HEAVY OBJECT:Volume5 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Rxls at 16:26, 18 November 2021

2021-11-18T16:26:10Z

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	For that reason, the participants in the Technopics were commonly referred to as athlete soldiers.		For that reason, the participants in the Technopics were commonly referred to as athlete soldiers.

	“I’ll be out there with 30 or 40 of those ~~manmade~~ machos. I assume you have some kind of protection strategy for if they cause some trouble.”		“I’ll be out there with 30 or 40 of those man-made machos. I assume you have some kind of protection strategy for if they cause some trouble.”

	“This would be a lot easier if Objects could handle situations like this.”		“This would be a lot easier if Objects could handle situations like this.”
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	The various types of interference carried out behind the scenes were tacitly seen as a part of the entertainment.		The various types of interference carried out behind the scenes were tacitly seen as a part of the entertainment.

	The Technopics being held on the giant ~~manmade~~ island of Olympia Dome would invite in even more blood and war.		The Technopics being held on the giant man-made island of Olympia Dome would invite in even more blood and war.

	===Enemy Forces 1===		===Enemy Forces 1===

Rxls: Reverting back to the original text with parentheses, Kamachi's style

2021-11-18T16:21:17Z

Reverting back to the original text with parentheses, Kamachi's style

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Belatkuro: Undo revision 445478 by 180.191.118.91 (talk)

2015-06-01T14:24:04Z

Undo revision 445478 by 180.191.118.91 (talk)

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180.191.118.91: /* Part 1 */

2015-06-01T13:58:06Z

Part 1

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Hiro Hayase: Adding Zakashi's edits back again

2013-01-22T07:18:54Z

Adding Zakashi's edits back again

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	When she heard that gentle female voice, Mariydi Whitewitch gave an annoyed sigh.		When she heard that gentle female voice, Mariydi Whitewitch gave an annoyed sigh.

	She was a 12 year old girl from the Capitalist Corporations. Her long blonde hair and her white skin were ~~here~~ primary characteristics, but the outfit she was wearing would likely draw more attention. She wore a special skintight suit that covered her from just below the neck all the way to the very tips of her toes. It was brightly colored in yellow and black. As befitting someone from the Capitalist Corporations, it had the names of various sponsors printed across it. She looked a bit like a hornet that had transformed into a race queen.		She was a 12 year old girl from the Capitalist Corporations. Her long blonde hair and her white skin were her primary characteristics, but the outfit she was wearing would likely draw more attention. She wore a special skintight suit that covered her from just below the neck all the way to the very tips of her toes. It was brightly colored in yellow and black. As befitting someone from the Capitalist Corporations, it had the names of various sponsors printed across it. She looked a bit like a hornet that had transformed into a race queen.

	One might think it was the uniform for the shootathlon event, but that was not accurate.		One might think it was the uniform for the shootathlon event, but that was not accurate.
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	“I will do my very best to protect you as long as my pay is enough to cover what that entails.”		“I will do my very best to protect you as long as my pay is enough to cover what that entails.”

	The instant after the bodyguard made that promise, the lights in the locker shut off and they were wrapped in darkness.		The instant after the bodyguard made that promise, the lights in the locker room shut off and they were wrapped in darkness.

	Mariydi Whitewitch did not just look up at the lights on the ceiling. This was not a power outage caused by lightning. Her bodyguard did not need to push her to the floor. She immediately grabbed the long glove-like part of her suit sitting on the bench and jumped to the floor herself.		Mariydi Whitewitch did not just look up at the lights on the ceiling. This was not a power outage caused by lightning. Her bodyguard did not need to push her to the floor. She immediately grabbed the long glove-like part of her suit sitting on the bench and jumped to the floor herself.
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	“!!”		“!!”

	Mariydi immediately dove to the ground and assault rifle fire swept across at about waist height in the next instant. Bullets flew from the broken door and struck the ~~oppose~~ wall of the passageway causing sparks to fly.		Mariydi immediately dove to the ground and assault rifle fire swept across at about waist height in the next instant. Bullets flew from the broken door and struck the opposite wall of the passageway causing sparks to fly.

	At first, Mariydi thought a Legitimacy Kingdom attacker that had made it within the locker room had fired.		At first, Mariydi thought a Legitimacy Kingdom attacker that had made it within the locker room had fired.
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	(…It’s about 750 grams.)		(…It’s about 750 grams.)

	Mariydi grabbed one of warhead that were shaped like slim rugby balls to check on its weight.		Mariydi grabbed one of the warhead that were shaped like slim rugby balls to check on its weight.

	“I’ll be borrowing your rifle.”		“I’ll be borrowing your rifle.”

Hiro Hayase: Undo revision 198724 by Zero2001 (talk) Reverting back to the original text with parentheses, Kamachi's style

2013-01-22T07:14:08Z

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Hiro Hayase: Undo revision 214881 by Zakashi (talk)

2013-01-22T07:09:15Z

Undo revision 214881 by Zakashi (talk)

Zakashi at 08:12, 25 December 2012

2012-12-25T08:12:43Z

Zero2001: Optimizing. Italicizing thought speech

2012-10-21T16:23:18Z

Optimizing. Italicizing thought speech

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Js06 at 20:30, 5 October 2012

2012-10-05T20:30:34Z

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← Older revision		Revision as of 07:09, 22 January 2013
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	When she heard that gentle female voice, Mariydi Whitewitch gave an annoyed sigh.		When she heard that gentle female voice, Mariydi Whitewitch gave an annoyed sigh.

	She was a 12 year old girl from the Capitalist Corporations. Her long blonde hair and her white skin were ~~her~~ primary characteristics, but the outfit she was wearing would likely draw more attention. She wore a special skintight suit that covered her from just below the neck all the way to the very tips of her toes. It was brightly colored in yellow and black. As befitting someone from the Capitalist Corporations, it had the names of various sponsors printed across it. She looked a bit like a hornet that had transformed into a race queen.		She was a 12 year old girl from the Capitalist Corporations. Her long blonde hair and her white skin were here primary characteristics, but the outfit she was wearing would likely draw more attention. She wore a special skintight suit that covered her from just below the neck all the way to the very tips of her toes. It was brightly colored in yellow and black. As befitting someone from the Capitalist Corporations, it had the names of various sponsors printed across it. She looked a bit like a hornet that had transformed into a race queen.

	One might think it was the uniform for the shootathlon event, but that was not accurate.		One might think it was the uniform for the shootathlon event, but that was not accurate.
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	"I will do my very best to protect you as long as my pay is enough to cover what that entails."		"I will do my very best to protect you as long as my pay is enough to cover what that entails."

	The instant after the bodyguard made that promise, the lights in the locker ~~room~~ shut off and they were wrapped in darkness.		The instant after the bodyguard made that promise, the lights in the locker shut off and they were wrapped in darkness.

	Mariydi Whitewitch did not just look up at the lights on the ceiling. This was not a power outage caused by lightning. Her bodyguard did not need to push her to the floor. She immediately grabbed the long glove-like part of her suit sitting on the bench and jumped to the floor herself.		Mariydi Whitewitch did not just look up at the lights on the ceiling. This was not a power outage caused by lightning. Her bodyguard did not need to push her to the floor. She immediately grabbed the long glove-like part of her suit sitting on the bench and jumped to the floor herself.
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	"!!"		"!!"

	Mariydi immediately dove to the ground and assault rifle fire swept across at about waist height in the next instant. Bullets flew from the broken door and struck the ~~opposite~~ wall of the passageway causing sparks to fly.		Mariydi immediately dove to the ground and assault rifle fire swept across at about waist height in the next instant. Bullets flew from the broken door and struck the oppose wall of the passageway causing sparks to fly.

	At first, Mariydi thought a Legitimacy Kingdom attacker that had made it within the locker room had fired.		At first, Mariydi thought a Legitimacy Kingdom attacker that had made it within the locker room had fired.
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	''...It's about 750 grams.''		''...It's about 750 grams.''

	Mariydi grabbed one of ~~the warheads~~ that were shaped like slim rugby balls to check on its weight.		Mariydi grabbed one of warhead that were shaped like slim rugby balls to check on its weight.

	"I'll be borrowing your rifle."		"I'll be borrowing your rifle."

← Older revision		Revision as of 08:12, 25 December 2012
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	When she heard that gentle female voice, Mariydi Whitewitch gave an annoyed sigh.		When she heard that gentle female voice, Mariydi Whitewitch gave an annoyed sigh.

	She was a 12 year old girl from the Capitalist Corporations. Her long blonde hair and her white skin were ~~here~~ primary characteristics, but the outfit she was wearing would likely draw more attention. She wore a special skintight suit that covered her from just below the neck all the way to the very tips of her toes. It was brightly colored in yellow and black. As befitting someone from the Capitalist Corporations, it had the names of various sponsors printed across it. She looked a bit like a hornet that had transformed into a race queen.		She was a 12 year old girl from the Capitalist Corporations. Her long blonde hair and her white skin were her primary characteristics, but the outfit she was wearing would likely draw more attention. She wore a special skintight suit that covered her from just below the neck all the way to the very tips of her toes. It was brightly colored in yellow and black. As befitting someone from the Capitalist Corporations, it had the names of various sponsors printed across it. She looked a bit like a hornet that had transformed into a race queen.

	One might think it was the uniform for the shootathlon event, but that was not accurate.		One might think it was the uniform for the shootathlon event, but that was not accurate.
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	"I will do my very best to protect you as long as my pay is enough to cover what that entails."		"I will do my very best to protect you as long as my pay is enough to cover what that entails."

	The instant after the bodyguard made that promise, the lights in the locker shut off and they were wrapped in darkness.		The instant after the bodyguard made that promise, the lights in the locker room shut off and they were wrapped in darkness.

	Mariydi Whitewitch did not just look up at the lights on the ceiling. This was not a power outage caused by lightning. Her bodyguard did not need to push her to the floor. She immediately grabbed the long glove-like part of her suit sitting on the bench and jumped to the floor herself.		Mariydi Whitewitch did not just look up at the lights on the ceiling. This was not a power outage caused by lightning. Her bodyguard did not need to push her to the floor. She immediately grabbed the long glove-like part of her suit sitting on the bench and jumped to the floor herself.
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	"!!"		"!!"

	Mariydi immediately dove to the ground and assault rifle fire swept across at about waist height in the next instant. Bullets flew from the broken door and struck the ~~oppose~~ wall of the passageway causing sparks to fly.		Mariydi immediately dove to the ground and assault rifle fire swept across at about waist height in the next instant. Bullets flew from the broken door and struck the opposite wall of the passageway causing sparks to fly.

	At first, Mariydi thought a Legitimacy Kingdom attacker that had made it within the locker room had fired.		At first, Mariydi thought a Legitimacy Kingdom attacker that had made it within the locker room had fired.
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	''...It's about 750 grams.''		''...It's about 750 grams.''

	Mariydi grabbed one of ~~warhead~~ that were shaped like slim rugby balls to check on its weight.		Mariydi grabbed one of the warheads that were shaped like slim rugby balls to check on its weight.

	"I'll be borrowing your rifle."		"I'll be borrowing your rifle."