. She would probably rather be doing this as her normal self, but she has to think about the image of the military. Look, you can see the corner of her mouth twitching.”】		“(The military show this will be part of acts as a form of propaganda to get more recruits and to get the people to understand what their taxes are going to. She would probably rather be doing this as her normal self, but she has to think about the image of the military. Look, you can see the corner of her mouth twitching.)”

	~~【“Well~~, I’ll admit showing a beauty will probably be more effective than some filthy old man.”】		“(Well, I’ll admit showing a beauty will probably be more effective than some filthy old man.)”

	The fact that Froleytia was at her limit seemed to infect everyone in the area because an unnatural number of hands shot up when she asked “Any questions!?” with a sharp look in her eyes. It looked like a scene from an elementary school math lesson.		The fact that Froleytia was at her limit seemed to infect everyone in the area because an unnatural number of hands shot up when she asked “Any questions!?” with a sharp look in her eyes. It looked like a scene from an elementary school math lesson.

	With a bitter smile, Heivia whispered, ~~【“Heh~~ heh. It looks like she’s stuck. Hey, Quenser, how about we show off just how good we are with the ladies by rescuing her here? If we’re lucky, we can get her to tread on us in the good way later.”】		With a bitter smile, Heivia whispered, “(Heh heh. It looks like she’s stuck. Hey, Quenser, how about we show off just how good we are with the ladies by rescuing her here? If we’re lucky, we can get her to tread on us in the good way later.)”

	~~【“You~~ say that, but you’re just going to ask her if she’s on her period or something else that qualifies as sexual harassment to see how she reacts on camera. I’m going to actually save her.”】		“(You say that, but you’re just going to ask her if she’s on her period or something else that qualifies as sexual harassment to see how she reacts on camera. I’m going to actually save her.)”

	After the first round of questions was over, Quenser raised a hand.		After the first round of questions was over, Quenser raised a hand.
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	With their commander back on her usual form, Heivia asked Quenser a question.		With their commander back on her usual form, Heivia asked Quenser a question.

	~~【“What~~ was that about having looked through the given materials?”】		“(What was that about having looked through the given materials?)”

	~~【“Some~~ lies are justified.”】		“(Some lies are justified.)”

	“Our intelligence department has discovered that this military coal mine is used to mine the fuel used by the JPlevelMHD reactors used in Objects. By destroying it, we can indirectly stop the movements of the entire Faith Organization military to a certain extent.”		“Our intelligence department has discovered that this military coal mine is used to mine the fuel used by the JPlevelMHD reactors used in Objects. By destroying it, we can indirectly stop the movements of the entire Faith Organization military to a certain extent.”
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	“I will now go over the order of events. First, Interference Program A will be sent to a UAV at Point 2 on the coast, neutralizing the surveillance network. Next, a small unit will head inland to Point 1. There, they will dig up the buried data cable that governs the large radar facilities and add in Interference Program B. This will let us use their targeting assistance against the Wing Balancer. Once the effects show themselves, we will finish by having the princess head out at full speed to attack. If she passes over the hill along the long and narrow Route 3 that lies between two cliffs, she can get within firing range of the Wing Balancer in a straight line. If the enemy’s targeting was working properly, she would definitely be hit by return fire from that position. Once she is within firing range of the target, she will blow away the Faith Organization’s Second Generation Object. Afterwards, we will send a recommendation of surrender to the coal mine. After giving them 900 seconds with which to evacuate all personnel, the Object’s firepower will be used to destroy it. …If all goes according to schedule, we will be shooting each other with water guns filled with champagne by dawn.”		“I will now go over the order of events. First, Interference Program A will be sent to a UAV at Point 2 on the coast, neutralizing the surveillance network. Next, a small unit will head inland to Point 1. There, they will dig up the buried data cable that governs the large radar facilities and add in Interference Program B. This will let us use their targeting assistance against the Wing Balancer. Once the effects show themselves, we will finish by having the princess head out at full speed to attack. If she passes over the hill along the long and narrow Route 3 that lies between two cliffs, she can get within firing range of the Wing Balancer in a straight line. If the enemy’s targeting was working properly, she would definitely be hit by return fire from that position. Once she is within firing range of the target, she will blow away the Faith Organization’s Second Generation Object. Afterwards, we will send a recommendation of surrender to the coal mine. After giving them 900 seconds with which to evacuate all personnel, the Object’s firepower will be used to destroy it. …If all goes according to schedule, we will be shooting each other with water guns filled with champagne by dawn.”

	~~【“Wow~~, so are the fridges already filled with ice-cold alcohol?”】		“(Wow, so are the fridges already filled with ice-cold alcohol?)”

	“However,” added Froleytia, striking down the excitement that had begun to well up among the soldiers. “If the UAVs spot us before the Wing Balancer’s targeting assistance has been dealt with, it is all over. Even if you shoot it down, the enemy will still learn what is going on. The Faith Organization UAVs each have two free-fall bombs installed, but do not attack them even if they fly right up to you. If anything is detected, the Wing Balancer will head out at once. And you will not be able to call in reinforcements from us. After all, it is highly unlikely the princess can win in a frontal assault. We cannot come to rescue you.”		“However,” added Froleytia, striking down the excitement that had begun to well up among the soldiers. “If the UAVs spot us before the Wing Balancer’s targeting assistance has been dealt with, it is all over. Even if you shoot it down, the enemy will still learn what is going on. The Faith Organization UAVs each have two free-fall bombs installed, but do not attack them even if they fly right up to you. If anything is detected, the Wing Balancer will head out at once. And you will not be able to call in reinforcements from us. After all, it is highly unlikely the princess can win in a frontal assault. We cannot come to rescue you.”
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	“No,” cut in Charlotte. “There is no reason for me to do nothing. I will go with you. …You seem too inexperienced to me. I would prefer not to have a bomb dropped on me because we left this to you and you got spotted.”		“No,” cut in Charlotte. “There is no reason for me to do nothing. I will go with you. …You seem too inexperienced to me. I would prefer not to have a bomb dropped on me because we left this to you and you got spotted.”

	~~【“Quenser~~, if you two head off and things start getting a little steamy, call me over. It’s cold here, and you’ll keep your warmth better with more people.”】		“(Quenser, if you two head off and things start getting a little steamy, call me over. It’s cold here, and you’ll keep your warmth better with more people.)”

	“If you were a proper soldier, that comment would be enough to get you shot,” commented Charlotte.		“If you were a proper soldier, that comment would be enough to get you shot,” commented Charlotte.

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	He opened the message and found a list of various materials with numbers next to them. The primary item on the list was welding gas. She seemed to be telling him to get the materials they were lacking.		He opened the message and found a list of various materials with numbers next to them. The primary item on the list was welding gas. She seemed to be telling him to get the materials they were lacking.

	【"...Tch. Why do they always give me odd jobs that have nothing to do with Object design?"】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"...Tch. Why do they always give me odd jobs that have nothing to do with Object design?"</span>

	"Did you say something, boy?"		"Did you say something, boy?"
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	Heivia frowned at Froleytia's slightly stiff voice.		Heivia frowned at Froleytia's slightly stiff voice.

	【"Ahn? What's with her? She's started some odd lip service all of a sudden. Her usual sharp edge and impeccable timing are missing. I didn't take her for the type to get nervous at this kind of briefing."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Ahn? What's with her? She's started some odd lip service all of a sudden. Her usual sharp edge and impeccable timing are missing. I didn't take her for the type to get nervous at this kind of briefing."</span>

	【"Heivia, Heivia. Look over at the back right edge of the room. It's hard to see because it's so small, but that's a CS TV camera."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Heivia, Heivia. Look over at the back right edge of the room. It's hard to see because it's so small, but that's a CS TV camera."</span>

	【"What a pain in the ass!! I thought she liked to stand out, so why is she not acting like herself here!?"】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"What a pain in the ass!! I thought she liked to stand out, so why is she not acting like herself here!?"</span>

	【"The military show this will be part of acts as a form of propaganda to get more recruits and to get the people to understand what their taxes are going to. She would probably rather be doing this as her normal self, but she has to think about the image of the military. Look, you can see the corner of her mouth twitching."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"The military show this will be part of acts as a form of propaganda to get more recruits and to get the people to understand what their taxes are going to. She would probably rather be doing this as her normal self, but she has to think about the image of the military. Look, you can see the corner of her mouth twitching."</span>

	【"Well, I'll admit showing a beauty will probably be more effective than some filthy old man."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Well, I'll admit showing a beauty will probably be more effective than some filthy old man."</span>

	The fact that Froleytia was at her limit seemed to infect everyone in the area because an unnatural number of hands shot up when she asked "Any questions!?" with a sharp look in her eyes. It looked like a scene from an elementary school math lesson.		The fact that Froleytia was at her limit seemed to infect everyone in the area because an unnatural number of hands shot up when she asked "Any questions!?" with a sharp look in her eyes. It looked like a scene from an elementary school math lesson.

	With a bitter smile, Heivia whispered, 【"Heh heh. It looks like she's stuck. Hey, Quenser, how about we show off just how good we are with the ladies by rescuing her here? If we're lucky, we can get her to tread on us in the good way later."】		With a bitter smile, Heivia whispered, <span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Heh heh. It looks like she's stuck. Hey, Quenser, how about we show off just how good we are with the ladies by rescuing her here? If we're lucky, we can get her to tread on us in the good way later."</span>

	【"You say that, but you're just going to ask her if she's on her period or something else that qualifies as sexual harassment to see how she reacts on camera. I'm going to actually save her."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"You say that, but you're just going to ask her if she's on her period or something else that qualifies as sexual harassment to see how she reacts on camera. I'm going to actually save her."</span>

	After the first round of questions was over, Quenser raised a hand.		After the first round of questions was over, Quenser raised a hand.
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	With their commander back on her usual form, Heivia asked Quenser a question.		With their commander back on her usual form, Heivia asked Quenser a question.

	【"What was that about having looked through the given materials?"】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"What was that about having looked through the given materials?"</span>

	【"Some lies are justified."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Some lies are justified."</span>

	"Our intelligence department has discovered that this military coal mine is used to mine the fuel used by the JPlevelMHD reactors used in Objects. By destroying it, we can indirectly stop the movements of the entire Faith Organization military to a certain extent."		"Our intelligence department has discovered that this military coal mine is used to mine the fuel used by the JPlevelMHD reactors used in Objects. By destroying it, we can indirectly stop the movements of the entire Faith Organization military to a certain extent."
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	"I will now go over the order of events. First, Interference Program A will be sent to a UAV at Point 2 on the coast, neutralizing the surveillance network. Next, a small unit will head inland to Point 1. There, they will dig up the buried data cable that governs the large radar facilities and add in Interference Program B. This will let us use their targeting assistance against the Wing Balancer. Once the effects show themselves, we will finish by having the princess head out at full speed to attack. If she passes over the hill along the long and narrow Route 3 that lies between two cliffs, she can get within firing range of the Wing Balancer in a straight line. If the enemy's targeting was working properly, she would definitely be hit by return fire from that position. Once she is within firing range of the target, she will blow away the Faith Organization's Second Generation Object. Afterwards, we will send a recommendation of surrender to the coal mine. After giving them 900 seconds with which to evacuate all personnel, the Object's firepower will be used to destroy it. ...If all goes according to schedule, we will be shooting each other with water guns filled with champagne by dawn."		"I will now go over the order of events. First, Interference Program A will be sent to a UAV at Point 2 on the coast, neutralizing the surveillance network. Next, a small unit will head inland to Point 1. There, they will dig up the buried data cable that governs the large radar facilities and add in Interference Program B. This will let us use their targeting assistance against the Wing Balancer. Once the effects show themselves, we will finish by having the princess head out at full speed to attack. If she passes over the hill along the long and narrow Route 3 that lies between two cliffs, she can get within firing range of the Wing Balancer in a straight line. If the enemy's targeting was working properly, she would definitely be hit by return fire from that position. Once she is within firing range of the target, she will blow away the Faith Organization's Second Generation Object. Afterwards, we will send a recommendation of surrender to the coal mine. After giving them 900 seconds with which to evacuate all personnel, the Object's firepower will be used to destroy it. ...If all goes according to schedule, we will be shooting each other with water guns filled with champagne by dawn."

	【"Wow, so are the fridges already filled with ice-cold alcohol?"】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Wow, so are the fridges already filled with ice-cold alcohol?"</span>

	"However," added Froleytia, striking down the excitement that had begun to well up among the soldiers. "If the UAVs spot us before the Wing Balancer's targeting assistance has been dealt with, it is all over. Even if you shoot it down, the enemy will still learn what is going on. The Faith Organization UAVs each have two free-fall bombs installed, but do not attack them even if they fly right up to you. If anything is detected, the Wing Balancer will head out at once. And you will not be able to call in reinforcements from us. After all, it is highly unlikely the princess can win in a frontal assault. We cannot come to rescue you."		"However," added Froleytia, striking down the excitement that had begun to well up among the soldiers. "If the UAVs spot us before the Wing Balancer's targeting assistance has been dealt with, it is all over. Even if you shoot it down, the enemy will still learn what is going on. The Faith Organization UAVs each have two free-fall bombs installed, but do not attack them even if they fly right up to you. If anything is detected, the Wing Balancer will head out at once. And you will not be able to call in reinforcements from us. After all, it is highly unlikely the princess can win in a frontal assault. We cannot come to rescue you."
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	"No," cut in Charlotte. "There is no reason for me to do nothing. I will go with you. ...You seem too inexperienced to me. I would prefer not to have a bomb dropped on me because we left this to you and you got spotted."		"No," cut in Charlotte. "There is no reason for me to do nothing. I will go with you. ...You seem too inexperienced to me. I would prefer not to have a bomb dropped on me because we left this to you and you got spotted."

	【"Quenser, if you two head off and things start getting a little steamy, call me over. It's cold here, and you'll keep your warmth better with more people."】		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Quenser, if you two head off and things start getting a little steamy, call me over. It's cold here, and you'll keep your warmth better with more people."</span>

	"If you were a proper soldier, that comment would be enough to get you shot," commented Charlotte.		"If you were a proper soldier, that comment would be enough to get you shot," commented Charlotte.