HEAVY OBJECT:Volume9 Chapter 2 - Revision history

121.98.99.213: /* Part 17 */ Removed 's' from explosives in 'explosives flames and blown away.'

2015-09-11T08:06:07Z

Part 17: Removed 's' from explosives in 'explosives flames and blown away.'

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	She first jumped behind a military truck.		She first jumped behind a military truck.

	A moment later, a storm of bullets blew by and the entire truck was enveloped in ~~explosives~~ flames and blown away.		A moment later, a storm of bullets blew by and the entire truck was enveloped in explosive flames and blown away.

	===Part 18===		===Part 18===

91.117.172.159 at 19:23, 6 September 2015

2015-09-06T19:23:43Z

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	Could they all leave this battle alive?		Could they all leave this battle alive?

	Heivia nervously turned toward the noise, but the student was not looking toward the ~~Flyway~~. He walked along with his eyes glued to the muddy driver’s journal.		Heivia nervously turned toward the noise, but the student was not looking toward the Flyaway. He walked along with his eyes glued to the muddy driver’s journal.

	“Wait, wait, wait. What are you going to learn from that thing!? There’s a horrifying monster right in front of us, you know!?”		“Wait, wait, wait. What are you going to learn from that thing!? There’s a horrifying monster right in front of us, you know!?”

Kemm: /* Part 8 */ Many people forget that "women" is plural and "woman" singular, but I believe this case to be no more than a mix-up; just something I've read in a web article.

2015-07-15T16:26:23Z

Part 8: Many people forget that "women" is plural and "woman" singular, but I believe this case to be no more than a mix-up; just something I've read in a web article.

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	“That’s a trap. You can tell from the location of the pelvis.”		“That’s a trap. You can tell from the location of the pelvis.”

	Heivia did a spit-take, but Quenser ignored his intensely regretful friend and gave the '''~~Women~~ in a Dress''' a skeptical look. What was he(?) doing on this mountain road?		Heivia did a spit-take, but Quenser ignored his intensely regretful friend and gave the '''Woman in a Dress''' a skeptical look. What was he(?) doing on this mountain road?

	Before he could find an answer, Millia spoke up.		Before he could find an answer, Millia spoke up.

Kemm: /* Part 1 */

2015-07-15T15:44:00Z

Part 1

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	“What are you talking about?”		“What are you talking about?”

	“You don’t know? You can make a lot of money selling genius kids to corporations, so there are organizations that specialize in going after elementary and middle school kids. That’s why their school buses ~~and~~ bulletproof and are escorted by armored trucks armed with machineguns. The kidnappers use attack helicopters to go after them from the air. Makes you wonder how that can be called a ‘safe’ country.”		“You don’t know? You can make a lot of money selling genius kids to corporations, so there are organizations that specialize in going after elementary and middle school kids. That’s why their school buses are bulletproof and are escorted by armored trucks armed with machineguns. The kidnappers use attack helicopters to go after them from the air. Makes you wonder how that can be called a ‘safe’ country.”

	“And the big companies buy the abducted kids!?”		“And the big companies buy the abducted kids!?”

Js06 at 02:52, 6 July 2015

2015-07-06T02:52:57Z

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Belatkuro: /* Part 8 */

2015-07-04T12:29:22Z

Part 8

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	While they complained, they stole motorcycles with practiced motions.		While they complained, they stole motorcycles with practiced motions.

	Having your means of transportation taken ~~form~~ you in the mountains late at night was a frightening thought, but the damage near the keyhole suggested these had been stolen already. That meant their “owners” had brought this bad luck upon themselves.		Having your means of transportation taken from you in the mountains late at night was a frightening thought, but the damage near the keyhole suggested these had been stolen already. That meant their “owners” had brought this bad luck upon themselves.

	“I hate these hot nights and their lack of women. Maybe I should call out to one of those women on the street corners.”		“I hate these hot nights and their lack of women. Maybe I should call out to one of those women on the street corners.”

Js06 at 01:30, 29 June 2015

2015-06-29T01:30:04Z

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Gamerdude13: /* Part 2 */ no -> not

2015-06-23T01:50:09Z

Part 2: no -> not

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	“ ‘Teacher’, if you’re going to show me the way around Lost Angels, I’d like you to show me a lot more ‘shortcuts’ and ‘back streets’!!”		“ ‘Teacher’, if you’re going to show me the way around Lost Angels, I’d like you to show me a lot more ‘shortcuts’ and ‘back streets’!!”

	“Noooooo!! I’d always wanted a girl to invite me into an empty back alley, but no like thiiiiissssssssssssss!!”		“Noooooo!! I’d always wanted a girl to invite me into an empty back alley, but not like thiiiiissssssssssssss!!”

	In a supermarket parking lot near the run-down motel, Quenser screamed like a girl stopped by an old man wearing nothing but a trench coat.		In a supermarket parking lot near the run-down motel, Quenser screamed like a girl stopped by an old man wearing nothing but a trench coat.

Js06: Created page with "{{Incomplete|parts=7|tparts=20}} ==Chapter 2: Guardian Deity of Talent >> Mountain Battle of Lost Angels== ===Part 1=== Long story short, they were back in the run-down Lost..."

2015-06-21T03:04:23Z

Created page with "{{Incomplete|parts=7|tparts=20}} ==Chapter 2: Guardian Deity of Talent >> Mountain Battle of Lost Angels== ===Part 1=== Long story short, they were back in the run-down Lost..."

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