HEAVY OBJECT:Volume7 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Bilagaana: typo

2014-01-26T06:20:10Z

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	Heivia glanced over at Myonri.		Heivia glanced over at Myonri.

	Instead of a heavy weapon like a light machine gun or assault rifle, she held a small and lightweight PDW like ~~how~~ pilot would carry in case of an emergency landing. It was commonly known as a “full auto in a business bag”.		Instead of a heavy weapon like a light machine gun or assault rifle, she held a small and lightweight PDW like a pilot would carry in case of an emergency landing. It was commonly known as a “full auto in a business bag”.

	But she was not carrying the lightweight weapon because she was a girl.		But she was not carrying the lightweight weapon because she was a girl.

62.205.84.93: /* Part 12 */

2014-01-20T22:17:58Z

Part 12

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	That guess was anything but funny.		That guess was anything but funny.

	The criminal organization was not selling cheap laborers or toys for perverts. They were selling extras to play the role of corpses. Selling them alive would be best, but they could be sold at a reduced price if they were frozen after they died. When a corpse was gruesomely roasted, you didn’t have to worry about ~~livor~~ mortis or anything like that. It was possible an autopsy wouldn’t even be performed.		The criminal organization was not selling cheap laborers or toys for perverts. They were selling extras to play the role of corpses. Selling them alive would be best, but they could be sold at a reduced price if they were frozen after they died. When a corpse was gruesomely roasted, you didn’t have to worry about rigor mortis or anything like that. It was possible an autopsy wouldn’t even be performed.

	“I also got my hands on a map of the harbor. I have a few guesses where the ‘products’ will be loaded, but I don’t know for sure. We need to go see for ourselves.”		“I also got my hands on a map of the harbor. I have a few guesses where the ‘products’ will be loaded, but I don’t know for sure. We need to go see for ourselves.”

DevilByMySide: /* Part 5 */

2014-01-13T19:11:22Z

Part 5

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	“Now, how will the enemy handle this?”		“Now, how will the enemy handle this?”

	“They’ll have set up a wire along a route the princess has to pass through. That could be the entrances to the hangar or the Object’s hatch.”		“They’ll have to set up a wire along a route the princess has to pass through. That could be the entrances to the hangar or the Object’s hatch.”

	This mock battle was based on the possibility of traitors within the military. The bandannas around their mouths were to make them easy to distinguish, but the maintenance soldiers were kept in a gray area. It was possible an enemy could approach while pretending to be an ally.		This mock battle was based on the possibility of traitors within the military. The bandannas around their mouths were to make them easy to distinguish, but the maintenance soldiers were kept in a gray area. It was possible an enemy could approach while pretending to be an ally.
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	“Mh. Quenser, do you think I am clumsy?”		“Mh. Quenser, do you think I am clumsy?”

	“Sorry, but I’ve never seen you act particularly ~~sharply~~! I can think of a few times when you almost killed me with the Baby Magnum. That time in Gibraltar for instance!!”		“Sorry, but I’ve never seen you act particularly sharp! I can think of a few times when you almost killed me with the Baby Magnum. That time in Gibraltar for instance!!”

	“Quit complaining, Quenser.”		“Quit complaining, Quenser.”

DevilByMySide: /* Part 3 */

2014-01-13T19:01:34Z

Part 3

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	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

	Froleytia Capistrano was a silver-haired, ~~giant~~-breasted~~, and~~ highly-ranked soldier. As she smoked her kiseru in the operation control room, she responded to a question from one of her subordinates.		Froleytia Capistrano was a silver-haired, big-breasted highly-ranked soldier. As she smoked her kiseru in the operation control room, she responded to a question from one of her subordinates.

	“Well, if you didn’t seriously want to avoid being hit, no one would fight seriously.”		“Well, if you didn’t seriously want to avoid being hit, no one would fight seriously.”

DevilByMySide: /* Part 1 */

2014-01-13T18:55:16Z

Part 1

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	As each of them finished applying their “makeup”, they tied on the bandannas so it covered the lower half of their face like bank robbers in a Western. The crescent moon was positioned just right to look like a large slit of a mouth.		As each of them finished applying their “makeup”, they tied on the bandannas so it covered the lower half of their face like bank robbers in a Western. The crescent moon was positioned just right to look like a large slit of a mouth.

	“That’s in terrible taste.”		“That’s such a terrible taste.”

	“What matters is that it shows up well.”		“What matters is that it shows up well.”
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	“Ammunition…check.”		“Ammunition…check.”

	While feeling ~~annoyance~~ at his one friend’s hesitation, Heivia stuck the magazine back in the rifle and pulled back the cocking lever to load the first bullet. He then brought his radio to his mouth.		While feeling annoyed at his one friend’s hesitation, Heivia stuck the magazine back in the rifle and pulled back the cocking lever to load the first bullet. He then brought his radio to his mouth.

	“Team A is ready. What about the others?”		“Team A is ready. What about the others?”
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	Heivia glanced over at Myonri.		Heivia glanced over at Myonri.

	Instead of a heavy weapon like a light ~~machinegun~~ or assault rifle, she held a small and lightweight PDW like a pilot would carry in case of an emergency landing. It was commonly known as a “full auto in a business bag”.		Instead of a heavy weapon like a light machine gun or assault rifle, she held a small and lightweight PDW like how pilot would carry in case of an emergency landing. It was commonly known as a “full auto in a business bag”.

	But she was not carrying the lightweight weapon because she was a girl.		But she was not carrying the lightweight weapon because she was a girl.
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	He was not looking outside the maintenance base zone.		He was not looking outside the maintenance base zone.

	He was looking in.		He was looking to the inside.

	He pointed his assault rifle toward the people who he would normally have called his allies.		He pointed his assault rifle toward the people who he would normally have called his allies.

Bakapervert at 12:55, 1 January 2014

2014-01-01T12:55:11Z

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	“R-really?”		“R-really?”

	She simply sat ~~their~~ blankly, but that was fine for the time being as it made it easier to work.		She simply sat there blankly, but that was fine for the time being as it made it easier to work.

	“Can you get it off?” asked Heivia.		“Can you get it off?” asked Heivia.
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	“Probably, but if we accuse them on nothing but speculation, we’ll be the ones left hurting.” Quenser clicked his tongue. “More importantly, what about Dorothy!? As long as the criminal organization is receiving this indulgence from the Information Alliance, they officially count as cooperating with the Information Alliance military. Froleytia won’t want to attack them blindly!!”		“Probably, but if we accuse them on nothing but speculation, we’ll be the ones left hurting.” Quenser clicked his tongue. “More importantly, what about Dorothy!? As long as the criminal organization is receiving this indulgence from the Information Alliance, they officially count as cooperating with the Information Alliance military. Froleytia won’t want to attack them blindly!!”

	“So they’re technically civilians yet are partially treated like soldiers.” Sewax seemed to be thinking. “Yes, it would cause a lot of trouble if a large unit was sent in to annihilate them. The Information Alliance could easily cause a much larger battle in the name of stopping the Legitimacy Kingdom from unrightfully attacking civilians. “		“So they’re technically civilians yet are partially treated like soldiers.” Sewax seemed to be thinking. “Yes, it would cause a lot of trouble if a large unit was sent in to annihilate them. The Information Alliance could easily cause a much larger battle in the name of stopping the Legitimacy Kingdom from unrightfully attacking civilians.“

	“Our huge-breasted commander can’t do anything,” spat out Heivia. “She isn’t stupid enough to start a war over thirty or forty people! But then what do we do!? If we could use the proper channels and send in a large unit, they’d be crushed in five seconds, but does that mean the four of us can defeat them? It’s impossible! Especially if we have to swiftly and accurately wipe them out so they can’t take away the abducted people!!”		“Our huge-breasted commander can’t do anything,” spat out Heivia. “She isn’t stupid enough to start a war over thirty or forty people! But then what do we do!? If we could use the proper channels and send in a large unit, they’d be crushed in five seconds, but does that mean the four of us can defeat them? It’s impossible! Especially if we have to swiftly and accurately wipe them out so they can’t take away the abducted people!!”
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	“N-no!! I wasn’t trying to fight!!”		“N-no!! I wasn’t trying to fight!!”

	He words did not reach the soldier.		His words did not reach the soldier.

	As soon as the soldier’s gun barrel moved to target him, Blue Bottle reflexively fired three bullets into the foolish soldier’s upper body.		As soon as the soldier’s gun barrel moved to target him, Blue Bottle reflexively fired three bullets into the foolish soldier’s upper body.

EnigmaticRepose: /* Part 13 */

2014-01-01T12:00:23Z

Part 13

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	“(There are three guards circling the office. If we sniped the high points to the west and southwest, it would be possible break in, but…)”		“(There are three guards circling the office. If we sniped the high points to the west and southwest, it would be possible break in, but…)”

	Sewax ~~continue~~ for Heivia.		Sewax continued for Heivia.

	“But it would be risky. And we would have to give up on rescuing the others because we don’t know where they are.”		“But it would be risky. And we would have to give up on rescuing the others because we don’t know where they are.”

EnigmaticRepose: /* Part 13 */

2014-01-01T10:49:35Z

Part 13

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	Quenser and Sewax carried the reconnaissance equipment while Heivia and Myonri carried the firearms as they walked toward the international harbor that was opened to the public to help the country recover.		Quenser and Sewax carried the reconnaissance equipment while Heivia and Myonri carried the firearms as they walked toward the international harbor that was opened to the public to help the country recover.

	“If you look at it the right way, war recovery is like a tree that grows money,” complained Heivia as he wiped sweat from his brow. “And with all this equipment being moved around, people are gonna show up to take it for themselves. No else is here, there are tons of things to hide behind, and there are any number of great spots for an attack. I can see why this area is so dangerous.”		“If you look at it the right way, war recovery is like a tree that grows money,” complained Heivia as he wiped sweat from his brow. “And with all this equipment being moved around, people are gonna show up to take it for themselves. No one else is here, there are tons of things to hide behind, and there are any number of great spots for an attack. I can see why this area is so dangerous.”

	“Are the containers shipped by land attacked because it’s a dangerous area or did it become a dangerous area because it’s a land route on which containers are shipped? It’s a bit of a chicken and the egg question,” said Sewax smoothly.		“Are the containers shipped by land attacked because it’s a dangerous area or did it become a dangerous area because it’s a land route on which containers are shipped? It’s a bit of a chicken and the egg question,” said Sewax smoothly.

173.51.129.107: /* Part 2 */

2014-01-01T07:24:05Z

Part 2

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	“Once Miss Milinda Brantini enters the Baby Magnum she is almost invincible. After all, that Object is made to withstand a direct nuclear strike. So…”		“Once Miss Milinda Brantini enters the Baby Magnum she is almost invincible. After all, that Object is made to withstand a direct nuclear strike. So…”

	“They’ll ~~bock~~ the path from the special lodgings to the Object hangar.”		“They’ll block the path from the special lodgings to the Object hangar.”

	Quenser scraped X-marks into the sand along a few routes.		Quenser scraped X-marks into the sand along a few routes.

Js06 at 00:25, 1 January 2014

2014-01-01T00:25:46Z

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